Comments received on poems by LIZ
WHAT DID YOU THINK WOULD HAPPEN?
Bobby O said:
Bill and Ted would say
That’s really excellent!💰
September 4th, 2023 04:01
Bobby O said:
Bill and Ted would say
That’s really excellent!💰
September 4th, 2023 04:01
WHAT DID YOU THINK WOULD HAPPEN?
Bobby O said:
Bill and Ted would say
That’s really excellent!💰
September 4th, 2023 03:54
Bobby O said:
Bill and Ted would say
That’s really excellent!💰
September 4th, 2023 03:54
WHAT DID YOU THINK WOULD HAPPEN?
Teddy.15 said:
Oh Liz, love can bring us pouring our guts out into a drain, but in the end we are strong we get up we move on and if we are really lucky as we both are, we get to write about that moment and share with others who may never have experienced such, and I hope they never do. I will survive, yes you did. 💖
September 4th, 2023 02:29
Teddy.15 said:
Oh Liz, love can bring us pouring our guts out into a drain, but in the end we are strong we get up we move on and if we are really lucky as we both are, we get to write about that moment and share with others who may never have experienced such, and I hope they never do. I will survive, yes you did. 💖
September 4th, 2023 02:29
WHAT DID YOU THINK WOULD HAPPEN?
orchidee said:
I was only trying to save ya from the fire that broke out in the building.
Of course, this is the only way I see this poem, in me sheltered life. heehee.
September 4th, 2023 02:02
orchidee said:
I was only trying to save ya from the fire that broke out in the building.
Of course, this is the only way I see this poem, in me sheltered life. heehee.
September 4th, 2023 02:02
WHAT DID YOU THINK WOULD HAPPEN?
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong emotive words LIZ.
Andy
September 4th, 2023 02:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong emotive words LIZ.
Andy
September 4th, 2023 02:01
WHAT DID YOU THINK WOULD HAPPEN?
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A good writing liz tho sad . It’s good to get away from those things that are not wanted / or feel harmful . Sounds intrusive / and unhealthy
September 4th, 2023 01:14
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A good writing liz tho sad . It’s good to get away from those things that are not wanted / or feel harmful . Sounds intrusive / and unhealthy
September 4th, 2023 01:14
WHAT DID YOU THINK WOULD HAPPEN?
Neville said:
this is superb and on so any levels .. firstly as a poem and in its very own write, it can clearly hold it\'s head above water ..
and then as an expression of your own achievement and dynamic recovery ..
Like I said .. superb LIZ and keep that head held high 💜
September 4th, 2023 00:58
Neville said:
this is superb and on so any levels .. firstly as a poem and in its very own write, it can clearly hold it\'s head above water ..
and then as an expression of your own achievement and dynamic recovery ..
Like I said .. superb LIZ and keep that head held high 💜
September 4th, 2023 00:58
WHAT DID YOU THINK WOULD HAPPEN?
Parisab said:
Words written vividly about toxic love-thanks for sharing…
September 4th, 2023 00:38
Parisab said:
Words written vividly about toxic love-thanks for sharing…
September 4th, 2023 00:38
THE TRUTH IS
LIZ said:
You always make me cry. I don\'t know if that\'s good or bad. I see we share life\'s anthem then. I definitely won\'t settle for mediocre love. But oh I will risk it all for true love!
\"come, witness these shrapnel in my heart they\'ll testify\"--I jumped upon Valentines\' arrow with or without a parachute of hope and never regretted\" 😭😭😭 Welcome to my scars!
I am obsessed with Teddy\'s music at the moment!!! LOL He\'s coming to my City November so I might see him. 🙂
That song....yes, I know it but don\'t listen to it often because it makes me so emotional. But, I love it! Thank you for always tugging at the strings of my heart! 🖤
September 1st, 2023 04:15
LIZ said:
You always make me cry. I don\'t know if that\'s good or bad. I see we share life\'s anthem then. I definitely won\'t settle for mediocre love. But oh I will risk it all for true love!
