Comments received on poems by Cheeky Missy
Hey Me!
jvl narasimha rao said:
It is a spiritual poem.Well penned
yours JVL
January 14th, 2011 12:09
jvl narasimha rao said:
It is a spiritual poem.Well penned
yours JVL
January 14th, 2011 12:09
Poor Wittle Birdie?
dbremner said:
A fun/novel way of looking at something so sad.
January 13th, 2011 14:35
dbremner said:
A fun/novel way of looking at something so sad.
January 13th, 2011 14:35
Musing on Dreams
StormyDay said:
I can relate. The last stanza is very blunt and curt, I like it very much because it just seems to complete the poem.
January 13th, 2011 13:34
StormyDay said:
I can relate. The last stanza is very blunt and curt, I like it very much because it just seems to complete the poem.
January 13th, 2011 13:34
Break My Heart?
Dolphine29 said:
Hi; I like the idea that u have it's sad but also has like a changelling point and that is important. Maybe it will help just closing your eyes and thinking about him and well just write without thinking of rhimes. It's amazing all that u can come out with from within.
Keep on!!! Best
D.
January 11th, 2011 14:57
Dolphine29 said:
Hi; I like the idea that u have it's sad but also has like a changelling point and that is important. Maybe it will help just closing your eyes and thinking about him and well just write without thinking of rhimes. It's amazing all that u can come out with from within.
Keep on!!! Best
D.
January 11th, 2011 14:57
Break My Heart?
lezyl legaspi said:
it was nice..maybe a couple of more thoughts would make it better..just suggesting..i hope it's just ok with you..
January 11th, 2011 04:03
lezyl legaspi said:
it was nice..maybe a couple of more thoughts would make it better..just suggesting..i hope it's just ok with you..
January 11th, 2011 04:03
Broken-hearted Musings.....
jerrypat said:
There is more than just a few lines of angst within this poem, Cheeky. Sometimes we find ourselves lost and even as we understand why that isn't enough to dig ourselves out of our sadness.
It seems, from your comment about it that you have been down this road before. Life has many roads and we stumble along looking for that well-lit path and sometimes it just takes time.
January 10th, 2011 22:42
jerrypat said:
There is more than just a few lines of angst within this poem, Cheeky. Sometimes we find ourselves lost and even as we understand why that isn't enough to dig ourselves out of our sadness.
It seems, from your comment about it that you have been down this road before. Life has many roads and we stumble along looking for that well-lit path and sometimes it just takes time.
January 10th, 2011 22:42
Seasonal Reflections on Love and Life
Nexuscjt said:
Nice. I like your style of writing. The reader is drawn in on your every word... its quite relaxing and re-refreshing.
January 8th, 2011 02:15
Nexuscjt said:
Nice. I like your style of writing. The reader is drawn in on your every word... its quite relaxing and re-refreshing.
January 8th, 2011 02:15
Snowflakes' Touch
gerrylegister said:
Snow is falling outside, and this sonnet is an expression of what I am seeing
January 7th, 2011 18:27
gerrylegister said:
Snow is falling outside, and this sonnet is an expression of what I am seeing
January 7th, 2011 18:27
Snowflakes' Touch
jerrypat said:
Bill is smiling.
It has been years since I have been involved with snow as you wrote about in this excellent sonnet, but I could taste and feel your words and they brought back some wonderful memories.
You have a talented gift of expression, and I am grateful we have met on the Superhighway of the World Wide Web.
January 7th, 2011 06:31
jerrypat said:
Bill is smiling.
It has been years since I have been involved with snow as you wrote about in this excellent sonnet, but I could taste and feel your words and they brought back some wonderful memories.
You have a talented gift of expression, and I am grateful we have met on the Superhighway of the World Wide Web.
January 7th, 2011 06:31
I'll Look My Age, I Think
jerrypat said:
Doesn't mean I can't comment on YOUR poetry.
I liked your realism in this piece. Life being fun is not age-influenced. Sometimes the very young and beautiful have so many hangups I actually feel sorry for some if them.
It is all about the attitude whether or not life and you can dance together. Attitude. I think I lost mine tonight during the give and take.
January 6th, 2011 23:13
jerrypat said:
Doesn't mean I can't comment on YOUR poetry.
I liked your realism in this piece. Life being fun is not age-influenced. Sometimes the very young and beautiful have so many hangups I actually feel sorry for some if them.
It is all about the attitude whether or not life and you can dance together. Attitude. I think I lost mine tonight during the give and take.
January 6th, 2011 23:13
I'll Look My Age, I Think
jvl narasimha rao said:
Your poem is brilliant.Thers is a proverb in my mother tongue which says "we should not ask a woman's age and a man's salary'?Infact you look for your age but you have revealed your age
why?
yours lovingly,
JVL
January 6th, 2011 20:17
jvl narasimha rao said:
Your poem is brilliant.Thers is a proverb in my mother tongue which says "we should not ask a woman's age and a man's salary'?Infact you look for your age but you have revealed your age
why?
yours lovingly,
JVL
January 6th, 2011 20:17
I'll Look My Age, I Think
Lifewellspoken said:
You still look 20.
