Comments received on poems by Cheeky Missy
O You Think You're so Clever...
Bokononsense said:
So lovely and light-hearted! Nothing constructive to add, I'm afraid; just another piece I particularly enjoyed. Reminds me of Ogden Nash!
November 3rd, 2011 13:15
Bokononsense said:
So lovely and light-hearted! Nothing constructive to add, I'm afraid; just another piece I particularly enjoyed. Reminds me of Ogden Nash!
November 3rd, 2011 13:15
Alas, Love...
Bokononsense said:
I'm green with envy at your mastery of the Petrarchan sonnet! (My attempts are always too disastrous to publish, I can never get the volta right)!
Usually I find it jarring when modern poets use archaic words- thees and thys and whatnot. But you use that well here to contribute to the tone of the poem as a whole; it's absolutely convincing as something from one of the Romantics- as you point out, the reader is instantly reminded of Wordsworth at his best.
The sentiment is beautiful and familliar, but the images you conjure in order to accentuate your theme are vivid and novel enough to keep the poem fresh and interesting.
Delightful poetry!
November 3rd, 2011 12:51
Bokononsense said:
I'm green with envy at your mastery of the Petrarchan sonnet! (My attempts are always too disastrous to publish, I can never get the volta right)!
Usually I find it jarring when modern poets use archaic words- thees and thys and whatnot. But you use that well here to contribute to the tone of the poem as a whole; it's absolutely convincing as something from one of the Romantics- as you point out, the reader is instantly reminded of Wordsworth at his best.
The sentiment is beautiful and familliar, but the images you conjure in order to accentuate your theme are vivid and novel enough to keep the poem fresh and interesting.
Delightful poetry!
November 3rd, 2011 12:51
In Passion's Wake
Anna said:
Wow... wow... Okay, I have to ask; are you a professional? You seem as though you have tons and tons of poem books by now! You're just stupendous, I mean, the language, the fitting stanzas, the chosen words... this is what only experts could do!
October 16th, 2011 18:39
Anna said:
Wow... wow... Okay, I have to ask; are you a professional? You seem as though you have tons and tons of poem books by now! You're just stupendous, I mean, the language, the fitting stanzas, the chosen words... this is what only experts could do!
October 16th, 2011 18:39
How a Cockroach Undid Me (in Church no less.....)
Paul Price said:
its funny, I like this one ; )
October 7th, 2011 20:49
Paul Price said:
its funny, I like this one ; )
October 7th, 2011 20:49
Of the Black Queen and the......
MBJ Pancras said:
Dear Poet Friend
I like the line 'transcend the dull mundane when they appear...'
It is obviously clear that every one wishes to go beyond the mundane sojourn.
MBJ Pancras
September 22nd, 2011 01:29
MBJ Pancras said:
Dear Poet Friend
I like the line 'transcend the dull mundane when they appear...'
It is obviously clear that every one wishes to go beyond the mundane sojourn.
MBJ Pancras
September 22nd, 2011 01:29
Astral Reflections
if_you are a women_kiss me said:
great poem lovely and fill whit
great flavor of love to the nature
great poem my dear poet
September 17th, 2011 18:34
if_you are a women_kiss me said:
great poem lovely and fill whit
great flavor of love to the nature
great poem my dear poet
September 17th, 2011 18:34
Summer's Fading Elegy
if_you are a women_kiss me said:
great writing my dear poet thank you
for giving to this lector a great poem
to anjoy it is very sweet poem
congratulations
September 13th, 2011 21:36
if_you are a women_kiss me said:
great writing my dear poet thank you
for giving to this lector a great poem
to anjoy it is very sweet poem
congratulations
September 13th, 2011 21:36
When Summer's Leaving
Alexandre Landsley said:
The end was just perfect especially the french part :) good write!!
September 3rd, 2011 11:17
Alexandre Landsley said:
The end was just perfect especially the french part :) good write!!
September 3rd, 2011 11:17
Life is Boring. Yet....
Jalso said:
I'm pretty sure there is suppose to be a 10/10 rateing on this
August 30th, 2011 23:30
Jalso said:
I'm pretty sure there is suppose to be a 10/10 rateing on this
August 30th, 2011 23:30
Love's Lost (lament)
Anna said:
Hee hee :) Today I decided to read one of your older poems! :D And I'm actually quite surprised! You were very good when you started out! This poem is so nice! :)
August 26th, 2011 22:03
Anna said:
Hee hee :) Today I decided to read one of your older poems! :D And I'm actually quite surprised! You were very good when you started out! This poem is so nice! :)
August 26th, 2011 22:03
Summer's Finest Days
nair36 said:
Seems like you have a poem for the moment or whatever is going on at the time. Nice poem.
August 15th, 2011 10:45
nair36 said:
Seems like you have a poem for the moment or whatever is going on at the time. Nice poem.
August 15th, 2011 10:45
Can't Resist Her....! # II
Anna said:
This poem made an incredibly detailed image in my head ^O^ Keep on writing!
August 11th, 2011 23:51
Anna said:
This poem made an incredibly detailed image in my head ^O^ Keep on writing!
August 11th, 2011 23:51
Au Revoir Madam....
Anna said:
Wow! I actually think they're brilliant, and deserve 1st prize! If you don't get it, then there should be some type of law opposing to that.
August 9th, 2011 08:26
Anna said:
Wow! I actually think they're brilliant, and deserve 1st prize! If you don't get it, then there should be some type of law opposing to that.
August 9th, 2011 08:26
Caught Blythely....In the Middle!
