Comments received on poems by Bobby O
UNSELFISH RAMBLE
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful and may she definately hopefully know it\'s for her. 💖
September 9th, 2023 02:50
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful and may she definately hopefully know it\'s for her. 💖
September 9th, 2023 02:50
UNSELFISH RAMBLE
orchidee said:
I thought this was gonna be about a walk/ramble ya had in the countryside or summat.
Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
September 9th, 2023 01:29
orchidee said:
I thought this was gonna be about a walk/ramble ya had in the countryside or summat.
Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
September 9th, 2023 01:29
UNSELFISH RAMBLE
David Wakeling said:
This is a powerful poem.Actually it reads like a song.It just needs a guitar solo.Just saying.Well done
September 9th, 2023 00:29
David Wakeling said:
This is a powerful poem.Actually it reads like a song.It just needs a guitar solo.Just saying.Well done
September 9th, 2023 00:29
CONNECTION
LIZ said:
Oh so beautiful! When we look past the obvious, we find....REAL!!! ❤️
September 9th, 2023 00:23
LIZ said:
Oh so beautiful! When we look past the obvious, we find....REAL!!! ❤️
September 9th, 2023 00:23
UNSELFISH RAMBLE
Parisab said:
‘Digits open a pristine view’ ‘unselfish valor will display’ how marvelous that you setting a stage with everything beautiful, for her-May you keep celebrating many birthdays and to keep absorbing the best with your taste…
September 8th, 2023 23:54
Parisab said:
‘Digits open a pristine view’ ‘unselfish valor will display’ how marvelous that you setting a stage with everything beautiful, for her-May you keep celebrating many birthdays and to keep absorbing the best with your taste…
September 8th, 2023 23:54
UNSELFISH RAMBLE
LIZ said:
Magic!!!! This is my favorite one! See, I knew you were a romantic at heart!! \"She is my first and last\" Mmmmm
oh wow! I\'m lighting a candle to this, and basking in the energy you\'ve so bravely displayed! Beautiful! Thank you! 💋💕
September 8th, 2023 19:39
LIZ said:
Magic!!!! This is my favorite one! See, I knew you were a romantic at heart!! \"She is my first and last\" Mmmmm
oh wow! I\'m lighting a candle to this, and basking in the energy you\'ve so bravely displayed! Beautiful! Thank you! 💋💕
September 8th, 2023 19:39
UNSELFISH RAMBLE
Introverted Sage said:
I hope she sees this!
Sweet write!
\'this magic box
Only her power unlocks\'
🤌🏽choice rhyming!
This is great!
September 8th, 2023 18:47
Introverted Sage said:
I hope she sees this!
Sweet write!
\'this magic box
Only her power unlocks\'
🤌🏽choice rhyming!
This is great!
September 8th, 2023 18:47
TRUE SIMPLE HEART
Bobby O said:
That’s a great review and it indicates valuable introspective.
September 5th, 2023 14:48
Bobby O said:
That’s a great review and it indicates valuable introspective.
September 5th, 2023 14:48
TRUE SIMPLE HEART
vividvoid14 said:
This poem is an expression of optimism and hope, encouraging readers to adopt positive attitudes and values in their lives. The poem challenges readers to break free from negative influences and stereotypes, and embrace their unique strengths and gifts. It also emphasizes the importance of living in the present moment, and finding purpose and fulfillment in the journey of life, rather than succumbing to the fear of death. Overall, the poem is a call to readers to choose strength over adversity, and to embrace a life of compassion, generosity, and courage.
September 5th, 2023 14:35
vividvoid14 said:
This poem is an expression of optimism and hope, encouraging readers to adopt positive attitudes and values in their lives. The poem challenges readers to break free from negative influences and stereotypes, and embrace their unique strengths and gifts. It also emphasizes the importance of living in the present moment, and finding purpose and fulfillment in the journey of life, rather than succumbing to the fear of death. Overall, the poem is a call to readers to choose strength over adversity, and to embrace a life of compassion, generosity, and courage.
September 5th, 2023 14:35
Blessed to Share
vividvoid14 said:
you have a handsome grandchild im happy for you and i love the poem
September 5th, 2023 13:51
vividvoid14 said:
you have a handsome grandchild im happy for you and i love the poem
September 5th, 2023 13:51
MENTOR’s HONOR
Bobby O said:
I accept but you might conff so under having a few as no one person fills in all gaps b
Pick a published poet with some notoriety and pay attention to Subject/ verb in the phrasing and then count the personal pronouns. You’re swimming against the tide when I shared advice I got from and thru reading the masters. IMO that should have been fixed in less than one day but it’s a month later and yiur still in that rut. That is the definition if all talk no action much like the man who swears he be wants to lose weight but ests a dozen donuts everdsy. When that guy s asks you for diet or weight loss advice. You just gonna ignore me at some point because it’s silly.
September 5th, 2023 12:36
Bobby O said:
I accept but you might conff so under having a few as no one person fills in all gaps b
Pick a published poet with some notoriety and pay attention to Subject/ verb in the phrasing and then count the personal pronouns. You’re swimming against the tide when I shared advice I got from and thru reading the masters. IMO that should have been fixed in less than one day but it’s a month later and yiur still in that rut. That is the definition if all talk no action much like the man who swears he be wants to lose weight but ests a dozen donuts everdsy. When that guy s asks you for diet or weight loss advice. You just gonna ignore me at some point because it’s silly.
