Comments received on poems by Shaunmatthewcpoetry
DEMOLITION MAN
orchidee said:
That\'s more than folk can bear - two episodes or more of The Brady Bunch. lol. And one episode leaves us mentally deranged.
June 22nd, 2023 05:16
orchidee said:
That\'s more than folk can bear - two episodes or more of The Brady Bunch. lol. And one episode leaves us mentally deranged.
June 22nd, 2023 05:16
The Army Of Darkness (Evil Dead 3)
orchidee said:
A bad hair day for some! lol.
I wish folk would use chain saws for proper purposes. Doh!
June 21st, 2023 02:17
orchidee said:
A bad hair day for some! lol.
I wish folk would use chain saws for proper purposes. Doh!
June 21st, 2023 02:17
Brightness Is Sure To Beckon
orchidee said:
I will help with the survey, but not after 11pm, as you say! lol.
June 19th, 2023 10:49
orchidee said:
I will help with the survey, but not after 11pm, as you say! lol.
June 19th, 2023 10:49
Brightness Is Sure To Beckon
L. B. Mek said:
some people fight to curate their reality
rest of us, realise early enough
better to invest in those dream
escapades...
what\'s the point of a heaven
for a child, which died
after a single breath of life
or another who was abused
till forced to take their own life
..
how about we shelve heaven
and settle for a reality
devoid of child cruelty!
for fck sake
June 19th, 2023 04:06
L. B. Mek said:
some people fight to curate their reality
rest of us, realise early enough
better to invest in those dream
escapades...
what\'s the point of a heaven
for a child, which died
after a single breath of life
or another who was abused
till forced to take their own life
..
how about we shelve heaven
and settle for a reality
devoid of child cruelty!
for fck sake
June 19th, 2023 04:06
EMP TWP (Electromagnetic Pulse The Whole Planet)
orchidee said:
I feel the vibes .... far out, man! Or not so far, if it\'s our own planet! lol.
June 18th, 2023 07:23
orchidee said:
I feel the vibes .... far out, man! Or not so far, if it\'s our own planet! lol.
June 18th, 2023 07:23
Fake Chains
orchidee said:
I got special diamond-encrusted phone. It don\'t go \'ring ring\'. It goes \'bling bling\'! heehee.
June 17th, 2023 12:29
orchidee said:
I got special diamond-encrusted phone. It don\'t go \'ring ring\'. It goes \'bling bling\'! heehee.
June 17th, 2023 12:29
Legacies Ending In Flames (50 Years Of Hip-Hop)
Parisab said:
We have to keep the flames alive: thanks for giving props to some of the legends of the past hip-hop-‘mess with it … but don’t abuse it’ indeed, poet friend-I’m afraid most of the art form is ‘bougie’ now-I wonder what you think of what you think of my new publish here named Midlife Rap
June 16th, 2023 09:14
Parisab said:
We have to keep the flames alive: thanks for giving props to some of the legends of the past hip-hop-‘mess with it … but don’t abuse it’ indeed, poet friend-I’m afraid most of the art form is ‘bougie’ now-I wonder what you think of what you think of my new publish here named Midlife Rap
June 16th, 2023 09:14
Legacies Ending In Flames (50 Years Of Hip-Hop)
L. B. Mek said:
when all the noise started this year
I was waiting, I knew you would deliver
off the fcking charts!
dear Rap-God poet, bars for days
best open a chain!
\'If hip-hop started out in the park
Why does every new MC look like a government narc?\'
\'I reach for my pad and begin to slowly jot
More complex rhymes than all the albums some dropped\'
\'At the very top who turned rap music pop
Execs dictating the future and it shows\'
still, while KRS, Talib, Raekwon, Nas
and the rest of Rap\'s true legits
draw breath, we can hope
they\'ll inspire a renaissance resurgence
cost contra \'esque\'!
June 16th, 2023 04:23
L. B. Mek said:
when all the noise started this year
I was waiting, I knew you would deliver
off the fcking charts!
dear Rap-God poet, bars for days
best open a chain!
\'If hip-hop started out in the park
Why does every new MC look like a government narc?\'
\'I reach for my pad and begin to slowly jot
More complex rhymes than all the albums some dropped\'
\'At the very top who turned rap music pop
Execs dictating the future and it shows\'
still, while KRS, Talib, Raekwon, Nas
and the rest of Rap\'s true legits
draw breath, we can hope
they\'ll inspire a renaissance resurgence
cost contra \'esque\'!
June 16th, 2023 04:23
King Of Kings
orchidee said:
Will that be the penultimate doorbell I hear? Is that you at me front foor?! lol.
June 15th, 2023 01:57
orchidee said:
Will that be the penultimate doorbell I hear? Is that you at me front foor?! lol.
June 15th, 2023 01:57
Inglourious Basterds
Bobby O said:
It’s cool to invent ways to thrash him. It’s cathartic.
