Comments received on poems by Bobby O
LIFE
Bobby O said:
Thank you for excellent insight. You jumped into my mind cuz that was exact !
September 23rd, 2023 13:30
Bobby O said:
Thank you for excellent insight. You jumped into my mind cuz that was exact !
September 23rd, 2023 13:30
LIFE
jarcher54 said:
The phrase \"trace my deep footsteps\" is a truly inspired line... many of us leave barely a trace... deep footprints indicate a life fully lived...
September 23rd, 2023 13:28
jarcher54 said:
The phrase \"trace my deep footsteps\" is a truly inspired line... many of us leave barely a trace... deep footprints indicate a life fully lived...
September 23rd, 2023 13:28
LIFE
Bobby O said:
You are way cool
Hope you also share thoughts on the one from yesterday? Mix not….
September 23rd, 2023 12:16
Bobby O said:
You are way cool
Hope you also share thoughts on the one from yesterday? Mix not….
September 23rd, 2023 12:16
LIFE
Parisab said:
Laborious but delicate in structure and deep in connection-great that you shared
September 23rd, 2023 11:26
Parisab said:
Laborious but delicate in structure and deep in connection-great that you shared
September 23rd, 2023 11:26
MIX NOT BUSINESS AND FUN
David Wakeling said:
Powerful verse here.A tough life lesson.Well done
September 23rd, 2023 06:58
David Wakeling said:
Powerful verse here.A tough life lesson.Well done
September 23rd, 2023 06:58
MIX NOT BUSINESS AND FUN
Bobby O said:
Thanks very much. She was fun for a minute. That photo above the poem is actually her.
September 23rd, 2023 03:59
Bobby O said:
Thanks very much. She was fun for a minute. That photo above the poem is actually her.
September 23rd, 2023 03:59
MIX NOT BUSINESS AND FUN
Doggerel Dave said:
Moral tale - powerful piece of advice........
That\'s.. (is.. was).. entertainment.
September 23rd, 2023 01:48
Doggerel Dave said:
Moral tale - powerful piece of advice........
That\'s.. (is.. was).. entertainment.
September 23rd, 2023 01:48
MIX NOT BUSINESS AND FUN
Neville said:
never learn anything by half ..
I sense both a compelling and constraining pleasure, but not maybe in equal measures and with a whole lot of intrigue thrown in .. a jolly good read old chap ... Neville
September 23rd, 2023 01:27
Neville said:
never learn anything by half ..
I sense both a compelling and constraining pleasure, but not maybe in equal measures and with a whole lot of intrigue thrown in .. a jolly good read old chap ... Neville
September 23rd, 2023 01:27
CRAZED and CONFUSED
Parisab said:
The barren desert must feelings so foreign from your side of Chicago-and those darn grains of sand, ouch, in the land escape of your words…wishing you well…
September 21st, 2023 23:04
Parisab said:
The barren desert must feelings so foreign from your side of Chicago-and those darn grains of sand, ouch, in the land escape of your words…wishing you well…
September 21st, 2023 23:04
CRAZED and CONFUSED
Neville said:
there are those that say the last cut is the deepest ..
but we all know that it\'s just the beginning, don\'t we .. a fine narrative that bites deep and leaves a sting behind it .. Neville
September 19th, 2023 05:44
Neville said:
there are those that say the last cut is the deepest ..
but we all know that it\'s just the beginning, don\'t we .. a fine narrative that bites deep and leaves a sting behind it .. Neville
September 19th, 2023 05:44
CRAZED and CONFUSED
Bobby O said:
It’s all made up. I just pretended that a woman dumped me as hard as thst is to believe it could happen???! And I don’t even know what a dromedary is?
September 19th, 2023 04:15
Bobby O said:
It’s all made up. I just pretended that a woman dumped me as hard as thst is to believe it could happen???! And I don’t even know what a dromedary is?
September 19th, 2023 04:15
CRAZED and CONFUSED
LIZ said:
Painful to read, but oh so raw. I think this one\'s my favorite from you, because it feels the most real. Mmmm not necessarily a waste of time. We always focus on the aftermath. What about the good times? But, what do I know!!! This is beautifully heartfelt!!! Glad you shared it!!!
September 19th, 2023 04:07
LIZ said:
Painful to read, but oh so raw. I think this one\'s my favorite from you, because it feels the most real. Mmmm not necessarily a waste of time. We always focus on the aftermath. What about the good times? But, what do I know!!! This is beautifully heartfelt!!! Glad you shared it!!!
September 19th, 2023 04:07
CRAZED and CONFUSED
David Wakeling said:
Some tough realisations here..I hope time will heal.
September 19th, 2023 03:20
David Wakeling said:
Some tough realisations here..I hope time will heal.
September 19th, 2023 03:20
SOX FANS SHOULD HIDE
MendedFences27 said:
Wow! !\'m impressed with your rapping skill. You have my sympathy, and I know how you feel, for I am a Sox fan, but of the Red persuasion. We too are now on a downward trend. Today\'s players and teams are all about the money.
Your rap shows what happens when a great team becomes lost due to insufficient funding. Maybe there should be a limit on salaries and expenditures. - Phil A.
September 18th, 2023 21:30
MendedFences27 said:
Wow! !\'m impressed with your rapping skill. You have my sympathy, and I know how you feel, for I am a Sox fan, but of the Red persuasion. We too are now on a downward trend. Today\'s players and teams are all about the money.
Your rap shows what happens when a great team becomes lost due to insufficient funding. Maybe there should be a limit on salaries and expenditures. - Phil A.
