Comments received on poems by Bobby O
CROOKED EYES
Parisab said:
I call them the gladiators of our time, at the crooked sports show business-the whole system stinks, but I sure love all the hero’s you named and even the unsung and underpaid injured heroes-I know your preferences are more sophisticated and intentional Bobby-
September 13th, 2023 23:39
Parisab said:
I call them the gladiators of our time, at the crooked sports show business-the whole system stinks, but I sure love all the hero’s you named and even the unsung and underpaid injured heroes-I know your preferences are more sophisticated and intentional Bobby-
September 13th, 2023 23:39
CROOKED EYES
Bobby O said:
Hee hee. It’s a misdirection that doesn’t go w the poem but rather w the picture. From Orphan Black one of the clones was a trained assassin and they were testing her math acuity. “ if I had three mangos and gave you two how many ….?”
In her Russian accent she says” mangos…,”. etc. it’s just a great scene. Orphan Black is a masterpiece.
September 13th, 2023 17:23
Bobby O said:
Hee hee. It’s a misdirection that doesn’t go w the poem but rather w the picture. From Orphan Black one of the clones was a trained assassin and they were testing her math acuity. “ if I had three mangos and gave you two how many ….?”
In her Russian accent she says” mangos…,”. etc. it’s just a great scene. Orphan Black is a masterpiece.
September 13th, 2023 17:23
CROOKED EYES
Bobby O said:
Hee hee. It’s a misdirection that doesn’t go w the poem but rather w the picture. From Orphan Black one of the clones was a trained assassin and they were testing her math acuity. “ if I had three mangos and gave you two how many ….?”
In her Russian accent she says” mangos…,”. etc. it’s just a great scene. Orphan Black is a masterpiece.
September 13th, 2023 17:22
Bobby O said:
Hee hee. It’s a misdirection that doesn’t go w the poem but rather w the picture. From Orphan Black one of the clones was a trained assassin and they were testing her math acuity. “ if I had three mangos and gave you two how many ….?”
In her Russian accent she says” mangos…,”. etc. it’s just a great scene. Orphan Black is a masterpiece.
September 13th, 2023 17:22
Even a Clueless Squirrel May Climb
Bobby O said:
I was going for that homey kinda title, like when an old guy tells a kid that the sun don’t shine on the same dog’s ass everyday or May it does shine on a different one? I got confused so I went w squirrel but I felt bad talking about a blind one cuz of PETA and stuff?
September 11th, 2023 10:58
Bobby O said:
I was going for that homey kinda title, like when an old guy tells a kid that the sun don’t shine on the same dog’s ass everyday or May it does shine on a different one? I got confused so I went w squirrel but I felt bad talking about a blind one cuz of PETA and stuff?
September 11th, 2023 10:58
Even a Clueless Squirrel May Climb
sorenbarrett said:
The title led me down a false path until the ending where my thoughts had to do a major readjust. We live in a world of surprises and some of them are memorable and some are just plain good. Nice write Bobby.
September 11th, 2023 10:17
sorenbarrett said:
The title led me down a false path until the ending where my thoughts had to do a major readjust. We live in a world of surprises and some of them are memorable and some are just plain good. Nice write Bobby.
September 11th, 2023 10:17
CONNECTION
Bobby O said:
I think good but then I talk myself into stuff l using logic perfectly designed by an insider
September 11th, 2023 04:23
Bobby O said:
I think good but then I talk myself into stuff l using logic perfectly designed by an insider
September 11th, 2023 04:23
Even a Clueless Squirrel May Climb
David Wakeling said:
She\'s making you an offer you cant refuse.Enjoyable read.
September 10th, 2023 17:27
David Wakeling said:
She\'s making you an offer you cant refuse.Enjoyable read.
September 10th, 2023 17:27
Even a Clueless Squirrel May Climb
peto said:
Great memory Bobby
Thanks for sharing such a beautiful write
The one part I struggled with
YOU an underdog???
Charmer
September 10th, 2023 07:16
peto said:
Great memory Bobby
Thanks for sharing such a beautiful write
The one part I struggled with
YOU an underdog???
