Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
England Is Lying In Ruins
orchidee said:
That Sam Smith pic has put me off my food for a month now.
If he strips - just don\'t let us see it - it\'s too ghastly! lol.
May 3rd, 2023 01:47
orchidee said:
That Sam Smith pic has put me off my food for a month now.
If he strips - just don\'t let us see it - it\'s too ghastly! lol.
May 3rd, 2023 01:47
Audrey II (Little Shop Of Horrors)
orchidee said:
It\'s Audrey from Corrie. She is age about 150! lol.
May 2nd, 2023 02:04
orchidee said:
It\'s Audrey from Corrie. She is age about 150! lol.
May 2nd, 2023 02:04
I Pledge No Allegiance
orchidee said:
I thought it was Saturday? Tomorrow\'s Tuesday. lol.
May 1st, 2023 07:48
orchidee said:
I thought it was Saturday? Tomorrow\'s Tuesday. lol.
May 1st, 2023 07:48
I Pledge No Allegiance
L. B. Mek said:
what\'s a royal
but a wording of privilege
and yet, so many
are born to a privileged state
so what to do
hate them all, in defiance of fate
pouting for not being born
in a similarly advantageous circumstance..?
if it works for you, as it does for most
that\'s perfectly fine and commendable
while I, have learnt
to value any individual, as just that
an individual
even if part of a greater, evil
till that person does something
to justify, my dislike
I shall not hate, for the sake of hate
Royalty
modernity, distilled
as that easy target of harnessed, hate
from politicians to clerics
striving to convey it, as that symbol
of our collective hate
but
this same, royalty lineage
gifted us, that brave Elizabeth the 1st
that steadfast, Elizabeth the 2nd
and that exemplar sublime
of empathy and motherly love
now remembered as that legacy
of a most beloved, Queen mother
and that first, herald of liberty for all
signed by King John
a conduit to that democracy, we all
still aspire to realise, till this date...
so yes
the king to be, has a horrid taste
in choosing a partner, (poor Diana)
and his brother, is filth incarnate
who should be rotting in jail
and his youngest son, has been brainwashed
by a failed actress
but, Charles
is till afforded my ounce of trust
by his legacy of progressive
and life affecting, endeavours
so, no
dear cherished Poet
I do not resent him, his day
after 60 odd years of waiting
and yet
I too, will not be watching that farce
I love my blighty
so i\'ll toast to the new king, hope
it\'s a good omen for our country
a conduit to a Time of peace
and prosperity for us, All
then go-non about my survival fight
as life...
\'The Queen is dead
Long live the King\'
cheers, n all that malarkey
🍻
(thanks for the extra bank holidays)
😉
May 1st, 2023 05:35
L. B. Mek said:
what\'s a royal
but a wording of privilege
and yet, so many
are born to a privileged state
so what to do
hate them all, in defiance of fate
pouting for not being born
in a similarly advantageous circumstance..?
if it works for you, as it does for most
that\'s perfectly fine and commendable
while I, have learnt
to value any individual, as just that
an individual
even if part of a greater, evil
till that person does something
to justify, my dislike
I shall not hate, for the sake of hate
Royalty
modernity, distilled
as that easy target of harnessed, hate
from politicians to clerics
striving to convey it, as that symbol
of our collective hate
but
this same, royalty lineage
gifted us, that brave Elizabeth the 1st
that steadfast, Elizabeth the 2nd
and that exemplar sublime
of empathy and motherly love
now remembered as that legacy
of a most beloved, Queen mother
and that first, herald of liberty for all
signed by King John
a conduit to that democracy, we all
still aspire to realise, till this date...
so yes
the king to be, has a horrid taste
in choosing a partner, (poor Diana)
and his brother, is filth incarnate
who should be rotting in jail
and his youngest son, has been brainwashed
by a failed actress
but, Charles
is till afforded my ounce of trust
by his legacy of progressive
and life affecting, endeavours
so, no
dear cherished Poet
I do not resent him, his day
after 60 odd years of waiting
and yet
I too, will not be watching that farce
I love my blighty
so i\'ll toast to the new king, hope
it\'s a good omen for our country
a conduit to a Time of peace
and prosperity for us, All
then go-non about my survival fight
as life...
