Comments received on poems by Bobby O
SO MANY THOUGHT ME LUCKY?
Bobby O said:
Don’t trust that AI. I am the narrator and I facetiously referred to a concubine as it the last thing I’d agree to as “I” would NEVER SELL my soul. Basically the poem is this , some Prima Donna rich bitch wanted done guy to lick her shoes and I said fuck off. Quit that AI bullshot as it is very good creating content but really terrible at understanding the nuance of an already created poem.
GRADE FOR AI - F , cuz it missed every point.
GRADE FOR VIV.,-L for limping
January 3rd, 2024 19:07
Bobby O said:
Don’t trust that AI. I am the narrator and I facetiously referred to a concubine as it the last thing I’d agree to as “I” would NEVER SELL my soul. Basically the poem is this , some Prima Donna rich bitch wanted done guy to lick her shoes and I said fuck off. Quit that AI bullshot as it is very good creating content but really terrible at understanding the nuance of an already created poem.
GRADE FOR AI - F , cuz it missed every point.
GRADE FOR VIV.,-L for limping
January 3rd, 2024 19:07
SO MANY THOUGHT ME LUCKY?
vividvoid14 said:
The poem then introduces the concept of \"crux\" and \"illusion,\" suggesting that true understanding requires facing harsh truths, rather than simply worshiping a surface-level appearance. The narrator defines herself as an actor, acknowledging the role she plays in her own life, and expresses gratitude for this opportunity.
The poem concludes by comparing you to a concubine, someone who offers their loyalty and service in exchange for privilege and luxury. The narrator is willing to sell her soul, acknowledging the price she pays to maintain her position, but also implies that she does so willingly and without remorse.
January 3rd, 2024 17:53
vividvoid14 said:
The poem then introduces the concept of \"crux\" and \"illusion,\" suggesting that true understanding requires facing harsh truths, rather than simply worshiping a surface-level appearance. The narrator defines herself as an actor, acknowledging the role she plays in her own life, and expresses gratitude for this opportunity.
The poem concludes by comparing you to a concubine, someone who offers their loyalty and service in exchange for privilege and luxury. The narrator is willing to sell her soul, acknowledging the price she pays to maintain her position, but also implies that she does so willingly and without remorse.
January 3rd, 2024 17:53
SO MANY THOUGHT ME LUCKY?
Introverted Sage said:
Deceit is a learned trait.. If only everyone wasn\'t so afraid to be themselves.
Seems like that \'luck\' got you out of there 🥂
January 2nd, 2024 12:17
Introverted Sage said:
Deceit is a learned trait.. If only everyone wasn\'t so afraid to be themselves.
Seems like that \'luck\' got you out of there 🥂
January 2nd, 2024 12:17
SO MANY THOUGHT ME LUCKY?
Neville said:
it is perfectly clear that she was something else .. perfect indeed 🎵🎵🎶🎵🎶🎶.. & now I understand precisely what you mean .. John Cleese indeed .. Neville
January 2nd, 2024 04:58
Neville said:
it is perfectly clear that she was something else .. perfect indeed 🎵🎵🎶🎵🎶🎶.. & now I understand precisely what you mean .. John Cleese indeed .. Neville
January 2nd, 2024 04:58
I’LL JUST DISAPPEAR
Bobby O said:
The very fact that I could be affected deeply and twist a bit w raw emotional pain is the proof of concept that the real and romantic is very much alive and the
Willingness to wander hurt keeps my exotic fairytales alive and childlike. Instead of hardened senses I relish the genuine bravery that nourished and brass ring of hope the will thrill when it is that I grasp. A reward authentically earned.
December 27th, 2023 23:46
Bobby O said:
The very fact that I could be affected deeply and twist a bit w raw emotional pain is the proof of concept that the real and romantic is very much alive and the
Willingness to wander hurt keeps my exotic fairytales alive and childlike. Instead of hardened senses I relish the genuine bravery that nourished and brass ring of hope the will thrill when it is that I grasp. A reward authentically earned.
December 27th, 2023 23:46
I’LL JUST DISAPPEAR
Parisab said:
It must be winter over there! There will be fire (and hell to pay) in the south side though! I got you homey, from the West Side! But don’t ever change your hopeful romantic side!
December 27th, 2023 23:33
Parisab said:
It must be winter over there! There will be fire (and hell to pay) in the south side though! I got you homey, from the West Side! But don’t ever change your hopeful romantic side!
December 27th, 2023 23:33
I’LL JUST DISAPPEAR
Bobby O said:
Thanks ,Hard to keep up with the freight Trane that you are though.
December 27th, 2023 16:53
Bobby O said:
Thanks ,Hard to keep up with the freight Trane that you are though.
December 27th, 2023 16:53
I’LL JUST DISAPPEAR
Introverted Sage said:
Creative ways used to dissipate anger or deep feelings are always so much more appreciated.. imo.
The feelings of the creator are more easily felt, understood and related to.(even if only parts are shared)
Good one🪶
December 27th, 2023 13:38
Introverted Sage said:
Creative ways used to dissipate anger or deep feelings are always so much more appreciated.. imo.
