Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
White Men Still Can\'t Jump
L. B. Mek said:
lost Hollywood and its blasphemous
remakes...?!
(loved the original, so underrated!
three great actors of their generation
just as they were peaking
so much fun
and a wonderful snapshot of that era)
I\'m gonna try and watch it again soon
thank you! dear Poet
February 6th, 2023 06:01
L. B. Mek said:
lost Hollywood and its blasphemous
remakes...?!
(loved the original, so underrated!
three great actors of their generation
just as they were peaking
so much fun
and a wonderful snapshot of that era)
I\'m gonna try and watch it again soon
thank you! dear Poet
February 6th, 2023 06:01
White Men Still Can\'t Jump
orchidee said:
I thought it read \'white men can\'t cook\' at first! Now - can they cook?! lol.
February 6th, 2023 03:07
orchidee said:
I thought it read \'white men can\'t cook\' at first! Now - can they cook?! lol.
February 6th, 2023 03:07
Welcome To The Spiritual War (What Side Are You Fighting For?)
L. B. Mek said:
I don\'t do war
February 3rd, 2023 06:01
L. B. Mek said:
I don\'t do war
February 3rd, 2023 06:01
Wholesommusic
Doggerel Dave said:
Twas ever thus - there were big exceptions in the sixties, seventies and perhaps eighties, but I mostly retreated to \'folk\'.
February 1st, 2023 06:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Twas ever thus - there were big exceptions in the sixties, seventies and perhaps eighties, but I mostly retreated to \'folk\'.
February 1st, 2023 06:42
Wholesommusic
arqios said:
The magic is sadly gone.
We are left with what appears to be hogswill.... or pre-bacon...
February 1st, 2023 04:08
arqios said:
The magic is sadly gone.
We are left with what appears to be hogswill.... or pre-bacon...
February 1st, 2023 04:08
The Car Of Life
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
accessibility a necessity
when utilising such a relatable imagery
as a window to the wisdom, imbued
in your purposed poetry!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
(and society slows down, as we crash n burn
conditioned, to think
must get that zoomed-in newsreel clip
...)
January 30th, 2023 04:55
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
accessibility a necessity
when utilising such a relatable imagery
as a window to the wisdom, imbued
in your purposed poetry!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
(and society slows down, as we crash n burn
conditioned, to think
must get that zoomed-in newsreel clip
...)
January 30th, 2023 04:55
Incompatible Souls And Selfish Fire
L. B. Mek said:
\'beware signing deals
with those corrupting vices
impersonating themselves
as an escape, from life\'
this is a unique read, dear poet
a nugget of insightful commentary
(avoidance
a much demeaned, survival
necessity of life
as gangs of idolised, ideals
face-off
at a mere spark of differences..
it takes
real skill, to find a safe path
in modernity
avoiding those easy pitfalls n vices
in society
beginning with our warped impressions
purely
on aesthetic appearances
based
on our internalised fears
than any individuals, actual deeds...)
January 27th, 2023 06:52
L. B. Mek said:
\'beware signing deals
with those corrupting vices
impersonating themselves
as an escape, from life\'
this is a unique read, dear poet
a nugget of insightful commentary
(avoidance
a much demeaned, survival
necessity of life
as gangs of idolised, ideals
face-off
at a mere spark of differences..
it takes
real skill, to find a safe path
in modernity
avoiding those easy pitfalls n vices
in society
beginning with our warped impressions
purely
on aesthetic appearances
based
on our internalised fears
than any individuals, actual deeds...)
