Comments received on poems by Doc X



The Beginning
Priya Tomar said:

Rhythm like restless river......
Destiny vs human effort. Brilliant write with clever rhyming....


August 17th, 2025 21:44

The Beginning
Poetic Licence said:

The little steps that can evolve into love over time, nicely written

August 17th, 2025 17:26

The Beginning
sorenbarrett said:

Bits of truth mounted in a poem nicely done.

August 17th, 2025 17:04

Joy
Poetic Licence said:

Very nicely written, flows nicely, enjoyed the read

August 16th, 2025 06:46

Joy
Priya Tomar said:

Lovely lyric has clever rhyming.
Well written, a fave !

August 16th, 2025 06:29

Joy
sorenbarrett said:

Clever the usage of divine images and personages to tie into the the final part of the poem wishing the love to always be divine. Nicely done

August 16th, 2025 04:54

A kiss in the rain
Priya Tomar said:

Lovely lyric.....
Rhyming scheme is catchy.

August 15th, 2025 09:44

Damsel from heaven
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely write of romance and promises made, enjoyed the read

August 14th, 2025 18:43

Damsel from heaven
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of romance, sweet, innocent, yet seductive and lovely

August 14th, 2025 14:43

Throwback to a foregone era
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely write of the journey of a positive relationship, enjoyed the read

August 9th, 2025 05:24

Throwback to a foregone era
sorenbarrett said:

Infatuation such a wonderful feeling where passion burns bright. Nicely done

August 9th, 2025 04:26

Another chance
Poetic Licence said:

A polite request for redemption for past mistakes and to be given another chance, nicely expressed and written

August 8th, 2025 21:46

Another chance
sorenbarrett said:

A poem asking for a chance at redemption. Nicely written as a plea for another chance

August 8th, 2025 18:45

A kiss in the rain
Poetic Licence said:

The fond memory of a first encounter, nicely written

August 8th, 2025 00:43

A kiss in the rain
sorenbarrett said:

A recounting of a first encounter and romantic adventure. Nicely done

August 7th, 2025 18:33

A moment of reflection
novaa said:

\'The pandemic changed our lives forever,\'.....Couldn\'t agree more. A very reflective and inspiring read!

October 14th, 2023 10:08

An ode to a green-eyed doe
L. B. Mek said:

beautiful imagery
a wonderful read
thanks for sharing

October 2nd, 2023 05:10

An ode to a green-eyed doe
Soman Ragavan said:


My comments on the poem \"An ode to a green-eyed doe” by drpreetshah

Even if you did not mention \"dr\" in your name, there are hints that you are in medicine : “irises, oculi.” However, it is unusual for a doctor to speak of : \"flares akin to an inferno\" ; \"defuse the storm,\" ‘incendiary.” \"Portal\" shows a scientific mind.
Can you guess my zodiac sign ?...
Soman Ragavan. 2 October, 2023. //
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October 1st, 2023 22:12