Comments received on poems by Bobby O
GENDER ROTATION
Neville said:
the moment I opened the page
I had an increasingly intense feeling of deja vu waft over me ..
try telling me I\'ve not been here before
January 17th, 2024 06:28
Neville said:
the moment I opened the page
I had an increasingly intense feeling of deja vu waft over me ..
try telling me I\'ve not been here before
January 17th, 2024 06:28
GENDER ROTATION
orchidee said:
Dunno about all this gender stuff, but I\'m half human, half guinea pig - see my pic?! lol.
January 14th, 2024 03:01
orchidee said:
Dunno about all this gender stuff, but I\'m half human, half guinea pig - see my pic?! lol.
January 14th, 2024 03:01
SO MANY THOUGHT ME LUCKY?
š¤s.zaynab.kamoonpuriš·š¦š½ said:
A clever brilliant poem creatively expressed wow! Kudos!!
Plz plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
January 8th, 2024 01:27
š¤s.zaynab.kamoonpuriš·š¦š½ said:
A clever brilliant poem creatively expressed wow! Kudos!!
Plz plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
January 8th, 2024 01:27
SO MANY THOUGHT ME LUCKY?
Bobby O said:
Donāt trust that AI. I am the narrator and I facetiously referred to a concubine as it the last thing Iād agree to as āIā would NEVER SELL my soul. Basically the poem is this , some Prima Donna rich bitch wanted done guy to lick her shoes and I said fuck off. Quit that AI bullshot as it is very good creating content but really terrible at understanding the nuance of an already created poem.
GRADE FOR AI - F , cuz it missed every point.
GRADE FOR VIV.,-L for limping
January 3rd, 2024 19:07
Bobby O said:
Donāt trust that AI. I am the narrator and I facetiously referred to a concubine as it the last thing Iād agree to as āIā would NEVER SELL my soul. Basically the poem is this , some Prima Donna rich bitch wanted done guy to lick her shoes and I said fuck off. Quit that AI bullshot as it is very good creating content but really terrible at understanding the nuance of an already created poem.
GRADE FOR AI - F , cuz it missed every point.
GRADE FOR VIV.,-L for limping
January 3rd, 2024 19:07
SO MANY THOUGHT ME LUCKY?
vividvoid14 said:
The poem then introduces the concept of \"crux\" and \"illusion,\" suggesting that true understanding requires facing harsh truths, rather than simply worshiping a surface-level appearance. The narrator defines herself as an actor, acknowledging the role she plays in her own life, and expresses gratitude for this opportunity.
The poem concludes by comparing you to a concubine, someone who offers their loyalty and service in exchange for privilege and luxury. The narrator is willing to sell her soul, acknowledging the price she pays to maintain her position, but also implies that she does so willingly and without remorse.
January 3rd, 2024 17:53
vividvoid14 said:
The poem then introduces the concept of \"crux\" and \"illusion,\" suggesting that true understanding requires facing harsh truths, rather than simply worshiping a surface-level appearance. The narrator defines herself as an actor, acknowledging the role she plays in her own life, and expresses gratitude for this opportunity.
The poem concludes by comparing you to a concubine, someone who offers their loyalty and service in exchange for privilege and luxury. The narrator is willing to sell her soul, acknowledging the price she pays to maintain her position, but also implies that she does so willingly and without remorse.
January 3rd, 2024 17:53
SO MANY THOUGHT ME LUCKY?
Introverted Sage said:
Deceit is a learned trait.. If only everyone wasn\'t so afraid to be themselves.
Seems like that \'luck\' got you out of there š„
January 2nd, 2024 12:17
Introverted Sage said:
Deceit is a learned trait.. If only everyone wasn\'t so afraid to be themselves.
Seems like that \'luck\' got you out of there š„
January 2nd, 2024 12:17
SO MANY THOUGHT ME LUCKY?
Neville said:
it is perfectly clear that she was something else .. perfect indeed šµšµš¶šµš¶š¶.. & now I understand precisely what you mean .. John Cleese indeed .. Neville
January 2nd, 2024 04:58
Neville said:
it is perfectly clear that she was something else .. perfect indeed šµšµš¶šµš¶š¶.. & now I understand precisely what you mean .. John Cleese indeed .. Neville
January 2nd, 2024 04:58
IāLL JUST DISAPPEAR
Bobby O said:
The very fact that I could be affected deeply and twist a bit w raw emotional pain is the proof of concept that the real and romantic is very much alive and the
Willingness to wander hurt keeps my exotic fairytales alive and childlike. Instead of hardened senses I relish the genuine bravery that nourished and brass ring of hope the will thrill when it is that I grasp. A reward authentically earned.
December 27th, 2023 23:46
Bobby O said:
The very fact that I could be affected deeply and twist a bit w raw emotional pain is the proof of concept that the real and romantic is very much alive and the
Willingness to wander hurt keeps my exotic fairytales alive and childlike. Instead of hardened senses I relish the genuine bravery that nourished and brass ring of hope the will thrill when it is that I grasp. A reward authentically earned.