June 13th, 2023 08:21
Bobby O said:
It’s cool to invent ways to thrash him. It’s cathartic.
June 13th, 2023 08:21
Inglourious Basterds
orchidee said:
Is the worst thing about the film Brad Pitt\'s moustache? Dead caterpillar! lol.
June 13th, 2023 01:58
orchidee said:
Is the worst thing about the film Brad Pitt\'s moustache? Dead caterpillar! lol.
June 13th, 2023 01:58
A Random Night In Waitangi
L. B. Mek said:
a sequel to \'the great escape\'?
choosing, realising
before the fact, before it\'s too late
learning
from our lessons of life..
(a vivid scenario some of us
can relate to
thanks for sharing, dear poet )
June 12th, 2023 04:03
L. B. Mek said:
a sequel to \'the great escape\'?
choosing, realising
before the fact, before it\'s too late
learning
from our lessons of life..
(a vivid scenario some of us
can relate to
thanks for sharing, dear poet )
June 12th, 2023 04:03
The Inner Spirit (Smaller Circle)
orchidee said:
I didn\'t realise we had this argument, you and I! lol.
June 11th, 2023 02:19
orchidee said:
I didn\'t realise we had this argument, you and I! lol.
June 11th, 2023 02:19
Keep busy and don\'t seek spirituality?
Bobby O said:
Wired umbilically ?you hot this piece going on dude. Set and balanced. But maybe some clowns to the left ….??
June 9th, 2023 22:48
Bobby O said:
Wired umbilically ?you hot this piece going on dude. Set and balanced. But maybe some clowns to the left ….??
June 9th, 2023 22:48
Drowning In The Dam, Damn
Goldfinch60 said:
It seems to be happening too often nowadays, do people no longer care Coolcuk.
Andy
June 6th, 2023 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
It seems to be happening too often nowadays, do people no longer care Coolcuk.
Andy
June 6th, 2023 00:28
Drowning In The Dam, Damn
L. B. Mek said:
on our screens, true devastating
tragedy
seems far removed from our
reality
till, its our turn
to feel, how precious a life truly is
witnessing that pain, fallout
as morbid legacy of a shortened
life
and we, too numbed by life
ask ourselves
have we lost the capacity, to feel
to empathise
why didn\'t we have a clue
that mere miles from our smiles
death
was reading those last rights
to a despairing heart
...
(love the humane empathy
in your chosen subject
and poetic wording dear Poet
Brilliant!)
June 5th, 2023 03:17
L. B. Mek said:
on our screens, true devastating
tragedy
seems far removed from our
reality
till, its our turn
to feel, how precious a life truly is
witnessing that pain, fallout
as morbid legacy of a shortened
life
and we, too numbed by life
ask ourselves
have we lost the capacity, to feel
to empathise
why didn\'t we have a clue
that mere miles from our smiles
death
was reading those last rights
to a despairing heart
...
(love the humane empathy
in your chosen subject
and poetic wording dear Poet
Brilliant!)
June 5th, 2023 03:17
Never Lose Hope
orchidee said:
I lost hope years ago, about a certain \'Morning TV\' couple. As one said \'Who cares a fig about them?\' Does anyone ever watch that show?
There are more important things in life - like watching paint dry. lol.
June 3rd, 2023 01:38
orchidee said:
I lost hope years ago, about a certain \'Morning TV\' couple. As one said \'Who cares a fig about them?\' Does anyone ever watch that show?
There are more important things in life - like watching paint dry. lol.
June 3rd, 2023 01:38
Pledge Allegiance (Code Of Silence)
orchidee said:
Can we trust anyone with wooden teeth (Disney)?! Doh!
June 1st, 2023 10:43
orchidee said:
Can we trust anyone with wooden teeth (Disney)?! Doh!
June 1st, 2023 10:43
Celebrity Hypocrisy
Bobby O said:
Anybody who’s looking for cheap quotes can pick on the demagogues in Hollywood. Afyer you’re rich from getting paid there it’s just hypocritical to make those comments. Quit the business , give back the money, find a studio that doesn’t participate on the prurient. But no, he’s chasing cheap headlines and that msjeshim s phony.
May 31st, 2023 03:13
Bobby O said:
Anybody who’s looking for cheap quotes can pick on the demagogues in Hollywood. Afyer you’re rich from getting paid there it’s just hypocritical to make those comments. Quit the business , give back the money, find a studio that doesn’t participate on the prurient. But no, he’s chasing cheap headlines and that msjeshim s phony.
May 31st, 2023 03:13
Celebrity Hypocrisy
orchidee said:
I\'ve not got the time to waste on celebrities!
May 31st, 2023 03:09
orchidee said:
I\'ve not got the time to waste on celebrities!
May 31st, 2023 03:09
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