\'The Queen is dead
Long live the King\'
cheers, n all that malarkey
🍻
(thanks for the extra bank holidays)
😉
May 1st, 2023 05:35
Page 3
orchidee said:
You know Jackie, Leilani, etc?! lol. Where are they now?
April 29th, 2023 09:16
orchidee said:
You know Jackie, Leilani, etc?! lol. Where are they now?
April 29th, 2023 09:16
Clarity Within The Imagery
L. B. Mek said:
if not religion, then
next weaponized idea, up next
since collectively, we so enjoy
judging and belittling, others
and finding that \'great power\'
to blame and pray to
when we\'re in da shit
(if it ain\'t broke...)
April 28th, 2023 05:19
L. B. Mek said:
if not religion, then
next weaponized idea, up next
since collectively, we so enjoy
judging and belittling, others
and finding that \'great power\'
to blame and pray to
when we\'re in da shit
(if it ain\'t broke...)
April 28th, 2023 05:19
God Is Not A Woman
Audrey A. said:
The wife is Adam. Blame the woman all you want, it\'s his rib.
April 27th, 2023 06:19
Audrey A. said:
The wife is Adam. Blame the woman all you want, it\'s his rib.
April 27th, 2023 06:19
God Is Not A Woman
2781 said:
What is truth? I read all our problems started because Adam listened to his wife!
April 27th, 2023 06:05
2781 said:
What is truth? I read all our problems started because Adam listened to his wife!
April 27th, 2023 06:05
God Is Not A Woman
orchidee said:
\'He\' God is He and She, I would say. But nothing to do with this gender nonsense. I read there are 73 supposed genders now.
April 27th, 2023 01:33
orchidee said:
\'He\' God is He and She, I would say. But nothing to do with this gender nonsense. I read there are 73 supposed genders now.
April 27th, 2023 01:33
Clarity Within The Imagery
orchidee said:
Why some skulls only have about 3 brain cells in them? - seems like it! Doh! lol.
April 26th, 2023 03:25
orchidee said:
Why some skulls only have about 3 brain cells in them? - seems like it! Doh! lol.
April 26th, 2023 03:25
Clarity Within The Imagery
2781 said:
That\'s why we seek the words, that where the truth is. The imagery is evil, IMHO.
April 26th, 2023 02:01
2781 said:
That\'s why we seek the words, that where the truth is. The imagery is evil, IMHO.
April 26th, 2023 02:01
From The Fallopian To Heaven
2781 said:
We are here for as long as we are needed:)
April 25th, 2023 06:42
2781 said:
We are here for as long as we are needed:)
April 25th, 2023 06:42
From The Fallopian To Heaven
Introverted Sage said:
I like the flow of this.
Relatable and concise.
So much is thrown at us in this short time we have here.
As soon as we think we have it all figured out, something changes our entire perspective.
Nice work
Happy writing!
April 25th, 2023 02:01
Introverted Sage said:
I like the flow of this.
Relatable and concise.
So much is thrown at us in this short time we have here.
As soon as we think we have it all figured out, something changes our entire perspective.
Nice work
Happy writing!
April 25th, 2023 02:01
Pantomime Phases
Doggerel Dave said:
Reminds me of the very old joke - Instruction in the Case of Disaster: \'When the alarm sounds, bend over, put your head between your legs, and kiss your bum good bye\'.
A dose of cynicism well placed, C.
April 24th, 2023 08:26
Doggerel Dave said:
Reminds me of the very old joke - Instruction in the Case of Disaster: \'When the alarm sounds, bend over, put your head between your legs, and kiss your bum good bye\'.
A dose of cynicism well placed, C.
