Comments received on poems by gray0328
The Biggest Lie
sorenbarrett said:
Some great lines here with a view of life as difficult at best and impossible at worst. Nicely written
July 30th, 2024 19:36
sorenbarrett said:
Some great lines here with a view of life as difficult at best and impossible at worst. Nicely written
July 30th, 2024 19:36
Cauliflower Ears
sorenbarrett said:
A story of badges earned in life and cleverly etched in flesh as well as word. Beautifully crafted this is a wonderful piece of art
July 29th, 2024 13:07
sorenbarrett said:
A story of badges earned in life and cleverly etched in flesh as well as word. Beautifully crafted this is a wonderful piece of art
July 29th, 2024 13:07
Uteruses Stretch
sorenbarrett said:
Well described in verse the physical process of conception and birth. Well done.
July 27th, 2024 20:12
sorenbarrett said:
Well described in verse the physical process of conception and birth. Well done.
July 27th, 2024 20:12
Salubrious Retreat
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the imagery and especially the line \"where shadows sleep\" very quieting and peaceful. Nicely done.
July 26th, 2024 12:46
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the imagery and especially the line \"where shadows sleep\" very quieting and peaceful. Nicely done.
July 26th, 2024 12:46
Whispers of Learning
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words in tribute to a holy place, the library of wisdom. Lovely
July 24th, 2024 07:05
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words in tribute to a holy place, the library of wisdom. Lovely
July 24th, 2024 07:05
The Great Marriage
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words written in metaphor with meaning deeper than what may appear either on the surface or the layer beneath.
July 22nd, 2024 06:07
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words written in metaphor with meaning deeper than what may appear either on the surface or the layer beneath.
July 22nd, 2024 06:07
Urban Love
Parisab said:
Love’s brief glow in the electric night.
Great end line!
July 21st, 2024 12:11
Parisab said:
Love’s brief glow in the electric night.
Great end line!
July 21st, 2024 12:11
Winter Vigil
Parisab said:
You kept the entire rhythm as “slow and deliberate” I really like that it fits the theme of your poem…
July 16th, 2024 20:27
Parisab said:
You kept the entire rhythm as “slow and deliberate” I really like that it fits the theme of your poem…
July 16th, 2024 20:27
Winter Vigil
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful sonnet. Lovely winter description and a feeling of peace being attained. Happy Tuesday.
July 16th, 2024 14:02
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful sonnet. Lovely winter description and a feeling of peace being attained. Happy Tuesday.
July 16th, 2024 14:02
The Gift of Absence
Parisab said:
Loving in silence is filled with grace-
I really enjoyed this tender write…
July 7th, 2024 23:46
Parisab said:
Loving in silence is filled with grace-
I really enjoyed this tender write…
July 7th, 2024 23:46
The Gift of Absence
RSM0812 said:
It message is a virtue of truth. I really like it.
July 7th, 2024 15:02
RSM0812 said:
It message is a virtue of truth. I really like it.
July 7th, 2024 15:02
Unyielding
Parisab said:
Great metaphor about how the light came through the dark mirror…Grace is beautiful from all angles…Good read…
July 5th, 2024 11:21
Parisab said:
Great metaphor about how the light came through the dark mirror…Grace is beautiful from all angles…Good read…
July 5th, 2024 11:21
Embrace the Stillness
Cassie58 said:
rest in slumber’s cradle
be cradled by the night
Such beautiful lines in your stanzas. I am sorry for the loss of your mom. May she rest in eternal peace.
June 30th, 2024 02:34
Cassie58 said:
rest in slumber’s cradle
be cradled by the night
Such beautiful lines in your stanzas. I am sorry for the loss of your mom. May she rest in eternal peace.
June 30th, 2024 02:34
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