Comments received on poems by Lorenz



Santa Muerte
Ellen Marsell said:

The harsh reality...

February 20th, 2024 12:05

Santa Muerte
Alan R said:

You describe a dilemma expats can relate too...

February 20th, 2024 11:47

Time difference
Ellen Marsell said:

It\'s a beautiful poem!

February 18th, 2024 17:25

Time difference
Alan R said:

Beautiful

February 18th, 2024 08:52

Guitar in the clouds
Alan R said:

lost in a never caressed face ... beautiful expression

February 17th, 2024 08:19

Guitar in the clouds
2781 said:

For the birds of the air
Come to the feast.

February 17th, 2024 07:05

Mother
Ellen Marsell said:

We take more from the earth than we can give back to it, and that debt resounds in the sobs of the wind and the sounds of smoldering forests...

February 16th, 2024 10:58

Mystical colors
2781 said:

\"And the serpent said unto the woman, Ye shall not surely die:.

February 16th, 2024 00:58

Mystical colors
Ellen Marsell said:

Beautiful work... An exotic journey through amazing symbolic imagery. Very inspiring!

February 14th, 2024 12:01

Tribal village
Ellen Marsell said:

Quite a subtle poem! Bravo!

February 12th, 2024 11:39

Cabaret
Alan R said:

Berlin :)


February 12th, 2024 05:14

Cabaret
Bella Shepard said:

You\'ve done a remarkable job of contrasting life in Berlin, before and after the Nazi\'s gained power. I would say a difficult task, and one you\'ve done it admirably!

February 11th, 2024 14:47

Cabaret
Ellen Marsell said:

The atmosphere of the city with its cultural contradictions and historical legacy. The multifaceted nature of the past and present, eloquently and profoundly reflecting both glitter and shadows.

February 11th, 2024 11:51

He\'s back !
Thoughtless said:

The end is always a beginning rather than an end.

February 10th, 2024 11:14

Is she ?
Bella Shepard said:

The face, seared into the mind of the lover, haunting memory that lingers on the edge of reallity. Incredible verse!

February 9th, 2024 15:10

Is she ?
Alan R said:

Very elegant

February 9th, 2024 13:03

Is she ?
Ellen Marsell said:

Impressive poem!

February 9th, 2024 11:58

Hours
Ellen Marsell said:

Un poème inspirant. Des images colorées qui personnifient le temps (les heures de la vie) comme une essence divine présente dans divers aspects de la vie humaine.
Comprenons-nous vraiment la signification du temps et les messages qu\'il véhicule?

February 8th, 2024 11:54

A ritual
Bella Shepard said:

There is the anticipation, the preparation, the waiting as it brews and fills the air with its tantalizing aroma, and finally the drinking which is pure heaven. It caresses the brain and induces euphoria. What\'s not to love? Incredible presentation of this beloved, seductive stimulant. Would love another cup!

February 6th, 2024 16:40

A ritual
Ellen Marsell said:

When the shadow of loneliness envelops, the aroma of coffee becomes closer than anyone else.

February 6th, 2024 11:51

Gospel of imposture
Bella Shepard said:

There is the subtle slyness in the smile, a hint of craftiness in the eyes. I think she dares, why not. Superb!

February 5th, 2024 15:02

Gospel of imposture
Ellen Marsell said:

Une image d\'une histoire de genèse séduisante. Comme d\'habitude, l\'écriture est exquise, avec des accents philosophiques. Je l\'aime beaucoup !

February 5th, 2024 11:50

Gospel of imposture
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

February 5th, 2024 10:25

I , the Angel
2781 said:

Will he make many supplications unto thee? will he speak soft words unto thee?

Will he make a covenant with thee? will thou take him for a servant forever?

February 4th, 2024 08:04

Awakening
Reynaldo Casison said:

cosmic and serene

February 4th, 2024 03:24

I am the wind
2781 said:

\"And after these things I saw four angels standing on the four corners of the earth, holding the four winds of the earth, that the wind should not blow on the earth, nor on the sea, nor on any tree.\"

February 3rd, 2024 22:48

Scorpio
2781 said:

Should I drink to that?

February 3rd, 2024 16:15

Scorpio
Ellen Marsell said:

Master of overcoming his own shadows.

February 3rd, 2024 11:43

I am the wind
Bella Shepard said:

This homage to the wind is priceless. It\'s power is exhilerating, its softness soothing. I have often stood in awe, on my deck, as a storm approaches, and the wind furiously whips the tree tops. It is
the most incredible feeling in the world. Thank you for this gem!

February 2nd, 2024 15:47

I am the wind
Introverted Sage said:

Strong write!

February 2nd, 2024 14:24



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