January 27th, 2023 06:52
Spock\'s Mind Meld
L. B. Mek said:
Spock, one of my favourite characters
and Vulcan\'s, one of sci-fi fantasy\'s
greatest species
sadly, I fear humanity
will never evolve to value
such a reasoned and sensitive
embrace of existence
(a wonderful dedication
and statement of inking ambition, dear Poet
may your circuits, never
short
merely teleport
from one state, to their natural
next
with \'Scotty\'s\' trusty fingers
guiding your fate..)
lol
January 23rd, 2023 06:46
L. B. Mek said:
Spock, one of my favourite characters
and Vulcan\'s, one of sci-fi fantasy\'s
greatest species
sadly, I fear humanity
will never evolve to value
such a reasoned and sensitive
embrace of existence
(a wonderful dedication
and statement of inking ambition, dear Poet
may your circuits, never
short
merely teleport
from one state, to their natural
next
with \'Scotty\'s\' trusty fingers
guiding your fate..)
lol
January 23rd, 2023 06:46
Actress Or Activist? Part.2 (Greta\'s Arrest)
Ok Waleed said:
Should we be focused on the activism or the activist?
January 21st, 2023 16:29
Ok Waleed said:
Should we be focused on the activism or the activist?
January 21st, 2023 16:29
Actress Or Activist? Part.2 (Greta\'s Arrest)
orchidee said:
Some don\'t like her - telling us what to do, a jumped up........!
January 21st, 2023 08:35
orchidee said:
Some don\'t like her - telling us what to do, a jumped up........!
January 21st, 2023 08:35
Back To The 80s
Doggerel Dave said:
Certainly felt like a time just before the world began to go down the gurgler.... maybe... who knows? But please remember that the 80\'s was only possible, and owes much to the 60\'s and 70\'s....
January 20th, 2023 16:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Certainly felt like a time just before the world began to go down the gurgler.... maybe... who knows? But please remember that the 80\'s was only possible, and owes much to the 60\'s and 70\'s....
January 20th, 2023 16:24
Back To The 80s
L. B. Mek said:
80\'s delivered so many classics
enjoyed your gallery
so many images that invite recalling
of cherished memories..
thank you!
January 20th, 2023 06:39
L. B. Mek said:
80\'s delivered so many classics
enjoyed your gallery
so many images that invite recalling
of cherished memories..
thank you!
January 20th, 2023 06:39
Castrated And Hated For Speaking Out (Andrew Brigden)
Kinsey Peterson said:
Even in a poem riddled with anger and blame, it was lovely to see compassion within it. \"For my niece.\" May those familial bonds withstand the test of political disarray.
January 13th, 2023 11:47
Kinsey Peterson said:
Even in a poem riddled with anger and blame, it was lovely to see compassion within it. \"For my niece.\" May those familial bonds withstand the test of political disarray.
January 13th, 2023 11:47
Castrated And Hated For Speaking Out (Andrew Brigden)
L. B. Mek said:
\'They wanted war
Between vaccinated and unvaccinated
Stoking division and hatred\'
(tried and tested methods:
divide to concur
segregate, to rule over)
imagine a world
where 60% of its industries
ceased to operate
for months at a time
for multiple years
caused by a plague, we know
was manmade
and yet here we are, back to normal
billions of lives effected
and not a single person held, accountable
and beneath it all, is that cesspool
where profiteering vultures
made trillions for themselves and their friends
but all is well, now
world has been conditioned to grab masks
at every sneeze
I wonder what they have in store for us next
we decimated Iraq for its phantom WMD\'s
while we watch-on
as WMD\'s are utilised to condemn our realities
8 billion people, subjugated
by the strategic fear, wielded
by the 1% in power...
no one can write, dystopian fantasy
as fantastical
as the reality we endure, every day of our lives
January 13th, 2023 06:25
L. B. Mek said:
\'They wanted war
Between vaccinated and unvaccinated
Stoking division and hatred\'
(tried and tested methods:
divide to concur
segregate, to rule over)
imagine a world
where 60% of its industries
ceased to operate
for months at a time
for multiple years
caused by a plague, we know
was manmade
and yet here we are, back to normal
billions of lives effected
and not a single person held, accountable
and beneath it all, is that cesspool
where profiteering vultures
made trillions for themselves and their friends
but all is well, now
world has been conditioned to grab masks
at every sneeze
I wonder what they have in store for us next
we decimated Iraq for its phantom WMD\'s
while we watch-on
as WMD\'s are utilised to condemn our realities
8 billion people, subjugated
by the strategic fear, wielded
by the 1% in power...
no one can write, dystopian fantasy
as fantastical
as the reality we endure, every day of our lives
January 13th, 2023 06:25
Earth (The Prison Planet)
L. B. Mek said:
(add the Bilderberg group and keep on going...
still, at least I came to be
in a time when, if I choose it
\'they\'
can\'t fuck with how I butter my toast
or sugar my tea and coffee
grateful, am I
for this mirage of freedom, afforded to me
by sheer evolutionary, timeline lottery
a \'Tomorrow\' is coming
when chips entwined with our warped mindsets
will insure
even this, will be a long forgotten
dream
someday soon...)
