Comments received on poems by Cheeky Missy
Dancing....With Love
jvl narasimha rao said:
YOU ARE ON POETIC FIRE. YOU DESREVE A 10. WHAT A POET YOU ARE! MAY BE YOU ARE CELEBRATING CHRISTMAS IN YOUR OWN WAY. I AM CELEBRATING IT IN MY OWN WAY
yours lovingly,
JVL NARASIMHA RAO
December 24th, 2010 12:11
jvl narasimha rao said:
YOU ARE ON POETIC FIRE. YOU DESREVE A 10. WHAT A POET YOU ARE! MAY BE YOU ARE CELEBRATING CHRISTMAS IN YOUR OWN WAY. I AM CELEBRATING IT IN MY OWN WAY
yours lovingly,
JVL NARASIMHA RAO
December 24th, 2010 12:11
What the Fireball Said.....
jvl narasimha rao said:
A LOVELY GIFT FOR UR HUSBAND.a GREAT POEM WITH GREAT PASSION WHICH DESERVES A 10
yours JVL
December 24th, 2010 12:06
jvl narasimha rao said:
A LOVELY GIFT FOR UR HUSBAND.a GREAT POEM WITH GREAT PASSION WHICH DESERVES A 10
yours JVL
December 24th, 2010 12:06
What the Fireball Said.....
dbremner said:
Wonderful piece, sign me a book as well! Very glad you have posted it, it certainly deserves to be here.
December 24th, 2010 03:18
dbremner said:
Wonderful piece, sign me a book as well! Very glad you have posted it, it certainly deserves to be here.
December 24th, 2010 03:18
What the Fireball Said.....
nair36 said:
Kool... you do have a humor side to you... great poem as always. It's not really "Naughty" it's more like a great piece of art. Remember me please when you're in book stores or other places signing autographs :)
December 24th, 2010 00:17
nair36 said:
Kool... you do have a humor side to you... great poem as always. It's not really "Naughty" it's more like a great piece of art. Remember me please when you're in book stores or other places signing autographs :)
December 24th, 2010 00:17
Dancing....With Love
dbremner said:
Absolutely Snowflake, Absolutely! Excellent sonnet.
December 23rd, 2010 12:12
dbremner said:
Absolutely Snowflake, Absolutely! Excellent sonnet.
December 23rd, 2010 12:12
Standing on the Cusp......
dbremner said:
Snowflake this piece is absolutely excellent. The way you structure lines 9 and 10 are pure brilliance.
December 22nd, 2010 16:14
dbremner said:
Snowflake this piece is absolutely excellent. The way you structure lines 9 and 10 are pure brilliance.
December 22nd, 2010 16:14
Standing on the Cusp......
jvl narasimha rao said:
Your poem is as beautiful as life itself with its dreams,doubts, hopes, wishes and above all our fate.I have given a ten.I am always liberal with my younger sister
yours elder brother
JVL
December 22nd, 2010 01:02
jvl narasimha rao said:
Your poem is as beautiful as life itself with its dreams,doubts, hopes, wishes and above all our fate.I have given a ten.I am always liberal with my younger sister
yours elder brother
JVL
December 22nd, 2010 01:02
Falling in Love with YOU
jvl narasimha rao said:
It may be a gift for your husband, my brother-in-law.He is lucky.
yours lovingly,
JVL
December 21st, 2010 12:18
jvl narasimha rao said:
It may be a gift for your husband, my brother-in-law.He is lucky.
yours lovingly,
JVL
December 21st, 2010 12:18
Aren't We Having Fun?!
jvl narasimha rao said:
It looks personal but it is universal.You prove to be a great poet.You are making all of us have fun.i HAVE RATED IT WITH A TEN I am more liberal than you
yours lovingly,
JVL
December 21st, 2010 11:57
jvl narasimha rao said:
It looks personal but it is universal.You prove to be a great poet.You are making all of us have fun.i HAVE RATED IT WITH A TEN I am more liberal than you
yours lovingly,
JVL
December 21st, 2010 11:57
Aren't We Having Fun?!
dbremner said:
I like this poem a great deal. The 4,4,6,7 makes for a nicely flowing piece of poetry. The subject too is perfect! Well done to you.
December 21st, 2010 10:29
dbremner said:
I like this poem a great deal. The 4,4,6,7 makes for a nicely flowing piece of poetry. The subject too is perfect! Well done to you.
December 21st, 2010 10:29
Aren't We Having Fun?!
Pratikshya said:
its really a sweet composition....and i felt all the sweet feelings of the heart.....
December 21st, 2010 07:20
Pratikshya said:
its really a sweet composition....and i felt all the sweet feelings of the heart.....