Loved your read.
January 6th, 2011 11:02
Lifewellspoken said:
You still look 20.
Loved your read.
January 6th, 2011 11:02
Falling E-love!!
gerrylegister said:
Funny how love can be found in the strangest of places, humorous thoughts!
January 4th, 2011 17:47
gerrylegister said:
Funny how love can be found in the strangest of places, humorous thoughts!
January 4th, 2011 17:47
Falling E-love!!
StormyDay said:
It's very cute. Childish, foolish, maybe, but a dose of silly is just the remedy. Of course, love and faith conquer all.
January 4th, 2011 11:44
StormyDay said:
It's very cute. Childish, foolish, maybe, but a dose of silly is just the remedy. Of course, love and faith conquer all.
January 4th, 2011 11:44
Falling E-love!!
jvl narasimha rao said:
These days e-love is possible.Do you need it?Ofcourse, it may not be personal Your poem may be universal
JVL
January 4th, 2011 10:08
jvl narasimha rao said:
These days e-love is possible.Do you need it?Ofcourse, it may not be personal Your poem may be universal
JVL
January 4th, 2011 10:08
Autumn's Promise....Love Won!
gerrylegister said:
I can identify with poems relating to nature
With such a lovely setting
January 3rd, 2011 15:15
gerrylegister said:
I can identify with poems relating to nature
With such a lovely setting
January 3rd, 2011 15:15
What the Fireball Said.....
Nexuscjt said:
Wow. Fascinating poem. Its not naughty, its mature and beatuiful. Really good work here, seriously!
January 3rd, 2011 01:07
Nexuscjt said:
Wow. Fascinating poem. Its not naughty, its mature and beatuiful. Really good work here, seriously!
January 3rd, 2011 01:07
What the Fireball Said.....
gerrylegister said:
Beautiful poem, it provokes and inspires me
January 1st, 2011 21:01
gerrylegister said:
Beautiful poem, it provokes and inspires me
January 1st, 2011 21:01
Remember Me
jvl narasimha rao said:
It is universal love.Those who read your poems love you and you love them or it may be the love between you and your husband.
JVL
January 1st, 2011 06:01
jvl narasimha rao said:
It is universal love.Those who read your poems love you and you love them or it may be the love between you and your husband.
JVL
January 1st, 2011 06:01
Helpless Musings in a Dark Corner....of the Dungeon
ironmaiden_81186 said:
hey cheeky...glad you're back with a gem...
the poem is much deeper than your internet problem tho...its beautiful..i really like it..
December 30th, 2010 07:41
ironmaiden_81186 said:
hey cheeky...glad you're back with a gem...
the poem is much deeper than your internet problem tho...its beautiful..i really like it..
December 30th, 2010 07:41
Helpless Musings in a Dark Corner....of the Dungeon
jvl narasimha rao said:
Your sonnet really reminds of shakespeare.You are really a gifted poet
December 30th, 2010 06:34
jvl narasimha rao said:
Your sonnet really reminds of shakespeare.You are really a gifted poet
December 30th, 2010 06:34
Musing Regretfully....in the Dungeon
jvl narasimha rao said:
there is great pain in this wonderful sonnet.
JVL
December 30th, 2010 06:31
jvl narasimha rao said:
there is great pain in this wonderful sonnet.
JVL
December 30th, 2010 06:31
Helpless Musings in a Dark Corner....of the Dungeon
dbremner said:
Very well written, as for its sentiments I'm not certain I agree. If you read my Love, Space, Stars you'll see that was composed for you. Great that you are back.
December 30th, 2010 03:30
dbremner said:
Very well written, as for its sentiments I'm not certain I agree. If you read my Love, Space, Stars you'll see that was composed for you. Great that you are back.
December 30th, 2010 03:30
Musing Regretfully....in the Dungeon
dbremner said:
Well Snowflake this as a piece is exceptionally well written. Are you not able to return to more happier pieces? For they were so good to read.
December 30th, 2010 03:25
dbremner said:
Well Snowflake this as a piece is exceptionally well written. Are you not able to return to more happier pieces? For they were so good to read.
December 30th, 2010 03:25
Musing Regretfully....in the Dungeon
nair36 said:
Your poems are always so epic... 11/10... maybe 11 and a half/10
December 30th, 2010 00:17
nair36 said:
Your poems are always so epic... 11/10... maybe 11 and a half/10
December 30th, 2010 00:17
Helpless Musings in a Dark Corner....of the Dungeon
nair36 said:
I'm not laughing... I would of lent a helping hand to any poet... great poem... you're like Shakespear but as a woman... You and your poems are GREAT and I always look forward to the next.
December 29th, 2010 22:30
nair36 said:
I'm not laughing... I would of lent a helping hand to any poet... great poem... you're like Shakespear but as a woman... You and your poems are GREAT and I always look forward to the next.
December 29th, 2010 22:30
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