Comments received on poems by Bobby O
A FOREVER DOOM
orchidee said:
Nice dog Bobby! Not an ugly pug.
I admit I find some poem cryptic in places and hard to follow. :)
Sometimes I just reply \'Good write\' or \'fine write\'.
October 23rd, 2023 11:57
orchidee said:
Nice dog Bobby! Not an ugly pug.
I admit I find some poem cryptic in places and hard to follow. :)
Sometimes I just reply \'Good write\' or \'fine write\'.
October 23rd, 2023 11:57
A FOREVER DOOM
Bobby O said:
Just about finished Seedy. Every piece is strong. I’m in awe.
October 23rd, 2023 06:38
Bobby O said:
Just about finished Seedy. Every piece is strong. I’m in awe.
October 23rd, 2023 06:38
A FOREVER DOOM
peto said:
You don\'t miss and hit the wall Bobby
I enjoyed it as a whole but the 1st verse is superb
The satan\'s laugh line made me shake also
Great word choices
\"Calloused veneer \"
\"Twisted strife \"
And so much more
Great read
October 23rd, 2023 05:17
peto said:
You don\'t miss and hit the wall Bobby
I enjoyed it as a whole but the 1st verse is superb
The satan\'s laugh line made me shake also
Great word choices
\"Calloused veneer \"
\"Twisted strife \"
And so much more
Great read
October 23rd, 2023 05:17
Even a Clueless Squirrel May Climb
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant capture of the memory.
October 23rd, 2023 00:56
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant capture of the memory.
October 23rd, 2023 00:56
MONK and MY AUNT
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant, you and Monk. Great memories of listening to him one summer in \'87. Nice work.
October 23rd, 2023 00:28
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant, you and Monk. Great memories of listening to him one summer in \'87. Nice work.
October 23rd, 2023 00:28
MICHAEL D
Thomas W Case said:
Great work Bobby. As we used to say in California, posers go home. Lol
October 23rd, 2023 00:24
Thomas W Case said:
Great work Bobby. As we used to say in California, posers go home. Lol
October 23rd, 2023 00:24
BEDFELLOWS
Parisab said:
I chuckled for real…The awkward pairings the poem couldn’t resist…
October 22nd, 2023 14:45
Parisab said:
I chuckled for real…The awkward pairings the poem couldn’t resist…
October 22nd, 2023 14:45
Avoiding Cliche’
Thomas W Case said:
Great job Bobby. I love the vulnerability.
October 22nd, 2023 13:05
Thomas W Case said:
Great job Bobby. I love the vulnerability.
October 22nd, 2023 13:05
Blessed to Share
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. Great flow and use of language. Wonderful picture too.
October 18th, 2023 10:52
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. Great flow and use of language. Wonderful picture too.
October 18th, 2023 10:52
SOX FANS SHOULD HIDE
Bobby O said:
It’s a crazy game. Braves win MLB Best, 104 and now they’re out. Just what plan solves their problem? My Sox have hit a 54 year low as they almost lose a C note in the bigs while every one of their Minor League teams finished last.
October 15th, 2023 00:59
Bobby O said:
It’s a crazy game. Braves win MLB Best, 104 and now they’re out. Just what plan solves their problem? My Sox have hit a 54 year low as they almost lose a C note in the bigs while every one of their Minor League teams finished last.
October 15th, 2023 00:59
SOX FANS SHOULD HIDE
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent. I\'m a baseball fan from way back, even worked at turner field and took in many braves games in 2000. You gave me a hunger for the boys of summer, fantastic job.
October 15th, 2023 00:46
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent. I\'m a baseball fan from way back, even worked at turner field and took in many braves games in 2000. You gave me a hunger for the boys of summer, fantastic job.
October 15th, 2023 00:46
Thelonius Reborn As the Dee Oh Double G
Thomas W Case said:
This is a true work of art. From the jazz flow to the juxtaposition of artists. It is fantastic. Brilliant work.