September 5th, 2023 12:36
MENTOR’s HONOR
Introverted Sage said:
Such a beautiful write!
From the heart always wins.
May the memories of your great friend remind you of who you are!
Thanks for sharing!
... and the music in the background while I was reading and commenting... choice
September 1st, 2023 12:52
Introverted Sage said:
Such a beautiful write!
From the heart always wins.
May the memories of your great friend remind you of who you are!
Thanks for sharing!
... and the music in the background while I was reading and commenting... choice
September 1st, 2023 12:52
MENTOR’s HONOR
Bobby O said:
Hard to beat that many thanks and much appreciation for your words and friendship
September 1st, 2023 05:02
Bobby O said:
Hard to beat that many thanks and much appreciation for your words and friendship
September 1st, 2023 05:02
MENTOR’s HONOR
peto said:
As a scot I\'ve always admired the pipes and drums
The magic created from the most awkward of instruments is astounding
I\'ve also had the honour of your podium position so know that beginning only too well
A marvellous tribute to Duke
Great to see you return
And in such a poignant way
Total respect
September 1st, 2023 04:32
peto said:
As a scot I\'ve always admired the pipes and drums
The magic created from the most awkward of instruments is astounding
I\'ve also had the honour of your podium position so know that beginning only too well
A marvellous tribute to Duke
Great to see you return
And in such a poignant way
Total respect
September 1st, 2023 04:32
MENTOR’s HONOR
Neville said:
a most moving and fitting tribute Bobby .. I too, am truly sorry for your loss sir ..
I am no longer a jazz bagpipe virgin and my ears are both smiling 🎶🎶🎵🎶
September 1st, 2023 02:30
Neville said:
a most moving and fitting tribute Bobby .. I too, am truly sorry for your loss sir ..
I am no longer a jazz bagpipe virgin and my ears are both smiling 🎶🎶🎵🎶
September 1st, 2023 02:30
MENTOR’s HONOR
LIZ said:
Beautiful tribute! I\'m sorry for your loss. Keep the memories alive! ❤️
September 1st, 2023 00:42
LIZ said:
Beautiful tribute! I\'m sorry for your loss. Keep the memories alive! ❤️
September 1st, 2023 00:42
MENTOR’s HONOR
Bobby O said:
Thanks. Duke was only one of two known to play the Jazz bagpipes. He treated the leather so that it would hold sound and altered the mouthpiece so he could create unique sound. It’s on the posted video. Btw, he was also a master of the alto, soprano, and tenor sax. He taught me to listen to delineate style and artists. It was in credible.
August 31st, 2023 21:35
Bobby O said:
Thanks. Duke was only one of two known to play the Jazz bagpipes. He treated the leather so that it would hold sound and altered the mouthpiece so he could create unique sound. It’s on the posted video. Btw, he was also a master of the alto, soprano, and tenor sax. He taught me to listen to delineate style and artists. It was in credible.
August 31st, 2023 21:35
MENTOR’s HONOR
Parisab said:
Bagpipes, how cool! Sorry for your loss, I am sure that your words hit all the correct notes…
August 31st, 2023 21:26
Parisab said:
Bagpipes, how cool! Sorry for your loss, I am sure that your words hit all the correct notes…
August 31st, 2023 21:26
MICHAEL D
David Wakeling said:
A heart felt commentary.Some anger here.I\'m not sure who the person is but the message is clear.
August 20th, 2023 17:59
David Wakeling said:
A heart felt commentary.Some anger here.I\'m not sure who the person is but the message is clear.
August 20th, 2023 17:59
MICHAEL D
orchidee said:
I can only recall the guy vaguely, and forgot what he wrote about. Doh!
August 20th, 2023 04:42
orchidee said:
I can only recall the guy vaguely, and forgot what he wrote about. Doh!
August 20th, 2023 04:42
Blessed to Share
Michael D said:
How can you call yourself a poet. Your rambling bullshit sucks. Come on really. Get a rope and find a tree.
August 19th, 2023 18:31
Michael D said:
How can you call yourself a poet. Your rambling bullshit sucks. Come on really. Get a rope and find a tree.
August 19th, 2023 18:31
Blessed to Share
Parisab said:
Special in its steadfast and emotive way… I ought to fave its ‘I challenged the gods of serendipity by chasing truth unselfishly’
August 19th, 2023 12:12
Parisab said:
Special in its steadfast and emotive way… I ought to fave its ‘I challenged the gods of serendipity by chasing truth unselfishly’
August 19th, 2023 12:12
UNCERTAIN PLANNED
Michael D said:
I could eat a box of alphabits and shit a better poem.
August 19th, 2023 10:14
Michael D said:
I could eat a box of alphabits and shit a better poem.
August 19th, 2023 10:14
CONNECTION
Bobby O said:
This actually the middle piece in a trilogy that speaks to
1Getting rid poisonous people
2 identifying people to keep
3 celebrating who you now have
Correction. Connection Collection
This a link to the trilogy. I really appreciate the kindness of your comment. Thanks
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-168202
August 18th, 2023 11:04
Bobby O said:
This actually the middle piece in a trilogy that speaks to
1Getting rid poisonous people
2 identifying people to keep
3 celebrating who you now have
Correction. Connection Collection
This a link to the trilogy. I really appreciate the kindness of your comment. Thanks
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-168202
August 18th, 2023 11:04
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