Comments received on poems by Thomas W Case



Dark Corners of the Soul
Teddy.15 said:

So very sad and realistic to any human and their life story. We all have one this is superb.
She made nightmares look good.... That\'s excellent. I on e had a boyfriend like that, he\'d make hell look like Disney world 🌹

March 17th, 2024 08:22

Dark Corners of the Soul
orchidee said:

Good write T.

March 17th, 2024 02:29

Six
sorenbarrett said:

Very nice it speaks to those few days where poems just roll out.

March 16th, 2024 23:16

That Sorceriffic Ass
Teddy.15 said:

Seems as though you sacrificed yourself for beautiful body instead of a personality, you are only human, and no outside beauty of any of us last too long, it\'s the heart and kind mind that stays hopefully. Love this one dear Thomas🌹

March 15th, 2024 02:34

That Sorceriffic Ass
2781 said:

Since Adam and Eve.

March 14th, 2024 07:54

That Sorceriffic Ass
Cassie58 said:

I would imagine that has been the down fall of many a bloke. Tough out there. Great write Thomas.

March 13th, 2024 11:00

That Sorceriffic Ass
Tom Dylan said:

Another belter, Thomas.

March 13th, 2024 06:46

That Sorceriffic Ass
Bobby O said:

I can relate. I’m guessing that’s a trap that has a tomorrow??

March 13th, 2024 03:59

That Sorceriffic Ass
orchidee said:

Ahh, a poem about a donkey/mule - ass! lol.

March 13th, 2024 03:11

That Sorceriffic Ass
MendedFences27 said:

Gritty. filled with some phrases I liked.
The Buddha Bit in the first Stanza, the fourth stanza, and \"sorceriffic.\" I guess the moral here is to be cautious or end up \"behind \" the eight ball. _ Phil A.


March 12th, 2024 19:13

That Sorceriffic Ass
sorenbarrett said:

A definite statement that can be taken various ways. Nicely done

March 12th, 2024 15:29

One for Hunter
Tom Dylan said:

Love this poem. HST is a legend, Thomas. We share a few of the same literary heroes. Bukowski is one of the great too, and a fantastic name for a cat. Cheers, Tom.

March 12th, 2024 03:52

One for Hunter
orchidee said:

I don\'t know the guy! lol.

March 12th, 2024 03:02

One for Hunter
Goldfinch60 said:

I am sure you will come out of that hole David with a winning hand.

Andy

March 12th, 2024 02:48

One for Hunter
sorenbarrett said:

The first person helps this wonderful write present itself in a vivid and most engaging manner. Well done.

March 12th, 2024 02:42

One for Hunter
Cassie58 said:

A man with a plan, and hell if you end up in prison you need one to help you pass the time and keep you out of more trouble.

A guerilla approach to writing - I like the sharp focus that offers. Another great write Thomas.

March 11th, 2024 23:29

Exstacy
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Thomas.

Andy

March 11th, 2024 02:25

Exstacy
Teddy.15 said:

I love this so much dear Thomas. A superb write. 🌹

March 10th, 2024 16:36

The Search Continues
sunshine777 said:

So he moved on, sometimes the greatest thing to do. Great write!

March 10th, 2024 15:25

Fishing
peto said:

I\'ve never been fishing but know many enjoy it
Even get competitive
Liked that you got a tug at the end
Well written as per

March 10th, 2024 15:03

Fishing
Meera Mere said:

Beautiful poem Thomas W Case.

March 10th, 2024 04:19

Fishing
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Thomas. There is nothing quite like a fish pulled from the water and cooked straight away.

Andy

March 9th, 2024 02:53

Fishing
Cassie58 said:

You need to be patient to be a fisherman, but the outcome can be delicious. Your 5/7/5’s tell a story Thomas and a visual one.

March 8th, 2024 22:03

Fishing
Teddy.15 said:

lol reminds me of the song by the carpenters on the bayou. You also made me hungry

Great 5/7/5\'s most enjoyed 🌹

March 8th, 2024 14:34

Fishing
orchidee said:

Good writes T.

March 8th, 2024 14:25

The Proper Task
Introverted Sage said:

An underused gift indeed.
Beautiful write!

March 7th, 2024 21:34

The Proper Task
Cloie said:

Your piece beautifully evokes the rhythm of life and the delicate balance of existence. The imagery of swaying to an eternal metronome and the juxtaposition of elements create a sense of harmony and interconnectedness. It\'s a thought-provoking reflection on the depth of love as a precious yet often overlooked gift. Great job!

March 7th, 2024 09:43

The Proper Task
Teddy.15 said:

How truly beautiful

When they autopsied the
Tin Man, there were
irises and orchids and
Neruda poems where
his heart should have
been.

Absolutely love this stanza 🌹

March 7th, 2024 05:30

The Proper Task
Tom Dylan said:

Absolutely brilliant, Thomas. Just perfect.

March 7th, 2024 03:52

The Proper Task
Neville said:



I think this is quite possibly my new favourite TWC post to date .. Neville

March 7th, 2024 02:37



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