Comments received on poems by J.Edse
Here Before They Were
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a mystical, old, from the past feel to it that calls hypnotically out of time passed. Lovely
April 23rd, 2025 05:20
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has a mystical, old, from the past feel to it that calls hypnotically out of time passed. Lovely
April 23rd, 2025 05:20
Here Before They Were
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Personally I thought this poem was very original, it had a voice of its own. It spoke about that one voice in the void that one story that one journey. Though at the same time it mirrored reflections. An echo heard long after it quietens totally. Much enjoyed the read!
April 23rd, 2025 01:40
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Personally I thought this poem was very original, it had a voice of its own. It spoke about that one voice in the void that one story that one journey. Though at the same time it mirrored reflections. An echo heard long after it quietens totally. Much enjoyed the read!
April 23rd, 2025 01:40
Like a Night Monster
Poetic Licence said:
Powerful words laced with some dark imagery, enjoyed the read
February 15th, 2025 16:16
Poetic Licence said:
Powerful words laced with some dark imagery, enjoyed the read
February 15th, 2025 16:16
Like a Night Monster
sorenbarrett said:
Very passionate in its power. A strong poem.
February 15th, 2025 16:10
sorenbarrett said:
Very passionate in its power. A strong poem.
February 15th, 2025 16:10
It Seems Like it’s Always Cloudy
Poetic Licence said:
A touching piece of the struggles some people are facing with their mental health, if concerns the author by writing it out like this, i hope helps a little, it seem a long way away but the sun will shine again. Well written
January 12th, 2025 15:52
Poetic Licence said:
A touching piece of the struggles some people are facing with their mental health, if concerns the author by writing it out like this, i hope helps a little, it seem a long way away but the sun will shine again. Well written
January 12th, 2025 15:52
A Man Made Prison
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings that many share this poem drips with s sense of purposelessness, frustration and anger. A sense of angst is present in the daily routine. Nicely written
August 19th, 2024 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings that many share this poem drips with s sense of purposelessness, frustration and anger. A sense of angst is present in the daily routine. Nicely written
August 19th, 2024 05:28
A Man Made Prison
Cheeky Missy said:
And to think we chased at the bit, dying for adulthood.
August 18th, 2024 21:59
Cheeky Missy said:
And to think we chased at the bit, dying for adulthood.
August 18th, 2024 21:59
His Daily Ritual
sorenbarrett said:
Sacrifice a sign of worth and value. Nicely said.
August 12th, 2024 20:42
sorenbarrett said:
Sacrifice a sign of worth and value. Nicely said.
August 12th, 2024 20:42
The Most Valuable Treasure
Parisab said:
I can sense the attention to detail and connecting it to the mystery of the past, coming from an “old soul” poet. Good poem.
May 20th, 2023 17:37
Parisab said:
I can sense the attention to detail and connecting it to the mystery of the past, coming from an “old soul” poet. Good poem.
May 20th, 2023 17:37
Dandelion Harbinger
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
By any chance are you experiencing an issue where you click on your public profile and it says critical error on this website?
January 21st, 2023 10:13
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
By any chance are you experiencing an issue where you click on your public profile and it says critical error on this website?
January 21st, 2023 10:13
A New Galaxy Far Far Away
orchidee said:
There\'s no new galaxy. I\'ve eaten it. Plus the milky way, mars bars, etc lol.
January 2nd, 2023 13:50
orchidee said:
There\'s no new galaxy. I\'ve eaten it. Plus the milky way, mars bars, etc lol.
January 2nd, 2023 13:50
Holiday Season
Doggerel Dave said:
You are mad in the very best kind of way - it seems you might have some insight....
Fun write
October 22nd, 2022 03:30
Doggerel Dave said:
You are mad in the very best kind of way - it seems you might have some insight....
Fun write
October 22nd, 2022 03:30
Garbage Men
Doggerel Dave said:
Moral to this story? Get a shredder.
Fun write
BTW - I note you collect typewriters: Do you have a selection of IBM \'golf ball\' Selectric models? Fascinated by them back then, there\'s still something about them...
October 15th, 2022 21:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Moral to this story? Get a shredder.
Fun write
BTW - I note you collect typewriters: Do you have a selection of IBM \'golf ball\' Selectric models? Fascinated by them back then, there\'s still something about them...
October 15th, 2022 21:07
Life Doesn\\\\\\\'t Care About You Sometimes
J.H.Byron-Nuel said:
It feels that way way often in my life also.
October 12th, 2022 23:07
J.H.Byron-Nuel said:
It feels that way way often in my life also.
October 12th, 2022 23:07
Apartment A
Doggerel Dave said:
I like this a lot and can relate to most of it, although it would be invidious to highlight any particular part; I\'ll keep with the whole at this point.
I hope you stay on and give us more....
September 26th, 2022 19:44
Doggerel Dave said:
I like this a lot and can relate to most of it, although it would be invidious to highlight any particular part; I\'ll keep with the whole at this point.
I hope you stay on and give us more....
September 26th, 2022 19:44
