Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
Musk-traction
mvvenkataraman said:
Elon Musk has destroyed Twitter\'s beauty,
He is not a man, but just a machine only,
All he needs is money and nothing else,
He loves Mars and Jupiter, but not humans?
April 14th, 2023 11:18
mvvenkataraman said:
Elon Musk has destroyed Twitter\'s beauty,
He is not a man, but just a machine only,
All he needs is money and nothing else,
He loves Mars and Jupiter, but not humans?
April 14th, 2023 11:18
The Man With The Golden Gun
orchidee said:
Ohh, they\'re not human. Seeing them go to the loo is beyond them. They don\'t do that, these super-humans. They may not even need to breathe to live! lol.
Also, in shops on TV, the shelves are always full, cos no customers hardly call in! lol.
April 13th, 2023 01:37
orchidee said:
Ohh, they\'re not human. Seeing them go to the loo is beyond them. They don\'t do that, these super-humans. They may not even need to breathe to live! lol.
Also, in shops on TV, the shelves are always full, cos no customers hardly call in! lol.
April 13th, 2023 01:37
Relentless Rebels Revolt
orchidee said:
I was gonna write this poem, but me \'R\' won\'t work!
I will call it \'Elentless Ebels Evolt!.
I talk some rubbish! lol.
April 11th, 2023 05:46
orchidee said:
I was gonna write this poem, but me \'R\' won\'t work!
I will call it \'Elentless Ebels Evolt!.
I talk some rubbish! lol.
April 11th, 2023 05:46
An Influencer
L. B. Mek said:
love this! especially that sarcastic undertone
it rhymes in-beat with that cynic pulse, in me
lol
(i find it funny, when people click
watch and comment
\'why are you ding this\' blah blah blah
an i\'m like
well, they\'re doing this cause you\'re paying them to
with every click ...
so then, i\'m left wondering
why
are you, doing \'this\'
lol
people be crazy sometimes
yet
it\'s not very funny, is it...
watching a live stream of society\'s
collective degradation)
April 10th, 2023 05:56
L. B. Mek said:
love this! especially that sarcastic undertone
it rhymes in-beat with that cynic pulse, in me
lol
(i find it funny, when people click
watch and comment
\'why are you ding this\' blah blah blah
an i\'m like
well, they\'re doing this cause you\'re paying them to
with every click ...
so then, i\'m left wondering
why
are you, doing \'this\'
lol
people be crazy sometimes
yet
it\'s not very funny, is it...
watching a live stream of society\'s
collective degradation)
April 10th, 2023 05:56
An Influencer
orchidee said:
I was just looking at You Tube and............ lol
April 8th, 2023 02:34
orchidee said:
I was just looking at You Tube and............ lol
April 8th, 2023 02:34
The Nicola Sturgeon Scandal Goes On
L. B. Mek said:
dear Poet
look back, remember who she apprenticed under
what did people expect
oh yeah, she\'s female
so she must have had no idea
what that other guy was doing
while she worked with him
day n night
then left him to freefall, when the time was right...?!
(what a disgrace! we are
to ourselves
every time, we herded ,majority
refuse to engage our brains
everything we do or think, a reaction
going from one extreme to another
addicted to sensationalism
as our chosen entertainment in life
distracting us
from that very realisation, that we
put these maggots in power
and then
we have the wilful ignorance to act bewildered
when the same fuki\'n thing happens
again
cyclical like clockwork, how fuki\'n
pathetic!)
April 7th, 2023 03:24
L. B. Mek said:
dear Poet
look back, remember who she apprenticed under
what did people expect
oh yeah, she\'s female
so she must have had no idea
what that other guy was doing
while she worked with him
day n night
then left him to freefall, when the time was right...?!
(what a disgrace! we are
to ourselves
every time, we herded ,majority
refuse to engage our brains
everything we do or think, a reaction
going from one extreme to another
addicted to sensationalism
as our chosen entertainment in life
distracting us
from that very realisation, that we
put these maggots in power
and then
we have the wilful ignorance to act bewildered
when the same fuki\'n thing happens
again
cyclical like clockwork, how fuki\'n
pathetic!)
April 7th, 2023 03:24
Scum, Sean Hogg
orchidee said:
I wrote to a prison penfriend. He turned out be vile. They\'re not all extreme though.
April 6th, 2023 07:42
orchidee said:
I wrote to a prison penfriend. He turned out be vile. They\'re not all extreme though.
April 6th, 2023 07:42
The Mark Of The Beast
orchidee said:
It\'s not the mark of the beast, but I\'ve seen at some pedestrian crossings - one can press the button, OR hold one\'s hand under a sensor, to change the traffic lights, from the red man (stop) to the green man (go). But no chip implant required.
