Comments received on poems by Bobby O
A HEART ALIVE
Thad Wilk said:
An outstanding poem
and nice advice! 🙏
I so enjoyed
I read it twice! 🏆
Thanks for sharing,
great read my friend!! 👏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 20th, 2024 21:44
Thad Wilk said:
An outstanding poem
and nice advice! 🙏
I so enjoyed
I read it twice! 🏆
Thanks for sharing,
great read my friend!! 👏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 20th, 2024 21:44
Thelonius Reborn As the Dee Oh Double G
Cheeky Missy said:
Dat was downright fun! First I listened to you, then read your lines in the dead silence as if checking your work, and that was too fun. Thank you very much! Delightfully rendered with excellent humor and a very subtle poignancy, not to mention superb imagery. Thank you again!
October 20th, 2024 06:34
Cheeky Missy said:
Dat was downright fun! First I listened to you, then read your lines in the dead silence as if checking your work, and that was too fun. Thank you very much! Delightfully rendered with excellent humor and a very subtle poignancy, not to mention superb imagery. Thank you again!
October 20th, 2024 06:34
TO RESCUE WITH VALOR
sorenbarrett said:
Bobby I like this poem and its message. A good poem to me does one of two things and hopefully both. It strikes an emotional chord or it opens a new life changing perspective. This one certainly has done the first the second yet to be seen. This speaks to the loyalty of a friendship that is more than most want to give. Today\'s cardboard friendships are made of flimsier stuff. Well writen and composed (to risk awkward, to go onward) love how these were left in atypical grammer it emphasized the point. The next portion speaks to many qualities that a friend possess\' and the rarity of such. A beautiful poem Bobby I don\'t fav many but this one is
October 20th, 2024 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
Bobby I like this poem and its message. A good poem to me does one of two things and hopefully both. It strikes an emotional chord or it opens a new life changing perspective. This one certainly has done the first the second yet to be seen. This speaks to the loyalty of a friendship that is more than most want to give. Today\'s cardboard friendships are made of flimsier stuff. Well writen and composed (to risk awkward, to go onward) love how these were left in atypical grammer it emphasized the point. The next portion speaks to many qualities that a friend possess\' and the rarity of such. A beautiful poem Bobby I don\'t fav many but this one is
October 20th, 2024 05:28
TO RESCUE WITH VALOR
Neville said:
True friendship is a guardian knot that angel hands have tied .. I forget most of the rest .. but I get your drift and it seemed to fit .. so there and now I\'m gonna hide
October 20th, 2024 03:06
Neville said:
True friendship is a guardian knot that angel hands have tied .. I forget most of the rest .. but I get your drift and it seemed to fit .. so there and now I\'m gonna hide
October 20th, 2024 03:06
TO RESCUE WITH VALOR
arqios said:
Loyalty is an essential element to any good friendship!
October 20th, 2024 01:31
arqios said:
Loyalty is an essential element to any good friendship!
October 20th, 2024 01:31
SOLAR POWER
Thad Wilk said:
An uplifting, refreshing,
insightful and
captivating write!! ✍️
Mesmerizing imagery
and a treat to recite!! 💯
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 19th, 2024 20:24
Thad Wilk said:
An uplifting, refreshing,
insightful and
captivating write!! ✍️
Mesmerizing imagery
and a treat to recite!! 💯
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 19th, 2024 20:24
SPINNING CONCLUSION
Cheeky Missy said:
Taught poetry is to be read aloud, and your mentioning or alluding to apparently reading this at an open mic event, I just did so: as long as you can relax and read it freely, it\'ll rock like it does now. Rollicking along like a ramble or a happy jaunt, rhyming to effect like a river bubbling through, it\'s beautiful and rendered sweetly with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy as should be, not to mention owning a delightfully subtle sense of humor. Thank you very much for sharing!
October 19th, 2024 17:19
Cheeky Missy said:
Taught poetry is to be read aloud, and your mentioning or alluding to apparently reading this at an open mic event, I just did so: as long as you can relax and read it freely, it\'ll rock like it does now. Rollicking along like a ramble or a happy jaunt, rhyming to effect like a river bubbling through, it\'s beautiful and rendered sweetly with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy as should be, not to mention owning a delightfully subtle sense of humor. Thank you very much for sharing!
October 19th, 2024 17:19
MR. WAKELING
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow, I never. Marvelissimo. How capably you\'ve woven this pretty little tapestry in honor of Mr Wakeling, including so many ere him that I\'m left nigh speechless. Very lovely and beautifully rendered. Thank you so very much for sharing.
October 19th, 2024 16:05
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow, I never. Marvelissimo. How capably you\'ve woven this pretty little tapestry in honor of Mr Wakeling, including so many ere him that I\'m left nigh speechless. Very lovely and beautifully rendered. Thank you so very much for sharing.
October 19th, 2024 16:05
SPINNING CONCLUSION
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
Awesomazing poem
almost like a song! 🎵 🎶 🎵 🎶
Great rhyme and flow
made me wanna sing along! 👍
Terrific presentation!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 18th, 2024 16:26
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
Awesomazing poem
almost like a song! 🎵 🎶 🎵 🎶
Great rhyme and flow
made me wanna sing along! 👍
Terrific presentation!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 18th, 2024 16:26
SPINNING CONCLUSION
NafisaSB said:
verse or prose - whatever it is, the effect is delightful
October 17th, 2024 06:29
NafisaSB said:
verse or prose - whatever it is, the effect is delightful
October 17th, 2024 06:29
SPINNING CONCLUSION
Neville said:
You win some, you loose some .. or should that be You winsome, you loathsome ..
