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The Backwards Man
L. B. Mek said:
progression as our sainted regression
devouring the new, as we implode
cursed for dismissing, what we knew
armies for space missions
while blowing ourselves up, diving
for history\'s titanic wreckages..
as if the summer heat wasn\'t bad enough
Europe burns, because of a fck\'d up
cop
still, a new election
and all will be ok for a few days
right!
yeah, if my words sound hollow
it\'s because I checked out
of hoping for humanity\'s salvation
a long time ago
now I just lament, like adding branches
to a a guy fawkes bonfire in July
and feeling like it\'s a better fit
than those 4th of july fireworks
July 3rd, 2023 04:38
L. B. Mek said:
progression as our sainted regression
devouring the new, as we implode
cursed for dismissing, what we knew
armies for space missions
while blowing ourselves up, diving
for history\'s titanic wreckages..
as if the summer heat wasn\'t bad enough
Europe burns, because of a fck\'d up
cop
still, a new election
and all will be ok for a few days
right!
yeah, if my words sound hollow
it\'s because I checked out
of hoping for humanity\'s salvation
a long time ago
now I just lament, like adding branches
to a a guy fawkes bonfire in July
and feeling like it\'s a better fit
than those 4th of july fireworks
July 3rd, 2023 04:38
The Backwards Man
Bobby O said:
Reverse is the nice way of describing it. I like this piece my friend.
July 3rd, 2023 02:32
Bobby O said:
Reverse is the nice way of describing it. I like this piece my friend.
July 3rd, 2023 02:32
The Backwards Man
orchidee said:
I saw a guy walking backwards with two bags of shopping - true. erm, was he practising for The Annual Walking Backwards marathon? lol.
July 3rd, 2023 01:50
orchidee said:
I saw a guy walking backwards with two bags of shopping - true. erm, was he practising for The Annual Walking Backwards marathon? lol.
July 3rd, 2023 01:50
The Truth Behind The Logos
2781 said:
Kind of brings the word to life: friendship with the world is enmity with God....
July 2nd, 2023 04:26
2781 said:
Kind of brings the word to life: friendship with the world is enmity with God....
July 2nd, 2023 04:26
The Truth Behind The Logos
orchidee said:
We changed logos at one workplace, to the most boring thing - a few coloured vertical stripes.
July 2nd, 2023 04:05
orchidee said:
We changed logos at one workplace, to the most boring thing - a few coloured vertical stripes.
July 2nd, 2023 04:05
The Truth Behind The Logos
orchidee said:
I suspected something when someone gave me a funny handshake. Doh! I wish \'masons\' would stick to the building sort!
July 2nd, 2023 04:04
orchidee said:
I suspected something when someone gave me a funny handshake. Doh! I wish \'masons\' would stick to the building sort!
July 2nd, 2023 04:04
Belligerent Bullies On The School Bus
Parisab said:
I like the reference to the Lost Boys of the Peter Pan-Alas some never grew up
July 1st, 2023 01:07
Parisab said:
I like the reference to the Lost Boys of the Peter Pan-Alas some never grew up
July 1st, 2023 01:07
Belligerent Bullies On The School Bus
L. B. Mek said:
\'trapped
in the world of the wilfully ignorant
where inconsideration is the most
prevalent
and kindness deemed an irrelevant
curse\'
(still we can but hope, dear poet
what a horrid experience
you had to live through
especially so young, crazy)
June 30th, 2023 06:43
L. B. Mek said:
\'trapped
in the world of the wilfully ignorant
where inconsideration is the most
prevalent
and kindness deemed an irrelevant
curse\'
(still we can but hope, dear poet
what a horrid experience
you had to live through
especially so young, crazy)
June 30th, 2023 06:43
Belligerent Bullies On The School Bus
orchidee said:
If it wasn\'t serious, that\'s one heck of a bad hair day in that pic! lol.
June 30th, 2023 04:34
orchidee said:
If it wasn\'t serious, that\'s one heck of a bad hair day in that pic! lol.
June 30th, 2023 04:34
Belligerent Bullies On The School Bus
Bobby O said:
Some grow out of it and some have set a pattern gif life. I couldn’t guess at the split with any accuracy. 70pct probably stay Jagoffs I think it’s worthwhile to get us all thinking about this. Nice Cool. Real nice
June 30th, 2023 03:34
Bobby O said:
Some grow out of it and some have set a pattern gif life. I couldn’t guess at the split with any accuracy. 70pct probably stay Jagoffs I think it’s worthwhile to get us all thinking about this. Nice Cool. Real nice
June 30th, 2023 03:34
996 BAPHOMET (AS ABOVE, SO BELOW)
orchidee said:
I don\'t know the fella. Does he look like a flying goat?! lol.
Some guy predicted his own death - then it happened. Doh! A dodgy path to travel.
June 29th, 2023 01:42
orchidee said:
I don\'t know the fella. Does he look like a flying goat?! lol.
Some guy predicted his own death - then it happened. Doh! A dodgy path to travel.
June 29th, 2023 01:42
996 BAPHOMET (AS ABOVE, SO BELOW)
Bobby O said:
I loved this even though I’m a little slow with smart and the triangle reference. People should just call you cool!!
June 29th, 2023 01:33
Bobby O said:
I loved this even though I’m a little slow with smart and the triangle reference. People should just call you cool!!
June 29th, 2023 01:33
The Imploding Submarine And Musk Vs Zuckerberg
2781 said:
Monkeys thrown nuts...love it.