Charmer
September 10th, 2023 07:16
Even a Clueless Squirrel May Climb
Neville said:
good fortune always smiles down on the righteous .. my guess is, you earnt it sir .. very muchly enjoyed .. Neville
September 10th, 2023 02:47
Neville said:
good fortune always smiles down on the righteous .. my guess is, you earnt it sir .. very muchly enjoyed .. Neville
September 10th, 2023 02:47
Even a Clueless Squirrel May Climb
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories will be forever with you Bobby.
Andy
September 10th, 2023 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories will be forever with you Bobby.
Andy
September 10th, 2023 01:47
Even a Clueless Squirrel May Climb
LIZ said:
First, the title is gold! I\'m glad you hold this experience with such fondness! Certain \"moments\" don\'t come around often! 💫
September 10th, 2023 00:32
LIZ said:
First, the title is gold! I\'m glad you hold this experience with such fondness! Certain \"moments\" don\'t come around often! 💫
September 10th, 2023 00:32
CONNECTION
Neville said:
no doubt she has two of the most adorable pairs of lips too .. 🎶🎵🎶
September 9th, 2023 09:19
Neville said:
no doubt she has two of the most adorable pairs of lips too .. 🎶🎵🎶
September 9th, 2023 09:19
CONNECTION
peto said:
Didn\'t think you could top the picture
Then you lifted your pen
September 9th, 2023 04:28
peto said:
Didn\'t think you could top the picture
Then you lifted your pen
September 9th, 2023 04:28
UNSELFISH RAMBLE
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful and may she definately hopefully know it\'s for her. 💖
September 9th, 2023 02:50
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful and may she definately hopefully know it\'s for her. 💖
September 9th, 2023 02:50
UNSELFISH RAMBLE
orchidee said:
I thought this was gonna be about a walk/ramble ya had in the countryside or summat.
Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
September 9th, 2023 01:29
orchidee said:
I thought this was gonna be about a walk/ramble ya had in the countryside or summat.
Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
September 9th, 2023 01:29
UNSELFISH RAMBLE
David Wakeling said:
This is a powerful poem.Actually it reads like a song.It just needs a guitar solo.Just saying.Well done
September 9th, 2023 00:29
David Wakeling said:
This is a powerful poem.Actually it reads like a song.It just needs a guitar solo.Just saying.Well done
September 9th, 2023 00:29
CONNECTION
LIZ said:
Oh so beautiful! When we look past the obvious, we find....REAL!!! ❤️
September 9th, 2023 00:23
LIZ said:
Oh so beautiful! When we look past the obvious, we find....REAL!!! ❤️
September 9th, 2023 00:23
UNSELFISH RAMBLE
Parisab said:
‘Digits open a pristine view’ ‘unselfish valor will display’ how marvelous that you setting a stage with everything beautiful, for her-May you keep celebrating many birthdays and to keep absorbing the best with your taste…
September 8th, 2023 23:54
Parisab said:
‘Digits open a pristine view’ ‘unselfish valor will display’ how marvelous that you setting a stage with everything beautiful, for her-May you keep celebrating many birthdays and to keep absorbing the best with your taste…
September 8th, 2023 23:54
UNSELFISH RAMBLE
LIZ said:
Magic!!!! This is my favorite one! See, I knew you were a romantic at heart!! \"She is my first and last\" Mmmmm
oh wow! I\'m lighting a candle to this, and basking in the energy you\'ve so bravely displayed! Beautiful! Thank you! 💋💕
September 8th, 2023 19:39
LIZ said:
Magic!!!! This is my favorite one! See, I knew you were a romantic at heart!! \"She is my first and last\" Mmmmm
oh wow! I\'m lighting a candle to this, and basking in the energy you\'ve so bravely displayed! Beautiful! Thank you! 💋💕
September 8th, 2023 19:39
UNSELFISH RAMBLE
Introverted Sage said:
I hope she sees this!
Sweet write!
\'this magic box
Only her power unlocks\'
🤌🏽choice rhyming!
This is great!
September 8th, 2023 18:47
Introverted Sage said:
I hope she sees this!
Sweet write!
\'this magic box
Only her power unlocks\'
🤌🏽choice rhyming!