December 21st, 2010 07:20
Falling in Love with YOU
Dolphine29 said:
I like it!! It's honest, you should not be hard on yourself :)
December 20th, 2010 15:26
Dolphine29 said:
I like it!! It's honest, you should not be hard on yourself :)
December 20th, 2010 15:26
I'm Afraid I'm Very Stuck-up.....!
dbremner said:
I like this an the way it is presented ending each even numbered line with 'me' fits the story within the piece, very clever.
December 19th, 2010 16:28
dbremner said:
I like this an the way it is presented ending each even numbered line with 'me' fits the story within the piece, very clever.
December 19th, 2010 16:28
O Childhood....whither hast thou fled?
ironmaiden_81186 said:
i really like this piece, for its medieval style of writing and the theme that it has touched......and i know this poem has a much better literary feel than "back to times of splendor"...
very well written for its holistic approach towards a human life cycle...
December 19th, 2010 01:04
ironmaiden_81186 said:
i really like this piece, for its medieval style of writing and the theme that it has touched......and i know this poem has a much better literary feel than "back to times of splendor"...
very well written for its holistic approach towards a human life cycle...
December 19th, 2010 01:04
O Childhood....whither hast thou fled?
dbremner said:
I like this poem it deals with a subject we likely all think about, our younger days seem brighter but we should be optimistic about the future too.
December 18th, 2010 19:04
dbremner said:
I like this poem it deals with a subject we likely all think about, our younger days seem brighter but we should be optimistic about the future too.
December 18th, 2010 19:04
Brothers
jvl narasimha rao said:
You seem to be my sister.You always follow my poems .You have A sisterly heart.As a brother I rated the poem with a ten
yours loving brother,
JVL
December 18th, 2010 11:57
jvl narasimha rao said:
You seem to be my sister.You always follow my poems .You have A sisterly heart.As a brother I rated the poem with a ten
yours loving brother,
JVL
December 18th, 2010 11:57
I Don't Like You Anymore
dbremner said:
You have no reason to be dissatisfied as this is a well written piece.
December 16th, 2010 13:48
dbremner said:
You have no reason to be dissatisfied as this is a well written piece.
December 16th, 2010 13:48
Thoughts of Spring in Wintertime.....
ironmaiden_81186 said:
"Thus beguile you winter's clime
With warm thoughts of spring's delight".....just love the last lines,
a very fiting end to a beautiful poem..
December 16th, 2010 07:26
ironmaiden_81186 said:
"Thus beguile you winter's clime
With warm thoughts of spring's delight".....just love the last lines,
a very fiting end to a beautiful poem..
December 16th, 2010 07:26
"S" is for.......
StormyDay said:
It's silly and truely original; very fun with a rhyme scheme to boot! It brings a smile to my face. With your permission I'd like to try your new style for myself (?)
December 15th, 2010 15:07
StormyDay said:
It's silly and truely original; very fun with a rhyme scheme to boot! It brings a smile to my face. With your permission I'd like to try your new style for myself (?)
December 15th, 2010 15:07
Thoughts of Spring in Wintertime.....
dbremner said:
A REALLY nice poem, I like it dearly. Well done to you.
December 15th, 2010 13:54
dbremner said:
A REALLY nice poem, I like it dearly. Well done to you.
December 15th, 2010 13:54
Two Little Flames....A Fire!
dbremner said:
A beautiful love poem. Well done! Very well done!
December 14th, 2010 14:40
dbremner said:
A beautiful love poem. Well done! Very well done!
December 14th, 2010 14:40
Fun Rhymes to Pass the Time.....
nair36 said:
I can't believe I'm the first one to comment on this great poem. You mentioned to fix one of the poems' lines but there was nothing to fix. I know it's all juss good humor but still you created yet another great poem. I'm gonna look at all the ones that havent been commented on yet and comment. I'll have to remember your name in the future when you're a famous poet.
December 13th, 2010 18:27
nair36 said:
I can't believe I'm the first one to comment on this great poem. You mentioned to fix one of the poems' lines but there was nothing to fix. I know it's all juss good humor but still you created yet another great poem. I'm gonna look at all the ones that havent been commented on yet and comment. I'll have to remember your name in the future when you're a famous poet.
December 13th, 2010 18:27
Sometimes......
nair36 said:
Oh to be saved indeed. Wonderful poem. I can relate to this poem in particular. Like the vulgar poems I make and trying to be saved. I take for granted what I already have and live for selfish reasons when I should really be living for God. One day I'll get my act together though. This poem is kinda like a first step in a way. Like me admitting my problem. Great poem. Makes me think.
December 13th, 2010 18:16
nair36 said:
Oh to be saved indeed. Wonderful poem. I can relate to this poem in particular. Like the vulgar poems I make and trying to be saved. I take for granted what I already have and live for selfish reasons when I should really be living for God. One day I'll get my act together though. This poem is kinda like a first step in a way. Like me admitting my problem. Great poem. Makes me think.
December 13th, 2010 18:16
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