Comments received on poems by Cheeky Missy
O Childhood....whither hast thou fled?
dbremner said:
I like this poem it deals with a subject we likely all think about, our younger days seem brighter but we should be optimistic about the future too.
December 18th, 2010 19:04
dbremner said:
I like this poem it deals with a subject we likely all think about, our younger days seem brighter but we should be optimistic about the future too.
December 18th, 2010 19:04
Brothers
jvl narasimha rao said:
You seem to be my sister.You always follow my poems .You have A sisterly heart.As a brother I rated the poem with a ten
yours loving brother,
JVL
December 18th, 2010 11:57
jvl narasimha rao said:
You seem to be my sister.You always follow my poems .You have A sisterly heart.As a brother I rated the poem with a ten
yours loving brother,
JVL
December 18th, 2010 11:57
I Don't Like You Anymore
dbremner said:
You have no reason to be dissatisfied as this is a well written piece.
December 16th, 2010 13:48
dbremner said:
You have no reason to be dissatisfied as this is a well written piece.
December 16th, 2010 13:48
Thoughts of Spring in Wintertime.....
ironmaiden_81186 said:
"Thus beguile you winter's clime
With warm thoughts of spring's delight".....just love the last lines,
a very fiting end to a beautiful poem..
December 16th, 2010 07:26
ironmaiden_81186 said:
"Thus beguile you winter's clime
With warm thoughts of spring's delight".....just love the last lines,
a very fiting end to a beautiful poem..
December 16th, 2010 07:26
"S" is for.......
StormyDay said:
It's silly and truely original; very fun with a rhyme scheme to boot! It brings a smile to my face. With your permission I'd like to try your new style for myself (?)
December 15th, 2010 15:07
StormyDay said:
It's silly and truely original; very fun with a rhyme scheme to boot! It brings a smile to my face. With your permission I'd like to try your new style for myself (?)
December 15th, 2010 15:07
Thoughts of Spring in Wintertime.....
dbremner said:
A REALLY nice poem, I like it dearly. Well done to you.
December 15th, 2010 13:54
dbremner said:
A REALLY nice poem, I like it dearly. Well done to you.
December 15th, 2010 13:54
Two Little Flames....A Fire!
dbremner said:
A beautiful love poem. Well done! Very well done!
December 14th, 2010 14:40
dbremner said:
A beautiful love poem. Well done! Very well done!
December 14th, 2010 14:40
Fun Rhymes to Pass the Time.....
nair36 said:
I can't believe I'm the first one to comment on this great poem. You mentioned to fix one of the poems' lines but there was nothing to fix. I know it's all juss good humor but still you created yet another great poem. I'm gonna look at all the ones that havent been commented on yet and comment. I'll have to remember your name in the future when you're a famous poet.
December 13th, 2010 18:27
nair36 said:
I can't believe I'm the first one to comment on this great poem. You mentioned to fix one of the poems' lines but there was nothing to fix. I know it's all juss good humor but still you created yet another great poem. I'm gonna look at all the ones that havent been commented on yet and comment. I'll have to remember your name in the future when you're a famous poet.
December 13th, 2010 18:27
Sometimes......
nair36 said:
Oh to be saved indeed. Wonderful poem. I can relate to this poem in particular. Like the vulgar poems I make and trying to be saved. I take for granted what I already have and live for selfish reasons when I should really be living for God. One day I'll get my act together though. This poem is kinda like a first step in a way. Like me admitting my problem. Great poem. Makes me think.
December 13th, 2010 18:16
nair36 said:
Oh to be saved indeed. Wonderful poem. I can relate to this poem in particular. Like the vulgar poems I make and trying to be saved. I take for granted what I already have and live for selfish reasons when I should really be living for God. One day I'll get my act together though. This poem is kinda like a first step in a way. Like me admitting my problem. Great poem. Makes me think.
