Comments received on poems by LIZ
DEMONS
The Dreamer said:
Amazing! I hope I can reach your level someday, the way you are able to convey your feelings so precisely is just remarkable! (Although to be honest I don\'t think I understood the poem completely 😝, but atleast I tried 😂)
June 22nd, 2023 14:57
The Dreamer said:
Amazing! I hope I can reach your level someday, the way you are able to convey your feelings so precisely is just remarkable! (Although to be honest I don\'t think I understood the poem completely 😝, but atleast I tried 😂)
June 22nd, 2023 14:57
SMOKESCREEN
L. B. Mek said:
love your self-empowering theme
indeed, introspection is a tool
not an excuse or a freefall of worth
just because we confront
our shortcomings, we should never
marginalise our self worth..
a great message!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 26th, 2023 02:34
L. B. Mek said:
love your self-empowering theme
indeed, introspection is a tool
not an excuse or a freefall of worth
just because we confront
our shortcomings, we should never
marginalise our self worth..
a great message!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 26th, 2023 02:34
EMPTY PLEASURE
L. B. Mek said:
\'it\'s making me bleed,
explosion of colors that feel like true silk.
Locked in a room, with waves that crash in,
splashes of glass that pierce through my skin.
The wound is so deep,\'
just by themselves, these lines
are a poetic, impactful wording
of that turmoil n frustration
so many of us can relate to, dear poet
(a beautiful poem, imbued
with such laudable vulnerability)
thank you!
May 19th, 2023 02:08
L. B. Mek said:
\'it\'s making me bleed,
explosion of colors that feel like true silk.
Locked in a room, with waves that crash in,
splashes of glass that pierce through my skin.
The wound is so deep,\'
just by themselves, these lines
are a poetic, impactful wording
of that turmoil n frustration
so many of us can relate to, dear poet
(a beautiful poem, imbued
with such laudable vulnerability)
thank you!
May 19th, 2023 02:08
EMPTY PLEASURE
Neville said:
what a great title and otherwise very much enjoyed .. I particularly liked the teensy bit erotic narrative ... Neville :)
May 16th, 2023 05:57
Neville said:
what a great title and otherwise very much enjoyed .. I particularly liked the teensy bit erotic narrative ... Neville :)
May 16th, 2023 05:57
DEPTH
Bobby O said:
It’s like you maintain a kindness rather than risk compromise to others and fighting back that primal urge, succeeding, paints your character in the brightest light.
April 15th, 2023 07:31
Bobby O said:
It’s like you maintain a kindness rather than risk compromise to others and fighting back that primal urge, succeeding, paints your character in the brightest light.
April 15th, 2023 07:31
BLEEDING
L. B. Mek said:
\'Each a bullet that remains, buried in love I never felt.\'
hope you find your way, to that promised tomorrow
where yesterday\'s, are but fragmented memories...
(hard to get, at
those shrapnel, daggers
sunken, deep
in that fractured remnant of
our shattered hearts...
it hurts more, if we never
realised
just how deeply, we fell
in love
..still
while we have Time, we can hope
a laughter visits us soon
devoid of remembrance ghosts..)
February 27th, 2023 05:04
L. B. Mek said:
\'Each a bullet that remains, buried in love I never felt.\'
hope you find your way, to that promised tomorrow
where yesterday\'s, are but fragmented memories...
(hard to get, at
those shrapnel, daggers
sunken, deep
in that fractured remnant of
our shattered hearts...
it hurts more, if we never
realised
just how deeply, we fell
in love
..still
while we have Time, we can hope
a laughter visits us soon
devoid of remembrance ghosts..)
February 27th, 2023 05:04
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