Comments received on poems by Bobby O



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peto said:

Bobby
You done it again boss
No better place to start than the mirror
You see it there
You see it everywhere

September 25th, 2023 12:44

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Bobby O said:

When we played tag in grade school …

September 25th, 2023 04:22

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Lorenz said:

O yeah,
everybody get together
put your hands like this
and sing alone with the Jackson five ,
yeah !

September 25th, 2023 04:19

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Neville said:


you managed to cram more than just a handful of life\'s very important lessons into such a tiny space .. bravo Bobby O .. N


September 25th, 2023 01:59

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David Wakeling said:

This is incredible.So much wisdom here.Sadly I\'m too dumb to understand it all but I will give it a second try.Amazing

September 24th, 2023 21:52

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Introverted Sage said:

Wise words
great write!

September 24th, 2023 20:25

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Bobby O said:

I agree. I’m thinking this might fall into the general common sense category, sorta like “look both ways before crossing the street”
Far be from me to advise most of my tales tell of barely surviving.

September 24th, 2023 19:53

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Bobby O said:

I agree. I’m thinking this might fall into the general common sense category, sorta like “look both ways before crossing the street”
Far be from me to advise most of my tales tell of barely surviving.

September 24th, 2023 19:52

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Doggerel Dave said:

Not normally keen on on offerings of advice in poetic form here.
But there\'s lotsa wisdom there......

September 24th, 2023 19:39

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Parisab said:

Finding the truth in connection within and a gentle attachment to the one you adore! So sweet is higher love…

September 24th, 2023 19:32

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vividvoid14 said:

haha ofc you posted it on your page

September 24th, 2023 17:43

LIFE
vividvoid14 said:

right on!
amazing poem

September 24th, 2023 17:33

LIFE
Neville said:


you are a braver man than me sir .. much braver .. 🎵🎶👍

September 24th, 2023 11:01

MIX NOT BUSINESS AND FUN
Bobby O said:

Men are such j@@offs so many times over.

September 23rd, 2023 17:23

MIX NOT BUSINESS AND FUN
Parisab said:

How could one resist, pleasure or business, both would become tales to tell, from the likes of her-side note, I saw a very bad movie of her the other night and thought that her talent is definitely underutilized because the “movie business” only saw her as a piece of as$

September 23rd, 2023 17:04

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jarcher54 said:

Oh wow... the parting image is so poignant. A lovely synecdoche... that last whiff of perfume, that last time being in her company. Oh and thanks for the photo-- it kind of explains a lot!

September 23rd, 2023 13:32

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Bobby O said:

Thank you for excellent insight. You jumped into my mind cuz that was exact !

September 23rd, 2023 13:30

LIFE
jarcher54 said:

The phrase \"trace my deep footsteps\" is a truly inspired line... many of us leave barely a trace... deep footprints indicate a life fully lived...

September 23rd, 2023 13:28

LIFE
Bobby O said:

You are way cool
Hope you also share thoughts on the one from yesterday? Mix not….

September 23rd, 2023 12:16

LIFE
Parisab said:

Laborious but delicate in structure and deep in connection-great that you shared

September 23rd, 2023 11:26

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David Wakeling said:

Powerful verse here.A tough life lesson.Well done

September 23rd, 2023 06:58

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Bobby O said:

Thanks very much. She was fun for a minute. That photo above the poem is actually her.

September 23rd, 2023 03:59

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Doggerel Dave said:

Moral tale - powerful piece of advice........
That\'s.. (is.. was).. entertainment.

September 23rd, 2023 01:48

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Neville said:



never learn anything by half ..
I sense both a compelling and constraining pleasure, but not maybe in equal measures and with a whole lot of intrigue thrown in .. a jolly good read old chap ... Neville


September 23rd, 2023 01:27

CRAZED and CONFUSED
Parisab said:

The barren desert must feelings so foreign from your side of Chicago-and those darn grains of sand, ouch, in the land escape of your words…wishing you well…

September 21st, 2023 23:04

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Neville said:



there are those that say the last cut is the deepest ..

but we all know that it\'s just the beginning, don\'t we .. a fine narrative that bites deep and leaves a sting behind it .. Neville

September 19th, 2023 05:44

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Bobby O said:

It’s all made up. I just pretended that a woman dumped me as hard as thst is to believe it could happen???! And I don’t even know what a dromedary is?

September 19th, 2023 04:15

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LIZ said:

Painful to read, but oh so raw. I think this one\'s my favorite from you, because it feels the most real. Mmmm not necessarily a waste of time. We always focus on the aftermath. What about the good times? But, what do I know!!! This is beautifully heartfelt!!! Glad you shared it!!!

September 19th, 2023 04:07

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David Wakeling said:

Some tough realisations here..I hope time will heal.

September 19th, 2023 03:20

SOX FANS SHOULD HIDE
MendedFences27 said:

Wow! !\'m impressed with your rapping skill. You have my sympathy, and I know how you feel, for I am a Sox fan, but of the Red persuasion. We too are now on a downward trend. Today\'s players and teams are all about the money.
Your rap shows what happens when a great team becomes lost due to insufficient funding. Maybe there should be a limit on salaries and expenditures. - Phil A.

September 18th, 2023 21:30



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