This is great!
September 8th, 2023 18:47
TRUE SIMPLE HEART
Bobby O said:
That’s a great review and it indicates valuable introspective.
September 5th, 2023 14:48
Bobby O said:
That’s a great review and it indicates valuable introspective.
September 5th, 2023 14:48
TRUE SIMPLE HEART
vividvoid14 said:
This poem is an expression of optimism and hope, encouraging readers to adopt positive attitudes and values in their lives. The poem challenges readers to break free from negative influences and stereotypes, and embrace their unique strengths and gifts. It also emphasizes the importance of living in the present moment, and finding purpose and fulfillment in the journey of life, rather than succumbing to the fear of death. Overall, the poem is a call to readers to choose strength over adversity, and to embrace a life of compassion, generosity, and courage.
September 5th, 2023 14:35
vividvoid14 said:
This poem is an expression of optimism and hope, encouraging readers to adopt positive attitudes and values in their lives. The poem challenges readers to break free from negative influences and stereotypes, and embrace their unique strengths and gifts. It also emphasizes the importance of living in the present moment, and finding purpose and fulfillment in the journey of life, rather than succumbing to the fear of death. Overall, the poem is a call to readers to choose strength over adversity, and to embrace a life of compassion, generosity, and courage.
September 5th, 2023 14:35
Blessed to Share
vividvoid14 said:
you have a handsome grandchild im happy for you and i love the poem
September 5th, 2023 13:51
vividvoid14 said:
you have a handsome grandchild im happy for you and i love the poem
September 5th, 2023 13:51
MENTOR’s HONOR
Bobby O said:
I accept but you might conff so under having a few as no one person fills in all gaps b
Pick a published poet with some notoriety and pay attention to Subject/ verb in the phrasing and then count the personal pronouns. You’re swimming against the tide when I shared advice I got from and thru reading the masters. IMO that should have been fixed in less than one day but it’s a month later and yiur still in that rut. That is the definition if all talk no action much like the man who swears he be wants to lose weight but ests a dozen donuts everdsy. When that guy s asks you for diet or weight loss advice. You just gonna ignore me at some point because it’s silly.
September 5th, 2023 12:36
Bobby O said:
I accept but you might conff so under having a few as no one person fills in all gaps b
Pick a published poet with some notoriety and pay attention to Subject/ verb in the phrasing and then count the personal pronouns. You’re swimming against the tide when I shared advice I got from and thru reading the masters. IMO that should have been fixed in less than one day but it’s a month later and yiur still in that rut. That is the definition if all talk no action much like the man who swears he be wants to lose weight but ests a dozen donuts everdsy. When that guy s asks you for diet or weight loss advice. You just gonna ignore me at some point because it’s silly.
September 5th, 2023 12:36
MENTOR’s HONOR
Introverted Sage said:
Such a beautiful write!
From the heart always wins.
May the memories of your great friend remind you of who you are!
Thanks for sharing!
... and the music in the background while I was reading and commenting... choice
September 1st, 2023 12:52
Introverted Sage said:
Such a beautiful write!
From the heart always wins.
May the memories of your great friend remind you of who you are!
Thanks for sharing!
... and the music in the background while I was reading and commenting... choice
September 1st, 2023 12:52
MENTOR’s HONOR
Bobby O said:
Hard to beat that many thanks and much appreciation for your words and friendship
September 1st, 2023 05:02
Bobby O said:
Hard to beat that many thanks and much appreciation for your words and friendship
September 1st, 2023 05:02
MENTOR’s HONOR
peto said:
As a scot I\'ve always admired the pipes and drums
The magic created from the most awkward of instruments is astounding
I\'ve also had the honour of your podium position so know that beginning only too well
A marvellous tribute to Duke
Great to see you return
And in such a poignant way
Total respect
September 1st, 2023 04:32
peto said:
As a scot I\'ve always admired the pipes and drums
The magic created from the most awkward of instruments is astounding
I\'ve also had the honour of your podium position so know that beginning only too well
A marvellous tribute to Duke
Great to see you return
And in such a poignant way
Total respect
September 1st, 2023 04:32
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