Comments received on poems by Cheeky Missy
Where not to put the Broken...
StormyDay said:
Aw, I was going to guess a pencil.. Anyway, cute poem! I thought it so fun, would you consider doing more riddle-poems?
January 28th, 2011 13:15
StormyDay said:
Aw, I was going to guess a pencil.. Anyway, cute poem! I thought it so fun, would you consider doing more riddle-poems?
January 28th, 2011 13:15
Where not to put the Broken...
Belinda AMeharry said:
lol
I give up. What was it?
January 28th, 2011 07:11
Belinda AMeharry said:
lol
I give up. What was it?
January 28th, 2011 07:11
Where not to put the Broken...
Marius said:
"clothespin" according to Jenny Gordon ;)
January 28th, 2011 04:26
Marius said:
"clothespin" according to Jenny Gordon ;)
January 28th, 2011 04:26
Clothespin Illustration of Marriage?!
gerrylegister said:
Thought provoking poem, with a serious element, leaving you thinking which side is better.
January 27th, 2011 21:26
gerrylegister said:
Thought provoking poem, with a serious element, leaving you thinking which side is better.
January 27th, 2011 21:26
Lightning Bugs?
Zojinjo said:
A very nice poem. Good rhythm and I nice choice of words.
You've sketched a scene I've encountered many times, yet I never thought of it this way. Great work.
-Zojinjo
January 27th, 2011 13:42
Zojinjo said:
A very nice poem. Good rhythm and I nice choice of words.
You've sketched a scene I've encountered many times, yet I never thought of it this way. Great work.
-Zojinjo
January 27th, 2011 13:42
Clothespin Illustration of Marriage?!
StormyDay said:
It's intriquing, thought-provoking, loved it. You never mentioned what the spring symbolizes..well, here's an idea. I think it is the bond of love, and through it God, for he is love incarnate.
January 27th, 2011 12:31
StormyDay said:
It's intriquing, thought-provoking, loved it. You never mentioned what the spring symbolizes..well, here's an idea. I think it is the bond of love, and through it God, for he is love incarnate.
January 27th, 2011 12:31
Clothespin Illustration of Marriage?!
StormyDay said:
It's intriquing, thought-provoking, loved it. You never mentioned what the spring symbolizes..well, here's an idea. I think it is the bond of love, and through it God, for he is love incarnate.
January 27th, 2011 12:31
StormyDay said:
It's intriquing, thought-provoking, loved it. You never mentioned what the spring symbolizes..well, here's an idea. I think it is the bond of love, and through it God, for he is love incarnate.
January 27th, 2011 12:31
Clothespin Illustration of Marriage?!
Marius said:
Humorous yet very serious. Been there, done that and I can relate. It spoke to me.
However, to answer your question, the woman is always the better half ;)
January 27th, 2011 03:21
Marius said:
Humorous yet very serious. Been there, done that and I can relate. It spoke to me.
However, to answer your question, the woman is always the better half ;)
January 27th, 2011 03:21
Ah, Incurable Dreamer.......
Marius said:
A nightmare for the protagonist but a dream of a poem. Very expressive.
January 27th, 2011 03:15
Marius said:
A nightmare for the protagonist but a dream of a poem. Very expressive.
January 27th, 2011 03:15
Lightning Bugs?
Marius said:
Very nice poem. I loved the fireflies comparison.
January 26th, 2011 04:06
Marius said:
Very nice poem. I loved the fireflies comparison.
January 26th, 2011 04:06
Ah, but what to write?
Marius said:
This beautifully exposes the feelings one gets from writing and reading their own creations as well as the dreaded writer's block when nothing seems to work. I loved it.
January 25th, 2011 17:00
Marius said:
This beautifully exposes the feelings one gets from writing and reading their own creations as well as the dreaded writer's block when nothing seems to work. I loved it.
January 25th, 2011 17:00
Grown Up?
gerrylegister said:
I agree with wisdom with age gained, beautiful!
