Comments received on poems by thinkerbell
Writing after dark
Neville said:
that concluding line is nigh on to die for .. wish I had got there first .. bravo thinkerbell & write on .. Neville
November 12th, 2024 00:46
Neville said:
that concluding line is nigh on to die for .. wish I had got there first .. bravo thinkerbell & write on .. Neville
November 12th, 2024 00:46
Writing after dark
NinjaGirl said:
The candle that lights our way and keeps us company also burns our fingers. I love the imagery, beautiful job!
November 11th, 2024 22:04
NinjaGirl said:
The candle that lights our way and keeps us company also burns our fingers. I love the imagery, beautiful job!
November 11th, 2024 22:04
A flower
Thad Wilk said:
a lovely haiku
touching and poignant too 😢
much enjoyed thank you!! 💯
Thanks for sharing poetess!!
Best wishes 🍀🤗🌹. Thad
November 11th, 2024 16:25
Thad Wilk said:
a lovely haiku
touching and poignant too 😢
much enjoyed thank you!! 💯
Thanks for sharing poetess!!
Best wishes 🍀🤗🌹. Thad
November 11th, 2024 16:25
Writing after dark
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This, my friend, is beautifully worded! Can feel every line, each word carefully chosen. Each line thought out. A brilliant poem indeed and one that I can personally relate to! Well done! 🌹👏
November 11th, 2024 12:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This, my friend, is beautifully worded! Can feel every line, each word carefully chosen. Each line thought out. A brilliant poem indeed and one that I can personally relate to! Well done! 🌹👏
November 11th, 2024 12:25
A flower
Cheeky Missy said:
Beautiful and eloquent in sweetly disarming brevity. Thank you for sharing.
September 2nd, 2024 17:34
Cheeky Missy said:
Beautiful and eloquent in sweetly disarming brevity. Thank you for sharing.
September 2nd, 2024 17:34
A flower
Bella Shepard said:
How beautifully you correlate the flower with the dream. So well done!
September 2nd, 2024 13:22
Bella Shepard said:
How beautifully you correlate the flower with the dream. So well done!
September 2nd, 2024 13:22
A Starved Soul
Parisab said:
And such a sensitive soul, capturing and absorbing everything.
January 25th, 2024 23:51
Parisab said:
And such a sensitive soul, capturing and absorbing everything.
January 25th, 2024 23:51
A Starved Soul
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful imagery captures the emotion in this poem, and the last stanza \"The music of my mind serenades my soul\", priceless!
January 21st, 2024 14:06
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful imagery captures the emotion in this poem, and the last stanza \"The music of my mind serenades my soul\", priceless!
January 21st, 2024 14:06
Smile
Lil said:
That is so true smiles are soo contageous. And plz if you want check out my poems too.😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
December 31st, 2023 13:12
Lil said:
That is so true smiles are soo contageous. And plz if you want check out my poems too.😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
December 31st, 2023 13:12
Smile
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A lovely poem on a smile blossoming on lips. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
October 4th, 2023 06:06
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A lovely poem on a smile blossoming on lips. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
October 4th, 2023 06:06
Smile
Pop64 said:
A beautiful description of a smile and as well the need for a smile. Lovely.
September 15th, 2023 07:55
Pop64 said:
A beautiful description of a smile and as well the need for a smile. Lovely.
September 15th, 2023 07:55
Smile
Teddy.15 said:
Oh yes and stunning poetry from you, a smile so innocent can open a thousand happy vibes in a moment. 💖
July 27th, 2023 12:46
Teddy.15 said:
Oh yes and stunning poetry from you, a smile so innocent can open a thousand happy vibes in a moment. 💖
July 27th, 2023 12:46
Smile
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true thinkerbell, I smile at most people.
\"Smile, it confuses people.\"
Andy
July 17th, 2023 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true thinkerbell, I smile at most people.
\"Smile, it confuses people.\"
Andy
July 17th, 2023 01:10
Smile
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful poem, beautiful pic. Made me smile just looking at it. A smile is contageous in the best possible way. Thank you dear poet!
July 16th, 2023 13:31
Bella Shepard said:
Beautiful poem, beautiful pic. Made me smile just looking at it. A smile is contageous in the best possible way. Thank you dear poet!
July 16th, 2023 13:31
Tears
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fine impressive poem on the types of tears, i have posted something like that so i enjoyed your version. Kudos for the muse!
