Comments received on poems by LIZ



DEPARTURE
Thomas W Case said:

Hell yes. Great write Liz.

November 20th, 2023 17:15

DEPARTURE
Goldfinch60 said:

So true LIZ, without ourselves we would get nowhere.

Andy

I hope you are not away for long.

November 20th, 2023 02:42

DEPARTURE
Teddy.15 said:

Choosing yourself is indeed the greatest and highest gift dear Liz, although I say I\'m so sorry to see you going off, I do hope you will come back to share more of your heartfelt poetry/ songs because you are one of my favourites. We all need a break from forums that\'s for sure. Biggest of hugs to you my darling friend of MPS. ❤️

November 19th, 2023 17:32

DEPARTURE
Bella Shepard said:

You have showcased \"integrity\"in this poem, in spades. Kudos!

November 19th, 2023 13:27

I REMEMBER
Teddy.15 said:

What a beautiful piece of poetry, loved your first stanza it\'s rhyme is perfect, Lizzy, I always feel it from the heart, which is where it indeed comes from. I always admire your courage and your strengths and your kindness, we who have had trauma in our lives seem truly to be those with the most empathy and compassion. You have it all. ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

November 19th, 2023 08:13

DEPARTURE
Neville said:


I hope there is more to this than I am able to fathom & that I am remarkably wrong .. 💜

November 19th, 2023 06:51

DEPARTURE
orchidee said:

Oh lol, at around 6:30 in the video, she\'s in deep misery. it would be deep, wouldn\'t it?! heehee.

November 19th, 2023 05:56

I REMEMBER
Muse Gong said:

beautiful

November 19th, 2023 05:55

DEPARTURE
Muse Gong said:

very good

November 19th, 2023 05:53

I REMEMBER
Goldfinch60 said:

That love will always be there for you LIZ.

Andy

November 18th, 2023 02:26

I REMEMBER
Thomas W Case said:

Truly beautiful.

November 17th, 2023 22:17

I REMEMBER
Accidental Poet said:

In life, everyone has a choice to make. But when you stand by family and others you love, that\'s the best and right choice to make. Great Write Liz. 😉

November 17th, 2023 20:53

I REMEMBER
orchidee said:

Yep, I always stayed around! lol.
And now my poem: I remember when it was deep, very deep....
Oops, I dozed off; forgot the rest of the poem. heehee. Maybe it\'s best I did. What was deep? EWe\'ll never know! 😁

November 17th, 2023 07:47

I REMEMBER
LIZ said:

Ayyyyyyy hi Maxine!!!! You are so sweet!!! Thank you so much!!! You know I always appreciate your comments!! 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
Sending you a big hug!!!

November 17th, 2023 06:20

I REMEMBER
LIZ said:

NEVILLE!!! Yes, that \"once in a lifetime unmistakable, unrequited unconditional kinda love\" UFFFFFF indeed!!! Thank YOU!!!! 💜💜💜💜💜💜

November 17th, 2023 03:50

I REMEMBER
Neville said:



I have no doubt you refer to that maybe once in a lifetime unmistakable, unrequited unconditional UFFFF kinda love .. the kind that despite its inevitable niggles and may be a minor flaw here n there make it perfect ... Neville 💜


November 17th, 2023 03:45

I REMEMBER
Bobby O said:

Everyone ran but you stayed around. That’s a forever attachment and I believe however deep the appreciation is from the start , it will grow as the heroic nature of being shown that loyalty stands more and more apart from those that didn’t stay and try to pass off insufficient reason as they still grasp for your friendship. They continue to be shallow and never realize you know and that defines and the choice of staying rises high and rinds deep Everest next to the canyon. And their tied and the same snd you have a hero

November 17th, 2023 03:04

WALK AWAY
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive words LIZ, I do hope all worked out well and those times are now just a memory.

Andy

November 12th, 2023 01:50

WALK AWAY
Introverted Sage said:

Time heals all wounds and some take longer than others.
Great write!

November 11th, 2023 22:13

WALK AWAY
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic write Liz.

November 11th, 2023 06:11

WALK AWAY
Neville said:



the point you make you make well .. I can feel it loud and crystal clear .. much respect Liz .. Neville 👍💜

November 11th, 2023 06:04

WALK AWAY
Teddy.15 said:

Love is blind and that is one sure thing it is only when we walk away for good and have time to reflect we can then see how awful it was to be there. I felt this and all I can say this is the fall out of doubt and the love when you have no other choice than to leave to protect yourself. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

November 11th, 2023 05:59

WALK AWAY
orchidee said:

I will walk away from ya if things become deep! heehee.😁🤣🙄

November 11th, 2023 03:14

POETIC JUSTICE
Bella Shepard said:

Your lines are so profoundly beautiful. Heartfelt and cathartic, they resonate with new found confidence and liberation. You go girl!

October 30th, 2023 15:53

POETIC JUSTICE
peto said:

Well worth the wait
A tremendous confession draped in rhyme
Extremely subtle
Yet so powerful
\"Voicing things I dare not say\"
You don\'t seem shy or the type to hold back
Makes this line even more powerful
Magic


October 26th, 2023 05:32

POETIC JUSTICE
Bobby O said:

Beautiful piece and I caught that Janet thing. PAC prolly wondering
What have you done for me lately.?

October 25th, 2023 23:55

POETIC JUSTICE
MendedFences27 said:



October 25th, 2023 16:06

POETIC JUSTICE
orchidee said:

Anything of DEEP concern cropped up? 😁
And why did I turn up to write this useless comment?! Cooeee, goodnight soon! lol.

October 25th, 2023 13:43

POETIC JUSTICE
Misunderstood said:

I used to have that feeling, of relief purging my feelings on paper. Getting that exhale expelling what’s been weighing you down.

You have displayed every feeling I used to take away from writing.

Beautiful confessional.

I hope people continue to seeing you for you and your writing will continue to be your therapy.






October 25th, 2023 11:22

POETIC JUSTICE
Garth Rakumakoe said:

Telling the untold and unsaid Liz... Lovely lines, too sublime... This is why I love poetry.

October 25th, 2023 08:03

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