Comments received on poems by Bobby O



SOX FANS SHOULD HIDE
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent. I\'m a baseball fan from way back, even worked at turner field and took in many braves games in 2000. You gave me a hunger for the boys of summer, fantastic job.

October 15th, 2023 00:46

Thelonius Reborn As the Dee Oh Double G
Bobby O said:

Two taps on my heart.

October 14th, 2023 01:14

Thelonius Reborn As the Dee Oh Double G
Thomas W Case said:

This is a true work of art. From the jazz flow to the juxtaposition of artists. It is fantastic. Brilliant work.

October 14th, 2023 00:39

MIX NOT BUSINESS AND FUN
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work

October 14th, 2023 00:25

LIFE
Bobby O said:

Very cool words. Appreciate how you jump in and lend support. That shows a good heart

October 13th, 2023 20:11

LIFE
Thomas W Case said:

Full of emotion. Well crafted.

October 13th, 2023 19:45

JAZZ IS LIFE ( updated version)
Parisab said:

Almost prophetic, so there is hope since we have jazz-This was unintended melody -I hope that you had a reading or an open mic…

October 13th, 2023 02:55

CROOKED EYES
Thomas W Case said:

Great job.

October 13th, 2023 02:35

JAZZ IS LIFE ( updated version)
Thomas W Case said:

Yes, just like a Coltrane riff...very well crafted.

October 13th, 2023 01:37

JAZZ IS LIFE ( updated version)
peto said:

Your passion is felt Bobby
A great read with some classics mentioned
A jazz battler
Quite the combination
Many strings to a talented bow

October 12th, 2023 14:39

JAZZ IS LIFE ( updated version)
Goldfinch60 said:

Jaz certainly is life Bobby, I have been listening to it for over seventy years.

Andy

October 12th, 2023 01:21

JAZZ IS LIFE ( updated version)
Bobby O said:

I’m trying to memorize and work on the cadence and pauses in time for an open mic I’m gonna attend next Tuesday. Hopefully I’ll be able to get it in video. Good or bad I’ll send you a copy. I’m hopeful I stick to my plan and practice a lot this week.

October 11th, 2023 17:01

JAZZ IS LIFE ( updated version)
LIZ said:

The title says it all! And I enjoyed the rhymn! 💫

October 11th, 2023 16:26

Thelonius Reborn As the Dee Oh Double G
Bobby O said:

It’s cuz just like King Kong, you got it going on.
Thank you for your kind words.

October 11th, 2023 15:50

JAZZ IS LIFE ( updated version)
Bobby O said:

Wow! You hit on exactly what I hoped to reach. That means a real lot and I’m grateful. Now I have to memorize it so I can deliver smooth and with its intended cadence. Thanks much.

October 11th, 2023 14:16

JAZZ IS LIFE ( updated version)
David Wakeling said:

I have to agree here.This made me revisit the Jazz greats.There should be heard out there.It flows like a Jazz melody.Well done

October 11th, 2023 13:42

Avoiding Cliche’
Parisab said:

Nothing about this is a cliche’ When one is so mindful to not be one! We influence the love but no ‘one’ is to blame…Glad to find your, wise yet cool words, as always…

October 8th, 2023 11:57

Avoiding Cliche’
Bobby O said:

Thank you much. Perhaps your words prompt to find me an open mic so as to make indelible your encouraging words. In the manner of Pee Wee Marquette the famous BIRDLAND Emcee
“Ladies and Gentlemen, we have something special for you today”

October 8th, 2023 03:22

Avoiding Cliche’
Neville said:


quite literally brilliant the narrative flowed like it had been rehearsed to perfection and was delivered without fault or falter the night of the gig ..

amazing image too sir O .. at first I thought the pug was sitting in the shadow of a wolf hound or the black dog himself .. Neville 🎷

October 8th, 2023 02:43

Avoiding Cliche’
Michaelpoet said:

This is a good piece

October 7th, 2023 07:19

Final Resort
Bobby O said:

That’s the way I prefer to think!!

October 7th, 2023 01:34

Final Resort
Neville said:


Little Miss Understood lived her life under a series of misapprehensions .. but only after a catastrophic mistake did she realise she fucked with him too often .. to her own ultimate personal misfortune .. 🎵🎵


October 7th, 2023 01:18

END OUT
Bobby O said:

That means a lot. I’m not able to capture as you do w succinct phrase, as my minds is sorta stuck on literal. So the fact you can find some interest really means very much. Also, I’m not as proliferate as some. But I plug away and am not afraid to discard so as to accomplish a certain standard. I’ll keep going and when you spread some joy this direction by digging back it gladdens me.

October 5th, 2023 03:22

END OUT
Neville said:



Strangely enough, I found this somewhat inspirational too ..

It also felt good checking out your play set .. Neville

October 5th, 2023 03:09

I LEFT
Bobby O said:

I had to laugh.

October 4th, 2023 04:44

I LEFT
Neville said:


UFFFF .. 2 things spring to mind .. firstly, I am darn sure I knew this dame either before or after you .. and a couple of times after she changed her outward appearance .. and secondly, if you ever get round to checking, you will almost certainly note the fact I have written about her many times over .. There is a third thing but being a gentleman, I am bound by the oath of silence .. 🎵🎶🎶 🎷

October 4th, 2023 03:20

I LEFT
Bobby O said:

I meant it to be Triumphant.
I fucking left and now she’s with some maniac and I’m laughing. It would be Sad if I had stayed

October 2nd, 2023 17:26

I LEFT
Parisab said:

This cool “cat” flew over the moon and not a minute too soon! I don’t trust people who tear up good poetry. C\'est vulgaire!

October 1st, 2023 01:37

I LEFT
David Wakeling said:

Women ya can\'t live with them and ya can\'t kill \'em.Never mind at least you got your talent bro.Great but sad poem

September 30th, 2023 15:21

FOLLOW THE SMILE QUICK ROAD
sorenbarrett said:

So true Bobby self respect and self love come before love or respect for others and yes the power is in you all along. A very important message.

September 28th, 2023 05:16



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