April 3rd, 2023 02:08
orchidee said:
It\'s not the mark of the beast, but I\'ve seen at some pedestrian crossings - one can press the button, OR hold one\'s hand under a sensor, to change the traffic lights, from the red man (stop) to the green man (go). But no chip implant required.
April 3rd, 2023 02:08
Bring Back Jack Bauer
L. B. Mek said:
him and MacGyver
just to remind us, that there was a time
when masculinity
wasn\'t representative of toxic barbarity
or emasculated impotence
on our screens...
(great social commentary, dear poet)
March 31st, 2023 04:27
L. B. Mek said:
him and MacGyver
just to remind us, that there was a time
when masculinity
wasn\'t representative of toxic barbarity
or emasculated impotence
on our screens...
(great social commentary, dear poet)
March 31st, 2023 04:27
Spiritual Soldier
2781 said:
:for flesh and blood has not revealed this to you, but my Father which is in heaven.
March 30th, 2023 06:01
2781 said:
:for flesh and blood has not revealed this to you, but my Father which is in heaven.
March 30th, 2023 06:01
Look Into The Great Beyond
L. B. Mek said:
I so relate, dear poet
(an inquisitive nature
that treasure of an active, imagination
aspiring to excavate
the right questions, from within)
March 27th, 2023 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
I so relate, dear poet
(an inquisitive nature
that treasure of an active, imagination
aspiring to excavate
the right questions, from within)
March 27th, 2023 04:57
Auschwitz Spirits
Goldfinch60 said:
A friend of mine went there a couple of weeks ago and was totally moved by the place.
Andy
March 26th, 2023 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
A friend of mine went there a couple of weeks ago and was totally moved by the place.
Andy
March 26th, 2023 01:32
Auschwitz Spirits
Peter Pan - The Rock said:
A terrible horrible time in History. Respect. And... Peace.
March 25th, 2023 06:50
Peter Pan - The Rock said:
A terrible horrible time in History. Respect. And... Peace.
March 25th, 2023 06:50
Among The Spiders And Snakes
L. B. Mek said:
dude, bro!
maybe save us that nightmare image
there\'s enough vividity in your poetic
imagery...!
lol
sheesh, gonna go watch
clips of puppies and kittens
entrust in my escapist routine
and pray it\'s enough to save me...
lol
March 24th, 2023 07:28
L. B. Mek said:
dude, bro!
maybe save us that nightmare image
there\'s enough vividity in your poetic
imagery...!
lol
sheesh, gonna go watch
clips of puppies and kittens
entrust in my escapist routine
and pray it\'s enough to save me...
lol
March 24th, 2023 07:28
Lethal Weapon 3
L. B. Mek said:
so fun,
it\'s quite sad that your summarisation
is basically everything important
that happens, makes me think
what was I watching for the other
120 mins
lol
March 21st, 2023 04:39
L. B. Mek said:
so fun,
it\'s quite sad that your summarisation
is basically everything important
that happens, makes me think
what was I watching for the other
120 mins
lol
March 21st, 2023 04:39
God\'s Wrath
Addy said:
Nicely written! I enjoyed it. I think a little refining is needed and a bit of concrete structure to the poem, otherwise its good!
March 18th, 2023 01:13
Addy said:
Nicely written! I enjoyed it. I think a little refining is needed and a bit of concrete structure to the poem, otherwise its good!
March 18th, 2023 01:13
Lethal Weapon 2
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, Joe Pesci is such an underrated addition
to most films he\'s worked on,
a wonderful tribute to a childhood favourite
thanks for sharing, dear poet
made me smile
March 17th, 2023 05:58
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, Joe Pesci is such an underrated addition
to most films he\'s worked on,
a wonderful tribute to a childhood favourite
thanks for sharing, dear poet
made me smile
March 17th, 2023 05:58
Controlled Opposition (Carol Voderman)
orchidee said:
Urgh! Who cares? Celebrities - yuk! People haven\'t got time for this nonsense, have thy?
March 16th, 2023 02:58
orchidee said:
Urgh! Who cares? Celebrities - yuk! People haven\'t got time for this nonsense, have thy?
March 16th, 2023 02:58
Controlled Opposition (Carol Voderman)
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
It\'s a big story going on in England right now but probably just another distraction.
March 16th, 2023 01:15
Shaunmatthewcpoetry said:
It\'s a big story going on in England right now but probably just another distraction.
March 16th, 2023 01:15
Controlled Opposition (Carol Voderman)
2781 said:
I don\'t know this woman, but makes me think of the great American dream, or what it has become.
March 16th, 2023 00:41
2781 said:
I don\'t know this woman, but makes me think of the great American dream, or what it has become.
March 16th, 2023 00:41
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