Happy New Year, dear Poet
question it all, including
yourself
(\'know thy self\'
to emancipate, ourselves
free of those clutches, beyond
our very capacity to glean
those societal mirages and lies)
January 6th, 2023 07:20
L. B. Mek said:
(add the Bilderberg group and keep on going...
still, at least I came to be
in a time when, if I choose it
\'they\'
can\'t fuck with how I butter my toast
or sugar my tea and coffee
grateful, am I
for this mirage of freedom, afforded to me
by sheer evolutionary, timeline lottery
a \'Tomorrow\' is coming
when chips entwined with our warped mindsets
will insure
even this, will be a long forgotten
dream
someday soon...)
Happy New Year, dear Poet
question it all, including
yourself
(\'know thy self\'
to emancipate, ourselves
free of those clutches, beyond
our very capacity to glean
those societal mirages and lies)
January 6th, 2023 07:20
Life As The Economy Drones
mvvenkataraman said:
First I studied the meaning friend,
Only then I noticed the rhyming,
Nice poem and all the best
To write more such poems!
January 4th, 2023 21:20
mvvenkataraman said:
First I studied the meaning friend,
Only then I noticed the rhyming,
Nice poem and all the best
To write more such poems!
January 4th, 2023 21:20
Andrew Tate (What\'s Your Birthdate?)
orchidee said:
I don\'t know the guy nor the story.
January 2nd, 2023 09:09
orchidee said:
I don\'t know the guy nor the story.
January 2nd, 2023 09:09
Sun Energy (God\'s Eye)
orchidee said:
It\'s good you felt spiritual and not \'religious\'. That\'s the cause of a lot of problems, I think.
December 27th, 2022 02:47
orchidee said:
It\'s good you felt spiritual and not \'religious\'. That\'s the cause of a lot of problems, I think.
December 27th, 2022 02:47
Sun Energy (God\'s Eye)
Goldfinch60 said:
May that veil never come over your life again Coolcuk.
Andy
December 27th, 2022 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
May that veil never come over your life again Coolcuk.
Andy
December 27th, 2022 02:26
Dreaming of People from My Past
rhmn_7 said:
Maybe it\'s not just you but people from the past want to see you? Good read.
December 26th, 2022 16:28
rhmn_7 said:
Maybe it\'s not just you but people from the past want to see you? Good read.
December 26th, 2022 16:28
Gifts Vs Good Deeds (Christmas Time)
orchidee said:
Yes - we don\'t actually know if He was born on Dec 25th or not.
December 25th, 2022 03:09
orchidee said:
Yes - we don\'t actually know if He was born on Dec 25th or not.
December 25th, 2022 03:09
Black Squares
L. B. Mek said:
yup, if you have time
check out an old piece of mine titled
\'veracity\'s assassins\'..
and that BLM fraud couple
with their Hollywood property purchases
has been well documented
but what\'s really shameful
is how these entitled, pseudo activist\'s
turn into spineless scamming, dictators
at a mere taste of money, power or control..
and they do it, get away with it
because apparently, the entire worlds is scared
to call a black activist a thief
because now the page has been flipped
where racism, activism
is a tool for confidence fraud
apparently, every white human
is a relative of a slaver
so if they dare to point out
the very fact
that two female black woman (as the leaders)
blatantly, stole millions of donated
\'charity\' money
then Blatantly, purchased
Hollywood homes
without even bothering to hide their name
while magazines across the word
lauded them
for being iconic feminists...?
