Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Selfless / Selfish
jazzwa30 said:
so true society today is so centered around their image good read
August 5th, 2022 07:56
jazzwa30 said:
so true society today is so centered around their image good read
August 5th, 2022 07:56
Selfless / Selfish
L. B. Mek said:
(hopefully
some peaceful rest
a place, devoid of anxiety
or hope
just stillness, devoid of time
a place
we can blink and swim
in fond memories
feeling proximity of our loved ones
aside us in that interconnected
nothingness..
a place where selfishness
is born of selflessness
and that sense of self
exists only, in the images
where our mementos
await to be replayed
time-n-again
a constant loop of curated, daydreams
in a dreamless state)
maybe, wishfully
personally, I will settle
for anything close to that
dear Poet
August 5th, 2022 03:16
L. B. Mek said:
(hopefully
some peaceful rest
a place, devoid of anxiety
or hope
just stillness, devoid of time
a place
we can blink and swim
in fond memories
feeling proximity of our loved ones
aside us in that interconnected
nothingness..
a place where selfishness
is born of selflessness
and that sense of self
exists only, in the images
where our mementos
await to be replayed
time-n-again
a constant loop of curated, daydreams
in a dreamless state)
maybe, wishfully
personally, I will settle
for anything close to that
dear Poet
August 5th, 2022 03:16
Brainwashed Boys
L. B. Mek said:
if we can\'t accept our differences
in harmless, preferences:
we inevitably, kill each other!
be it with sounds, metaphors or bullets
...
so i just, choose to let things be
till it effects me
this affords me
a little longer
before becoming a soldier
like the rest of the conflict
salivating, herd..
\'woosah\'
August 4th, 2022 03:47
L. B. Mek said:
if we can\'t accept our differences
in harmless, preferences:
we inevitably, kill each other!
be it with sounds, metaphors or bullets
...
so i just, choose to let things be
till it effects me
this affords me
a little longer
before becoming a soldier
like the rest of the conflict
salivating, herd..
\'woosah\'
August 4th, 2022 03:47
Office Slavery Drones
Doggerel Dave said:
Not just the office, but any job can have a culture which could be authoritarian or cooperative or any point between.
Good write which covers one extreme end of that spectrum. Absolutely right to walk away.
August 1st, 2022 17:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Not just the office, but any job can have a culture which could be authoritarian or cooperative or any point between.
Good write which covers one extreme end of that spectrum. Absolutely right to walk away.
August 1st, 2022 17:57
Walking in the sunshine thinking of corny rappers who can\'t rhyme
Manny Jordan said:
This is an awesome piece
Keep inking
August 1st, 2022 04:35
Manny Jordan said:
This is an awesome piece
Keep inking
August 1st, 2022 04:35
Walking in the sunshine thinking of corny rappers who can\'t rhyme
L. B. Mek said:
\'Is air really fresh?
I just smell smoke\'..
indeed, they\'ve
even put a premium
on clean, air
soon, aside our fruits
they\'ll be selling us
back, our fresh oxygen
and
some kid
\'will be reading the ingredients
and expiry dates, asking
how they make that...?\'
(insightful commentary
a great read, thanks for sharing
dear poet)
August 1st, 2022 03:32
L. B. Mek said:
\'Is air really fresh?
I just smell smoke\'..
indeed, they\'ve
even put a premium
on clean, air
soon, aside our fruits
they\'ll be selling us
back, our fresh oxygen
and
some kid
\'will be reading the ingredients
and expiry dates, asking
how they make that...?\'
(insightful commentary
a great read, thanks for sharing
dear poet)
August 1st, 2022 03:32
Office Slavery Drones
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words Cc, I can understand where you come from but when I was working I always found that treating office staff with respect always made the people so much more efficient.
Andy
August 1st, 2022 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words Cc, I can understand where you come from but when I was working I always found that treating office staff with respect always made the people so much more efficient.
Andy
August 1st, 2022 01:06
Live Music and Good Times
L. B. Mek said:
awesome!
so many of my fav\'s you\'ve named
might be late in her career, but
if you get a chance to watch Tracy Chapman live
in a small venue
try her out, it\'s one of the most impactful experiences of my life
(my 2 cents, luckily its free)
lol
July 29th, 2022 04:04
L. B. Mek said:
awesome!
so many of my fav\'s you\'ve named
might be late in her career, but
if you get a chance to watch Tracy Chapman live
in a small venue
try her out, it\'s one of the most impactful experiences of my life
(my 2 cents, luckily its free)
lol
July 29th, 2022 04:04
Society Says
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
\'Fight those in Power
by defining, our own
path in Life..!
