Comments received on poems by Bobby O
AND THE LINES WERE LONG
David Wakeling said:
Indeed how else can it end? It made me think.Well done
February 18th, 2024 15:16
David Wakeling said:
Indeed how else can it end? It made me think.Well done
February 18th, 2024 15:16
AND THE LINES WERE LONG
sorenbarrett said:
A great description of the process of writing a novel, song, or poem. A steam of consciousness that is so difficult to explain. Loved it.
February 18th, 2024 06:36
sorenbarrett said:
A great description of the process of writing a novel, song, or poem. A steam of consciousness that is so difficult to explain. Loved it.
February 18th, 2024 06:36
AND THE LINES WERE LONG
Bobby O said:
Hey cool, we have labors of love in common. I wrote this piece for over six years. This is a video presentation of me speaking to how hip-hop and jazz are similar. I’d be honored if you gave it https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-163174
February 18th, 2024 06:06
Bobby O said:
Hey cool, we have labors of love in common. I wrote this piece for over six years. This is a video presentation of me speaking to how hip-hop and jazz are similar. I’d be honored if you gave it https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-163174
February 18th, 2024 06:06
AND THE LINES WERE LONG
Teddy.15 said:
A superb piece, loved this twist at the end. Emotion imagery and so very inspiring speaking to me sending me inspirations almost as if you were literally just speaking to me. 🌹
February 18th, 2024 05:51
Teddy.15 said:
A superb piece, loved this twist at the end. Emotion imagery and so very inspiring speaking to me sending me inspirations almost as if you were literally just speaking to me. 🌹
February 18th, 2024 05:51
AND THE LINES WERE LONG
orchidee said:
Yep, that sure is some long lines there!
February 18th, 2024 03:21
orchidee said:
Yep, that sure is some long lines there!
February 18th, 2024 03:21
FATAL ARROGANCE
Parisab said:
Love the urgency in your play by play… conducting as you were right there! Great experience reading from you, Bobby.
February 17th, 2024 23:21
Parisab said:
Love the urgency in your play by play… conducting as you were right there! Great experience reading from you, Bobby.
February 17th, 2024 23:21
JAZZ IS LIFE ( updated version)
Jaxxie said:
Jazz transcends my mind. It brings me to a place unreachable by any other genre. A moving verse you’ve written, Bobby.
February 17th, 2024 12:27
Jaxxie said:
Jazz transcends my mind. It brings me to a place unreachable by any other genre. A moving verse you’ve written, Bobby.
February 17th, 2024 12:27
FATAL ARROGANCE
David Wakeling said:
This is very powerful.I liked big bad john as well.
February 17th, 2024 05:36
David Wakeling said:
This is very powerful.I liked big bad john as well.
February 17th, 2024 05:36
FATAL ARROGANCE
Neville said:
after much consideration, I am sure the correct and most appropriate course of action was undertaken under the circumstances of the predicament more than adequately outlined ..
I hear that Big fella is still going strong then .. ? different vocalist maybe .. damned good tune .. N
February 17th, 2024 04:35
Neville said:
after much consideration, I am sure the correct and most appropriate course of action was undertaken under the circumstances of the predicament more than adequately outlined ..
I hear that Big fella is still going strong then .. ? different vocalist maybe .. damned good tune .. N
February 17th, 2024 04:35
A BEAUTIFUL FIND
Bobby O said:
I still don’t understand quantum entanglement , I really think it had to do with the reasons women leave me ?
February 2nd, 2024 01:28
Bobby O said:
I still don’t understand quantum entanglement , I really think it had to do with the reasons women leave me ?
February 2nd, 2024 01:28
A BEAUTIFUL FIND
Parisab said:
Simply put, infinite ways to create order from chaos, yet it brings no cure for insanity-thanks for helping shed light
February 2nd, 2024 01:10
Parisab said:
Simply put, infinite ways to create order from chaos, yet it brings no cure for insanity-thanks for helping shed light
February 2nd, 2024 01:10
A BEAUTIFUL FIND
David Wakeling said:
Some wonderful physics here.great poem.Well done
February 1st, 2024 02:45
David Wakeling said:
Some wonderful physics here.great poem.Well done
February 1st, 2024 02:45
A BEAUTIFUL FIND
Neville said:
my guess is, it was there all along but nobody saw it through their own private fog & old Bertie persuaded em .. well that\'s my equation .. well digged Bobby
Neville
February 1st, 2024 02:38
Neville said:
my guess is, it was there all along but nobody saw it through their own private fog & old Bertie persuaded em .. well that\'s my equation .. well digged Bobby
Neville
February 1st, 2024 02:38
GENDER ROTATION
Bobby O said:
The first stanza speaks to how ego or power trips doesn’t mean you are most qualified to be in charge. So ego and not admitting thats how you got the power tends to be mostly men that are guilty of that.
Then I speak in the second verse to the problems of how alpha males driven not by logic but by testosterone ( balls)make errors that mess up the chain of events.