then what happens
when the truth comes out
that obstinance of silence
as a wall of indifference
just like that Amber Heard, ignorance
so prevalent in the media world
because
people, are now indoctrinated in that
PC theology..
where apparently to champion feminism
and the need for minority\'s (not just black people)
to be given an equal opportunity to succeed
equates, to crimes
being committed by this identity groups
must be forgiven, without accusation
because, they\'re all
victims that need to protected
and removed from humanity\'s
\'need to be accountable for our actions\'
collective responsibility
and where will this take us
to that inevitable
retaliatory political mindset
where everyone gets fed up
with this PC bul sht
and its back
to socialism\'s, divisive tactics
natzi\'s concurring germany
first
with that fad narrative of antisemitism
based on a groundless poisonous heritage
of \'hatred\', germinating
from christian doctrines
against the very people, that
gave the world \'theology\'
let alone that whole
\'give the other cheek\' lesson
pointedly, chosen to be ignored
collectively
...
so now kanye, is allowed to spew hatred
because that\'s what his christianity
has emboldened him to inherit
as a mantra
as a go-to, pointing fingers blame
but
its ok, to call him mad
he\'s crazy
because he is male
if a black woman was saying
what kanye is
would there be widespread coverage?
will she be labelled crazy
or will we be talking about what caused her to \'change\'
how \'she\' must be a victim
...
fck
so deflating,
humanity, barely makes
one step of progress
from the 60\'s to 2020\'s
barely hundred years since
woman got to vote
and the conceited self-serving
sharks are waiting
to take advantage and warp all that progress
how many millions of master\'s and doctorates
do woman hold, yet
our screens are filled
with female militant newsreaders
who can\'t formulate an objective opinion
now, its ideological gang warfare
\'I\'m a female so I support All Females\'
\'I\'m a human being with coloured skin so I support all coloured people\'
\'I\'m a man so I\'m to blame, for my ancestors
my role is to shut up
feel guilty and wait it out\'
...
fck!
Black Panther, \'Wakanda\'
supported by the whole world
a huge success,
Black Panther two comes out
now the narrative is
if you don\'t watch it or rate it, you\'re a racist
really?
so PC culture is a tool for stripping us
of individual thought or opinion?
so i\'m a racist black man
...
fck!
and yet
woman in rural india
are literally
being murdered, at birth
because
of that horrific mindset
where they\'re deemed
a waste of expense, an extra mouth to feed
then we have a situation manifesting
where there are no young woman in rural india
so gangs of men, patrol
to abuse and rape any woman
who dares
to stay out late...?
and here we are
in our \'first world feminism\'
being hijacked
for equally par rights
for the one percentile
making their celebrity millions
..
fck
and now
\'I am left feeling like a dinosaur
misogynistic and racist
archaic pig\'
because, this very truths
go-on
to embolden the KKk\'s and hate groups
waiting for societies far-left, tide
to change
look at the extremist right\'s progress
in politics, all over the world
italy, france etc
....
fck!
FUCK!!!
so demoralizingly shitty
this cyclical need for self-destruction
humanity
is so addicted to...
Fck
I\'m sorry, it all just came out
but what the hell do I know
I\'m just another overopinionated fool
December 23rd, 2022 09:18
L. B. Mek said:
yup, if you have time
check out an old piece of mine titled
\'veracity\'s assassins\'..
and that BLM fraud couple
with their Hollywood property purchases
has been well documented
but what\'s really shameful
is how these entitled, pseudo activist\'s
turn into spineless scamming, dictators
at a mere taste of money, power or control..
and they do it, get away with it
because apparently, the entire worlds is scared
to call a black activist a thief
because now the page has been flipped
where racism, activism
is a tool for confidence fraud
apparently, every white human
is a relative of a slaver
so if they dare to point out
the very fact
that two female black woman (as the leaders)
blatantly, stole millions of donated
\'charity\' money
then Blatantly, purchased
Hollywood homes
without even bothering to hide their name
while magazines across the word
lauded them
for being iconic feminists...?
