Comments received on poems by Lorenz
Little father
sorenbarrett said:
At first this seemed such a vivid portrayal of a man well pictured but then I wondered if it were a metaphor of political leadership. Nicely done
June 21st, 2025 06:39
sorenbarrett said:
At first this seemed such a vivid portrayal of a man well pictured but then I wondered if it were a metaphor of political leadership. Nicely done
June 21st, 2025 06:39
Roma
Ellen Marsell said:
An ironic, allusion-rich poem where Rome becomes a symbol of decline, beauty, and the blending of times and cultures.
The final line feels like a closing note of a new era — one that’s foreign to the Rome of the past.
June 19th, 2025 14:19
Ellen Marsell said:
An ironic, allusion-rich poem where Rome becomes a symbol of decline, beauty, and the blending of times and cultures.
The final line feels like a closing note of a new era — one that’s foreign to the Rome of the past.
June 19th, 2025 14:19
Roma
sorenbarrett said:
Lorenz what a most interesting mix in this poem all surrounding the setting of Rome. Religion, to art to women to location and back to God is great
June 19th, 2025 09:54
sorenbarrett said:
Lorenz what a most interesting mix in this poem all surrounding the setting of Rome. Religion, to art to women to location and back to God is great
June 19th, 2025 09:54
I am waiting your return
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the Little Prince and Alice in Wonderland. The second from childhood and the first from adulthood. They are used so cleverly in this poem to enhance the meaning and well done too. Most lovely
June 18th, 2025 11:28
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the Little Prince and Alice in Wonderland. The second from childhood and the first from adulthood. They are used so cleverly in this poem to enhance the meaning and well done too. Most lovely
June 18th, 2025 11:28
I am waiting your return
Ellen Marsell said:
A tender, ironic, and profound monologue of a soul that has slipped away into a world of dreams...
June 18th, 2025 11:08
Ellen Marsell said:
A tender, ironic, and profound monologue of a soul that has slipped away into a world of dreams...
June 18th, 2025 11:08
The shadows of the ghetto
Ellen Marsell said:
The text can be seen as an anti-cyclical warning: if the spiral of revenge and violence does not come to a halt, the shadow of the ghetto will forever wander through new streets, carrying with it both the pain of the victims and the tragedy of the executioners.
The most powerful line is — \"No one knows when rain will come…\"
June 16th, 2025 13:41
Ellen Marsell said:
The text can be seen as an anti-cyclical warning: if the spiral of revenge and violence does not come to a halt, the shadow of the ghetto will forever wander through new streets, carrying with it both the pain of the victims and the tragedy of the executioners.
The most powerful line is — \"No one knows when rain will come…\"
June 16th, 2025 13:41
The shadows of the ghetto
Lorenz said:
It can be seen from a psychoanalytical angle !
June 16th, 2025 09:56
Lorenz said:
It can be seen from a psychoanalytical angle !
June 16th, 2025 09:56
The shadows of the ghetto
sorenbarrett said:
Layers of symbolism where we all live in our own ghetto and in fact are our ghetto. A lovely write and a fave
June 16th, 2025 08:24
sorenbarrett said:
Layers of symbolism where we all live in our own ghetto and in fact are our ghetto. A lovely write and a fave
June 16th, 2025 08:24
The price of blood
Tony Grannell said:
Nowt left but carrion and weeds where false gods once prevailed. A profound and brilliant passage of poetic literature.
Kind regards,
Tony.
June 15th, 2025 12:08
Tony Grannell said:
Nowt left but carrion and weeds where false gods once prevailed. A profound and brilliant passage of poetic literature.
Kind regards,
Tony.
June 15th, 2025 12:08
The price of blood
Ellen Marsell said:
A poetic treatise on the end of history, where man has become both the priest and the sacrifice of his own utopia. Powerful metaphors give the poem the force of an ancient curse and a tragic warning. A piercing text!
June 15th, 2025 11:08
Ellen Marsell said:
A poetic treatise on the end of history, where man has become both the priest and the sacrifice of his own utopia. Powerful metaphors give the poem the force of an ancient curse and a tragic warning. A piercing text!