September 18th, 2023 21:30
SOX FANS SHOULD HIDE
Bobby O said:
No, I was at a party and some kids were freestyling Rappin’ and when it’s your turn they give you a subject matter and I asked to join in and cause I was talking bout BB earlier with a few of them that was my assigned subject. They didn’t even believe I could or would do it and one of them recorded me and the poem here is my exact freestyle. The kids were surprised, but it’s something I can do , mostly..
September 18th, 2023 04:13
Bobby O said:
No, I was at a party and some kids were freestyling Rappin’ and when it’s your turn they give you a subject matter and I asked to join in and cause I was talking bout BB earlier with a few of them that was my assigned subject. They didn’t even believe I could or would do it and one of them recorded me and the poem here is my exact freestyle. The kids were surprised, but it’s something I can do , mostly..
September 18th, 2023 04:13
SOX FANS SHOULD HIDE
Neville said:
I am a baseball virgin .. sorry if we are on about something else entirely ..
September 18th, 2023 03:52
Neville said:
I am a baseball virgin .. sorry if we are on about something else entirely ..
September 18th, 2023 03:52
SOX FANS SHOULD HIDE
Bobby O said:
The kids are always surprised that an old man can hold his own in that arena. It’s fun and I’m careful I don’t step up to those w monster talent. These guys weren’t ready
September 17th, 2023 23:29
Bobby O said:
The kids are always surprised that an old man can hold his own in that arena. It’s fun and I’m careful I don’t step up to those w monster talent. These guys weren’t ready
September 17th, 2023 23:29
FATED HERO FAKED
jarcher54 said:
I saw the courage before I read your comments.. bold and rough, rugged like Whitman, musical like Ginsburg. Carry on sir. A good one to re-read!
September 16th, 2023 01:57
jarcher54 said:
I saw the courage before I read your comments.. bold and rough, rugged like Whitman, musical like Ginsburg. Carry on sir. A good one to re-read!
September 16th, 2023 01:57
FATED HERO FAKED
Bobby O said:
I get used to patterns and am making efforts to try different approach. This was sorta new.
September 15th, 2023 16:23
Bobby O said:
I get used to patterns and am making efforts to try different approach. This was sorta new.
September 15th, 2023 16:23
FATED HERO FAKED
Parisab said:
So now you are ‘growing’ reflective on
Me! Your poems already had me on jazz and basketball and this one will keep me on my auditory trip even longer- Word
September 15th, 2023 15:59
Parisab said:
So now you are ‘growing’ reflective on
Me! Your poems already had me on jazz and basketball and this one will keep me on my auditory trip even longer- Word
September 15th, 2023 15:59
FATED HERO FAKED
Bobby O said:
A departure from accustomed style. Trying to be braver and not so dependent on constant rhyme. Appreciate the kind word. It means a lot. I’ve got some good examples of talent to stretch toward, yourself on top list.
September 15th, 2023 10:07
Bobby O said:
A departure from accustomed style. Trying to be braver and not so dependent on constant rhyme. Appreciate the kind word. It means a lot. I’ve got some good examples of talent to stretch toward, yourself on top list.
September 15th, 2023 10:07
FATED HERO FAKED
peto said:
Great read Bobby
Sounds really personal rather than historical
Like a coward dies a thousand deaths
And you savored every one
Special write
September 15th, 2023 10:02
peto said:
Great read Bobby
Sounds really personal rather than historical
Like a coward dies a thousand deaths
And you savored every one
Special write
September 15th, 2023 10:02
MONK and MY AUNT
Neville said:
I dig single malt as it comes .. and have on occasion, dug too deep .. this is so cool, but am sorry for your loss Bobby O .. Neville
September 15th, 2023 02:49
Neville said:
I dig single malt as it comes .. and have on occasion, dug too deep .. this is so cool, but am sorry for your loss Bobby O .. Neville
September 15th, 2023 02:49
MONK and MY AUNT
David Wakeling said:
The trifecta: Aunt Carol,he and Thelonius Monk.This inspired me to listen to some Jazz again.Well done
September 14th, 2023 21:35
David Wakeling said:
The trifecta: Aunt Carol,he and Thelonius Monk.This inspired me to listen to some Jazz again.Well done
September 14th, 2023 21:35
MONK and MY AUNT
Bobby O said:
She has that touch doesn’t she. Thanks for the read and grace
September 14th, 2023 15:02
Bobby O said:
She has that touch doesn’t she. Thanks for the read and grace
September 14th, 2023 15:02
MONK and MY AUNT
peto said:
Such a unique delivery it captivates the reader
Think parisab said it all
Great read
September 14th, 2023 14:58
peto said:
Such a unique delivery it captivates the reader
Think parisab said it all
Great read
September 14th, 2023 14:58
MONK and MY AUNT
Parisab said:
The hyper focus on being present among the spirit of jazz in the ‘hazed fog’ and the ‘pervasive funk’ can bring nothing but the mastery of jazz consumption, as it is meant to be-I’m sure the jazz heroes may have hoped for exactly this type of intimacy and commitment -thanks for the write as always
September 14th, 2023 13:55
Parisab said:
The hyper focus on being present among the spirit of jazz in the ‘hazed fog’ and the ‘pervasive funk’ can bring nothing but the mastery of jazz consumption, as it is meant to be-I’m sure the jazz heroes may have hoped for exactly this type of intimacy and commitment -thanks for the write as always
September 14th, 2023 13:55
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