Comments received on poems by gray0328
the language of hands
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful write in a sense we so seldom use in poetry. A bit of a metaphor as well. Very nice
April 12th, 2025 10:32
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful write in a sense we so seldom use in poetry. A bit of a metaphor as well. Very nice
April 12th, 2025 10:32
bite
sorenbarrett said:
Gray I loved the metaphor in this poem and the last stanza was my favorite the last two lines sealed it a fave
April 11th, 2025 12:43
sorenbarrett said:
Gray I loved the metaphor in this poem and the last stanza was my favorite the last two lines sealed it a fave
April 11th, 2025 12:43
the weight of \"g\"
sorenbarrett said:
Some great lines in this poem \'Gray. Love the thought as well pronunciation has always made me laugh with everyone thinking they have the right one. How about pronouncing the G in gnostic? A fun read
April 10th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
Some great lines in this poem \'Gray. Love the thought as well pronunciation has always made me laugh with everyone thinking they have the right one. How about pronouncing the G in gnostic? A fun read
April 10th, 2025 04:16
keep some things to yourself
Poetic Licence said:
Life is like a game of poker never reveal your whole hand, keep some back, lovely write, enjoyed the read
April 9th, 2025 12:14
Poetic Licence said:
Life is like a game of poker never reveal your whole hand, keep some back, lovely write, enjoyed the read
April 9th, 2025 12:14
keep some things to yourself
sorenbarrett said:
Proper trust to proper individuals not all trust is equal. Very nice Gray
April 9th, 2025 11:43
sorenbarrett said:
Proper trust to proper individuals not all trust is equal. Very nice Gray
April 9th, 2025 11:43
the way You love me
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful line that love is to be given as water is freely without the expectation of return. Lovely. A wonderful poem
April 8th, 2025 12:50
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful line that love is to be given as water is freely without the expectation of return. Lovely. A wonderful poem
April 8th, 2025 12:50
Booted Grace
sorenbarrett said:
This is an example of how context gives different meaning to a poem. I read this first before the authors note and it felt very different after reading the note. Pieces that were hanging enigmatically now fell into place. Well done Gray
April 6th, 2025 07:21
sorenbarrett said:
This is an example of how context gives different meaning to a poem. I read this first before the authors note and it felt very different after reading the note. Pieces that were hanging enigmatically now fell into place. Well done Gray
April 6th, 2025 07:21
First Time at the Track
sorenbarrett said:
A snapshot picture in poetic words leaves not only visual but olfactory and auditory images as well. Very nicely written
April 5th, 2025 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
A snapshot picture in poetic words leaves not only visual but olfactory and auditory images as well. Very nicely written
April 5th, 2025 05:12
Jesus, the Icon
sorenbarrett said:
The wording of this poem captured me and I give it a fave
April 4th, 2025 11:25
sorenbarrett said:
The wording of this poem captured me and I give it a fave
April 4th, 2025 11:25
The Twins Contrite
sorenbarrett said:
Different feelings, different reactions to the same situation but love knows the heart of each and reacts the same. A wonderful write about how differences are loved just the same.
April 3rd, 2025 10:46
sorenbarrett said:
Different feelings, different reactions to the same situation but love knows the heart of each and reacts the same. A wonderful write about how differences are loved just the same.
April 3rd, 2025 10:46
The Months as People
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write travelling through natures seasons and awakening the old memory bank, really enjoyed the read
April 2nd, 2025 12:11
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write travelling through natures seasons and awakening the old memory bank, really enjoyed the read
April 2nd, 2025 12:11
The Months as People
sorenbarrett said:
The poem flows through the months smoothly and with great images that bring many memories. Very nice
April 2nd, 2025 10:58
sorenbarrett said:
The poem flows through the months smoothly and with great images that bring many memories. Very nice
April 2nd, 2025 10:58
Stripping the Veneer
sorenbarrett said:
So much emotion in this piece. Very nicely worded Gray.
April 1st, 2025 13:37
sorenbarrett said:
So much emotion in this piece. Very nicely worded Gray.
April 1st, 2025 13:37
Love, Light, Way
sorenbarrett said:
We falter in our ignorance and look for guidance. A poem of direction. Very nice
March 31st, 2025 05:51
sorenbarrett said:
We falter in our ignorance and look for guidance. A poem of direction. Very nice
March 31st, 2025 05:51
The Mirror and the Window
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that has seduced me into a fave. It mysteriously has biblical images woven in (only in twos) yet speaks in metaphor with mirror and window. There is gentle internal near rhyme that together with the meter caries the reader onward as if rolling down hill to where it ends with the last two wonderful lines. Beautiful
March 30th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that has seduced me into a fave. It mysteriously has biblical images woven in (only in twos) yet speaks in metaphor with mirror and window. There is gentle internal near rhyme that together with the meter caries the reader onward as if rolling down hill to where it ends with the last two wonderful lines. Beautiful
March 30th, 2025 04:33
In Order to Change
arqios said:
Happy birthday Gray, keep fighting the good fight, keep running your race🙏🏻🕊
March 28th, 2025 17:40
arqios said:
Happy birthday Gray, keep fighting the good fight, keep running your race🙏🏻🕊
March 28th, 2025 17:40
In Order to Change
sorenbarrett said:
I love the line (room doused in yesterday\'s shadows) a poem of gathering strength and the leaving behind those shadows of yesterday. A wonderful write.
March 28th, 2025 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
I love the line (room doused in yesterday\'s shadows) a poem of gathering strength and the leaving behind those shadows of yesterday. A wonderful write.
March 28th, 2025 04:37
We Played \"Sorry\"
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how much you can get to know about a person playing a game with them. This poem brought images and feelings of family unity and joy from times past when people actually spent time together. A lovely feel.
March 27th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how much you can get to know about a person playing a game with them. This poem brought images and feelings of family unity and joy from times past when people actually spent time together. A lovely feel.
March 27th, 2025 04:46
The Dust Bowl Lesson
gray0328 said:
Thanks Soren always appreciate your feedback
March 26th, 2025 12:25
gray0328 said:
Thanks Soren always appreciate your feedback
March 26th, 2025 12:25
The Dust Bowl Lesson
sorenbarrett said:
What a great description done so poetically. A very nice piece Gray
March 26th, 2025 11:40
sorenbarrett said:
What a great description done so poetically. A very nice piece Gray
March 26th, 2025 11:40
The Sacred Thread
sorenbarrett said:
Gray your poems ring with rhyme and such great meter your word choice is so well done. Very nice my friend
March 25th, 2025 13:13
sorenbarrett said:
Gray your poems ring with rhyme and such great meter your word choice is so well done. Very nice my friend
March 25th, 2025 13:13
There is an Orchard Within Us
Eugene S. said:
Simple, beautiful, and an understanding that can only come from experience. 👍
March 24th, 2025 18:00
Eugene S. said:
Simple, beautiful, and an understanding that can only come from experience. 👍
March 24th, 2025 18:00
There is an Orchard Within Us
sorenbarrett said:
(Affection swells a crimson sphere, while joy drips like golden dew) now there is a lovely line. Your word magic is amazing and to be envied. Like Eve you tempt me with your apple. A peaceful and serene poem of exquisite tranquility. I loved it and for that one line a fave.
March 24th, 2025 15:31
sorenbarrett said:
(Affection swells a crimson sphere, while joy drips like golden dew) now there is a lovely line. Your word magic is amazing and to be envied. Like Eve you tempt me with your apple. A peaceful and serene poem of exquisite tranquility. I loved it and for that one line a fave.
March 24th, 2025 15:31
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