Comments received on poems by Bobby O
HASTEN
Parisab said:
Wow Bobby! Your whole sense of being was linked to her affirmation and her strength was what grounded you! You captured this mother and son attachment with an exquisite pen! Lucky to be so lovingly linked with your first love…You’ve told me once that your mom raised you right and it shows, sir…
October 26th, 2023 01:51
Parisab said:
Wow Bobby! Your whole sense of being was linked to her affirmation and her strength was what grounded you! You captured this mother and son attachment with an exquisite pen! Lucky to be so lovingly linked with your first love…You’ve told me once that your mom raised you right and it shows, sir…
October 26th, 2023 01:51
HASTEN
Neville said:
this, my man is more than a love poem .. it is also a mourning song .. truly beautiful as indeed she who inspired it ..
so very much and I do mean, very much enjoyed .. Neville
October 26th, 2023 01:19
Neville said:
this, my man is more than a love poem .. it is also a mourning song .. truly beautiful as indeed she who inspired it ..
so very much and I do mean, very much enjoyed .. Neville
October 26th, 2023 01:19
I LEFT
Bobby O said:
Thanks Boss. The worst part is I needed to send that out in triplicate. I wrote it as a Catch All , this time skipping
Ass onance?
October 25th, 2023 13:45
Bobby O said:
Thanks Boss. The worst part is I needed to send that out in triplicate. I wrote it as a Catch All , this time skipping
Ass onance?
October 25th, 2023 13:45
BEDFELLOWS
Bobby O said:
Its comforting to have an understanding friend. Strange, though, none of my Aussie friends got it.
October 24th, 2023 23:32
Bobby O said:
Its comforting to have an understanding friend. Strange, though, none of my Aussie friends got it.
October 24th, 2023 23:32
BEDFELLOWS
Neville said:
I think my best ever breakfast besides a full English of course was taken in a little diner off Bourbon Street New Orleans .. Owzat for taste eh ..
Oh; and should toast ever be involved its gotta be thick, covered in butter and orange marmalade with proper tea in a china cup .. I chuckled too Bobby .. Neville
October 24th, 2023 23:19
Neville said:
I think my best ever breakfast besides a full English of course was taken in a little diner off Bourbon Street New Orleans .. Owzat for taste eh ..
Oh; and should toast ever be involved its gotta be thick, covered in butter and orange marmalade with proper tea in a china cup .. I chuckled too Bobby .. Neville
October 24th, 2023 23:19
FATED HERO FAKED
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic job with this Bobby. I love the way you use assonance in this.
October 24th, 2023 16:01
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic job with this Bobby. I love the way you use assonance in this.
October 24th, 2023 16:01
A FOREVER DOOM
Parisab said:
I liked this whole presentation for many known and unknown reasons: Firstly, I am shocked that I have not heard about this gem, Gil Scott-Heron, and his legacy of spoken word and influence on hip-hop. I’m glad that there is so much more to artistry yet undiscovered. Secondly, your words, were so haunting as if you were describing the super natural scenes I witnessed (fully sober) of New Orleans when I went on a road trip during Covid and we visited the city when no jazz musicians could perform due to the lock down-People were walking around like the living dead-it was so haunting as if there was no life and ‘Satan’ had taken over the city and now I know why-It was because there was no jazz and no voo doo could protect anyone-It a sign of a great art if it helps you make references and personal meaning…Thanks for this Bobby!
October 24th, 2023 01:22
Parisab said:
I liked this whole presentation for many known and unknown reasons: Firstly, I am shocked that I have not heard about this gem, Gil Scott-Heron, and his legacy of spoken word and influence on hip-hop. I’m glad that there is so much more to artistry yet undiscovered. Secondly, your words, were so haunting as if you were describing the super natural scenes I witnessed (fully sober) of New Orleans when I went on a road trip during Covid and we visited the city when no jazz musicians could perform due to the lock down-People were walking around like the living dead-it was so haunting as if there was no life and ‘Satan’ had taken over the city and now I know why-It was because there was no jazz and no voo doo could protect anyone-It a sign of a great art if it helps you make references and personal meaning…Thanks for this Bobby!
October 24th, 2023 01:22
A FOREVER DOOM
Bobby O said:
Your communique tends to gladden me.
