Comments received on poems by Bobby O



Avoiding Cliche’
Parisab said:

Nothing about this is a cliche’ When one is so mindful to not be one! We influence the love but no ‘one’ is to blame…Glad to find your, wise yet cool words, as always…

October 8th, 2023 11:57

Avoiding Cliche’
Bobby O said:

Thank you much. Perhaps your words prompt to find me an open mic so as to make indelible your encouraging words. In the manner of Pee Wee Marquette the famous BIRDLAND Emcee
“Ladies and Gentlemen, we have something special for you today”

October 8th, 2023 03:22

Avoiding Cliche’
Neville said:


quite literally brilliant the narrative flowed like it had been rehearsed to perfection and was delivered without fault or falter the night of the gig ..

amazing image too sir O .. at first I thought the pug was sitting in the shadow of a wolf hound or the black dog himself .. Neville 🎷

October 8th, 2023 02:43

Avoiding Cliche’
Michaelpoet said:

This is a good piece

October 7th, 2023 07:19

Final Resort
Bobby O said:

That’s the way I prefer to think!!

October 7th, 2023 01:34

Final Resort
Neville said:


Little Miss Understood lived her life under a series of misapprehensions .. but only after a catastrophic mistake did she realise she fucked with him too often .. to her own ultimate personal misfortune .. 🎵🎵


October 7th, 2023 01:18

END OUT
Bobby O said:

That means a lot. I’m not able to capture as you do w succinct phrase, as my minds is sorta stuck on literal. So the fact you can find some interest really means very much. Also, I’m not as proliferate as some. But I plug away and am not afraid to discard so as to accomplish a certain standard. I’ll keep going and when you spread some joy this direction by digging back it gladdens me.

October 5th, 2023 03:22

END OUT
Neville said:



Strangely enough, I found this somewhat inspirational too ..

It also felt good checking out your play set .. Neville

October 5th, 2023 03:09

I LEFT
Bobby O said:

I had to laugh.

October 4th, 2023 04:44

I LEFT
Neville said:


UFFFF .. 2 things spring to mind .. firstly, I am darn sure I knew this dame either before or after you .. and a couple of times after she changed her outward appearance .. and secondly, if you ever get round to checking, you will almost certainly note the fact I have written about her many times over .. There is a third thing but being a gentleman, I am bound by the oath of silence .. 🎵🎶🎶 🎷

October 4th, 2023 03:20

I LEFT
Bobby O said:

I meant it to be Triumphant.
I fucking left and now she’s with some maniac and I’m laughing. It would be Sad if I had stayed

October 2nd, 2023 17:26

I LEFT
Parisab said:

This cool “cat” flew over the moon and not a minute too soon! I don’t trust people who tear up good poetry. C\'est vulgaire!

October 1st, 2023 01:37

I LEFT
David Wakeling said:

Women ya can\'t live with them and ya can\'t kill \'em.Never mind at least you got your talent bro.Great but sad poem

September 30th, 2023 15:21

FOLLOW THE SMILE QUICK ROAD
sorenbarrett said:

So true Bobby self respect and self love come before love or respect for others and yes the power is in you all along. A very important message.

September 28th, 2023 05:16

FOLLOW THE SMILE QUICK ROAD
peto said:

Bobby
You done it again boss
No better place to start than the mirror
You see it there
You see it everywhere

September 25th, 2023 12:44

FOLLOW THE SMILE QUICK ROAD
Bobby O said:

When we played tag in grade school …

September 25th, 2023 04:22

FOLLOW THE SMILE QUICK ROAD
Lorenz said:

O yeah,
everybody get together
put your hands like this
and sing alone with the Jackson five ,
yeah !

September 25th, 2023 04:19

FOLLOW THE SMILE QUICK ROAD
Neville said:


you managed to cram more than just a handful of life\'s very important lessons into such a tiny space .. bravo Bobby O .. N


September 25th, 2023 01:59

FOLLOW THE SMILE QUICK ROAD
David Wakeling said:

This is incredible.So much wisdom here.Sadly I\'m too dumb to understand it all but I will give it a second try.Amazing

September 24th, 2023 21:52

FOLLOW THE SMILE QUICK ROAD
Introverted Sage said:

Wise words
great write!

September 24th, 2023 20:25

FOLLOW THE SMILE QUICK ROAD
Bobby O said:

I agree. I’m thinking this might fall into the general common sense category, sorta like “look both ways before crossing the street”
Far be from me to advise most of my tales tell of barely surviving.

September 24th, 2023 19:53

FOLLOW THE SMILE QUICK ROAD
Bobby O said:

I agree. I’m thinking this might fall into the general common sense category, sorta like “look both ways before crossing the street”
Far be from me to advise most of my tales tell of barely surviving.

September 24th, 2023 19:52

FOLLOW THE SMILE QUICK ROAD
Doggerel Dave said:

Not normally keen on on offerings of advice in poetic form here.
But there\'s lotsa wisdom there......

September 24th, 2023 19:39

FOLLOW THE SMILE QUICK ROAD
Parisab said:

Finding the truth in connection within and a gentle attachment to the one you adore! So sweet is higher love…

September 24th, 2023 19:32

FOLLOW THE SMILE QUICK ROAD
vividvoid14 said:

haha ofc you posted it on your page

September 24th, 2023 17:43

LIFE
vividvoid14 said:

right on!
amazing poem

September 24th, 2023 17:33

LIFE
Neville said:


you are a braver man than me sir .. much braver .. 🎵🎶👍

September 24th, 2023 11:01

MIX NOT BUSINESS AND FUN
Bobby O said:

Men are such j@@offs so many times over.

September 23rd, 2023 17:23

MIX NOT BUSINESS AND FUN
Parisab said:

How could one resist, pleasure or business, both would become tales to tell, from the likes of her-side note, I saw a very bad movie of her the other night and thought that her talent is definitely underutilized because the “movie business” only saw her as a piece of as$

September 23rd, 2023 17:04

MIX NOT BUSINESS AND FUN
jarcher54 said:

Oh wow... the parting image is so poignant. A lovely synecdoche... that last whiff of perfume, that last time being in her company. Oh and thanks for the photo-- it kind of explains a lot!

September 23rd, 2023 13:32



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