Comments received on poems by Thomas W Case
Furor Scribendi
sorenbarrett said:
This was so raw and the wording with images and metaphor were so clever. Several good lines in this piece.
\"I grab the pen like
a junkie grabs the syringe,}
\" the pen vomits
words on the paper,\"
Great work
May 24th, 2024 12:27
sorenbarrett said:
This was so raw and the wording with images and metaphor were so clever. Several good lines in this piece.
\"I grab the pen like
a junkie grabs the syringe,}
\" the pen vomits
words on the paper,\"
Great work
May 24th, 2024 12:27
Trips to the Cemetery.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Thomas showing the innocence of children.
Andy
May 24th, 2024 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Thomas showing the innocence of children.
Andy
May 24th, 2024 01:50
Trips to the Cemetery.
Teddy.15 said:
Such true innocence of a seven year old, beautifully written dear Thomas. 🌹
May 23rd, 2024 19:03
Teddy.15 said:
Such true innocence of a seven year old, beautifully written dear Thomas. 🌹
May 23rd, 2024 19:03
Trips to the Cemetery.
sorenbarrett said:
A great story that keeps the timeline. When I was small my father took us to the cemetery to show us where Santa was buried.
May 23rd, 2024 17:56
sorenbarrett said:
A great story that keeps the timeline. When I was small my father took us to the cemetery to show us where Santa was buried.
May 23rd, 2024 17:56
The Cages
orchidee said:
Good write T.
What happened to me? I was The Birdman. lol.
May 22nd, 2024 02:03
orchidee said:
Good write T.
What happened to me? I was The Birdman. lol.
May 22nd, 2024 02:03
The Cages
Teddy.15 said:
Wow Thomas, those last birds incredibly creative and quite the epic, brilliant, loved every line, the stanza of the raven spoke very loud. 🌹
May 21st, 2024 13:56
Teddy.15 said:
Wow Thomas, those last birds incredibly creative and quite the epic, brilliant, loved every line, the stanza of the raven spoke very loud. 🌹
May 21st, 2024 13:56
The Cages
aDarkerMind said:
another write to read, digest,
then read again Thomas.
May 21st, 2024 13:31
aDarkerMind said:
another write to read, digest,
then read again Thomas.
May 21st, 2024 13:31
The Cages
Neville said:
Cages don\'t have a place in the free world do they .. I get it too fella .. N
May 21st, 2024 12:29
Neville said:
Cages don\'t have a place in the free world do they .. I get it too fella .. N
May 21st, 2024 12:29
The Cages
sorenbarrett said:
Loss of freedom, chokes out life whether physical or emotional. Nicely worded Thomas.
May 21st, 2024 11:47
sorenbarrett said:
Loss of freedom, chokes out life whether physical or emotional. Nicely worded Thomas.
May 21st, 2024 11:47
Cor Meum, Caput Meum (My Heart My Head)
Goldfinch60 said:
We always need to turn the pages in our life Thomas as we can be amazed at what is ahead of us.
Andy
May 20th, 2024 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
We always need to turn the pages in our life Thomas as we can be amazed at what is ahead of us.
Andy
May 20th, 2024 01:47
Cor Meum, Caput Meum (My Heart My Head)
orchidee said:
Good write T. Bit of \'french\' there too?! cor meum, etc. I dunno what it means, but you\'ve translated it. lol.
May 20th, 2024 01:26
orchidee said:
Good write T. Bit of \'french\' there too?! cor meum, etc. I dunno what it means, but you\'ve translated it. lol.
May 20th, 2024 01:26
Cor Meum, Caput Meum (My Heart My Head)
David Wakeling said:
If you find a place with less pain let me know. Quite a \"poetic\" view of life.Loved the imagery
May 19th, 2024 17:09
David Wakeling said:
If you find a place with less pain let me know. Quite a \"poetic\" view of life.Loved the imagery
May 19th, 2024 17:09
Cor Meum, Caput Meum (My Heart My Head)
sorenbarrett said:
Magnificent words that set the limits between heart and head. Very nice.
May 19th, 2024 17:06
sorenbarrett said:
Magnificent words that set the limits between heart and head. Very nice.
May 19th, 2024 17:06
Cor Meum, Caput Meum (My Heart My Head)
Teddy.15 said:
Exquisite poetry dear Thomas, how I\'d also just like to be one of those flowers blowing in the breeze, especially today. We should never change though one day that love will come right back to you. 🌹
May 19th, 2024 15:24
Teddy.15 said:
Exquisite poetry dear Thomas, how I\'d also just like to be one of those flowers blowing in the breeze, especially today. We should never change though one day that love will come right back to you. 🌹
May 19th, 2024 15:24
It\'s the Little Things
2781 said:
It\'s hard to appreciate freedom if you haven\'t experienced slavery.
May 18th, 2024 19:33
2781 said:
It\'s hard to appreciate freedom if you haven\'t experienced slavery.
May 18th, 2024 19:33
It\'s the Little Things
Goldfinch60 said:
It certainly could be worse Thomas.
Andy
May 18th, 2024 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
It certainly could be worse Thomas.
Andy
May 18th, 2024 00:59
It\'s the Little Things
David Wakeling said:
Some of us are in our own private prisons and yes we appreciated the little things.Great poem.
May 17th, 2024 16:41
David Wakeling said:
Some of us are in our own private prisons and yes we appreciated the little things.Great poem.
May 17th, 2024 16:41
It\'s the Little Things
Alan R said:
Kindness in hell goes a long way!! That\'s a brilliant thing to say
May 17th, 2024 14:15
Alan R said:
Kindness in hell goes a long way!! That\'s a brilliant thing to say
May 17th, 2024 14:15
It\'s the Little Things
Neville said:
they size don\'t matter, don\'t they, but it is the little things that always seem to count the most
May 17th, 2024 13:39
Neville said:
they size don\'t matter, don\'t they, but it is the little things that always seem to count the most
May 17th, 2024 13:39
It\'s the Little Things
Teddy.15 said:
It could always be worse, this is brilliant, shaking the crap out of bad times placing them where they should be right there in the appreciation of the little things. Superb. 🌹
May 17th, 2024 12:46
Teddy.15 said:
It could always be worse, this is brilliant, shaking the crap out of bad times placing them where they should be right there in the appreciation of the little things. Superb. 🌹
May 17th, 2024 12:46
Damnation Island (Lunatic\'s Ball)
Neville said:
well I\'ll be damned .. never even got an invite 😎👍
May 17th, 2024 08:18
Neville said:
well I\'ll be damned .. never even got an invite 😎👍
May 17th, 2024 08:18
Damnation Island (Lunatic\'s Ball)
orchidee said:
Does the No.7 bus (or boat) go there?! lol.
May 17th, 2024 01:35
orchidee said:
Does the No.7 bus (or boat) go there?! lol.
May 17th, 2024 01:35
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