If you ain\'t harming
anyone
then just, do You!\'
more power to you, dear poet
for sharing such a healing
message
July 28th, 2022 03:42
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
\'Fight those in Power
by defining, our own
path in Life..!
If you ain\'t harming
anyone
then just, do You!\'
more power to you, dear poet
for sharing such a healing
message
July 28th, 2022 03:42
Peaceful
arqios said:
Anything to block out negativity! Vibranium would do the job, Cap\'s got his work cut out for him!
July 27th, 2022 07:53
arqios said:
Anything to block out negativity! Vibranium would do the job, Cap\'s got his work cut out for him!
July 27th, 2022 07:53
A Mental Mess
AlitaOpal said:
Great write! Be all you can be stay inspired and all the great things above L.B Mek said.. 🎈
July 20th, 2022 09:53
AlitaOpal said:
Great write! Be all you can be stay inspired and all the great things above L.B Mek said.. 🎈
July 20th, 2022 09:53
The Battle for my Soul
AlitaOpal said:
Sounds like a bad trip, great write 🎈
July 20th, 2022 09:37
AlitaOpal said:
Sounds like a bad trip, great write 🎈
July 20th, 2022 09:37
A Mental Mess
L. B. Mek said:
we all think we\'re
the different one
and yeah, we all different
but still, we must realise
we humans be 99.99%, alike
so our waters, inevitably
will bleed and taint, each others
colours..
so yes, dear Poet
be You! be Proud! and sing it loud!
but remember
we all just fallible humans
some more aware
other\'s blissfully, unaware
but all of us, alike
drinking and shitting
till our life\'s, bill
is served..
(a great message
empowering our individuality
is a great, trait)
thanks for sharing
July 19th, 2022 06:00
L. B. Mek said:
we all think we\'re
the different one
and yeah, we all different
but still, we must realise
we humans be 99.99%, alike
so our waters, inevitably
will bleed and taint, each others
colours..
so yes, dear Poet
be You! be Proud! and sing it loud!
but remember
we all just fallible humans
some more aware
other\'s blissfully, unaware
but all of us, alike
drinking and shitting
till our life\'s, bill
is served..
(a great message
empowering our individuality
is a great, trait)
thanks for sharing
July 19th, 2022 06:00
A Mental Mess
evenwheniLie said:
Nice poem, and self examining to, you should do more of that and not look up; also write some more to, that was excellent.
July 19th, 2022 02:17
evenwheniLie said:
Nice poem, and self examining to, you should do more of that and not look up; also write some more to, that was excellent.
July 19th, 2022 02:17
Fighting my Dreams
L. B. Mek said:
nah some dreams are far too real
I don\'t mess with dreams or nightmares
just try to forget them as soon as I can..
lol
thanks for sharing
(you\'re so creative, dear poet
endlessly diverse in your topics
a great trait, in a poet!)
July 15th, 2022 03:09
L. B. Mek said:
nah some dreams are far too real
I don\'t mess with dreams or nightmares
just try to forget them as soon as I can..
lol
thanks for sharing
(you\'re so creative, dear poet
endlessly diverse in your topics
a great trait, in a poet!)
July 15th, 2022 03:09
Controversial Conundrums and Autotune Mumblers
L. B. Mek said:
\'music is dead, long live music..\'
(a great read, thank you!)
July 14th, 2022 01:03
L. B. Mek said:
\'music is dead, long live music..\'
(a great read, thank you!)
July 14th, 2022 01:03
Spiritual Distancing
Goldfinch60 said:
That confusion will only be there if untrustworthy people are allowed in you lie, trusted people are so few and far between though.
Andy
July 12th, 2022 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
That confusion will only be there if untrustworthy people are allowed in you lie, trusted people are so few and far between though.
Andy
July 12th, 2022 00:44
Spiritual Distancing
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, distance
is the only wat to survive
this days, idiocy
is a very contagious
plague
of modernity
lol
\'well, at least
that\'s what they shout back at me
as they flee...\'
July 11th, 2022 03:08
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, distance
is the only wat to survive
this days, idiocy
is a very contagious
plague
of modernity
lol
\'well, at least
that\'s what they shout back at me
as they flee...\'
July 11th, 2022 03:08
Upset The Natural Order
Doggerel Dave said:
Some of your criticism may be right, but let\'s not base your argument on the plot of a fictional TV series.
Let\'s get more reality based.
July 10th, 2022 06:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Some of your criticism may be right, but let\'s not base your argument on the plot of a fictional TV series.
