Comments received on poems by Bobby O
FOXES IN THE TREES
arqios said:
Life’s tightrope walk every single interaction we have, shifting gears and adjusting course settings… so much to look out for and navigate through….
November 15th, 2024 08:11
arqios said:
Life’s tightrope walk every single interaction we have, shifting gears and adjusting course settings… so much to look out for and navigate through….
November 15th, 2024 08:11
FOXES IN THE TREES
sorenbarrett said:
All depends on what you want. proxcimity and misery distance and lonely regret take your choice. A most poignant write Bobby The game of life does not always offer the prizes we desire.
November 15th, 2024 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
All depends on what you want. proxcimity and misery distance and lonely regret take your choice. A most poignant write Bobby The game of life does not always offer the prizes we desire.
November 15th, 2024 05:47
FOXES IN THE TREES
Neville said:
There is an old saying that proposes one should quit while the going is good .. you clearly didn\'t .. maybe its time to move on but with a few lessons learned 🎶🎵
November 15th, 2024 03:20
Neville said:
There is an old saying that proposes one should quit while the going is good .. you clearly didn\'t .. maybe its time to move on but with a few lessons learned 🎶🎵
November 15th, 2024 03:20
A Transcendent Classic
Neville said:
You sure know your stuff .. this aint plain sailin for shore, is it Mr. O ~~~~ ⛵~~~ 🐧👍
November 14th, 2024 07:41
Neville said:
You sure know your stuff .. this aint plain sailin for shore, is it Mr. O ~~~~ ⛵~~~ 🐧👍
November 14th, 2024 07:41
A Transcendent Classic
arqios said:
True, jazz can be the best think at specific moments!
November 14th, 2024 05:36
arqios said:
True, jazz can be the best think at specific moments!
November 14th, 2024 05:36
A Transcendent Classic
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poetic response to an artistic act. Nicely said Bobby.
November 14th, 2024 05:13
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poetic response to an artistic act. Nicely said Bobby.
November 14th, 2024 05:13
Three Wishes
arqios said:
What a superb twist that turns the whole story on its proverbial heels!
November 13th, 2024 05:17
arqios said:
What a superb twist that turns the whole story on its proverbial heels!
November 13th, 2024 05:17
Three Wishes
sorenbarrett said:
Now that’s the stuff that comedy is made of. A very entertaining story with a more entertaining ending.
November 13th, 2024 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
Now that’s the stuff that comedy is made of. A very entertaining story with a more entertaining ending.
November 13th, 2024 05:08
MY HOKEY POKEY PLAN
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
A refreshing and
delightful write!! ✍️
Love the rhyme and flow, 🎵 🎶
a pleasure to recite! 👏
Thanks for sharing!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
November 9th, 2024 10:15
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
A refreshing and
delightful write!! ✍️
Love the rhyme and flow, 🎵 🎶
a pleasure to recite! 👏
Thanks for sharing!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
November 9th, 2024 10:15
I WISH IT WERE A SHE
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 clapping!
A mellifluous and
evocative write!! 👍
Great internal rhyme,
flows like a gentle stream
AND a treat to recite!!💯
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
November 6th, 2024 14:07
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 clapping!
A mellifluous and
evocative write!! 👍
Great internal rhyme,
flows like a gentle stream
AND a treat to recite!!💯
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
November 6th, 2024 14:07
I WISH IT WERE A SHE
arqios said:
Hope floating in the fluid motion of words and images!
November 6th, 2024 05:44
arqios said:
Hope floating in the fluid motion of words and images!
November 6th, 2024 05:44
I WISH IT WERE A SHE
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poem that must be read out loud to appreciate the intertwining rhythm and rhyme as they flow off the tongue. The internal rhyme is quite complex and ties this poem togeather like a shoe lace. It pulses with power. Very nice Bobby
November 6th, 2024 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poem that must be read out loud to appreciate the intertwining rhythm and rhyme as they flow off the tongue. The internal rhyme is quite complex and ties this poem togeather like a shoe lace. It pulses with power. Very nice Bobby
November 6th, 2024 03:40
I WISH IT WERE A SHE
Neville said:
We can but live in hope .. can\'t we .. you get a dubble crossed fingers thumbs up from from this side of the pond sir .. 👍🤞👍🤞
November 6th, 2024 03:06
Neville said:
We can but live in hope .. can\'t we .. you get a dubble crossed fingers thumbs up from from this side of the pond sir .. 👍🤞👍🤞
November 6th, 2024 03:06
I WISH IT WERE A SHE
NafisaSB said:
let\'s see if your wish comes true
good write, indeed
November 6th, 2024 00:16
NafisaSB said:
let\'s see if your wish comes true
good write, indeed
November 6th, 2024 00:16
MY HOKEY POKEY PLAN
sorenbarrett said:
Bobby is it the dirty old man in me or did you leave a lot of metaphorical word seeds in this poem? For the sake of propriety I\'ll leave it at that but a well woven and fun read my friend
October 31st, 2024 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
Bobby is it the dirty old man in me or did you leave a lot of metaphorical word seeds in this poem? For the sake of propriety I\'ll leave it at that but a well woven and fun read my friend
October 31st, 2024 04:20
MY HOKEY POKEY PLAN
Neville said:
This has got to be one of the best Bobby .. 🎵🎵🎶🎶🎶🎵👍
October 31st, 2024 03:12
Neville said:
This has got to be one of the best Bobby .. 🎵🎵🎶🎶🎶🎵👍
October 31st, 2024 03:12
TO RESCUE WITH VALOR
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous warm painting of this scene.
