Comments received on poems by Cheeky Missy
Consider This When You Complain
downinit said:
yw:) thank u like i said it was great to remember her
January 20th, 2011 01:06
downinit said:
yw:) thank u like i said it was great to remember her
January 20th, 2011 01:06
Consider This When You Complain
downinit said:
this poem reminded me of a girl I onced cared for in a Christ centered camp. She was 8 and had no parents left to live from foster home to foster home she visted us for one week and as I was showing her the love of God she shared a favorite verse of hers- do everything without fault finding or complaining. i don't remember the address. You don't know how that changed my life coming from an orphan a sweet and gentle yet strong little girl. thnx for reminding me !!!!!!! loved it!
January 20th, 2011 00:54
downinit said:
this poem reminded me of a girl I onced cared for in a Christ centered camp. She was 8 and had no parents left to live from foster home to foster home she visted us for one week and as I was showing her the love of God she shared a favorite verse of hers- do everything without fault finding or complaining. i don't remember the address. You don't know how that changed my life coming from an orphan a sweet and gentle yet strong little girl. thnx for reminding me !!!!!!! loved it!
January 20th, 2011 00:54
You Make My Day
gerrylegister said:
Love sweetly woven in beautiful presentation
January 19th, 2011 17:27
gerrylegister said:
Love sweetly woven in beautiful presentation
January 19th, 2011 17:27
Broken-hearted Musings.....
a soldiers wife13 said:
i like ur writting.. its soo precise...srry cant spell even if my life can depend on it...lol...everyone gets hurt now and again we just have to pick our selfs up and move on..but some poeple have troubles doing that like me but it just takes awhile to get goin again...love ur writen keep it up....
January 19th, 2011 15:43
a soldiers wife13 said:
i like ur writting.. its soo precise...srry cant spell even if my life can depend on it...lol...everyone gets hurt now and again we just have to pick our selfs up and move on..but some poeple have troubles doing that like me but it just takes awhile to get goin again...love ur writen keep it up....
January 19th, 2011 15:43
You Make My Day
StormyDay said:
It's absolutely beautiful! Very well and maturely written, I'm completely in love with it!
January 19th, 2011 14:10
StormyDay said:
It's absolutely beautiful! Very well and maturely written, I'm completely in love with it!
January 19th, 2011 14:10
Love's Dilemma
jvl narasimha rao said:
You have given a wonderful message.The person we loved may have married somebody else.Yet we could be friends.We need not become enemies.Life doesn't go as we planned or wished always.We have to accept the facts and unexpected happenings,
yours lovingly,
JVL
January 19th, 2011 11:31
jvl narasimha rao said:
You have given a wonderful message.The person we loved may have married somebody else.Yet we could be friends.We need not become enemies.Life doesn't go as we planned or wished always.We have to accept the facts and unexpected happenings,
yours lovingly,
JVL
January 19th, 2011 11:31
You Make My Day
jvl narasimha rao said:
The poem speaks of your love for your dear ones.It may be a little bird or a great man or a woman,I believe you are a kind and noble soul
yours lovingly,
JVL
January 19th, 2011 11:23
jvl narasimha rao said:
The poem speaks of your love for your dear ones.It may be a little bird or a great man or a woman,I believe you are a kind and noble soul
yours lovingly,
JVL
January 19th, 2011 11:23
Snowscape
dbremner said:
Nothing wrong with this in my mind it is very well composed.
January 18th, 2011 15:58
dbremner said:
Nothing wrong with this in my mind it is very well composed.
January 18th, 2011 15:58
Love's Dilemma
dbremner said:
Very well written, truly beautiful, among your very best. Great meter!
January 17th, 2011 13:05
dbremner said:
Very well written, truly beautiful, among your very best. Great meter!
January 17th, 2011 13:05
Hey Me!
jvl narasimha rao said:
It is a spiritual poem.Well penned
yours JVL
January 14th, 2011 12:09
jvl narasimha rao said:
It is a spiritual poem.Well penned
yours JVL
January 14th, 2011 12:09
Poor Wittle Birdie?
dbremner said:
A fun/novel way of looking at something so sad.
January 13th, 2011 14:35
dbremner said:
A fun/novel way of looking at something so sad.
January 13th, 2011 14:35
Musing on Dreams
StormyDay said:
I can relate. The last stanza is very blunt and curt, I like it very much because it just seems to complete the poem.
January 13th, 2011 13:34
StormyDay said:
I can relate. The last stanza is very blunt and curt, I like it very much because it just seems to complete the poem.
