Comments received on poems by hzugman
It\'s better to laugh than to cry
peto said:
Excellent write
Great message
Delivered so smoothly
October 2nd, 2023 10:47
peto said:
Excellent write
Great message
Delivered so smoothly
October 2nd, 2023 10:47
Wants and needs
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot happens to Profits if everyone took your advice, heh?........................................ Well, the world is over populated, so let as many consumers bury themselves in it as possible......
September 23rd, 2023 21:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Wot happens to Profits if everyone took your advice, heh?........................................ Well, the world is over populated, so let as many consumers bury themselves in it as possible......
September 23rd, 2023 21:11
Wants and needs
jarcher54 said:
Love this little lesson, and how it ends with a little landslide of stuff!
September 23rd, 2023 13:26
jarcher54 said:
Love this little lesson, and how it ends with a little landslide of stuff!
September 23rd, 2023 13:26
How things are
Pop64 said:
A well rhyming piece of truth. Message perfectly expressed.
September 21st, 2023 10:17
Pop64 said:
A well rhyming piece of truth. Message perfectly expressed.
September 21st, 2023 10:17
The value of trying
Pop64 said:
very wise and profound all put together and displayed in a well rhyming piece of poetry.
September 19th, 2023 13:41
Pop64 said:
very wise and profound all put together and displayed in a well rhyming piece of poetry.
September 19th, 2023 13:41
What do you know?
hzugman said:
I thought that since 2+7+8+1= 18 it might be considered a nickname.
September 16th, 2023 10:18
hzugman said:
I thought that since 2+7+8+1= 18 it might be considered a nickname.
September 16th, 2023 10:18
whose side are you on?
2781 said:
Amen. If everyone\'s doing it it\'s probably wrong.
September 14th, 2023 22:07
2781 said:
Amen. If everyone\'s doing it it\'s probably wrong.
September 14th, 2023 22:07
You and me babe
hzugman said:
Thanx Pop. Appreciate the comment.
BTW I\'m 83 does that make me Pop pop?
September 13th, 2023 09:09
hzugman said:
Thanx Pop. Appreciate the comment.
BTW I\'m 83 does that make me Pop pop?
September 13th, 2023 09:09
You and me babe
Pop64 said:
Short and sweet, often the most profound in delivery, as in this case. Wonderfully written!
September 13th, 2023 09:00
Pop64 said:
Short and sweet, often the most profound in delivery, as in this case. Wonderfully written!
September 13th, 2023 09:00
The whole enchilada
peto said:
I love your gratitude and zest for life
Hope this does not sound cheeky
But at your age you must have lived through some horrendous times
Always so positive and a joy to read
Great example for us all
September 6th, 2023 04:36
peto said:
I love your gratitude and zest for life
Hope this does not sound cheeky
But at your age you must have lived through some horrendous times
Always so positive and a joy to read
Great example for us all
September 6th, 2023 04:36
Judging rules
Soman Ragavan said:
4 September, 2023
My comments on the poem \"Judging rules” by Hzugman
We can quote the bible on this :
“So when they continued asking him, he lifted up himself, and said unto them, He that is without sin among you, let him first cast a stone at her.
John 8:7-11 King James Version (KJV)”
https://www.google.mu/search?q=let+him+who+has+never+sinned+cast+the+first+stone&sca_esv=562421344&source=hp&ei=xkj1ZKv3B6G_i...
Soman Ragavan. 4 September, 2023.
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September 3rd, 2023 22:10
Soman Ragavan said:
4 September, 2023
My comments on the poem \"Judging rules” by Hzugman
We can quote the bible on this :
“So when they continued asking him, he lifted up himself, and said unto them, He that is without sin among you, let him first cast a stone at her.
John 8:7-11 King James Version (KJV)”
https://www.google.mu/search?q=let+him+who+has+never+sinned+cast+the+first+stone&sca_esv=562421344&source=hp&ei=xkj1ZKv3B6G_i...
Soman Ragavan. 4 September, 2023.