October 17th, 2024 03:29
Neville said:
You win some, you loose some .. or should that be You winsome, you loathsome ..
October 17th, 2024 03:29
SPINNING CONCLUSION
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent. It has a jazz feel to it.
October 16th, 2024 09:41
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent. It has a jazz feel to it.
October 16th, 2024 09:41
SPINNING CONCLUSION
arqios said:
There’s always that slightest bit of a shift when jazz riffs hit the air!
October 16th, 2024 06:58
arqios said:
There’s always that slightest bit of a shift when jazz riffs hit the air!
October 16th, 2024 06:58
SPINNING CONCLUSION
David Wakeling said:
Great story with a hopeful ending. Everything goes better with a little Jazz.
October 16th, 2024 06:06
David Wakeling said:
Great story with a hopeful ending. Everything goes better with a little Jazz.
October 16th, 2024 06:06
A HEART ALIVE
sorenbarrett said:
Maintanence, an oil change, and tune up all help extend the milage. A glass of wine or two is the fun part.
October 16th, 2024 05:20
sorenbarrett said:
Maintanence, an oil change, and tune up all help extend the milage. A glass of wine or two is the fun part.
October 16th, 2024 05:20
SPINNING CONCLUSION
rebellion_in_sanity said:
WOW! I wish I could write something like \"Smirking now and not wondering how this before never empty seat shouts intimacy subtracted and belated\". Loved it.
October 16th, 2024 05:05
rebellion_in_sanity said:
WOW! I wish I could write something like \"Smirking now and not wondering how this before never empty seat shouts intimacy subtracted and belated\". Loved it.
October 16th, 2024 05:05
SPINNING CONCLUSION
peet said:
Nice lyrics there. Ever thought of turning it into a song ? If not, give it a try.
October 15th, 2024 13:21
peet said:
Nice lyrics there. Ever thought of turning it into a song ? If not, give it a try.
October 15th, 2024 13:21
AND THE WORLD WILL BE BETTER FOR THIS
sorenbarrett said:
I remember that TV program Bobby. The poem harks back to when honor, fidelity to another, courage and standing up for something was valued and expected. Nicely stated my friend
September 24th, 2024 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
I remember that TV program Bobby. The poem harks back to when honor, fidelity to another, courage and standing up for something was valued and expected. Nicely stated my friend
September 24th, 2024 05:16
SOLAR POWER
Parisab said:
Beautiful word play, this poem is an elevated form of your expression—bravo, Bobby-I enjoy how you love women whole heartedly …
September 23rd, 2024 01:08
Parisab said:
Beautiful word play, this poem is an elevated form of your expression—bravo, Bobby-I enjoy how you love women whole heartedly …
September 23rd, 2024 01:08
SOLAR POWER
sorenbarrett said:
Sun worshiper Bobby? This was a fun read and as for me I love the sun and am a worshiper.
September 21st, 2024 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Sun worshiper Bobby? This was a fun read and as for me I love the sun and am a worshiper.
September 21st, 2024 04:40
SOLAR POWER
Neville said:
I just couldn\'t stop the smile forming as I was reading .. ever so slow .. I could picture every step, swish n swirl .. and all in glorious technicolour & all round sound .. 🎵🎵🎶🎵🎶🎶😎👍
September 21st, 2024 03:56
Neville said:
I just couldn\'t stop the smile forming as I was reading .. ever so slow .. I could picture every step, swish n swirl .. and all in glorious technicolour & all round sound .. 🎵🎵🎶🎵🎶🎶😎👍
September 21st, 2024 03:56
DICHOTOMY
sorenbarrett said:
The shadow of wisdom tied in the knot of words. I guess being tongue tied is one method of indecision although it may not be very strategic. A most fun read
September 18th, 2024 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
The shadow of wisdom tied in the knot of words. I guess being tongue tied is one method of indecision although it may not be very strategic. A most fun read
September 18th, 2024 04:26
DICHOTOMY
Dan Williams said:
I think everybody fears lonely. I sure do. Nice work.
September 18th, 2024 00:44
Dan Williams said:
I think everybody fears lonely. I sure do. Nice work.
September 18th, 2024 00:44
DICHOTOMY
Neville said:
its a risk that not everyone is prepared to take .. I dunno why because I think I am a risk taker .. but then, maybe I do, because I tend to side with the underdog in the hope of being a catalyst for change .. even tho I know the opposing forces are too great ..
September 17th, 2024 01:14
Neville said:
its a risk that not everyone is prepared to take .. I dunno why because I think I am a risk taker .. but then, maybe I do, because I tend to side with the underdog in the hope of being a catalyst for change .. even tho I know the opposing forces are too great ..
September 17th, 2024 01:14
DICHOTOMY
Teddy.15 said:
This truly made me laugh and may I say it\'s which ever plan works for you, this one would also work for me, it\'s hilarious 🌹🤣
September 16th, 2024 10:15
Teddy.15 said:
This truly made me laugh and may I say it\'s which ever plan works for you, this one would also work for me, it\'s hilarious 🌹🤣
September 16th, 2024 10:15
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