Comments received on poems by J.Edse
A Man Made Prison
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings that many share this poem drips with s sense of purposelessness, frustration and anger. A sense of angst is present in the daily routine. Nicely written
August 19th, 2024 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
Feelings that many share this poem drips with s sense of purposelessness, frustration and anger. A sense of angst is present in the daily routine. Nicely written
August 19th, 2024 05:28
A Man Made Prison
Cheeky Missy said:
And to think we chased at the bit, dying for adulthood.
August 18th, 2024 21:59
Cheeky Missy said:
And to think we chased at the bit, dying for adulthood.
August 18th, 2024 21:59
His Daily Ritual
sorenbarrett said:
Sacrifice a sign of worth and value. Nicely said.
August 12th, 2024 20:42
sorenbarrett said:
Sacrifice a sign of worth and value. Nicely said.
August 12th, 2024 20:42
The Most Valuable Treasure
Parisab said:
I can sense the attention to detail and connecting it to the mystery of the past, coming from an “old soul” poet. Good poem.
May 20th, 2023 17:37
Parisab said:
I can sense the attention to detail and connecting it to the mystery of the past, coming from an “old soul” poet. Good poem.
May 20th, 2023 17:37
Dandelion Harbinger
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
By any chance are you experiencing an issue where you click on your public profile and it says critical error on this website?
January 21st, 2023 10:13
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
By any chance are you experiencing an issue where you click on your public profile and it says critical error on this website?
January 21st, 2023 10:13
A New Galaxy Far Far Away
orchidee said:
There\'s no new galaxy. I\'ve eaten it. Plus the milky way, mars bars, etc lol.
January 2nd, 2023 13:50
orchidee said:
There\'s no new galaxy. I\'ve eaten it. Plus the milky way, mars bars, etc lol.
January 2nd, 2023 13:50
Holiday Season
Doggerel Dave said:
You are mad in the very best kind of way - it seems you might have some insight....
Fun write
October 22nd, 2022 03:30
Doggerel Dave said:
You are mad in the very best kind of way - it seems you might have some insight....
Fun write
October 22nd, 2022 03:30
Garbage Men
Doggerel Dave said:
Moral to this story? Get a shredder.
Fun write
BTW - I note you collect typewriters: Do you have a selection of IBM \'golf ball\' Selectric models? Fascinated by them back then, there\'s still something about them...
October 15th, 2022 21:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Moral to this story? Get a shredder.
Fun write
BTW - I note you collect typewriters: Do you have a selection of IBM \'golf ball\' Selectric models? Fascinated by them back then, there\'s still something about them...
October 15th, 2022 21:07
Life Doesn\\\\\\\'t Care About You Sometimes
J.H.Byron-Nuel said:
It feels that way way often in my life also.
October 12th, 2022 23:07
J.H.Byron-Nuel said:
It feels that way way often in my life also.
October 12th, 2022 23:07
Apartment A
Doggerel Dave said:
I like this a lot and can relate to most of it, although it would be invidious to highlight any particular part; I\'ll keep with the whole at this point.
I hope you stay on and give us more....
September 26th, 2022 19:44
Doggerel Dave said:
I like this a lot and can relate to most of it, although it would be invidious to highlight any particular part; I\'ll keep with the whole at this point.
I hope you stay on and give us more....
September 26th, 2022 19:44