January 13th, 2011 13:34
Break My Heart?
Dolphine29 said:
Hi; I like the idea that u have it's sad but also has like a changelling point and that is important. Maybe it will help just closing your eyes and thinking about him and well just write without thinking of rhimes. It's amazing all that u can come out with from within.
Keep on!!! Best
D.
January 11th, 2011 14:57
Dolphine29 said:
Hi; I like the idea that u have it's sad but also has like a changelling point and that is important. Maybe it will help just closing your eyes and thinking about him and well just write without thinking of rhimes. It's amazing all that u can come out with from within.
Keep on!!! Best
D.
January 11th, 2011 14:57
Break My Heart?
lezyl legaspi said:
it was nice..maybe a couple of more thoughts would make it better..just suggesting..i hope it's just ok with you..
January 11th, 2011 04:03
lezyl legaspi said:
it was nice..maybe a couple of more thoughts would make it better..just suggesting..i hope it's just ok with you..
January 11th, 2011 04:03
Broken-hearted Musings.....
jerrypat said:
There is more than just a few lines of angst within this poem, Cheeky. Sometimes we find ourselves lost and even as we understand why that isn't enough to dig ourselves out of our sadness.
It seems, from your comment about it that you have been down this road before. Life has many roads and we stumble along looking for that well-lit path and sometimes it just takes time.
January 10th, 2011 22:42
jerrypat said:
There is more than just a few lines of angst within this poem, Cheeky. Sometimes we find ourselves lost and even as we understand why that isn't enough to dig ourselves out of our sadness.
It seems, from your comment about it that you have been down this road before. Life has many roads and we stumble along looking for that well-lit path and sometimes it just takes time.
January 10th, 2011 22:42
Seasonal Reflections on Love and Life
Nexuscjt said:
Nice. I like your style of writing. The reader is drawn in on your every word... its quite relaxing and re-refreshing.
January 8th, 2011 02:15
Nexuscjt said:
Nice. I like your style of writing. The reader is drawn in on your every word... its quite relaxing and re-refreshing.
January 8th, 2011 02:15
Snowflakes' Touch
gerrylegister said:
Snow is falling outside, and this sonnet is an expression of what I am seeing
January 7th, 2011 18:27
gerrylegister said:
Snow is falling outside, and this sonnet is an expression of what I am seeing
January 7th, 2011 18:27
Snowflakes' Touch
jerrypat said:
Bill is smiling.
It has been years since I have been involved with snow as you wrote about in this excellent sonnet, but I could taste and feel your words and they brought back some wonderful memories.
You have a talented gift of expression, and I am grateful we have met on the Superhighway of the World Wide Web.
January 7th, 2011 06:31
jerrypat said:
Bill is smiling.
It has been years since I have been involved with snow as you wrote about in this excellent sonnet, but I could taste and feel your words and they brought back some wonderful memories.
You have a talented gift of expression, and I am grateful we have met on the Superhighway of the World Wide Web.
January 7th, 2011 06:31
I'll Look My Age, I Think
jerrypat said:
Doesn't mean I can't comment on YOUR poetry.
I liked your realism in this piece. Life being fun is not age-influenced. Sometimes the very young and beautiful have so many hangups I actually feel sorry for some if them.
It is all about the attitude whether or not life and you can dance together. Attitude. I think I lost mine tonight during the give and take.
January 6th, 2011 23:13
jerrypat said:
Doesn't mean I can't comment on YOUR poetry.
I liked your realism in this piece. Life being fun is not age-influenced. Sometimes the very young and beautiful have so many hangups I actually feel sorry for some if them.
It is all about the attitude whether or not life and you can dance together. Attitude. I think I lost mine tonight during the give and take.
January 6th, 2011 23:13
I'll Look My Age, I Think
jvl narasimha rao said:
Your poem is brilliant.Thers is a proverb in my mother tongue which says "we should not ask a woman's age and a man's salary'?Infact you look for your age but you have revealed your age
why?
yours lovingly,
JVL
January 6th, 2011 20:17
jvl narasimha rao said:
Your poem is brilliant.Thers is a proverb in my mother tongue which says "we should not ask a woman's age and a man's salary'?Infact you look for your age but you have revealed your age
why?
yours lovingly,
JVL
January 6th, 2011 20:17
I'll Look My Age, I Think
Lifewellspoken said:
You still look 20.
Loved your read.
January 6th, 2011 11:02
Lifewellspoken said:
You still look 20.
Loved your read.
January 6th, 2011 11:02
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