October 14th, 2023 00:39
Thomas W Case said:
This is a true work of art. From the jazz flow to the juxtaposition of artists. It is fantastic. Brilliant work.
October 14th, 2023 00:39
LIFE
Bobby O said:
Very cool words. Appreciate how you jump in and lend support. That shows a good heart
October 13th, 2023 20:11
Bobby O said:
Very cool words. Appreciate how you jump in and lend support. That shows a good heart
October 13th, 2023 20:11
JAZZ IS LIFE ( updated version)
Parisab said:
Almost prophetic, so there is hope since we have jazz-This was unintended melody -I hope that you had a reading or an open mic…
October 13th, 2023 02:55
Parisab said:
Almost prophetic, so there is hope since we have jazz-This was unintended melody -I hope that you had a reading or an open mic…
October 13th, 2023 02:55
JAZZ IS LIFE ( updated version)
Thomas W Case said:
Yes, just like a Coltrane riff...very well crafted.
October 13th, 2023 01:37
Thomas W Case said:
Yes, just like a Coltrane riff...very well crafted.
October 13th, 2023 01:37
JAZZ IS LIFE ( updated version)
peto said:
Your passion is felt Bobby
A great read with some classics mentioned
A jazz battler
Quite the combination
Many strings to a talented bow
October 12th, 2023 14:39
peto said:
Your passion is felt Bobby
A great read with some classics mentioned
A jazz battler
Quite the combination
Many strings to a talented bow
October 12th, 2023 14:39
JAZZ IS LIFE ( updated version)
Goldfinch60 said:
Jaz certainly is life Bobby, I have been listening to it for over seventy years.
Andy
October 12th, 2023 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Jaz certainly is life Bobby, I have been listening to it for over seventy years.
Andy
October 12th, 2023 01:21
JAZZ IS LIFE ( updated version)
Bobby O said:
I’m trying to memorize and work on the cadence and pauses in time for an open mic I’m gonna attend next Tuesday. Hopefully I’ll be able to get it in video. Good or bad I’ll send you a copy. I’m hopeful I stick to my plan and practice a lot this week.
October 11th, 2023 17:01
Bobby O said:
I’m trying to memorize and work on the cadence and pauses in time for an open mic I’m gonna attend next Tuesday. Hopefully I’ll be able to get it in video. Good or bad I’ll send you a copy. I’m hopeful I stick to my plan and practice a lot this week.
October 11th, 2023 17:01
JAZZ IS LIFE ( updated version)
LIZ said:
The title says it all! And I enjoyed the rhymn! 💫
October 11th, 2023 16:26
LIZ said:
The title says it all! And I enjoyed the rhymn! 💫
October 11th, 2023 16:26
Thelonius Reborn As the Dee Oh Double G
Bobby O said:
It’s cuz just like King Kong, you got it going on.
Thank you for your kind words.
October 11th, 2023 15:50
Bobby O said:
It’s cuz just like King Kong, you got it going on.
Thank you for your kind words.
October 11th, 2023 15:50
JAZZ IS LIFE ( updated version)
Bobby O said:
Wow! You hit on exactly what I hoped to reach. That means a real lot and I’m grateful. Now I have to memorize it so I can deliver smooth and with its intended cadence. Thanks much.
October 11th, 2023 14:16
Bobby O said:
Wow! You hit on exactly what I hoped to reach. That means a real lot and I’m grateful. Now I have to memorize it so I can deliver smooth and with its intended cadence. Thanks much.
October 11th, 2023 14:16
JAZZ IS LIFE ( updated version)
David Wakeling said:
I have to agree here.This made me revisit the Jazz greats.There should be heard out there.It flows like a Jazz melody.Well done
October 11th, 2023 13:42
David Wakeling said:
I have to agree here.This made me revisit the Jazz greats.There should be heard out there.It flows like a Jazz melody.Well done
October 11th, 2023 13:42
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