You , sir , rate amongst my daily anticipatory strides. My guess is when a glass in hand and a small table tween we could enjoy light hearted lies cuz we would know and build momentum when shared truths surround new or tried and true eloquence. It a certain home run
October 23rd, 2023 17:42
Bobby O said:
Your communique tends to gladden me.
You , sir , rate amongst my daily anticipatory strides. My guess is when a glass in hand and a small table tween we could enjoy light hearted lies cuz we would know and build momentum when shared truths surround new or tried and true eloquence. It a certain home run
October 23rd, 2023 17:42
A FOREVER DOOM
Neville said:
Epic sir Bob .. I am so glad I was able to sneak in the back door before lights out and Halloween of course .. Like I said .. this is epic .. Neville
October 23rd, 2023 16:04
Neville said:
Epic sir Bob .. I am so glad I was able to sneak in the back door before lights out and Halloween of course .. Like I said .. this is epic .. Neville
October 23rd, 2023 16:04
Thelonius Reborn As the Dee Oh Double G
Bobby O said:
Appreciate your trust to look at a request. Thank you.
October 23rd, 2023 14:49
Bobby O said:
Appreciate your trust to look at a request. Thank you.
October 23rd, 2023 14:49
Thelonius Reborn As the Dee Oh Double G
seventeen said:
i’m not an expert here at all but the flow and rhythm are incredible, it’s literally music!! loved the rhymes especially, so very much on point
October 23rd, 2023 14:48
seventeen said:
i’m not an expert here at all but the flow and rhythm are incredible, it’s literally music!! loved the rhymes especially, so very much on point
October 23rd, 2023 14:48
A FOREVER DOOM
orchidee said:
Nice dog Bobby! Not an ugly pug.
I admit I find some poem cryptic in places and hard to follow. :)
Sometimes I just reply \'Good write\' or \'fine write\'.
October 23rd, 2023 11:57
orchidee said:
Nice dog Bobby! Not an ugly pug.
I admit I find some poem cryptic in places and hard to follow. :)
Sometimes I just reply \'Good write\' or \'fine write\'.
October 23rd, 2023 11:57
A FOREVER DOOM
Bobby O said:
Just about finished Seedy. Every piece is strong. I’m in awe.
October 23rd, 2023 06:38
Bobby O said:
Just about finished Seedy. Every piece is strong. I’m in awe.
October 23rd, 2023 06:38
A FOREVER DOOM
peto said:
You don\'t miss and hit the wall Bobby
I enjoyed it as a whole but the 1st verse is superb
The satan\'s laugh line made me shake also
Great word choices
\"Calloused veneer \"
\"Twisted strife \"
And so much more
Great read
October 23rd, 2023 05:17
peto said:
You don\'t miss and hit the wall Bobby
I enjoyed it as a whole but the 1st verse is superb
The satan\'s laugh line made me shake also
Great word choices
\"Calloused veneer \"
\"Twisted strife \"
And so much more
Great read
October 23rd, 2023 05:17
Even a Clueless Squirrel May Climb
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant capture of the memory.
October 23rd, 2023 00:56
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant capture of the memory.
October 23rd, 2023 00:56
MONK and MY AUNT
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant, you and Monk. Great memories of listening to him one summer in \'87. Nice work.
October 23rd, 2023 00:28
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant, you and Monk. Great memories of listening to him one summer in \'87. Nice work.
October 23rd, 2023 00:28
MICHAEL D
Thomas W Case said:
Great work Bobby. As we used to say in California, posers go home. Lol
October 23rd, 2023 00:24
Thomas W Case said:
Great work Bobby. As we used to say in California, posers go home. Lol
October 23rd, 2023 00:24
BEDFELLOWS
Parisab said:
I chuckled for real…The awkward pairings the poem couldn’t resist…
October 22nd, 2023 14:45
Parisab said:
I chuckled for real…The awkward pairings the poem couldn’t resist…
October 22nd, 2023 14:45
Avoiding Cliche’
Thomas W Case said:
Great job Bobby. I love the vulnerability.
October 22nd, 2023 13:05
Thomas W Case said:
Great job Bobby. I love the vulnerability.
October 22nd, 2023 13:05
Blessed to Share
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. Great flow and use of language. Wonderful picture too.
October 18th, 2023 10:52
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful. Great flow and use of language. Wonderful picture too.
October 18th, 2023 10:52
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