\"come, witness these shrapnel in my heart they\'ll testify\"--I jumped upon Valentines\' arrow with or without a parachute of hope and never regretted\" 😭😭😭 Welcome to my scars!
I am obsessed with Teddy\'s music at the moment!!! LOL He\'s coming to my City November so I might see him. 🙂
That song....yes, I know it but don\'t listen to it often because it makes me so emotional. But, I love it! Thank you for always tugging at the strings of my heart! 🖤
September 1st, 2023 04:15
THE TRUTH IS
L. B. Mek said:
\'I understand love has been hard;
but I\'d rather risk it than live in a lie!\'
with these words, dear cherished Poet
you\'ve versed the anthem to my life
no lie
no, i won\'t settle for nothing less
than love\'s indisputable best!
come, witness these shrapnel in my heart
they\'ll testify, when given a chance
I jumped upon Valentines\' arrow
with or without a parachute of hope
and never regretted, merely
looked back and wished, I had been
the one destined to give you
the love you deserve...!
I see you\'re on a Teddy rocket ship
of musical epiphany, lol
i know his voice and lyrics are out of this world
and his new album dropping 15th
here\'s the song I\'m looking forward to the most
to thank you for sharing such a meaningful poem:
(
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vCpYp5BtTSg
)
September 1st, 2023 03:55
L. B. Mek said:
\'I understand love has been hard;
but I\'d rather risk it than live in a lie!\'
with these words, dear cherished Poet
you\'ve versed the anthem to my life
no lie
no, i won\'t settle for nothing less
than love\'s indisputable best!
come, witness these shrapnel in my heart
they\'ll testify, when given a chance
I jumped upon Valentines\' arrow
with or without a parachute of hope
and never regretted, merely
looked back and wished, I had been
the one destined to give you
the love you deserve...!
I see you\'re on a Teddy rocket ship
of musical epiphany, lol
i know his voice and lyrics are out of this world
and his new album dropping 15th
here\'s the song I\'m looking forward to the most
to thank you for sharing such a meaningful poem:
(
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vCpYp5BtTSg
)
September 1st, 2023 03:55
THE TRUTH IS
Bobby O said:
It’s intoxicatingly honest and humble and wanting and self assured all at once. That dimensional aspect draws readers in and speaks to your elevated status as a writer and speaker of truths. Nice
September 1st, 2023 00:08
Bobby O said:
It’s intoxicatingly honest and humble and wanting and self assured all at once. That dimensional aspect draws readers in and speaks to your elevated status as a writer and speaker of truths. Nice
September 1st, 2023 00:08
THE TRUTH IS
LIZ said:
Awwww thank you very much!! Right? Once you\'ve had a taste....it really is all or nothing! ❤️
August 31st, 2023 02:45
LIZ said:
Awwww thank you very much!! Right? Once you\'ve had a taste....it really is all or nothing! ❤️
August 31st, 2023 02:45
THE TRUTH IS
Introverted Sage said:
\"What makes you think I\'ll follow the rules? I\'ve come too far to play the lost fool.\"
Exactly!
When you need that all or nothing Love!
Your poem goes so well with the song too!
Nice write!
August 31st, 2023 00:42
Introverted Sage said:
\"What makes you think I\'ll follow the rules? I\'ve come too far to play the lost fool.\"
Exactly!
When you need that all or nothing Love!
Your poem goes so well with the song too!
Nice write!
August 31st, 2023 00:42
THE TRUTH IS
Bella Shepard said:
The old adage \"Nothing ventured nothing gained\" is as true today as it ever was. The reward is often worth the risk, especially in love, for the heart will go where it will. Beautifully expressed dear poetess!
August 30th, 2023 15:06
Bella Shepard said:
The old adage \"Nothing ventured nothing gained\" is as true today as it ever was. The reward is often worth the risk, especially in love, for the heart will go where it will. Beautifully expressed dear poetess!
