Comments received on poems by Bobby O
LOVES LAST EPISODE
sorenbarrett said:
I always loved an improvised approach to poetry and often use it even it it is to be shaped latter on/ Great work.
March 26th, 2024 11:23
sorenbarrett said:
I always loved an improvised approach to poetry and often use it even it it is to be shaped latter on/ Great work.
March 26th, 2024 11:23
LOVES LAST EPISODE
vividvoid14 said:
hey dude! you knocked this right out the park, it flows like ocean currents
March 22nd, 2024 12:02
vividvoid14 said:
hey dude! you knocked this right out the park, it flows like ocean currents
March 22nd, 2024 12:02
LOVES LAST EPISODE
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Such a nice jazz feel and flow to it.
March 21st, 2024 17:40
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Such a nice jazz feel and flow to it.
March 21st, 2024 17:40
My new favorite song — Sky Up
Bobby O said:
It’s a departure from my usual, jazz or progressive R&B but I don’t know if she’s got something that that has a charisma in her voice in the writing is like that she studied under you or something you know what I mean love you man
March 16th, 2024 23:10
Bobby O said:
It’s a departure from my usual, jazz or progressive R&B but I don’t know if she’s got something that that has a charisma in her voice in the writing is like that she studied under you or something you know what I mean love you man
March 16th, 2024 23:10
THE SENSE TO SHAKE IT OFF
David Wakeling said:
The end is always sad. That\'s why I live alone.
March 13th, 2024 05:31
David Wakeling said:
The end is always sad. That\'s why I live alone.
March 13th, 2024 05:31
NEVER AGAIN BRING THIS B.S TO ME or definitive answer to
vividvoid14 said:
powerful
March 8th, 2024 23:09
vividvoid14 said:
powerful
March 8th, 2024 23:09
A CRITICAL MEASURE
Bobby O said:
Hmmm. , for the therapeutic part of this suggested exercise we might try to skip the AI you know
March 7th, 2024 10:25
Bobby O said:
Hmmm. , for the therapeutic part of this suggested exercise we might try to skip the AI you know
March 7th, 2024 10:25
A CRITICAL MEASURE
Cloie said:
Your piece navigates the complexities of love and loss with introspection and acceptance. Through the imagery of a mystic scale buried within the sea of emotions, you capture the struggle to understand relationships. However, the revelation that true importance lies in embracing life\'s joy and surrendering to its essence is both profound and poignant. Well done!
March 7th, 2024 09:41
Cloie said:
Your piece navigates the complexities of love and loss with introspection and acceptance. Through the imagery of a mystic scale buried within the sea of emotions, you capture the struggle to understand relationships. However, the revelation that true importance lies in embracing life\'s joy and surrendering to its essence is both profound and poignant. Well done!
March 7th, 2024 09:41
A CRITICAL MEASURE
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant work. You paint the scene well.
March 6th, 2024 23:49
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant work. You paint the scene well.
March 6th, 2024 23:49
A CRITICAL MEASURE
vividvoid14 said:
this is insanely good. i love the line
\"The magnificence now before our eyes , abruptly delivered a Shock and Awe surprise.\"
and
and I like the way you flipped the poem around at the end, true masterpiece
March 6th, 2024 09:38
vividvoid14 said:
this is insanely good. i love the line
\"The magnificence now before our eyes , abruptly delivered a Shock and Awe surprise.\"
and
and I like the way you flipped the poem around at the end, true masterpiece
March 6th, 2024 09:38
A CRITICAL MEASURE
vividvoid14 said:
this is insanely good. i love the line
\"The magnificence now before our eyes , abruptly delivered a Shock and Awe surprise.\"
and
and I like the way you flipped the poem around at the end, true masterpiece
March 6th, 2024 09:31
vividvoid14 said:
this is insanely good. i love the line
\"The magnificence now before our eyes , abruptly delivered a Shock and Awe surprise.\"
and
and I like the way you flipped the poem around at the end, true masterpiece
March 6th, 2024 09:31
A CRITICAL MEASURE
Bobby O said:
So you have a recent undesired relationship outcome? Two taps on my heart , my friend.
March 6th, 2024 06:05
Bobby O said:
So you have a recent undesired relationship outcome? Two taps on my heart , my friend.
March 6th, 2024 06:05
A CRITICAL MEASURE
sorenbarrett said:
This holds a great deal within it. A deeply human experience that anyone old enough and sensitive enough can relate to. Personal and a call after loss. It rings with familiarity.
March 6th, 2024 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
This holds a great deal within it. A deeply human experience that anyone old enough and sensitive enough can relate to. Personal and a call after loss. It rings with familiarity.
March 6th, 2024 05:19
A CRITICAL MEASURE
Bobby O said:
Wow ! That means a lot. I got tingly. Too cool.
March 6th, 2024 02:20
Bobby O said:
Wow ! That means a lot. I got tingly. Too cool.
