Comments received on poems by Cheeky Missy
U R the One Valentine....
nair36 said:
Sniff... so beautiful. I need a tissue.
February 14th, 2011 20:19
nair36 said:
Sniff... so beautiful. I need a tissue.
February 14th, 2011 20:19
In Love's Haunts, Valentine.....
dbremner said:
Another really good one! No need to alter this at all, I love it!
February 12th, 2011 05:26
dbremner said:
Another really good one! No need to alter this at all, I love it!
February 12th, 2011 05:26
With You, Valentine.....
dbremner said:
Good piece sonneteer. Paints the description well.
February 10th, 2011 15:32
dbremner said:
Good piece sonneteer. Paints the description well.
February 10th, 2011 15:32
I Luv U 2
jvl narasimha rao said:
No love is greater than jesus love for us.Valentine is lust.Your love is different.It is pious
yours JVL
February 9th, 2011 13:00
jvl narasimha rao said:
No love is greater than jesus love for us.Valentine is lust.Your love is different.It is pious
yours JVL
February 9th, 2011 13:00
It's U Valentine
jvl narasimha rao said:
This is all for your husband.You are a pious woman.I am a pious man.Can we use the word pious?
yours lovingly,
JVL
February 9th, 2011 12:54
jvl narasimha rao said:
This is all for your husband.You are a pious woman.I am a pious man.Can we use the word pious?
yours lovingly,
JVL
February 9th, 2011 12:54
Has to be LOVE.....
StormyDay said:
Wow, I'm stunned. Seems written by a master, if not one very experienced in verse.
February 7th, 2011 15:45
StormyDay said:
Wow, I'm stunned. Seems written by a master, if not one very experienced in verse.
February 7th, 2011 15:45
Has to be LOVE.....
dbremner said:
Wondefully written - wonderfully familiar!
February 7th, 2011 13:17
dbremner said:
Wondefully written - wonderfully familiar!
February 7th, 2011 13:17
Be Mine....
dbremner said:
You are at the top of your sonnetering game with this!
February 4th, 2011 15:35
dbremner said:
You are at the top of your sonnetering game with this!
February 4th, 2011 15:35
Dear Valentine......
Zojinjo said:
Loved it! You have a perfect choice of words and the rhythm is flawless.
February 3rd, 2011 16:48
Zojinjo said:
Loved it! You have a perfect choice of words and the rhythm is flawless.
February 3rd, 2011 16:48
Your Valentine.....
Leonard Dabydeen said:
Dance to the music of the mind, the closer you twirl towards him your Valentine will get closer to you. Keep dancing.
February 2nd, 2011 23:34
Leonard Dabydeen said:
Dance to the music of the mind, the closer you twirl towards him your Valentine will get closer to you. Keep dancing.
February 2nd, 2011 23:34
Re: the Church
Marius said:
Sounds like words and feelings coming out from years spent in the environment you describe here. Not your typical religious poem. Not many who believe would admit to the fear factor so prevalent in Christianity.
I would respectfully take exception to the hate mentioned in the last verse, though. I don't hate believers. Hate is the most honest feeling; it cannot be faked. They say love is the most powerful feeling in the world? Well, one can fake love, but not hate.
However, it is also too strong a feeling to be used against people you don't even know personally, and in my opinion, not worthy of being used at all.
Well written.
January 30th, 2011 00:27
Marius said:
Sounds like words and feelings coming out from years spent in the environment you describe here. Not your typical religious poem. Not many who believe would admit to the fear factor so prevalent in Christianity.
I would respectfully take exception to the hate mentioned in the last verse, though. I don't hate believers. Hate is the most honest feeling; it cannot be faked. They say love is the most powerful feeling in the world? Well, one can fake love, but not hate.
However, it is also too strong a feeling to be used against people you don't even know personally, and in my opinion, not worthy of being used at all.
Well written.
January 30th, 2011 00:27
Clothespin Illustration of Marriage?!
Belinda AMeharry said:
Nicely put.
Could the one with the spring have more strength in that moment of time. The ability to bring you back to feeling, to love...
January 29th, 2011 18:40
Belinda AMeharry said:
Nicely put.
Could the one with the spring have more strength in that moment of time. The ability to bring you back to feeling, to love...
January 29th, 2011 18:40
I love to sail....
Alexandre Landsley said:
Who wouldn't want to sail to the "High Seas?" After reading this everyone will want to.........great poem. :)
January 29th, 2011 14:27
Alexandre Landsley said:
Who wouldn't want to sail to the "High Seas?" After reading this everyone will want to.........great poem. :)
January 29th, 2011 14:27
I love to sail....
dbremner said:
Really good poem, is it about kite flying?
January 29th, 2011 04:36
dbremner said:
Really good poem, is it about kite flying?
January 29th, 2011 04:36
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