Comments received on poems by Hoween94
Could this be love?
Cheeky Missy said:
Alas, and how very well and perfectly you've depicted it here! Wonderful! It is a familiar question, in that so many likewise ask it. While it could lead there, it is not at all necessarily love. He could've done this with many another girl, just for the fun of it, maybe. The time to build love is before you get physical, seems to old-fashioned me. Your concluding line is excellent, for it aptly demonstrates the situation, hinting at the real, unfortunate answer.
May 12th, 2011 13:46
Cheeky Missy said:
Alas, and how very well and perfectly you've depicted it here! Wonderful! It is a familiar question, in that so many likewise ask it. While it could lead there, it is not at all necessarily love. He could've done this with many another girl, just for the fun of it, maybe. The time to build love is before you get physical, seems to old-fashioned me. Your concluding line is excellent, for it aptly demonstrates the situation, hinting at the real, unfortunate answer.
May 12th, 2011 13:46
What You Mean To ME
Cheeky Missy said:
It is a very sweet romantic tender love poem. Your similes are delightful and the sentiment very sweet. I like it very well.
December 16th, 2010 20:40
Cheeky Missy said:
It is a very sweet romantic tender love poem. Your similes are delightful and the sentiment very sweet. I like it very well.
December 16th, 2010 20:40
Broken Heart
Cheeky Missy said:
The fascinating thing is the empathy seems related to the love that would heal. I like it.
December 13th, 2010 21:49
Cheeky Missy said:
The fascinating thing is the empathy seems related to the love that would heal. I like it.
December 13th, 2010 21:49
Love's Dispare
Cheeky Missy said:
It is very interesting. I find I cannot justify it as love if I am demanding, though. Let Kim know it is a very nicely written piece. I like it.
December 11th, 2010 21:49
Cheeky Missy said:
It is very interesting. I find I cannot justify it as love if I am demanding, though. Let Kim know it is a very nicely written piece. I like it.
December 11th, 2010 21:49
Love's Dispare
dbremner said:
I think it is well thought out and well written.
December 11th, 2010 13:28
dbremner said:
I think it is well thought out and well written.
December 11th, 2010 13:28
Success
Cheeky Missy said:
Wishing you all success in doing well and doing right, I must be kind and warn you never to be proud, since "pride goeth before destruction...."
December 10th, 2010 18:22
Cheeky Missy said:
Wishing you all success in doing well and doing right, I must be kind and warn you never to be proud, since "pride goeth before destruction...."
December 10th, 2010 18:22
The Mirror Never Lies
dbremner said:
I like this piece it is cleverly composed.
December 10th, 2010 13:20
dbremner said:
I like this piece it is cleverly composed.
December 10th, 2010 13:20
The Mirror Never Lies
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting,....especially considering a couple things, the Bible would seem to agree saying it shows "what manner of man [we are]" and yet I've been told we are not the image we see in the mirror....and, I like my mirror image better than many of my photographs......Your last line seems to see a reflection of your own heart in theirs?
December 9th, 2010 22:50
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting,....especially considering a couple things, the Bible would seem to agree saying it shows "what manner of man [we are]" and yet I've been told we are not the image we see in the mirror....and, I like my mirror image better than many of my photographs......Your last line seems to see a reflection of your own heart in theirs?
December 9th, 2010 22:50
What Is Life?
Cheeky Missy said:
This existence is an interesting thing to try to describe....afterall, you are referring to what we all were born into as "life"....there is also what the Lord says, that we are all dead and He is the Life, and the life of the people He saves. But that was not what you were trying to describe/explain...but He is life.
December 8th, 2010 22:47
Cheeky Missy said:
This existence is an interesting thing to try to describe....afterall, you are referring to what we all were born into as "life"....there is also what the Lord says, that we are all dead and He is the Life, and the life of the people He saves. But that was not what you were trying to describe/explain...but He is life.
December 8th, 2010 22:47