Were they millionaires or billionaires?
I here say: \"who cares.\"
June 27th, 2023 06:25
2781 said:
Monkeys thrown nuts...love it.
Were they millionaires or billionaires?
I here say: \"who cares.\"
June 27th, 2023 06:25
Who Do You Believe In? (Stop Daydreamin\')
lostmoon said:
Materialism is so extreme nowadays, what exactly makes someone who has money qualified for respect? Often those are the people who are the most corrupt (though of course, not all rich people). And being grateful for what you have is a virtue, we shouldn\'t forget.
June 26th, 2023 08:14
lostmoon said:
Materialism is so extreme nowadays, what exactly makes someone who has money qualified for respect? Often those are the people who are the most corrupt (though of course, not all rich people). And being grateful for what you have is a virtue, we shouldn\'t forget.
June 26th, 2023 08:14
Who Do You Believe In? (Stop Daydreamin\')
L. B. Mek said:
just sad,
from myth heroes
to greed\'s envoys
lacking so much awareness
because their world is now
luxury and excess
yet, they too once felt
the misery
of the mass unprivileged, forced
to watch-on
as the fortunate, callously
parade their indifference
to the suffering of the world
this isn\'t a culture, things
it\'s just the inhumanity of those
too self-evolved
to check themselves, and
surrounded by too many, pilfering
yes men
to get checked for their bull sht!
June 26th, 2023 04:35
L. B. Mek said:
just sad,
from myth heroes
to greed\'s envoys
lacking so much awareness
because their world is now
luxury and excess
yet, they too once felt
the misery
of the mass unprivileged, forced
to watch-on
as the fortunate, callously
parade their indifference
to the suffering of the world
this isn\'t a culture, things
it\'s just the inhumanity of those
too self-evolved
to check themselves, and
surrounded by too many, pilfering
yes men
to get checked for their bull sht!
June 26th, 2023 04:35
Who Do You Believe In? (Stop Daydreamin\')
2781 said:
I might even get a Louis one day,
If I am a good boy!
June 26th, 2023 02:00
2781 said:
I might even get a Louis one day,
If I am a good boy!
June 26th, 2023 02:00
Who Do You Believe In? (Stop Daydreamin\')
2781 said:
I take hand me downs.
Dressed by the \"House of Dunn\" for the last 5 years.
June 26th, 2023 01:53
2781 said:
I take hand me downs.
Dressed by the \"House of Dunn\" for the last 5 years.
June 26th, 2023 01:53
Who Do You Believe In? (Stop Daydreamin\')
orchidee said:
I bought a bag rom Poundland. It was very expensive, costing me £1. I could have got it cheaper from the 99p Shop! heehee. Call me Scrooge.
June 26th, 2023 01:33
orchidee said:
I bought a bag rom Poundland. It was very expensive, costing me £1. I could have got it cheaper from the 99p Shop! heehee. Call me Scrooge.
June 26th, 2023 01:33
The Unspeakable Truth (Magnifying Glass)
orchidee said:
If it wasn\'t such a serious subject, I would say - that\'s a bit drastic punishment - a bad hair day. Doh!
June 25th, 2023 01:33
orchidee said:
If it wasn\'t such a serious subject, I would say - that\'s a bit drastic punishment - a bad hair day. Doh!
June 25th, 2023 01:33
The Unspeakable Truth (Magnifying Glass)
Goldfinch60 said:
I get very angry when children are hurt and abused, I want to see the perpetrators hung by their balls from a bridge and let the crows have them.
Andy
June 25th, 2023 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
I get very angry when children are hurt and abused, I want to see the perpetrators hung by their balls from a bridge and let the crows have them.
Andy
June 25th, 2023 01:30
Push On (Never Be Gone)
orchidee said:
I never met a talking monkey or ape - Planet of the Apes! lol.
Was we in that fil? Inside them ape costumes? heehee.
June 24th, 2023 11:27
orchidee said:
I never met a talking monkey or ape - Planet of the Apes! lol.
Was we in that fil? Inside them ape costumes? heehee.
June 24th, 2023 11:27
Push On (Never Be Gone)
Bobby O said:
Anything with indirect Grim Reaper Reference softly hits me like the summer wind , like faded kites
June 24th, 2023 03:20
Bobby O said:
Anything with indirect Grim Reaper Reference softly hits me like the summer wind , like faded kites
June 24th, 2023 03:20
Shitbag Sheep Won\'t Speak (Strengthen)
Bobby O said:
Too blinded by the pyramids peak… freaking cool and who wouldn’t be blinded , a fucking sharp ass triangular point perfectly designed to damage even a dinosaurs eye. I mean who could argue and who else could make that salient POINT. ??
June 23rd, 2023 14:07
Bobby O said:
Too blinded by the pyramids peak… freaking cool and who wouldn’t be blinded , a fucking sharp ass triangular point perfectly designed to damage even a dinosaurs eye. I mean who could argue and who else could make that salient POINT. ??
June 23rd, 2023 14:07
DEMOLITION MAN
orchidee said:
That\'s more than folk can bear - two episodes or more of The Brady Bunch. lol. And one episode leaves us mentally deranged.
June 22nd, 2023 05:16
orchidee said:
That\'s more than folk can bear - two episodes or more of The Brady Bunch. lol. And one episode leaves us mentally deranged.
June 22nd, 2023 05:16
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