August 30th, 2023 15:06
THE TRUTH IS
Pop64 said:
Life and love, both, are a dare. They need to be set free, cast aside those inhibitions. For he (or she) who stands still never moves forward. Beautifully expressed.
August 30th, 2023 12:24
Pop64 said:
Life and love, both, are a dare. They need to be set free, cast aside those inhibitions. For he (or she) who stands still never moves forward. Beautifully expressed.
August 30th, 2023 12:24
THE TRUTH IS
Neville said:
the truth is out there somewhere .. I\'m sure he knows it .. and it hurts, doesn\'t it .. 💜
August 30th, 2023 10:12
Neville said:
the truth is out there somewhere .. I\'m sure he knows it .. and it hurts, doesn\'t it .. 💜
August 30th, 2023 10:12
THE TRUTH IS
peto said:
Truth in the first line
Dare in the last
Love oozes from your pen LIZ
And you seem to weave magical meaning throughout
\"I opened the door and you just stood there \" wow
I admire your talent
August 30th, 2023 05:09
peto said:
Truth in the first line
Dare in the last
Love oozes from your pen LIZ
And you seem to weave magical meaning throughout
\"I opened the door and you just stood there \" wow
I admire your talent
August 30th, 2023 05:09
THE TRUTH IS
orchidee said:
And yep - 37 on the Lottery again - nearly every day it is! lol.
August 30th, 2023 01:46
orchidee said:
And yep - 37 on the Lottery again - nearly every day it is! lol.
August 30th, 2023 01:46
THE TRUTH IS
orchidee said:
Yep, I was scared. How long did I stand at the door for? I was waiting there for a No.7 bus really. lol.
And what makes me think these poems are all about us two?! 😁
August 30th, 2023 01:42
orchidee said:
Yep, I was scared. How long did I stand at the door for? I was waiting there for a No.7 bus really. lol.
And what makes me think these poems are all about us two?! 😁
August 30th, 2023 01:42
YOU DON\'T KNOW ME
LIZ said:
I love that! And so true! We have so many layers, and a lot of us are deep! Thank you for this!
August 4th, 2023 11:38
LIZ said:
I love that! And so true! We have so many layers, and a lot of us are deep! Thank you for this!
August 4th, 2023 11:38
YOU DON\'T KNOW ME
Pop64 said:
My daughter, at a very young age, once said, \"you can\'t judge a cupcake by the icing\". This reminds me of that. People perceive, oftentimes judge, based on an impression. They truly don\'t know a person without letting themselves be known. Just not possible. sorry for going on, a very thought provoking, true write.
August 4th, 2023 11:29
Pop64 said:
My daughter, at a very young age, once said, \"you can\'t judge a cupcake by the icing\". This reminds me of that. People perceive, oftentimes judge, based on an impression. They truly don\'t know a person without letting themselves be known. Just not possible. sorry for going on, a very thought provoking, true write.
August 4th, 2023 11:29
A THOUSAND WORDS
onedeeppaco said:
Was here to thank you but by now you probably got the message
July 24th, 2023 22:40
onedeeppaco said:
Was here to thank you but by now you probably got the message
July 24th, 2023 22:40
YOU DON\'T KNOW ME
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Liz, people see what they want but I am sure that I would see the good in you as I do with most people.
Andy
July 24th, 2023 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Liz, people see what they want but I am sure that I would see the good in you as I do with most people.
Andy
July 24th, 2023 01:08
YOU DON\'T KNOW ME
LIZ said:
Ayyyyyy I\'m laughing alright! 😆 thank you for that!!! And that\'s my \"get off my face\" song!!! 🤣 \"tell your enemies
you got people who\'ve got your back
that do poetic voodoo so they better not mess around before they catch a debilitating metaphor, to their thought\'s
throat!\" UFFFFFF People have no idea! We don\'t play!! You\'re right though, we must choose ourselves every time!! So yes, I\'m letting all the bulls*** drift with the wind LOL! Have an awesome weekend! Whoosah!!!!
