Colorblind
orchidee said:

Does it hurt - tattooing?

September 8th, 2023 01:52

Drunken, Sober.
L. B. Mek said:

catatonic, a transparent state
lacking awareness to hide our flaws
thus, we unveil all and liberate
ourselves, owning that fallibility
and choosing to witness
all that we are and all, we can become!
\'mercy, I name thee dissonance\'...
(love the brave honesty
that willpower to stare down, mirrors
and still roar your poetic defiance
and so well written as well)
thanks for sharing, dear poet

June 23rd, 2023 03:27

The Library
LIZ said:

Asking yourself (the hard) questions, is the best way to find out who you are and what you seek/desire! Beautiful poem!

June 15th, 2023 09:43

Heart\'s Vignette
orchidee said:

A poem is a poem - unless it\'s a fruit cake ....erm, that\'s me! lol.
A random bit of nonsense there from me. heehee.

June 1st, 2023 10:52

The Rose Garden
Rocky Lagou said:

My Lord, this poem is so profound and so nuanced that I feel like it’d take me a week to write a thorough analysis…the craziest part, it’s only an octave (eight lines)! Indeed, any poet can write something semi-profound in a page or two, but the art of brevity takes a true genius. I adore this, the final line is the most revitalizing of conclusions: “Both plant and planter understand / The desire to bloom.”

May 31st, 2023 10:04

The Flight of Sparrows
tattooedreverie said:

The color of this poem is Pantone PMS 158, or #E87722. Thank you for reading.

May 24th, 2023 09:54

The Cavern
Bobby O said:

I like the way you presented a point w a certain clarity w confident unpretentious verse.
Nice write. Good Read

May 21st, 2023 17:54

Love\'s Cacophony
Bobby O said:

Cacophony is one of my favorite words. Props.

May 21st, 2023 01:48