Then I address the fact of women have already pushed ego aside and are naturally fair and thoughtful cuz it’s not pumped up pride that drives them. They have a fair agenda and have birthed all of us and that combination of skills makes them qualified to lead ( perhaps) instead of only men The double X refers to their x x pair of chromosomes. Men have x y
So it’s a Gender Rotation ( poem title) that I recommend. Hit me back and tell me if this clears things up. ??
January 22nd, 2024 18:02
Bobby O said:
The first stanza speaks to how ego or power trips doesn’t mean you are most qualified to be in charge. So ego and not admitting thats how you got the power tends to be mostly men that are guilty of that.
Then I speak in the second verse to the problems of how alpha males driven not by logic but by testosterone ( balls)make errors that mess up the chain of events.
Then I address the fact of women have already pushed ego aside and are naturally fair and thoughtful cuz it’s not pumped up pride that drives them. They have a fair agenda and have birthed all of us and that combination of skills makes them qualified to lead ( perhaps) instead of only men The double X refers to their x x pair of chromosomes. Men have x y
So it’s a Gender Rotation ( poem title) that I recommend. Hit me back and tell me if this clears things up. ??
January 22nd, 2024 18:02
GENDER ROTATION
vividvoid14 said:
i dont understand it, please explain it bobby
January 22nd, 2024 17:33
vividvoid14 said:
i dont understand it, please explain it bobby
January 22nd, 2024 17:33
GENDER ROTATION
Neville said:
the moment I opened the page
I had an increasingly intense feeling of deja vu waft over me ..
try telling me I\'ve not been here before
January 17th, 2024 06:28
Neville said:
the moment I opened the page
I had an increasingly intense feeling of deja vu waft over me ..
try telling me I\'ve not been here before
January 17th, 2024 06:28
GENDER ROTATION
orchidee said:
Dunno about all this gender stuff, but I\'m half human, half guinea pig - see my pic?! lol.
January 14th, 2024 03:01
orchidee said:
Dunno about all this gender stuff, but I\'m half human, half guinea pig - see my pic?! lol.
January 14th, 2024 03:01
SO MANY THOUGHT ME LUCKY?
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A clever brilliant poem creatively expressed wow! Kudos!!
Plz plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
January 8th, 2024 01:27
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A clever brilliant poem creatively expressed wow! Kudos!!
Plz plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
January 8th, 2024 01:27
SO MANY THOUGHT ME LUCKY?
Bobby O said:
Don’t trust that AI. I am the narrator and I facetiously referred to a concubine as it the last thing I’d agree to as “I” would NEVER SELL my soul. Basically the poem is this , some Prima Donna rich bitch wanted done guy to lick her shoes and I said fuck off. Quit that AI bullshot as it is very good creating content but really terrible at understanding the nuance of an already created poem.
GRADE FOR AI - F , cuz it missed every point.
GRADE FOR VIV.,-L for limping
January 3rd, 2024 19:07
Bobby O said:
Don’t trust that AI. I am the narrator and I facetiously referred to a concubine as it the last thing I’d agree to as “I” would NEVER SELL my soul. Basically the poem is this , some Prima Donna rich bitch wanted done guy to lick her shoes and I said fuck off. Quit that AI bullshot as it is very good creating content but really terrible at understanding the nuance of an already created poem.
GRADE FOR AI - F , cuz it missed every point.
GRADE FOR VIV.,-L for limping
January 3rd, 2024 19:07
SO MANY THOUGHT ME LUCKY?
vividvoid14 said:
The poem then introduces the concept of \"crux\" and \"illusion,\" suggesting that true understanding requires facing harsh truths, rather than simply worshiping a surface-level appearance. The narrator defines herself as an actor, acknowledging the role she plays in her own life, and expresses gratitude for this opportunity.
The poem concludes by comparing you to a concubine, someone who offers their loyalty and service in exchange for privilege and luxury. The narrator is willing to sell her soul, acknowledging the price she pays to maintain her position, but also implies that she does so willingly and without remorse.
January 3rd, 2024 17:53
vividvoid14 said:
The poem then introduces the concept of \"crux\" and \"illusion,\" suggesting that true understanding requires facing harsh truths, rather than simply worshiping a surface-level appearance. The narrator defines herself as an actor, acknowledging the role she plays in her own life, and expresses gratitude for this opportunity.
The poem concludes by comparing you to a concubine, someone who offers their loyalty and service in exchange for privilege and luxury. The narrator is willing to sell her soul, acknowledging the price she pays to maintain her position, but also implies that she does so willingly and without remorse.
January 3rd, 2024 17:53
SO MANY THOUGHT ME LUCKY?
Introverted Sage said:
Deceit is a learned trait.. If only everyone wasn\'t so afraid to be themselves.
Seems like that \'luck\' got you out of there 🥂
January 2nd, 2024 12:17
Introverted Sage said:
Deceit is a learned trait.. If only everyone wasn\'t so afraid to be themselves.
Seems like that \'luck\' got you out of there 🥂
January 2nd, 2024 12:17
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