December 27th, 2023 23:46
IāLL JUST DISAPPEAR
Parisab said:
It must be winter over there! There will be fire (and hell to pay) in the south side though! I got you homey, from the West Side! But donāt ever change your hopeful romantic side!
December 27th, 2023 23:33
Parisab said:
It must be winter over there! There will be fire (and hell to pay) in the south side though! I got you homey, from the West Side! But donāt ever change your hopeful romantic side!
December 27th, 2023 23:33
IāLL JUST DISAPPEAR
Bobby O said:
Thanks ,Hard to keep up with the freight Trane that you are though.
December 27th, 2023 16:53
Bobby O said:
Thanks ,Hard to keep up with the freight Trane that you are though.
December 27th, 2023 16:53
IāLL JUST DISAPPEAR
Introverted Sage said:
Creative ways used to dissipate anger or deep feelings are always so much more appreciated.. imo.
The feelings of the creator are more easily felt, understood and related to.(even if only parts are shared)
Good onešŖ¶
December 27th, 2023 13:38
Introverted Sage said:
Creative ways used to dissipate anger or deep feelings are always so much more appreciated.. imo.
The feelings of the creator are more easily felt, understood and related to.(even if only parts are shared)
Good onešŖ¶
December 27th, 2023 13:38
IāLL JUST DISAPPEAR
Neville said:
Ouch\' that must have hurt an awful lot .. I could feel it from here ..
December 27th, 2023 06:26
Neville said:
Ouch\' that must have hurt an awful lot .. I could feel it from here ..
December 27th, 2023 06:26
IāLL JUST DISAPPEAR
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is certainly disturbing.I\'m not sure of the details but its sure has it all anger and hopelessness.
December 27th, 2023 04:15
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is certainly disturbing.I\'m not sure of the details but its sure has it all anger and hopelessness.
December 27th, 2023 04:15
IāLL JUST DISAPPEAR
Bobby O said:
So, Iāve been singing Barbra Streisand songs all day , āmemories light the corners of my mind, misty water colored memories ..ā
āPeople, people who need people ā
āYouāre turn at bat sir, I guess I didnāt make it, Hat sir, at least I didnāt fake itā
My dog has been hiding with his head buried under the afghan. Who knew he disliked Barbra Streisand THAT much??
December 27th, 2023 02:59
Bobby O said:
So, Iāve been singing Barbra Streisand songs all day , āmemories light the corners of my mind, misty water colored memories ..ā
āPeople, people who need people ā
āYouāre turn at bat sir, I guess I didnāt make it, Hat sir, at least I didnāt fake itā
My dog has been hiding with his head buried under the afghan. Who knew he disliked Barbra Streisand THAT much??
December 27th, 2023 02:59
IāLL JUST DISAPPEAR
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna do 22 stanzas of a poem, then sing them all, though no one can bear my singing! heehee.
And - where ya gone, disappeared to? lol.
December 27th, 2023 02:51
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna do 22 stanzas of a poem, then sing them all, though no one can bear my singing! heehee.
And - where ya gone, disappeared to? lol.
December 27th, 2023 02:51
A LOOK AT FOREVER
Neville said:
with much respect to both of you .. and muchly admired .. Neville
December 16th, 2023 07:11
Neville said:
with much respect to both of you .. and muchly admired .. Neville
December 16th, 2023 07:11
MR. WAKELING
David Wakeling said:
Awwe shucks I\'m just a guy with a dream.Thank you so much for this
December 14th, 2023 13:09
David Wakeling said:
Awwe shucks I\'m just a guy with a dream.Thank you so much for this
December 14th, 2023 13:09
EXITING
David Wakeling said:
Parting is such sweet sorrow..There is a new day dawning
December 14th, 2023 04:13
David Wakeling said:
Parting is such sweet sorrow..There is a new day dawning
December 14th, 2023 04:13
EXITING
orchidee said:
Was you laying on the floor when you took that pic?! A sideways view of a hat defying gravity. lol.
December 14th, 2023 02:49
orchidee said:
Was you laying on the floor when you took that pic?! A sideways view of a hat defying gravity. lol.
December 14th, 2023 02:49
EXITING
Cassie58 said:
Calling it a day. Life is too short to waste it on those who do not appreciate you. I would say, a message well penned.
December 13th, 2023 23:30
Cassie58 said:
Calling it a day. Life is too short to waste it on those who do not appreciate you. I would say, a message well penned.
December 13th, 2023 23:30
EXITING
Bobby O said:
Very kind. Youāve been on a roll. Finished the whole book. Strong strong and very strong. Props my friend.
December 13th, 2023 21:17
Bobby O said:
Very kind. Youāve been on a roll. Finished the whole book. Strong strong and very strong. Props my friend.
December 13th, 2023 21:17
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