The feelings of the creator are more easily felt, understood and related to.(even if only parts are shared)
Good one🪶
December 27th, 2023 13:38
I’LL JUST DISAPPEAR
Neville said:
Ouch\' that must have hurt an awful lot .. I could feel it from here ..
December 27th, 2023 06:26
Neville said:
Ouch\' that must have hurt an awful lot .. I could feel it from here ..
December 27th, 2023 06:26
I’LL JUST DISAPPEAR
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is certainly disturbing.I\'m not sure of the details but its sure has it all anger and hopelessness.
December 27th, 2023 04:15
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is certainly disturbing.I\'m not sure of the details but its sure has it all anger and hopelessness.
December 27th, 2023 04:15
I’LL JUST DISAPPEAR
Bobby O said:
So, I’ve been singing Barbra Streisand songs all day , “memories light the corners of my mind, misty water colored memories ..”
“People, people who need people “
“You’re turn at bat sir, I guess I didn’t make it, Hat sir, at least I didn’t fake it”
My dog has been hiding with his head buried under the afghan. Who knew he disliked Barbra Streisand THAT much??
December 27th, 2023 02:59
Bobby O said:
So, I’ve been singing Barbra Streisand songs all day , “memories light the corners of my mind, misty water colored memories ..”
“People, people who need people “
“You’re turn at bat sir, I guess I didn’t make it, Hat sir, at least I didn’t fake it”
My dog has been hiding with his head buried under the afghan. Who knew he disliked Barbra Streisand THAT much??
December 27th, 2023 02:59
I’LL JUST DISAPPEAR
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna do 22 stanzas of a poem, then sing them all, though no one can bear my singing! heehee.
And - where ya gone, disappeared to? lol.
December 27th, 2023 02:51
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna do 22 stanzas of a poem, then sing them all, though no one can bear my singing! heehee.
And - where ya gone, disappeared to? lol.
December 27th, 2023 02:51
A LOOK AT FOREVER
Neville said:
with much respect to both of you .. and muchly admired .. Neville
December 16th, 2023 07:11
Neville said:
with much respect to both of you .. and muchly admired .. Neville
December 16th, 2023 07:11
MR. WAKELING
David Wakeling said:
Awwe shucks I\'m just a guy with a dream.Thank you so much for this
December 14th, 2023 13:09
David Wakeling said:
Awwe shucks I\'m just a guy with a dream.Thank you so much for this
December 14th, 2023 13:09
EXITING
David Wakeling said:
Parting is such sweet sorrow..There is a new day dawning
December 14th, 2023 04:13
David Wakeling said:
Parting is such sweet sorrow..There is a new day dawning
December 14th, 2023 04:13
EXITING
orchidee said:
Was you laying on the floor when you took that pic?! A sideways view of a hat defying gravity. lol.
December 14th, 2023 02:49
orchidee said:
Was you laying on the floor when you took that pic?! A sideways view of a hat defying gravity. lol.
December 14th, 2023 02:49
EXITING
Cassie58 said:
Calling it a day. Life is too short to waste it on those who do not appreciate you. I would say, a message well penned.
December 13th, 2023 23:30
Cassie58 said:
Calling it a day. Life is too short to waste it on those who do not appreciate you. I would say, a message well penned.
December 13th, 2023 23:30
EXITING
Bobby O said:
Very kind. You’ve been on a roll. Finished the whole book. Strong strong and very strong. Props my friend.
December 13th, 2023 21:17
Bobby O said:
Very kind. You’ve been on a roll. Finished the whole book. Strong strong and very strong. Props my friend.
December 13th, 2023 21:17
PRAYER OF THANKS
Parisab said:
Visited her again, so thanks…
I am obsessed by revisiting David Bowie and each time I find another form of inspiration for his theatrical and poetic approach-of course I have to keep listening to “the Man Who Sold the World” as my life’s cover (for sound and not necessarily lyrics.) Those guitar chords are still out of this world and I beg my husband and son to play them over and over again-see if you like to listen soon-best
December 1st, 2023 11:36
Parisab said:
Visited her again, so thanks…
I am obsessed by revisiting David Bowie and each time I find another form of inspiration for his theatrical and poetic approach-of course I have to keep listening to “the Man Who Sold the World” as my life’s cover (for sound and not necessarily lyrics.) Those guitar chords are still out of this world and I beg my husband and son to play them over and over again-see if you like to listen soon-best
December 1st, 2023 11:36
PRAYER OF THANKS
Parisab said:
Graceful a d refined words, fit for the occasion!
November 26th, 2023 22:44
Parisab said:
Graceful a d refined words, fit for the occasion!
November 26th, 2023 22:44
PRAYER OF THANKS
orchidee said:
I would use it, but we gotta wait another month for turkey in the UK!
November 21st, 2023 06:13
orchidee said:
I would use it, but we gotta wait another month for turkey in the UK!
November 21st, 2023 06:13
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