Comments received on poems by gray0328



My Mom is Dying
2781 said:

Good stuff, your honouring your mum, and knowing mums I am sure they forgive us, in their wisdom.
God bless you all.

November 15th, 2023 02:04

Within the Shadows
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic

November 14th, 2023 06:20

Home
David Wakeling said:

Home sweet home. Memories are precious.Well written poem.

November 9th, 2023 15:20

Thumb Stump
gray0328 said:

Yeah but I can\'t point while I\'m telling it. 😆

November 9th, 2023 08:31

Thumb Stump
David Wakeling said:

Wow that\'s painful. At least you have a story to tell the grandchildren

November 8th, 2023 14:27

Where Darkness Abides
2781 said:

I kind of paradox between the pace and the message, but very engaging.
We\'re bombarded with fear, when there\'s beauty all around.

November 4th, 2023 08:06

Where Darkness Abides
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful write.

November 4th, 2023 07:03

Elusive Mistress
Thomas W Case said:

Superb I say on my sleepless night.

November 2nd, 2023 02:16

Old Concepts
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

October 31st, 2023 02:53

Beyond the Flesh
2781 said:

I liked that.

October 30th, 2023 08:01

Beyond the Flesh
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant writing.

October 30th, 2023 07:49

Canoe
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful.

October 29th, 2023 06:21

Canoe
2781 said:

God spelt backwards Man\'s best friend.

October 29th, 2023 06:05

Timeless Square
David Wakeling said:

This was a confusing disappointment.While it is well structured after 400 words we still don\'t know who the statue is of.I like the rhyme.

October 27th, 2023 15:49

Timeless Square
Thomas W Case said:

Nice work.

October 27th, 2023 15:39

The Pebble
Miss_Dreamer said:

What a great poem! Its rythm ebbed and flowed like the waves you talked about, I loved it

October 26th, 2023 11:35

Yellow Flower
Muse Gong said:

nice sentiment

October 25th, 2023 19:34

Yellow Flower
Thomas W Case said:

Beauty in the most unlikely place. Great job.

October 25th, 2023 12:44

Rooms
Thomas W Case said:

I like the metaphor. Well done.

October 24th, 2023 15:33

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