January 22nd, 2011 01:24
gerrylegister said:
I agree with wisdom with age gained, beautiful!
January 22nd, 2011 01:24
Consider This When You Complain
downinit said:
yw:) thank u like i said it was great to remember her
January 20th, 2011 01:06
downinit said:
yw:) thank u like i said it was great to remember her
January 20th, 2011 01:06
Consider This When You Complain
downinit said:
this poem reminded me of a girl I onced cared for in a Christ centered camp. She was 8 and had no parents left to live from foster home to foster home she visted us for one week and as I was showing her the love of God she shared a favorite verse of hers- do everything without fault finding or complaining. i don't remember the address. You don't know how that changed my life coming from an orphan a sweet and gentle yet strong little girl. thnx for reminding me !!!!!!! loved it!
January 20th, 2011 00:54
downinit said:
this poem reminded me of a girl I onced cared for in a Christ centered camp. She was 8 and had no parents left to live from foster home to foster home she visted us for one week and as I was showing her the love of God she shared a favorite verse of hers- do everything without fault finding or complaining. i don't remember the address. You don't know how that changed my life coming from an orphan a sweet and gentle yet strong little girl. thnx for reminding me !!!!!!! loved it!
January 20th, 2011 00:54
You Make My Day
gerrylegister said:
Love sweetly woven in beautiful presentation
January 19th, 2011 17:27
gerrylegister said:
Love sweetly woven in beautiful presentation
January 19th, 2011 17:27
Broken-hearted Musings.....
a soldiers wife13 said:
i like ur writting.. its soo precise...srry cant spell even if my life can depend on it...lol...everyone gets hurt now and again we just have to pick our selfs up and move on..but some poeple have troubles doing that like me but it just takes awhile to get goin again...love ur writen keep it up....
January 19th, 2011 15:43
a soldiers wife13 said:
i like ur writting.. its soo precise...srry cant spell even if my life can depend on it...lol...everyone gets hurt now and again we just have to pick our selfs up and move on..but some poeple have troubles doing that like me but it just takes awhile to get goin again...love ur writen keep it up....
January 19th, 2011 15:43
You Make My Day
StormyDay said:
It's absolutely beautiful! Very well and maturely written, I'm completely in love with it!
January 19th, 2011 14:10
StormyDay said:
It's absolutely beautiful! Very well and maturely written, I'm completely in love with it!
January 19th, 2011 14:10
Love's Dilemma
jvl narasimha rao said:
You have given a wonderful message.The person we loved may have married somebody else.Yet we could be friends.We need not become enemies.Life doesn't go as we planned or wished always.We have to accept the facts and unexpected happenings,
yours lovingly,
JVL
January 19th, 2011 11:31
jvl narasimha rao said:
You have given a wonderful message.The person we loved may have married somebody else.Yet we could be friends.We need not become enemies.Life doesn't go as we planned or wished always.We have to accept the facts and unexpected happenings,
yours lovingly,
JVL
January 19th, 2011 11:31
You Make My Day
jvl narasimha rao said:
The poem speaks of your love for your dear ones.It may be a little bird or a great man or a woman,I believe you are a kind and noble soul
yours lovingly,
JVL
January 19th, 2011 11:23
jvl narasimha rao said:
The poem speaks of your love for your dear ones.It may be a little bird or a great man or a woman,I believe you are a kind and noble soul
yours lovingly,
JVL
January 19th, 2011 11:23
Snowscape
dbremner said:
Nothing wrong with this in my mind it is very well composed.
January 18th, 2011 15:58
dbremner said:
Nothing wrong with this in my mind it is very well composed.
January 18th, 2011 15:58
Love's Dilemma
dbremner said:
Very well written, truly beautiful, among your very best. Great meter!
January 17th, 2011 13:05
dbremner said:
Very well written, truly beautiful, among your very best. Great meter!
January 17th, 2011 13:05
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