Comments received on poems by LIZ
THE VOICE WITHIN
orchidee said:
There\'s too much \'deepness\' going on \'ere in certain poems! lol. I told ya - I only want it shallow. 😁
But seriously, yes - some things won\'t go away just by us ignoring them.
September 18th, 2023 01:59
orchidee said:
There\'s too much \'deepness\' going on \'ere in certain poems! lol. I told ya - I only want it shallow. 😁
But seriously, yes - some things won\'t go away just by us ignoring them.
September 18th, 2023 01:59
THE VOICE WITHIN
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words LIZ, life cannot be easy sometimes but each large step you take in life brings you to a better place having learnt from the problems of the past.
Andy
September 18th, 2023 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words LIZ, life cannot be easy sometimes but each large step you take in life brings you to a better place having learnt from the problems of the past.
Andy
September 18th, 2023 01:56
THE VOICE WITHIN
Teddy.15 said:
An epic piece of reflection here, we can only grow if we make mistakes and learn from them, we are all alone in some way and your beautifully composed poem speaks volumes to who you are as a person and a poetess. Absolutely wonderful words my dear Liz. Your last two lines wow and yes it does. 💓
September 18th, 2023 01:49
Teddy.15 said:
An epic piece of reflection here, we can only grow if we make mistakes and learn from them, we are all alone in some way and your beautifully composed poem speaks volumes to who you are as a person and a poetess. Absolutely wonderful words my dear Liz. Your last two lines wow and yes it does. 💓
September 18th, 2023 01:49
THE VOICE WITHIN
Introverted Sage said:
Great write and advice! We always need the dark to dim some of the light, the good to balance the bad and so on.
\"When there\'s no one else, look inside yourself\"
Yes 1000%
Thanks for sharing!
September 18th, 2023 01:20
Introverted Sage said:
Great write and advice! We always need the dark to dim some of the light, the good to balance the bad and so on.
\"When there\'s no one else, look inside yourself\"
Yes 1000%
Thanks for sharing!
September 18th, 2023 01:20
HAUNTED
Pop64 said:
To be haunted that way is magical and often times secretive which contributes to the undeniable beauty of the haunt. What words (and people) can do. Love this!
September 11th, 2023 06:35
Pop64 said:
To be haunted that way is magical and often times secretive which contributes to the undeniable beauty of the haunt. What words (and people) can do. Love this!
September 11th, 2023 06:35
HAUNTED
LIZ said:
Oh my God!! 😭😭 I\'m feeling the darts you keep shooting at me. And well, I just couldn\'t resist! I close my eyes, and you\'re with me, we dance the night and fuel our dreams! You know I belive; love is too strong to just let it flee! \"may this become your truth, BellaBeth may you never know a lonely night again because in the veracity of these words a lifetime of lullabies, shall ever await\"🥺 Ayyyy mi Rey!! Thank you! 🖤🖤🖤
September 11th, 2023 03:46
LIZ said:
Oh my God!! 😭😭 I\'m feeling the darts you keep shooting at me. And well, I just couldn\'t resist! I close my eyes, and you\'re with me, we dance the night and fuel our dreams! You know I belive; love is too strong to just let it flee! \"may this become your truth, BellaBeth may you never know a lonely night again because in the veracity of these words a lifetime of lullabies, shall ever await\"🥺 Ayyyy mi Rey!! Thank you! 🖤🖤🖤
September 11th, 2023 03:46
HAUNTED
L. B. Mek said:
(damn, but how your words ignite
my ink, dear Poet
sparking inspiration, every time
what a gift)
love grows and haunts
friendship\'s seals, falters
passion\'s muse over stimulating
linked by a nightly routine
closed eyes, surrendered hearts
ignition in a recalled rhyme
static in a silhouette, so far away
yet right there, waiting
behind closed eyelids, inflamed
brave souls, anchored
a destiny undefined by limitations
just sharing, a devout caring
humility
gifting patience, that\'s rewarding
believing, hoping
awaking
that half of the bed is still empty
those arms needed to hold you tight, all night
still absent
but the heart, oh that thundering heart
is so full and bright
it shames Dawn\' sunlight..
in that love
is revealed
and proximity\'s chains
defeated...
may this become your truth, BellaBeth
may you never know a lonely night again
because in the veracity of these words
a lifetime of lullabies, shall ever await...
September 11th, 2023 03:27
L. B. Mek said:
(damn, but how your words ignite
my ink, dear Poet
sparking inspiration, every time
what a gift)
love grows and haunts
friendship\'s seals, falters
passion\'s muse over stimulating
linked by a nightly routine
closed eyes, surrendered hearts
ignition in a recalled rhyme
static in a silhouette, so far away
yet right there, waiting
behind closed eyelids, inflamed
brave souls, anchored
a destiny undefined by limitations
just sharing, a devout caring
humility
gifting patience, that\'s rewarding
believing, hoping
awaking
that half of the bed is still empty
those arms needed to hold you tight, all night
still absent
but the heart, oh that thundering heart
is so full and bright
it shames Dawn\' sunlight..
in that love
is revealed
and proximity\'s chains
defeated...
may this become your truth, BellaBeth
may you never know a lonely night again
because in the veracity of these words
a lifetime of lullabies, shall ever await...
