Comments received on poems by hzugman
How did we get this way?
Poetic Licence said:
Few words but point made, Nice write
December 9th, 2024 22:32
Poetic Licence said:
Few words but point made, Nice write
December 9th, 2024 22:32
How did we get this way?
teardrop said:
You get your point across very well here. Thank you for the readf.
December 9th, 2024 20:37
teardrop said:
You get your point across very well here. Thank you for the readf.
December 9th, 2024 20:37
How did we get this way?
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"Courage, Merry. Courage!\"
You asked a good question in this rhyme.
December 9th, 2024 19:17
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"Courage, Merry. Courage!\"
You asked a good question in this rhyme.
December 9th, 2024 19:17
Surprise!
Cheeky Missy said:
Thank you, Sir, that\'s correct. Beautifully rendered with a sweet rhythm.
December 8th, 2024 15:55
Cheeky Missy said:
Thank you, Sir, that\'s correct. Beautifully rendered with a sweet rhythm.
December 8th, 2024 15:55
Something to ponder
Cheeky Missy said:
That\'s a very interesting suggestion, leading me down a trail I never thought to take. I mean, there\'s Jacob and Esau who struggled together in Rebekah\'s womb, which seems to indicate they had plenty of thoughts BEFORE birth. Fascinating and charmingly rendered in tasteful brevity. Thank you for sharing.
November 24th, 2024 18:11
Cheeky Missy said:
That\'s a very interesting suggestion, leading me down a trail I never thought to take. I mean, there\'s Jacob and Esau who struggled together in Rebekah\'s womb, which seems to indicate they had plenty of thoughts BEFORE birth. Fascinating and charmingly rendered in tasteful brevity. Thank you for sharing.
November 24th, 2024 18:11
rhyme vs. reason
Dan Williams said:
You\'ve put in simple form something I have been uncomfortable with as long as I have been writing, an over emphasis on rhyme. Needed, but not vital, leads sometimes to grasping for words that don\'t really fit. Nice work.
October 8th, 2024 00:01
Dan Williams said:
You\'ve put in simple form something I have been uncomfortable with as long as I have been writing, an over emphasis on rhyme. Needed, but not vital, leads sometimes to grasping for words that don\'t really fit. Nice work.
October 8th, 2024 00:01
zzzzzzzzzz
jarcher54 said:
Oh my! I wonder why she sleeps so late! Imagination working overtime!
October 6th, 2024 10:22
jarcher54 said:
Oh my! I wonder why she sleeps so late! Imagination working overtime!
October 6th, 2024 10:22
What can I believe?
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
It\'s up to you to decipher what\'s true, good write.
October 3rd, 2024 12:14
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
It\'s up to you to decipher what\'s true, good write.
October 3rd, 2024 12:14
We go together
Cheeky Missy said:
Charming and winsome mono rhyme delineating a very beautiful reality. Lovely. Thank you for sharing!
September 23rd, 2024 18:28
Cheeky Missy said:
Charming and winsome mono rhyme delineating a very beautiful reality. Lovely. Thank you for sharing!
September 23rd, 2024 18:28
Ya know
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely and well-spoken. The subtle reality lurking just behind this admonition is hauntingly poignant. Thank you for sharing.
September 22nd, 2024 11:05
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely and well-spoken. The subtle reality lurking just behind this admonition is hauntingly poignant. Thank you for sharing.
September 22nd, 2024 11:05
Look at it this way
Cheeky Missy said:
Charming. Albeit I\'m woefully fond of routine. Variety is the spice of life and that statement led to a new Starbucks drink a year ago and this lovely little tribute is beautifully rendered. Thank you very much for sharing.
September 12th, 2024 19:44
Cheeky Missy said:
Charming. Albeit I\'m woefully fond of routine. Variety is the spice of life and that statement led to a new Starbucks drink a year ago and this lovely little tribute is beautifully rendered. Thank you very much for sharing.
September 12th, 2024 19:44
Words that mislead
Cheeky Missy said:
True....but it certainly seems like there are plenty of locations which aptly classify as \"nowhere.\" I kept expecting the \"glass half full/ half empty\" argument, stupidly. Fascinating suggestion and beautifully rendered thus. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 13:35
Cheeky Missy said:
True....but it certainly seems like there are plenty of locations which aptly classify as \"nowhere.\" I kept expecting the \"glass half full/ half empty\" argument, stupidly. Fascinating suggestion and beautifully rendered thus. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 13:35
Be thankful for the things you don\'t have
Cheeky Missy said:
That\'s downright lovely! Thank you for sharing. For my part I\'ll never know, but this is a winsome tribute to the gratitude for a clean bill of health.
September 4th, 2024 21:08
Cheeky Missy said:
That\'s downright lovely! Thank you for sharing. For my part I\'ll never know, but this is a winsome tribute to the gratitude for a clean bill of health.
September 4th, 2024 21:08
Be thankful for the things you don\'t have
MR.apocalypse said:
i thought this was very funny be thankfull for the things you dont have i had no idea what i was going to read but i knew it would provoke though and that it did very nice
September 4th, 2024 20:28
MR.apocalypse said:
i thought this was very funny be thankfull for the things you dont have i had no idea what i was going to read but i knew it would provoke though and that it did very nice
September 4th, 2024 20:28
Look here and enjoy
hzugman said:
No chiding necessary just share your heart. Thanx for the comment.
September 1st, 2024 11:13
hzugman said:
No chiding necessary just share your heart. Thanx for the comment.
September 1st, 2024 11:13
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