October 22nd, 2024 14:55
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous warm painting of this scene.
October 22nd, 2024 14:55
TO RESCUE WITH VALOR
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Loved the poem. Lines like \"reversing inaccuracy born of those who have come from before\" and \"you’d March straight through holy hell for this heavenly cause\" are stunning. Thanks for sharing
October 22nd, 2024 08:27
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Loved the poem. Lines like \"reversing inaccuracy born of those who have come from before\" and \"you’d March straight through holy hell for this heavenly cause\" are stunning. Thanks for sharing
October 22nd, 2024 08:27
A HEART ALIVE
Thad Wilk said:
An outstanding poem
and nice advice! 🙏
I so enjoyed
I read it twice! 🏆
Thanks for sharing,
great read my friend!! 👏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 20th, 2024 21:44
Thad Wilk said:
An outstanding poem
and nice advice! 🙏
I so enjoyed
I read it twice! 🏆
Thanks for sharing,
great read my friend!! 👏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 20th, 2024 21:44
Thelonius Reborn As the Dee Oh Double G
Cheeky Missy said:
Dat was downright fun! First I listened to you, then read your lines in the dead silence as if checking your work, and that was too fun. Thank you very much! Delightfully rendered with excellent humor and a very subtle poignancy, not to mention superb imagery. Thank you again!
October 20th, 2024 06:34
Cheeky Missy said:
Dat was downright fun! First I listened to you, then read your lines in the dead silence as if checking your work, and that was too fun. Thank you very much! Delightfully rendered with excellent humor and a very subtle poignancy, not to mention superb imagery. Thank you again!
October 20th, 2024 06:34
TO RESCUE WITH VALOR
sorenbarrett said:
Bobby I like this poem and its message. A good poem to me does one of two things and hopefully both. It strikes an emotional chord or it opens a new life changing perspective. This one certainly has done the first the second yet to be seen. This speaks to the loyalty of a friendship that is more than most want to give. Today\'s cardboard friendships are made of flimsier stuff. Well writen and composed (to risk awkward, to go onward) love how these were left in atypical grammer it emphasized the point. The next portion speaks to many qualities that a friend possess\' and the rarity of such. A beautiful poem Bobby I don\'t fav many but this one is
October 20th, 2024 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
Bobby I like this poem and its message. A good poem to me does one of two things and hopefully both. It strikes an emotional chord or it opens a new life changing perspective. This one certainly has done the first the second yet to be seen. This speaks to the loyalty of a friendship that is more than most want to give. Today\'s cardboard friendships are made of flimsier stuff. Well writen and composed (to risk awkward, to go onward) love how these were left in atypical grammer it emphasized the point. The next portion speaks to many qualities that a friend possess\' and the rarity of such. A beautiful poem Bobby I don\'t fav many but this one is
October 20th, 2024 05:28
TO RESCUE WITH VALOR
Neville said:
True friendship is a guardian knot that angel hands have tied .. I forget most of the rest .. but I get your drift and it seemed to fit .. so there and now I\'m gonna hide
October 20th, 2024 03:06
Neville said:
True friendship is a guardian knot that angel hands have tied .. I forget most of the rest .. but I get your drift and it seemed to fit .. so there and now I\'m gonna hide
October 20th, 2024 03:06
TO RESCUE WITH VALOR
arqios said:
Loyalty is an essential element to any good friendship!
October 20th, 2024 01:31
arqios said:
Loyalty is an essential element to any good friendship!
October 20th, 2024 01:31
SOLAR POWER
Thad Wilk said:
An uplifting, refreshing,
insightful and
captivating write!! ✍️
Mesmerizing imagery
and a treat to recite!! 💯
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 19th, 2024 20:24
Thad Wilk said:
An uplifting, refreshing,
insightful and
captivating write!! ✍️
Mesmerizing imagery
and a treat to recite!! 💯
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 19th, 2024 20:24
SPINNING CONCLUSION
Cheeky Missy said:
Taught poetry is to be read aloud, and your mentioning or alluding to apparently reading this at an open mic event, I just did so: as long as you can relax and read it freely, it\'ll rock like it does now. Rollicking along like a ramble or a happy jaunt, rhyming to effect like a river bubbling through, it\'s beautiful and rendered sweetly with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy as should be, not to mention owning a delightfully subtle sense of humor. Thank you very much for sharing!
October 19th, 2024 17:19
Cheeky Missy said:
Taught poetry is to be read aloud, and your mentioning or alluding to apparently reading this at an open mic event, I just did so: as long as you can relax and read it freely, it\'ll rock like it does now. Rollicking along like a ramble or a happy jaunt, rhyming to effect like a river bubbling through, it\'s beautiful and rendered sweetly with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy as should be, not to mention owning a delightfully subtle sense of humor. Thank you very much for sharing!
October 19th, 2024 17:19
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