April 24th, 2023 08:26
Pantomime Phases
L. B. Mek said:
so true, dear poet
(what use, a warning
when warheads, armed
with our inevitable endings
are half-way to our doorstep
instead of such silly, antics
dear \'concerned\' government
how about, you address
the little things, that wreck
our everyday
like, say - addressing
those endless, sirens
serenading, our bombarded state
of enforced, homestays
we need no more flames of fear
to, fear
we go to sleep, reading lullabies
to our kids
with a white noise, backdrop
of screams
and those ever-belated, sirens
destined for spending cut\'s
too late, arrivals
how about, that
do something about, that
warn us, when it will be our turn
to witness that next mugging
stabbing or senseless murder
on our doorsteps!!!
use all those cameras
for something, other than
chasing down car tax fraudsters
how about, trying
to save a life
for a change???
eh... dear \'concerned\' government
you fck\'n parasites!\'
April 24th, 2023 04:46
L. B. Mek said:
so true, dear poet
(what use, a warning
when warheads, armed
with our inevitable endings
are half-way to our doorstep
instead of such silly, antics
dear \'concerned\' government
how about, you address
the little things, that wreck
our everyday
like, say - addressing
those endless, sirens
serenading, our bombarded state
of enforced, homestays
we need no more flames of fear
to, fear
we go to sleep, reading lullabies
to our kids
with a white noise, backdrop
of screams
and those ever-belated, sirens
destined for spending cut\'s
too late, arrivals
how about, that
do something about, that
warn us, when it will be our turn
to witness that next mugging
stabbing or senseless murder
on our doorsteps!!!
use all those cameras
for something, other than
chasing down car tax fraudsters
how about, trying
to save a life
for a change???
eh... dear \'concerned\' government
you fck\'n parasites!\'
April 24th, 2023 04:46
Indiana Jones And The Horrible Sidekicks
Bobby O said:
A review wrapped in prose that moves to a conclusion. Love it.
April 23rd, 2023 04:51
Bobby O said:
A review wrapped in prose that moves to a conclusion. Love it.
April 23rd, 2023 04:51
Fast Forward (Dead Ash)
L. B. Mek said:
dear poet
\'hope\'
is my, chosen
gas mask
to survive, while wading
through reality\'s, decaying
manufactured, society
a \'hope\', curated
by my own intent
not shelf bought
paid for, by my sufferings
gleaned wisdom...
and on, and on
no fast-forwarding, our crawl
we strive, to hinder our defeat
for as long
as we, bravely dare to dream
of a better, next bite or sip
of life...
April 21st, 2023 06:28
L. B. Mek said:
dear poet
\'hope\'
is my, chosen
gas mask
to survive, while wading
through reality\'s, decaying
manufactured, society
a \'hope\', curated
by my own intent
not shelf bought
paid for, by my sufferings
gleaned wisdom...
and on, and on
no fast-forwarding, our crawl
we strive, to hinder our defeat
for as long
as we, bravely dare to dream
of a better, next bite or sip
of life...
April 21st, 2023 06:28
Dentist Appointment
2781 said:
I remember having my first bad tooth pulled, what a relief. I\'ve lost a few more since then. Always seemed to more pressing expenses.
April 20th, 2023 02:55
2781 said:
I remember having my first bad tooth pulled, what a relief. I\'ve lost a few more since then. Always seemed to more pressing expenses.
April 20th, 2023 02:55
Dentist Appointment
Doggerel Dave said:
And regular visits might keep decay away.
April 20th, 2023 02:45
Doggerel Dave said:
And regular visits might keep decay away.
April 20th, 2023 02:45
Triple Ice
Parisab said:
Important topic to tackle dear poet-I’m still optimistic about this genre and it’s evolution-There are still amazing hip hop artists with more outlets now-
April 17th, 2023 22:12
Parisab said:
Important topic to tackle dear poet-I’m still optimistic about this genre and it’s evolution-There are still amazing hip hop artists with more outlets now-
April 17th, 2023 22:12
Triple Ice
L. B. Mek said:
just sad,
from MC Lyte, Lisa \'left eye\', Da Brat, Missy, Eve, Nikki
... to this
and just as depressing on male side
Nas, was right
\'Hip Hop is DEAD!
April 17th, 2023 04:01
L. B. Mek said:
just sad,
from MC Lyte, Lisa \'left eye\', Da Brat, Missy, Eve, Nikki
... to this
and just as depressing on male side
Nas, was right
\'Hip Hop is DEAD!
April 17th, 2023 04:01
Time To Rethink
2781 said:
The longer the fruit is on the vine, the sweeter the meat.
April 16th, 2023 02:13
2781 said:
The longer the fruit is on the vine, the sweeter the meat.
April 16th, 2023 02:13
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