June 15th, 2025 11:08
The price of blood
sorenbarrett said:
Biblical in nature this poem cries a warning to the reader. Nicely imaged. Well done
June 15th, 2025 07:20
sorenbarrett said:
Biblical in nature this poem cries a warning to the reader. Nicely imaged. Well done
June 15th, 2025 07:20
The marvelous story of worlds
sorenbarrett said:
Cosmic surreal, a universal universe of images play through this poem. Very nicely done Lorenz
June 14th, 2025 08:04
sorenbarrett said:
Cosmic surreal, a universal universe of images play through this poem. Very nicely done Lorenz
June 14th, 2025 08:04
The marvelous story of worlds
Ellen Marsell said:
You write about the universe, but speak of the soul.
Behind the apparent simplicity of the imagery lies a deep meaning.
Astronomical motifs become the language of inner loneliness and hope.
Beautifully written!
June 14th, 2025 07:57
Ellen Marsell said:
You write about the universe, but speak of the soul.
Behind the apparent simplicity of the imagery lies a deep meaning.
Astronomical motifs become the language of inner loneliness and hope.
Beautifully written!
June 14th, 2025 07:57
The last poet
Ellen Marsell said:
Poetry of the end times and poetry of memory, in which the word becomes the only thread connecting the vanishing with the eternal.
June 13th, 2025 14:46
Ellen Marsell said:
Poetry of the end times and poetry of memory, in which the word becomes the only thread connecting the vanishing with the eternal.
June 13th, 2025 14:46
The last poet
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write Lorenz, thoroughly enjoyed
June 13th, 2025 12:27
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write Lorenz, thoroughly enjoyed
June 13th, 2025 12:27
The last poet
sorenbarrett said:
Once again meaning cloaked in symbols and mystery this poem reads of a warning and admonition. Nicely worded Lorenz
June 13th, 2025 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
Once again meaning cloaked in symbols and mystery this poem reads of a warning and admonition. Nicely worded Lorenz
June 13th, 2025 11:41
A poem for Elvira
Ellen Marsell said:
There is a beautiful, weathered grace in these lines — a kind of music of memory. I like its unapologetic sentimentality and emotional landscapes. It wanders like an old man gathering flowers in a field of clouds, and that is its charm.
June 11th, 2025 07:11
Ellen Marsell said:
There is a beautiful, weathered grace in these lines — a kind of music of memory. I like its unapologetic sentimentality and emotional landscapes. It wanders like an old man gathering flowers in a field of clouds, and that is its charm.
June 11th, 2025 07:11
A poem for Elvira
sorenbarrett said:
Age requires decisions. I love the last two lines of this poem and a fave
June 10th, 2025 13:52
sorenbarrett said:
Age requires decisions. I love the last two lines of this poem and a fave
June 10th, 2025 13:52
The artist dimension
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great imagery , delightful
June 7th, 2025 11:54
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great imagery , delightful
June 7th, 2025 11:54
The artist dimension
Ellen Marsell said:
The imaginative and inspired flow of metaphors turns this poem into a true ode to the artist — a creator who senses the world beyond the limits of time. Vivid images give the impression that we are reading dreams. Beautifully written!
June 7th, 2025 11:15
Ellen Marsell said:
The imaginative and inspired flow of metaphors turns this poem into a true ode to the artist — a creator who senses the world beyond the limits of time. Vivid images give the impression that we are reading dreams. Beautifully written!
June 7th, 2025 11:15
The artist dimension
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal like poem of intergalactic language, love and sensation. Very nicely done
June 7th, 2025 08:56
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal like poem of intergalactic language, love and sensation. Very nicely done
June 7th, 2025 08:56
Grand Jacques
Ellen Marsell said:
A beautiful poetic message. A delicate and piercing tribute to Jacques Brel, woven into the shifting images of a seascape and an inner storm.
June 5th, 2025 13:59
Ellen Marsell said:
A beautiful poetic message. A delicate and piercing tribute to Jacques Brel, woven into the shifting images of a seascape and an inner storm.
June 5th, 2025 13:59
Grand Jacques
sorenbarrett said:
A grand tribute to an artist in splendid images and wonderful metaphor. Colorful writing at its best.
June 5th, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
A grand tribute to an artist in splendid images and wonderful metaphor. Colorful writing at its best.
June 5th, 2025 04:57
The last hour angel
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem is like a gentle chord completing the complex symphony of life. I really like its soft rhythm and delicate imagery.
June 4th, 2025 12:57
Ellen Marsell said:
This poem is like a gentle chord completing the complex symphony of life. I really like its soft rhythm and delicate imagery.
June 4th, 2025 12:57
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