then what happens
when the truth comes out
that obstinance of silence
as a wall of indifference
just like that Amber Heard, ignorance
so prevalent in the media world
because
people, are now indoctrinated in that
PC theology..
where apparently to champion feminism
and the need for minority\'s (not just black people)
to be given an equal opportunity to succeed
equates, to crimes
being committed by this identity groups
must be forgiven, without accusation
because, they\'re all
victims that need to protected
and removed from humanity\'s
\'need to be accountable for our actions\'
collective responsibility
and where will this take us
to that inevitable
retaliatory political mindset
where everyone gets fed up
with this PC bul sht
and its back
to socialism\'s, divisive tactics
natzi\'s concurring germany
first
with that fad narrative of antisemitism
based on a groundless poisonous heritage
of \'hatred\', germinating
from christian doctrines
against the very people, that
gave the world \'theology\'
let alone that whole
\'give the other cheek\' lesson
pointedly, chosen to be ignored
collectively
...
so now kanye, is allowed to spew hatred
because that\'s what his christianity
has emboldened him to inherit
as a mantra
as a go-to, pointing fingers blame
but
its ok, to call him mad
he\'s crazy
because he is male
if a black woman was saying
what kanye is
would there be widespread coverage?
will she be labelled crazy
or will we be talking about what caused her to \'change\'
how \'she\' must be a victim
...
fck
so deflating,
humanity, barely makes
one step of progress
from the 60\'s to 2020\'s
barely hundred years since
woman got to vote
and the conceited self-serving
sharks are waiting
to take advantage and warp all that progress
how many millions of master\'s and doctorates
do woman hold, yet
our screens are filled
with female militant newsreaders
who can\'t formulate an objective opinion
now, its ideological gang warfare
\'I\'m a female so I support All Females\'
\'I\'m a human being with coloured skin so I support all coloured people\'
\'I\'m a man so I\'m to blame, for my ancestors
my role is to shut up
feel guilty and wait it out\'
...
fck!
Black Panther, \'Wakanda\'
supported by the whole world
a huge success,
Black Panther two comes out
now the narrative is
if you don\'t watch it or rate it, you\'re a racist
really?
so PC culture is a tool for stripping us
of individual thought or opinion?
so i\'m a racist black man
...
fck!
and yet
woman in rural india
are literally
being murdered, at birth
because
of that horrific mindset
where they\'re deemed
a waste of expense, an extra mouth to feed
then we have a situation manifesting
where there are no young woman in rural india
so gangs of men, patrol
to abuse and rape any woman
who dares
to stay out late...?
and here we are
in our \'first world feminism\'
being hijacked
for equally par rights
for the one percentile
making their celebrity millions
..
fck
and now
\'I am left feeling like a dinosaur
misogynistic and racist
archaic pig\'
because, this very truths
go-on
to embolden the KKk\'s and hate groups
waiting for societies far-left, tide
to change
look at the extremist right\'s progress
in politics, all over the world
italy, france etc
....
fck!
FUCK!!!
so demoralizingly shitty
this cyclical need for self-destruction
humanity
is so addicted to...
Fck
I\'m sorry, it all just came out
but what the hell do I know
I\'m just another overopinionated fool
December 23rd, 2022 09:18
What If Aliens Are Really Demons?
Saxon Crow said:
What if they\'re angels?!
December 20th, 2022 07:25
Saxon Crow said:
What if they\'re angels?!
December 20th, 2022 07:25
Underground Hip Hop Special
L. B. Mek said:
hope you have a great time!
stay safe
December 19th, 2022 07:13
L. B. Mek said:
hope you have a great time!
stay safe
December 19th, 2022 07:13
Tories Steal From Purses Of Nurses
Doggerel Dave said:
This is one of your best, mate - instead of a focus on the misdemeanors perpetrated by so called celebrities, you have approached the core of the problem. With focus you could crack it......
December 18th, 2022 03:17
Doggerel Dave said:
This is one of your best, mate - instead of a focus on the misdemeanors perpetrated by so called celebrities, you have approached the core of the problem. With focus you could crack it......
December 18th, 2022 03:17
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