March 6th, 2024 02:20
A CRITICAL MEASURE
Neville said:
Hi Bobby .. I swung by earlier as soon as I noticed you had posted and before my shower ..
Those opening three lines near had me reaching for the Kleenex .. so relatable and painful, felt like a knee in the groin .. and then it got better and with a feeling of relief, I was left with the residual dull ache with which we are clearly both familiar .. Yep, so good to see you friend .. 🎶🎵🎵🎶👍
March 6th, 2024 02:20
Neville said:
Hi Bobby .. I swung by earlier as soon as I noticed you had posted and before my shower ..
Those opening three lines near had me reaching for the Kleenex .. so relatable and painful, felt like a knee in the groin .. and then it got better and with a feeling of relief, I was left with the residual dull ache with which we are clearly both familiar .. Yep, so good to see you friend .. 🎶🎵🎵🎶👍
March 6th, 2024 02:20
A CRITICAL MEASURE
David Wakeling said:
This is amazing.I went back and read it again.There is so much in it.You are a true poet Bobby O i have always said that about you.Well done
March 6th, 2024 02:09
David Wakeling said:
This is amazing.I went back and read it again.There is so much in it.You are a true poet Bobby O i have always said that about you.Well done
March 6th, 2024 02:09
LEGENDARY MR. ROBINSON
Neville said:
You clearly know your stuff sir friend .. and this whole sheet is not only an inspiration but an education .. N 🎵🎶🎶🎵🎵🎶
March 1st, 2024 04:46
Neville said:
You clearly know your stuff sir friend .. and this whole sheet is not only an inspiration but an education .. N 🎵🎶🎶🎵🎵🎶
March 1st, 2024 04:46
LEGENDARY MR. ROBINSON
Parisab said:
They had other plans for him, to parade him center stage, he was so pretty! I’m glad you write with your sharp pen to recognize that he is much more and yet I think the modern music industry is still the same. That’s why I close my eyes or never look up the images of a new artist. Funny the attractive never get respected the same:))
February 25th, 2024 11:49
Parisab said:
They had other plans for him, to parade him center stage, he was so pretty! I’m glad you write with your sharp pen to recognize that he is much more and yet I think the modern music industry is still the same. That’s why I close my eyes or never look up the images of a new artist. Funny the attractive never get respected the same:))
February 25th, 2024 11:49
AND THE LINES WERE LONG
Bobby O said:
I’m not gonna be deal with fuck humility here I actually had an idea in my head and I never done this before. I turned onto Mike and I freestyle that poem 55 seconds I made no edits and I made no changes and it came out that way 55 seconds that I didn’t even know that it was gonna be a Broadway play till the end. I was just talking about an adventure somewhere I think maybe Disneyland lines and then later on, I thought the individual motions could be so different at a play, that’s a great way to put it on paper. Wow OK are you exactly your review was excellent. I asked you to be my friend that was like a level of understanding beyond like for a preteen is pretty good. You know what I mean teasing them teasing teasing thank you and be my friend because you write so good I’m gonna try to learn from you and thank you for having your really really great insight I appreciate
February 25th, 2024 06:58
Bobby O said:
I’m not gonna be deal with fuck humility here I actually had an idea in my head and I never done this before. I turned onto Mike and I freestyle that poem 55 seconds I made no edits and I made no changes and it came out that way 55 seconds that I didn’t even know that it was gonna be a Broadway play till the end. I was just talking about an adventure somewhere I think maybe Disneyland lines and then later on, I thought the individual motions could be so different at a play, that’s a great way to put it on paper. Wow OK are you exactly your review was excellent. I asked you to be my friend that was like a level of understanding beyond like for a preteen is pretty good. You know what I mean teasing them teasing teasing thank you and be my friend because you write so good I’m gonna try to learn from you and thank you for having your really really great insight I appreciate
February 25th, 2024 06:58
AND THE LINES WERE LONG
Cloie said:
This poem is a masterful exploration of the complexity of storytelling and the human experience. The imagery of braided metaphors and scalene angles provides a vivid picture of the intricacies within our lives and narratives. The closing lines evoke a sense of closure and catharsis, reminiscent of the end of a captivating Broadway performance. Bravo on capturing such depth and emotion!
February 25th, 2024 06:14
Cloie said:
This poem is a masterful exploration of the complexity of storytelling and the human experience. The imagery of braided metaphors and scalene angles provides a vivid picture of the intricacies within our lives and narratives. The closing lines evoke a sense of closure and catharsis, reminiscent of the end of a captivating Broadway performance. Bravo on capturing such depth and emotion!
February 25th, 2024 06:14
AND THE LINES WERE LONG
David Wakeling said:
Indeed how else can it end? It made me think.Well done
February 18th, 2024 15:16
David Wakeling said:
Indeed how else can it end? It made me think.Well done
February 18th, 2024 15:16
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