Anna said:
Lol, I guessed you were having rain yourself :)
I like being out in the rain too... but my mum doesn't like it when I get soaked :P
What I want to compliment about this is that I think you have an amazing vocabulary, and this poem is really clever! Thanks for posting it XD
July 24th, 2011 08:34
Anna said:
Lol, I guessed you were having rain yourself :)
I like being out in the rain too... but my mum doesn't like it when I get soaked :P
What I want to compliment about this is that I think you have an amazing vocabulary, and this poem is really clever! Thanks for posting it XD
July 24th, 2011 08:34
How it Happened.....
Anna said:
I think this poem is quite cute :)
Thanks goodness there wasn't any lightning!
July 24th, 2011 08:31
Anna said:
I think this poem is quite cute :)
Thanks goodness there wasn't any lightning!
July 24th, 2011 08:31
Prelude to....the party....and refreshment (sonnet trio)
Anna said:
^O^
I'm sitting here in awe *O*
July 24th, 2011 08:29
Anna said:
^O^
I'm sitting here in awe *O*
July 24th, 2011 08:29
How it Happened.....
Belinda AMeharry said:
So simple yet enjoyable.
Thankyou!
You are a wonderful poet.
July 23rd, 2011 16:54
Belinda AMeharry said:
So simple yet enjoyable.
Thankyou!
You are a wonderful poet.
July 23rd, 2011 16:54
Cicada Summer?
Anna said:
I'm so glad that I read Dandelion Wine, and now know what cicadas are XD This is a pretty poem :D
July 21st, 2011 06:20
Anna said:
I'm so glad that I read Dandelion Wine, and now know what cicadas are XD This is a pretty poem :D
July 21st, 2011 06:20
Clair de Lune Ecstasy....
Anna said:
I like moonlight... I think it's magical, and I think that this poem conveys the magic :) And that's a good title btw!
July 21st, 2011 06:19
Anna said:
I like moonlight... I think it's magical, and I think that this poem conveys the magic :) And that's a good title btw!
July 21st, 2011 06:19
Clair de Lune...on Terra Firma!
Anna said:
This is so beautiful... It's lovely XD
July 21st, 2011 06:17
Anna said:
This is so beautiful... It's lovely XD
July 21st, 2011 06:17
Reminiscing...........(sonnet trio)
Anna said:
Whoa whoa whoa! This sounds almost like Shakespeare (That's a compliment).
July 21st, 2011 06:16
Anna said:
Whoa whoa whoa! This sounds almost like Shakespeare (That's a compliment).
July 21st, 2011 06:16
On...Alter-Egos.....
Alexandre Landsley said:
not bad loved the way you end it it with a question
June 20th, 2011 10:47
Alexandre Landsley said:
not bad loved the way you end it it with a question
June 20th, 2011 10:47
On...Alter-Egos.....
Anna said:
My gosh. That was an awesome poem! Your words are really clever, and how you wrote and organized it is super cool (*^*)
June 4th, 2011 16:31
Anna said:
My gosh. That was an awesome poem! Your words are really clever, and how you wrote and organized it is super cool (*^*)
June 4th, 2011 16:31
On...Alter-Egos.....
Lifewellspoken said:
This is a beautiful poem and it's wonderful to see such a beautiful person write it.
April 13th, 2011 15:06
Lifewellspoken said:
This is a beautiful poem and it's wonderful to see such a beautiful person write it.
April 13th, 2011 15:06
Hey! I Miss YOU!
Emilou G. said:
Best friends are best friends, no matter what! No time length can change friendship. It is always there, it may sometimes sleep but that friendship will wake up one day and find a way to grow. SMILE! THE DAY IS GOD'S NEW GIFT!
March 22nd, 2011 22:42
Emilou G. said:
Best friends are best friends, no matter what! No time length can change friendship. It is always there, it may sometimes sleep but that friendship will wake up one day and find a way to grow. SMILE! THE DAY IS GOD'S NEW GIFT!
March 22nd, 2011 22:42
My Mom...My Best Friend
Emilou G. said:
Yes Cheeky, mother is the best friend one can ever have, only if they are given a chance. Problem with today's youth is they tend to be closer to their peers. It is so true "sisters are just sisters. And friends are only friends." mothers are always the best....SMILE! THE DAY IS GOD'S NEW GIFT!
March 22nd, 2011 22:33
Emilou G. said:
Yes Cheeky, mother is the best friend one can ever have, only if they are given a chance. Problem with today's youth is they tend to be closer to their peers. It is so true "sisters are just sisters. And friends are only friends." mothers are always the best....SMILE! THE DAY IS GOD'S NEW GIFT!
March 22nd, 2011 22:33
Reflecting in His Silence
Shyam said:
I love the line:-
"Your silence deafens and speaks volumes"
March 16th, 2011 07:11
Shyam said:
I love the line:-
"Your silence deafens and speaks volumes"
March 16th, 2011 07:11
Miscellaneous Quatrains on...Summer and Winter
Brennan said:
I really like this poem. I wish Summer, and spring would stay forever, but I suppose if it weren't for Winter, we wouldn't be able to appreciate the beauty of the Summers' and Springs'. I Really like your writing, keep em' coming.
March 16th, 2011 01:08
Brennan said:
I really like this poem. I wish Summer, and spring would stay forever, but I suppose if it weren't for Winter, we wouldn't be able to appreciate the beauty of the Summers' and Springs'. I Really like your writing, keep em' coming.
March 16th, 2011 01:08
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