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem too.
May 26th, 2023 05:35
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fine impressive poem on the types of tears, i have posted something like that so i enjoyed your version. Kudos for the muse!
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem too.
May 26th, 2023 05:35
Tears
Rocky Lagou said:
So wonderfully written! Tears are truly emotive expressions that reveal our most inner thoughts. Kudos to you!
April 25th, 2023 09:19
Rocky Lagou said:
So wonderfully written! Tears are truly emotive expressions that reveal our most inner thoughts. Kudos to you!
April 25th, 2023 09:19
Tears
L. B. Mek said:
(waterfall tears
as our showering words of refrain
as cleansing, droplet mercy\'s
rejuvenating our life-weary, smiles)
beautiful, a lovely read
thank you! dear Poet
April 24th, 2023 04:56
L. B. Mek said:
(waterfall tears
as our showering words of refrain
as cleansing, droplet mercy\'s
rejuvenating our life-weary, smiles)
beautiful, a lovely read
thank you! dear Poet
April 24th, 2023 04:56
Tears
Goldfinch60 said:
Tears show so many emotions within ourselves thinkerbell, fine words .
Andy
April 24th, 2023 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Tears show so many emotions within ourselves thinkerbell, fine words .
Andy
April 24th, 2023 01:52
Tears
Parisab said:
I like how the message shifted and tears represented different emotions and senses
April 23rd, 2023 19:46
Parisab said:
I like how the message shifted and tears represented different emotions and senses
April 23rd, 2023 19:46
Tears
Bobby O said:
Nice ending. Drops took on a lifelike persona I felt it. Nice piece and nice share
April 23rd, 2023 17:07
Bobby O said:
Nice ending. Drops took on a lifelike persona I felt it. Nice piece and nice share
April 23rd, 2023 17:07
Demented Minds
L. B. Mek said:
it\'s so hard when someone we care for
is struggling with mental health issues
unlike physical ailments, we have such limited tools
to engage with that person or aid them
in any impactful way..
\'Myriad of memories
Intermingle in reveries
Maimed mindfulness
Moulds madness\'
a poignant verse, distilling
those debilitating symptoms/causes
and that cycle, caging
once, articulate minds
into mere remnant shadows
of that person we knew and loved
(a great read, technically accomplished
with a huge slice of empathetic sincerity)
please for give me
if I\'ve misinterpreted your words, dear Poet
April 17th, 2023 02:14
L. B. Mek said:
it\'s so hard when someone we care for
is struggling with mental health issues
unlike physical ailments, we have such limited tools
to engage with that person or aid them
in any impactful way..
\'Myriad of memories
Intermingle in reveries
Maimed mindfulness
Moulds madness\'
a poignant verse, distilling
those debilitating symptoms/causes
and that cycle, caging
once, articulate minds
into mere remnant shadows
of that person we knew and loved
(a great read, technically accomplished
with a huge slice of empathetic sincerity)
please for give me
if I\'ve misinterpreted your words, dear Poet
April 17th, 2023 02:14
Soliloquy of a Songbird
Bobby O said:
Why is it a wonderful world.? Maybe it’s more powerful if you set up that line w some justification developed in the lines previous?
Chimes musically gift us w music lushly mellow that rides gently like natures perfect undulating tide over the chirps offered by birds perfectly unwrapping secrets of natures wind wafting in symc and this gravity defying ballet escapes into the backdrop of this wondrous world.
I exaggerated the point but it’s important to offer proof and substantiate what we hold in wonder and not just say so.
-BTW , I’m just sharing the wisdom of what I learned from somebody way smarter than me. I constantly fall into the same traps that dilute the power of our well thought plan.
April 15th, 2023 22:02
Bobby O said:
Why is it a wonderful world.? Maybe it’s more powerful if you set up that line w some justification developed in the lines previous?
Chimes musically gift us w music lushly mellow that rides gently like natures perfect undulating tide over the chirps offered by birds perfectly unwrapping secrets of natures wind wafting in symc and this gravity defying ballet escapes into the backdrop of this wondrous world.
I exaggerated the point but it’s important to offer proof and substantiate what we hold in wonder and not just say so.
-BTW , I’m just sharing the wisdom of what I learned from somebody way smarter than me. I constantly fall into the same traps that dilute the power of our well thought plan.
April 15th, 2023 22:02
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