Comments received on poems by 2781



Swords and spears
orchidee said:

Doh! What am I going to plow with? I beat my plowshare into a sword.
And what am I going to prune with? I beat my pruning hook into a spear!
I\'m a confused laddie. lol.

June 16th, 2024 11:08

Swords and spears
Neville said:



while sticks and stones may break my bones but words will ne\'er harm me ..

June 16th, 2024 06:58

Swords and spears
sorenbarrett said:

\"Hear a little
Their a little
The little understand...\"
A great play on the language as the Sumerians did who started the image of man being created from the rib of Enki.
Indeed \"hear a little\" and from the little understand Good write with hidden meaning.

June 16th, 2024 06:53

Hmm
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write 2781, did you have too much wine that night. LOL

Andy

June 16th, 2024 01:13

Hmm
2781 said:

Thanks, but is should have been it!

June 15th, 2024 21:11

Hmm
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

June 15th, 2024 20:58

Hmm
orchidee said:

Well, I\'m not often me. Who am I? lol.

June 15th, 2024 09:29

Hmm
sorenbarrett said:

A write I could identify with since when I looked at my listing on the net I found another\'s face in place of mine. Stolen identity at another level.
Good write my friend

June 15th, 2024 08:29

Hmm
Tony36 said:

Great write

June 15th, 2024 07:14

River
2781 said:

It\'s an interpretation of the final chapter.

June 14th, 2024 10:13

River
sorenbarrett said:

Many biblical references here (the river, tree of life, fruit, God as light)I always thought it interesting that Alpha and Omega are Greek terms not Hebrew. A nice flow to this piece.

June 14th, 2024 09:52

River
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

June 14th, 2024 07:49

River
Manslick said:

Can\'t get here fast enough for me.
Nice poem.

June 14th, 2024 06:17

River
orchidee said:

Hope I don\'t forget the river is in the middle of the street and fall in it! Will there be bridges? lol.

June 14th, 2024 04:18

Donkey
Thomas W Case said:

Tongue and cheek and powerful.

June 13th, 2024 11:22

Donkey
orchidee said:

A prayer book had a typo - what is a \'convenant\'?! Spell-checker don\'t like it. lol.

June 12th, 2024 04:01

Relations
Doggerel Dave said:

Depends on whether he feels under any obligation to \'strengthen relations\'.



June 11th, 2024 06:25

Science
Goldfinch60 said:

God isn\'t science either 2781.

Andy

June 10th, 2024 01:41

Science
Doggerel Dave said:

I wouldn\'t call it controversial........ Not going to respond in any depth.... just don\'t put science and God ( if you have to believe in such) in opposition - they are not mutually exclusive.

June 9th, 2024 19:46

Science
orchidee said:

If grain by grain, they will find out in about 500 million years! lol.

June 9th, 2024 13:14

Science
Sunita said:

Interesting topic, very well written!

June 9th, 2024 13:00

Starlink
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

June 9th, 2024 10:34

Starlink
2781 said:

There is NBN but not reliable enough, so they say.

June 8th, 2024 09:19

Starlink
Doggerel Dave said:

Wot no NBN?
Sounds like a painful business all round.

June 8th, 2024 07:51

Companion
Goldfinch60 said:

Another good time in your life 2781, keep it going.

Andy

June 7th, 2024 01:14

Companion
peto said:

Always enjoy a good rhyme
And this is a very good rhyme

June 6th, 2024 12:15

Companion
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful.

June 6th, 2024 07:37

Moving forward
Goldfinch60 said:

Always one step at a time will take us on the journey to glory 2781.

Andy

June 6th, 2024 01:41

Moving forward
Manslick said:

lovely

June 5th, 2024 06:22

Moving forward
orchidee said:

Now - I wondered why I wasn\'t getting far. I was walking backwards! lol.

June 5th, 2024 02:17



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