Let\'s get more reality based.
July 10th, 2022 06:16
BBC - Bastard Bullshitting Corporation
Paul Bell said:
The BBC is admired all around the world. Sadly, in Britain, it\'s become a bit of a joke.
July 9th, 2022 11:06
Paul Bell said:
The BBC is admired all around the world. Sadly, in Britain, it\'s become a bit of a joke.
July 9th, 2022 11:06
BBC - Bastard Bullshitting Corporation
orchidee said:
Good old \'Auntie\' Beeb?!
I never knew it was the b****** b****** Corporation!
Eastenders is enough to depress anyone. Is Wellard still in it - the dog?! Was last time I watched it.
July 9th, 2022 06:13
orchidee said:
Good old \'Auntie\' Beeb?!
I never knew it was the b****** b****** Corporation!
Eastenders is enough to depress anyone. Is Wellard still in it - the dog?! Was last time I watched it.
July 9th, 2022 06:13
The Veil of Television
orchidee said:
The news tends to emphasise the bad points.
Yet is it true, as in newspapers - the country is being run by Bozo, Coco, Thicko, etc?!
July 7th, 2022 02:06
orchidee said:
The news tends to emphasise the bad points.
Yet is it true, as in newspapers - the country is being run by Bozo, Coco, Thicko, etc?!
July 7th, 2022 02:06
The Veil of Television
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Coolcuk.
\"How can you tell when a politician is lying?\"
\"Their lips move!\"
Andy
July 7th, 2022 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Coolcuk.
\"How can you tell when a politician is lying?\"
\"Their lips move!\"
Andy
July 7th, 2022 01:25
Entertain the Dead Brain
L. B. Mek said:
how many people know of
NFT\'s?
or the emerging importance of Morocco in the coming decades?
how many, know
and watch-on, as it all unfolds..
(this is such an important write
dear Poe, yet
no one around to heed it\'s truths
apart from impotent fools, like me
because
those that know, are too busy
positioning themselves, to profit
from the fallout...!
such is the sickening, depravity
in our
inherited, inhumane cyclicality
of conceited immorality..)
July 4th, 2022 04:37
L. B. Mek said:
how many people know of
NFT\'s?
or the emerging importance of Morocco in the coming decades?
how many, know
and watch-on, as it all unfolds..
(this is such an important write
dear Poe, yet
no one around to heed it\'s truths
apart from impotent fools, like me
because
those that know, are too busy
positioning themselves, to profit
from the fallout...!
such is the sickening, depravity
in our
inherited, inhumane cyclicality
of conceited immorality..)
July 4th, 2022 04:37
Walking into Oblivion
Goldfinch60 said:
Medication can take your feelings away, as long as you survive without it all is well.
Andy
July 4th, 2022 00:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Medication can take your feelings away, as long as you survive without it all is well.
Andy
July 4th, 2022 00:17
Free-Dome
arqios said:
A cry of countless generations. It\'s all about the hive and the colony, they all have a queen, for humans that is quite unseen.
July 2nd, 2022 20:38
arqios said:
A cry of countless generations. It\'s all about the hive and the colony, they all have a queen, for humans that is quite unseen.
July 2nd, 2022 20:38
Happy?
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
indeed!
\'turning keys, without
first
having to twist ourselves
to fit
is that, distance
between, life\'s realities
and our ethereal, dreams\'
(or so I think)
lol
July 1st, 2022 03:43
L. B. Mek said:
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
indeed!
\'turning keys, without
first
having to twist ourselves
to fit
is that, distance
between, life\'s realities
and our ethereal, dreams\'
(or so I think)
lol
July 1st, 2022 03:43
Happy?
arqios said:
That question mark just struck the man in the back of his head...was that a pate?
July 1st, 2022 02:42
arqios said:
That question mark just struck the man in the back of his head...was that a pate?
July 1st, 2022 02:42
Happy?
orchidee said:
I had a dream that I was going to buy a Beatles Album - true. But it was a rare one or something, too expensive for me - then I woke up!
July 1st, 2022 02:09
orchidee said:
I had a dream that I was going to buy a Beatles Album - true. But it was a rare one or something, too expensive for me - then I woke up!
July 1st, 2022 02:09
3am (The Witching Hour)
verona said:
loved the story-telling in this one. and the way u combine a spooky vibe with a direct style.
what an experience it must have been ig lol
June 30th, 2022 08:31
verona said:
loved the story-telling in this one. and the way u combine a spooky vibe with a direct style.
what an experience it must have been ig lol
June 30th, 2022 08:31
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