September 11th, 2023 03:27
HAUNTED
LIZ said:
Right? Too magical for mere words! Thank you very much!!! 🩵
September 10th, 2023 12:33
LIZ said:
Right? Too magical for mere words! Thank you very much!!! 🩵
September 10th, 2023 12:33
HAUNTED
Introverted Sage said:
So much in this one!
\'..your flavor is divine!\'
\'I try to brush it off, continue with my life\'
\'Explain it if you can; I\'ve tried too many times.\'
These connections are so magical.. how do you tell anyone when it sounds so out of this world
Love it!
September 10th, 2023 12:17
Introverted Sage said:
So much in this one!
\'..your flavor is divine!\'
\'I try to brush it off, continue with my life\'
\'Explain it if you can; I\'ve tried too many times.\'
These connections are so magical.. how do you tell anyone when it sounds so out of this world
Love it!
September 10th, 2023 12:17
HAUNTED
peto said:
\"You feed a crave i have\'
Hints at addiction
Your writing is fantastic at the moment
Rhyme is outstanding
September 10th, 2023 07:08
peto said:
\"You feed a crave i have\'
Hints at addiction
Your writing is fantastic at the moment
Rhyme is outstanding
September 10th, 2023 07:08
HAUNTED
Neville said:
this is not in the slightest bit spooky .. so why the goosebumps 💜
September 10th, 2023 03:33
Neville said:
this is not in the slightest bit spooky .. so why the goosebumps 💜
September 10th, 2023 03:33
HAUNTED
orchidee said:
I will pop over, and we\'ll come alive at night! lol.
September 10th, 2023 02:26
orchidee said:
I will pop over, and we\'ll come alive at night! lol.
September 10th, 2023 02:26
HAUNTED
Goldfinch60 said:
May that haunting become a reality in your life LIZ.
Andy
September 10th, 2023 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
May that haunting become a reality in your life LIZ.
Andy
September 10th, 2023 01:48
TIRED
LIZ said:
Awwwww thank you!!!! 🙈🙈🙈 I\'m humbled! And right? We can learn and grow from these experiences! As difficult as they are! I appreciate you!
September 8th, 2023 19:24
LIZ said:
Awwwww thank you!!!! 🙈🙈🙈 I\'m humbled! And right? We can learn and grow from these experiences! As difficult as they are! I appreciate you!
September 8th, 2023 19:24
TIRED
Introverted Sage said:
Damn.. this one hit deep.. couldn\'t even finish the full song!
These waves come in and while reminding us what was taken from us, also remind us who we are, who we have behind us and give us strength and wisdom to accept nothing less than what we deserve!
Love this!!!
September 8th, 2023 17:39
Introverted Sage said:
Damn.. this one hit deep.. couldn\'t even finish the full song!
These waves come in and while reminding us what was taken from us, also remind us who we are, who we have behind us and give us strength and wisdom to accept nothing less than what we deserve!
Love this!!!
September 8th, 2023 17:39
TIRED
Bella Shepard said:
An emotional roller coaster can leave you exhausted. I can feel the pain in your words. So glad that you find release in expression, it truly does purge. I\'ve included a link to a video of Madelaine Kahn, from the movie \"Blazing Saddles\", singing \"I\'m tired\", thought it might give you a chuckle.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Uai7M4RpoLU
September 8th, 2023 16:10
Bella Shepard said:
An emotional roller coaster can leave you exhausted. I can feel the pain in your words. So glad that you find release in expression, it truly does purge. I\'ve included a link to a video of Madelaine Kahn, from the movie \"Blazing Saddles\", singing \"I\'m tired\", thought it might give you a chuckle.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Uai7M4RpoLU
September 8th, 2023 16:10
TIRED
LIZ said:
NEVILLE, NEVILLE, NEVILLE!!! Ayyyyyyy you have me over here talking Spanish! Gracias!!! 💜
September 8th, 2023 13:10
LIZ said:
NEVILLE, NEVILLE, NEVILLE!!! Ayyyyyyy you have me over here talking Spanish! Gracias!!! 💜
September 8th, 2023 13:10
TIRED
Neville said:
I came here earlier today before going to work and I loved it then ..
I came back this evening before going to bed and I loved it even more ..
I think perhaps I should just type amazing this time around to prevent me from cumming and going again ... maybe 💜
September 8th, 2023 13:06
Neville said:
I came here earlier today before going to work and I loved it then ..
I came back this evening before going to bed and I loved it even more ..
I think perhaps I should just type amazing this time around to prevent me from cumming and going again ... maybe 💜
September 8th, 2023 13:06
TIRED
LIZ said:
Absolutely! This is how I release! I definitely belive anything is possible. One thing about me, I\'ll never give up on....hope...love. I\'m too stubborn! 😊 Thank you very much!!!
September 8th, 2023 06:41
LIZ said:
Absolutely! This is how I release! I definitely belive anything is possible. One thing about me, I\'ll never give up on....hope...love. I\'m too stubborn! 😊 Thank you very much!!!
