Comments received on poems by hzugman
My girl, my girl, my girl
peto said:
Old school magic
You are a lucky man
And I\'m sure she is a lucky lady
Loved the rhyme
September 3rd, 2023 09:36
peto said:
Old school magic
You are a lucky man
And I\'m sure she is a lucky lady
Loved the rhyme
September 3rd, 2023 09:36
My girl, my girl, my girl
Suetah said:
Nice! Like the words you chose and short, sweet and to the point :)
September 3rd, 2023 09:01
Suetah said:
Nice! Like the words you chose and short, sweet and to the point :)
September 3rd, 2023 09:01
Inclucde every item
peto said:
Counting our blessings can\'t help but please ya
Thanks for the reminder
As wise as ever
August 29th, 2023 09:18
peto said:
Counting our blessings can\'t help but please ya
Thanks for the reminder
As wise as ever
August 29th, 2023 09:18
Say \"hi\"
2781 said:
I was in the city today, ask a battler how business was? Not great. Gave him a few dollars and a few moments. Made my day.
August 23rd, 2023 12:20
2781 said:
I was in the city today, ask a battler how business was? Not great. Gave him a few dollars and a few moments. Made my day.
August 23rd, 2023 12:20
Say \"hi\"
Pop64 said:
Such a small request, but such an impactful action, all wrapped in a beautiful rhyming read.
August 23rd, 2023 08:47
Pop64 said:
Such a small request, but such an impactful action, all wrapped in a beautiful rhyming read.
August 23rd, 2023 08:47
Better goals
jarcher54 said:
Wise words... I am a perfectionist of my own work, but try hard to be tolerant of others. I\'m working on heeding your sage advice!
August 19th, 2023 10:28
jarcher54 said:
Wise words... I am a perfectionist of my own work, but try hard to be tolerant of others. I\'m working on heeding your sage advice!
August 19th, 2023 10:28
Relatively speaking
peto said:
Couldn\'t agree more
Wise as ever
We don\'t know we are living nowadays
Always enjoy reading from you
August 14th, 2023 09:43
peto said:
Couldn\'t agree more
Wise as ever
We don\'t know we are living nowadays
Always enjoy reading from you
August 14th, 2023 09:43
good offerings everywhere
Bobby O said:
I love the way arcane and deign rhyme. One of my favorite snd midndersyood words is BANE , st first I thought it could fit in this piece but I was wrong, it really belongs as a descriptive annex included to pontificate about that one day when you had to make sure all those hippos were squeaky clean.
Oh, BTW, this piece is a winner.
Nice write good read
July 30th, 2023 17:42
Bobby O said:
I love the way arcane and deign rhyme. One of my favorite snd midndersyood words is BANE , st first I thought it could fit in this piece but I was wrong, it really belongs as a descriptive annex included to pontificate about that one day when you had to make sure all those hippos were squeaky clean.
Oh, BTW, this piece is a winner.
Nice write good read
July 30th, 2023 17:42
My favorite hippocrene
Bobby O said:
I chuckled from the top of my clavicle. Wow, how nice clavicle is to say. I gotta put it in a poem. Would a girl appreciate a clavicular compliment? Hmmm. It’ll b tricky subject matter. But back to our hippo which is a horse that hangs in water and generates canals that defray water in a direction different than current. And clean it mean w sheen unafraud that suddenly you’re crushed cuz he sees you looking at a bird that rides him. I’d be nervous and I’d outsource that hippo hygiene to an unsuspecting limerick writing mime.
July 28th, 2023 22:50
Bobby O said:
I chuckled from the top of my clavicle. Wow, how nice clavicle is to say. I gotta put it in a poem. Would a girl appreciate a clavicular compliment? Hmmm. It’ll b tricky subject matter. But back to our hippo which is a horse that hangs in water and generates canals that defray water in a direction different than current. And clean it mean w sheen unafraud that suddenly you’re crushed cuz he sees you looking at a bird that rides him. I’d be nervous and I’d outsource that hippo hygiene to an unsuspecting limerick writing mime.
July 28th, 2023 22:50
Pick one
Pop64 said:
Not rhyming is certainly a choice and a definite impact upon the reader. Well crafted!
July 27th, 2023 10:57
Pop64 said:
Not rhyming is certainly a choice and a definite impact upon the reader. Well crafted!
July 27th, 2023 10:57
Meant to be
Caring dove said:
Like the ideas in this .. a rose without thorns would be somehow wrong , as if something was missing ..
Good writing I like this made me think a bit
July 25th, 2023 15:16
Caring dove said:
Like the ideas in this .. a rose without thorns would be somehow wrong , as if something was missing ..
Good writing I like this made me think a bit
July 25th, 2023 15:16
Thank you MyPoeticSide
Caring dove said:
Lovely poem and nice words ) glad this poetry site exists and I ajways like it too
Others can be so supportive 🙂
July 25th, 2023 09:30
Caring dove said:
Lovely poem and nice words ) glad this poetry site exists and I ajways like it too
Others can be so supportive 🙂
July 25th, 2023 09:30
Stay on the path if you want to be happy
peto said:
Been ages since I read a new limerick
Making me feel nostalgic
Very much enjoyed
July 15th, 2023 10:24
peto said:
Been ages since I read a new limerick
Making me feel nostalgic
Very much enjoyed
July 15th, 2023 10:24
Chemoflage
peto said:
Your wisdom now has a tremendous rhyme scheme
Thanks for sharing it
July 11th, 2023 10:09
peto said:
Your wisdom now has a tremendous rhyme scheme
Thanks for sharing it
July 11th, 2023 10:09
Say what you mean
orchidee said:
Erm, yes, maybe, perhaps, possibly, don\'t know.... I\'m not saying what I mean here! lol. It\'s time I was decisive. heehee.
July 10th, 2023 14:28
orchidee said:
Erm, yes, maybe, perhaps, possibly, don\'t know.... I\'m not saying what I mean here! lol. It\'s time I was decisive. heehee.
July 10th, 2023 14:28
Accolades and pans
peto said:
Well said
The \"experts\" are so funny
Should read their own stuff
If they were as honest about that
They probably wouldn\'t post
Nothing nice to say??? Say nothing
Keep em coming
July 8th, 2023 09:49
peto said:
Well said
The \"experts\" are so funny
Should read their own stuff
If they were as honest about that
They probably wouldn\'t post
Nothing nice to say??? Say nothing
Keep em coming
July 8th, 2023 09:49
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