December 13th, 2010 18:16
Lament....My Windows are Closed for Winter!
dbremner said:
Nice poem with nice sentiments attached to it. Well done.
December 13th, 2010 16:59
dbremner said:
Nice poem with nice sentiments attached to it. Well done.
December 13th, 2010 16:59
It Rained Upon a Monday Here
dbremner said:
I really like the last two lines. They end it very well.
December 12th, 2010 14:38
dbremner said:
I really like the last two lines. They end it very well.
December 12th, 2010 14:38
Vanity....a lament
dbremner said:
It definately deserves to be published in my view.
December 11th, 2010 13:27
dbremner said:
It definately deserves to be published in my view.
December 11th, 2010 13:27
Our Lives are Spent in Vanity
dbremner said:
VERY well written with clearly much meaningful thought put in to it.
December 10th, 2010 16:35
dbremner said:
VERY well written with clearly much meaningful thought put in to it.
December 10th, 2010 16:35
Repenting Oneself
Hoween94 said:
I liked this poem very much. It just makes me want to read it over and over again.
December 9th, 2010 17:55
Hoween94 said:
I liked this poem very much. It just makes me want to read it over and over again.
December 9th, 2010 17:55
Repenting Oneself
dbremner said:
Very well constructed and clearly a very personal piece. As a poem I like it dearly.
December 9th, 2010 16:20
dbremner said:
Very well constructed and clearly a very personal piece. As a poem I like it dearly.
December 9th, 2010 16:20
A Close Friend
dbremner said:
It is a good little poem that says a lot in just a short piece.
December 7th, 2010 15:32
dbremner said:
It is a good little poem that says a lot in just a short piece.
December 7th, 2010 15:32
Reflections on a Frosty Window
dbremner said:
Ten for this without any doubt.
December 6th, 2010 13:35
dbremner said:
Ten for this without any doubt.
December 6th, 2010 13:35
Trudging through the snow...
Lifewellspoken said:
This is a very sweet poem/song, I love it.
December 5th, 2010 19:36
Lifewellspoken said:
This is a very sweet poem/song, I love it.
December 5th, 2010 19:36
"S" is for.......
dbremner said:
Likeable poem. Never seen one like it before.
December 4th, 2010 14:35
dbremner said:
Likeable poem. Never seen one like it before.
December 4th, 2010 14:35
"S" is for.......
ironmaiden_81186 said:
clecverly written...the vagueness of it is the beauty of it..
December 4th, 2010 05:25
ironmaiden_81186 said:
clecverly written...the vagueness of it is the beauty of it..
December 4th, 2010 05:25
I am Like the Weeds, I Guess....
ironmaiden_81186 said:
that adult must have been right....you certainly have a pretty smile
and when you put that in words...its even better.. so smile :)
December 4th, 2010 05:20
ironmaiden_81186 said:
that adult must have been right....you certainly have a pretty smile
and when you put that in words...its even better.. so smile :)
December 4th, 2010 05:20
Autumn's Promise....Love Won!
ironmaiden_81186 said:
i m still trying to unearth a few lines here......but i guess u broke the barrier of amateur poetry...its as beautiful as it can get
and i think the best comes in the least time...its flawless and the imagery is excellent...kudos
December 2nd, 2010 23:32
ironmaiden_81186 said:
i m still trying to unearth a few lines here......but i guess u broke the barrier of amateur poetry...its as beautiful as it can get
and i think the best comes in the least time...its flawless and the imagery is excellent...kudos
December 2nd, 2010 23:32
Why Should I Smile?
dbremner said:
Clever working of the lines through/between each part.
December 2nd, 2010 17:05
dbremner said:
Clever working of the lines through/between each part.
December 2nd, 2010 17:05
Where's Your Smile? (revision)
dbremner said:
Clever reworking. I can hear the American accent!
December 1st, 2010 14:13
dbremner said:
Clever reworking. I can hear the American accent!
December 1st, 2010 14:13
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