September 8th, 2023 06:41
TIRED
Pop64 said:
The expression of being too tired of it all, wanting to give up, comes through with clarity. But, never give up, let the one spark that may remain ignite the fire of all your strength, all that can still be possible. By writing of it all, it allows you and the reader to be tired, but to not stop.
September 8th, 2023 06:25
Pop64 said:
The expression of being too tired of it all, wanting to give up, comes through with clarity. But, never give up, let the one spark that may remain ignite the fire of all your strength, all that can still be possible. By writing of it all, it allows you and the reader to be tired, but to not stop.
September 8th, 2023 06:25
TIRED
L. B. Mek said:
(
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lYvdE2oEiyo
)
river rise, India
(our spirited clay of self
is moulded
by the kind hands that nourish
and cherish us for who we are
but also
by those rough hands that betray
our trust..
River rise, carry her to a place
where peace my once again
grace and sweeten her breath..)
\'stay\' strong, oh lioness Poet
roar your Poetry and let it loose
find that next smile, awaiting you
September 8th, 2023 04:20
L. B. Mek said:
(
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lYvdE2oEiyo
)
river rise, India
(our spirited clay of self
is moulded
by the kind hands that nourish
and cherish us for who we are
but also
by those rough hands that betray
our trust..
River rise, carry her to a place
where peace my once again
grace and sweeten her breath..)
\'stay\' strong, oh lioness Poet
roar your Poetry and let it loose
find that next smile, awaiting you
September 8th, 2023 04:20
TIRED
Teddy.15 said:
Hey Lizzy, there\'s definitely a song in here so wonderful I think I rapped my way through. Emotions rife. 💖
September 8th, 2023 03:21
Teddy.15 said:
Hey Lizzy, there\'s definitely a song in here so wonderful I think I rapped my way through. Emotions rife. 💖
September 8th, 2023 03:21
TIRED
orchidee said:
You tired of me? Or only tired of my corny jokes?! lol.
September 8th, 2023 01:47
orchidee said:
You tired of me? Or only tired of my corny jokes?! lol.
September 8th, 2023 01:47
TIRED
peto said:
Obviously exhausting LIZ
Please don\'t give up on the hoping and caring
You make many a day with these said trains
A wee glimpse at your vulnerability
\"Real true\"
Excellent switch up
September 8th, 2023 01:46
peto said:
Obviously exhausting LIZ
Please don\'t give up on the hoping and caring
You make many a day with these said trains
A wee glimpse at your vulnerability
\"Real true\"
Excellent switch up
September 8th, 2023 01:46
TIRED
Caring dove said:
I understand the ‘ being tired ‘ I’m tired of a lot of things too ..
A sad but good writing
It’s always helpful to try and let go of things or to even feel better
September 8th, 2023 00:50
Caring dove said:
I understand the ‘ being tired ‘ I’m tired of a lot of things too ..
A sad but good writing
It’s always helpful to try and let go of things or to even feel better
September 8th, 2023 00:50
WHAT DID YOU THINK WOULD HAPPEN?
Introverted Sage said:
Cutting the cords of toxic love takes but also gives great strength.
Great write!
September 5th, 2023 00:13
Introverted Sage said:
Cutting the cords of toxic love takes but also gives great strength.
Great write!
September 5th, 2023 00:13
WHAT DID YOU THINK WOULD HAPPEN?
Bella Shepard said:
I think it takes great courage to end an abusive relationship, as you have described here. Kudos my friend for your strength, and resiliency in writing this poem.
September 4th, 2023 14:09
Bella Shepard said:
I think it takes great courage to end an abusive relationship, as you have described here. Kudos my friend for your strength, and resiliency in writing this poem.
September 4th, 2023 14:09
WHAT DID YOU THINK WOULD HAPPEN?
orchidee said:
I knew you\'d be selective enough to associate with me! 😁🤣
September 4th, 2023 09:09
orchidee said:
I knew you\'d be selective enough to associate with me! 😁🤣
September 4th, 2023 09:09
WHAT DID YOU THINK WOULD HAPPEN?
L. B. Mek said:
loving the tight rhyme scheme
such ease in your poetic flow
and yes
those who love without brakes
must first, learn to survive!
soar then Phoenix heart
shine evergreen Bright
let them all regret
allowing you to escape
and evolve, beyond
grasp, of their regret charred
fingers and heart..
fools
September 4th, 2023 04:53
L. B. Mek said:
loving the tight rhyme scheme
such ease in your poetic flow
and yes
those who love without brakes
must first, learn to survive!
soar then Phoenix heart
shine evergreen Bright
let them all regret
allowing you to escape
and evolve, beyond
grasp, of their regret charred
fingers and heart..
fools
September 4th, 2023 04:53
WHAT DID YOU THINK WOULD HAPPEN?
Doggerel Dave said:
\' Sorry to be a party pooper, but you could do with being more selective with respect to whom you relate to initially.........
September 4th, 2023 04:19
Doggerel Dave said:
\' Sorry to be a party pooper, but you could do with being more selective with respect to whom you relate to initially.........
September 4th, 2023 04:19
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