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September 3rd, 2023 22:10
My girl, my girl, my girl
vividvoid14 said:
favorite line is when u say \" though i\'m pass eighty-three u mean the whole world to me\"
September 3rd, 2023 19:18
vividvoid14 said:
favorite line is when u say \" though i\'m pass eighty-three u mean the whole world to me\"
September 3rd, 2023 19:18
My girl, my girl, my girl
peto said:
Old school magic
You are a lucky man
And I\'m sure she is a lucky lady
Loved the rhyme
September 3rd, 2023 09:36
peto said:
Old school magic
You are a lucky man
And I\'m sure she is a lucky lady
Loved the rhyme
September 3rd, 2023 09:36
My girl, my girl, my girl
Suetah said:
Nice! Like the words you chose and short, sweet and to the point :)
September 3rd, 2023 09:01
Suetah said:
Nice! Like the words you chose and short, sweet and to the point :)
September 3rd, 2023 09:01
Inclucde every item
peto said:
Counting our blessings can\'t help but please ya
Thanks for the reminder
As wise as ever
August 29th, 2023 09:18
peto said:
Counting our blessings can\'t help but please ya
Thanks for the reminder
As wise as ever
August 29th, 2023 09:18
Say \"hi\"
2781 said:
I was in the city today, ask a battler how business was? Not great. Gave him a few dollars and a few moments. Made my day.
August 23rd, 2023 12:20
2781 said:
I was in the city today, ask a battler how business was? Not great. Gave him a few dollars and a few moments. Made my day.
August 23rd, 2023 12:20
Say \"hi\"
Pop64 said:
Such a small request, but such an impactful action, all wrapped in a beautiful rhyming read.
August 23rd, 2023 08:47
Pop64 said:
Such a small request, but such an impactful action, all wrapped in a beautiful rhyming read.
August 23rd, 2023 08:47
Better goals
jarcher54 said:
Wise words... I am a perfectionist of my own work, but try hard to be tolerant of others. I\'m working on heeding your sage advice!
August 19th, 2023 10:28
jarcher54 said:
Wise words... I am a perfectionist of my own work, but try hard to be tolerant of others. I\'m working on heeding your sage advice!
August 19th, 2023 10:28
Relatively speaking
peto said:
Couldn\'t agree more
Wise as ever
We don\'t know we are living nowadays
Always enjoy reading from you
August 14th, 2023 09:43
peto said:
Couldn\'t agree more
Wise as ever
We don\'t know we are living nowadays
Always enjoy reading from you
August 14th, 2023 09:43
good offerings everywhere
Bobby O said:
I love the way arcane and deign rhyme. One of my favorite snd midndersyood words is BANE , st first I thought it could fit in this piece but I was wrong, it really belongs as a descriptive annex included to pontificate about that one day when you had to make sure all those hippos were squeaky clean.
Oh, BTW, this piece is a winner.
Nice write good read
July 30th, 2023 17:42
Bobby O said:
I love the way arcane and deign rhyme. One of my favorite snd midndersyood words is BANE , st first I thought it could fit in this piece but I was wrong, it really belongs as a descriptive annex included to pontificate about that one day when you had to make sure all those hippos were squeaky clean.
Oh, BTW, this piece is a winner.
Nice write good read
July 30th, 2023 17:42
My favorite hippocrene
Bobby O said:
I chuckled from the top of my clavicle. Wow, how nice clavicle is to say. I gotta put it in a poem. Would a girl appreciate a clavicular compliment? Hmmm. It’ll b tricky subject matter. But back to our hippo which is a horse that hangs in water and generates canals that defray water in a direction different than current. And clean it mean w sheen unafraud that suddenly you’re crushed cuz he sees you looking at a bird that rides him. I’d be nervous and I’d outsource that hippo hygiene to an unsuspecting limerick writing mime.
July 28th, 2023 22:50
Bobby O said:
I chuckled from the top of my clavicle. Wow, how nice clavicle is to say. I gotta put it in a poem. Would a girl appreciate a clavicular compliment? Hmmm. It’ll b tricky subject matter. But back to our hippo which is a horse that hangs in water and generates canals that defray water in a direction different than current. And clean it mean w sheen unafraud that suddenly you’re crushed cuz he sees you looking at a bird that rides him. I’d be nervous and I’d outsource that hippo hygiene to an unsuspecting limerick writing mime.
July 28th, 2023 22:50
Pick one
Pop64 said:
Not rhyming is certainly a choice and a definite impact upon the reader. Well crafted!
July 27th, 2023 10:57
Pop64 said:
Not rhyming is certainly a choice and a definite impact upon the reader. Well crafted!
July 27th, 2023 10:57
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