July 21st, 2023 07:26
LIZ said:
Ayyyyyy I\'m laughing alright! 😆 thank you for that!!! And that\'s my \"get off my face\" song!!! 🤣 \"tell your enemies
you got people who\'ve got your back
that do poetic voodoo so they better not mess around before they catch a debilitating metaphor, to their thought\'s
throat!\" UFFFFFF People have no idea! We don\'t play!! You\'re right though, we must choose ourselves every time!! So yes, I\'m letting all the bulls*** drift with the wind LOL! Have an awesome weekend! Whoosah!!!!
July 21st, 2023 07:26
YOU DON\'T KNOW ME
L. B. Mek said:
that\'s my \'get over it\'
rock my head
till i forget, song
we in-sync, dancing
till we can\'t breathe
lol
perception, indeed
as mostly, it is ourselves that lets
those toxic influences linger
when we can just \'shake it off\'
and move on
just as quickly as we forget their names
lol
we just have to choose, us
and proactively work towards
enjoying our precious, life
(tell your enemies
you got people who\'ve got your back
that do poetic voodoo
so they better not mess around
before they catch a debilitating
metaphor, to their thought\'s
throat!)
yeah! they best be scared
pfffttt
😁
hope you have a lovely weekend
cherished friend
whoosah! your week\'s debris
let all the bull sht, drift
with the passing wind
(no, not a fart
like
a gust of wind..
geez
that\'s so unlady like
really)
😎
i tried to gift you a smile
I\'ll settle for a smirk
or even a knowing wink
🤷♂️😉
July 21st, 2023 04:13
L. B. Mek said:
that\'s my \'get over it\'
rock my head
till i forget, song
we in-sync, dancing
till we can\'t breathe
lol
perception, indeed
as mostly, it is ourselves that lets
those toxic influences linger
when we can just \'shake it off\'
and move on
just as quickly as we forget their names
lol
we just have to choose, us
and proactively work towards
enjoying our precious, life
(tell your enemies
you got people who\'ve got your back
that do poetic voodoo
so they better not mess around
before they catch a debilitating
metaphor, to their thought\'s
throat!)
yeah! they best be scared
pfffttt
😁
hope you have a lovely weekend
cherished friend
whoosah! your week\'s debris
let all the bull sht, drift
with the passing wind
(no, not a fart
like
a gust of wind..
geez
that\'s so unlady like
really)
😎
i tried to gift you a smile
I\'ll settle for a smirk
or even a knowing wink
🤷♂️😉
July 21st, 2023 04:13
YOU DON\'T KNOW ME
Bobby O said:
Easy to believe you are all that and more. I’ve been lucky cuz I’ve never had to “own”. A privileged visit is lifelong enriching muck like that Gale Garnett song.
“ We sang in the sunshine
You know we laughed every day
We sang in the sunshine
Then you went on you way”
July 21st, 2023 02:22
Bobby O said:
Easy to believe you are all that and more. I’ve been lucky cuz I’ve never had to “own”. A privileged visit is lifelong enriching muck like that Gale Garnett song.
“ We sang in the sunshine
You know we laughed every day
We sang in the sunshine
Then you went on you way”
July 21st, 2023 02:22
YOU DON\'T KNOW ME
Neville said:
I just love it when a woman shows she has hidden depths ..
a very insightful post today LIZ and on a topic very dear to me .. Neville
July 21st, 2023 01:04
Neville said:
I just love it when a woman shows she has hidden depths ..
a very insightful post today LIZ and on a topic very dear to me .. Neville
July 21st, 2023 01:04
A LETTER TO YOU
Goldfinch60 said:
Friends are so important in our lives Liz.
No sugar in my tea thank you. LOL
Andy
July 16th, 2023 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Friends are so important in our lives Liz.
No sugar in my tea thank you. LOL
Andy
July 16th, 2023 01:27
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