Comments received on poems by Thomas W Case
The Purple
aDarkerMind said:
night reading at its best my friend,
another work of art.
March 26th, 2024 11:04
aDarkerMind said:
night reading at its best my friend,
another work of art.
March 26th, 2024 11:04
The Womb\'s Lullaby
Teddy.15 said:
I first heard the
lullaby in the
womb.
It has a pulse
and rhythm.
It was embedded in
my tissue and cells.
And when I was shot out,
bloody and naked,
the cord was cut.
The journey began.
And still it goes on. Awe the pain and anxiety of each day yet to come, superb poetry Sir. 🌹
March 25th, 2024 03:28
Teddy.15 said:
I first heard the
lullaby in the
womb.
It has a pulse
and rhythm.
It was embedded in
my tissue and cells.
And when I was shot out,
bloody and naked,
the cord was cut.
The journey began.
And still it goes on. Awe the pain and anxiety of each day yet to come, superb poetry Sir. 🌹
March 25th, 2024 03:28
The Womb\'s Lullaby
orchidee said:
A fine write Thomas. I can\'t keep calling you \'T\'. Or shall I? lol.
March 25th, 2024 02:57
orchidee said:
A fine write Thomas. I can\'t keep calling you \'T\'. Or shall I? lol.
March 25th, 2024 02:57
Until the Rain Stops
Bella Shepard said:
To bare the soul for love, what could be more beautiful? I\'d say the poet definitely got it right.
March 22nd, 2024 16:01
Bella Shepard said:
To bare the soul for love, what could be more beautiful? I\'d say the poet definitely got it right.
March 22nd, 2024 16:01
Until the Rain Stops
orchidee said:
Good write T.
It stopped raining there?! lol.
March 22nd, 2024 03:43
orchidee said:
Good write T.
It stopped raining there?! lol.
March 22nd, 2024 03:43
Until the Rain Stops
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love still be there even in the rain Thomas.
Andy
March 22nd, 2024 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love still be there even in the rain Thomas.
Andy
March 22nd, 2024 02:11
Until the Rain Stops
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, I\'d say this is a love letter. And I\'m truly humbled to read this , so very romantic and real. Beautiful emotion Sir. 🌹
March 22nd, 2024 01:03
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, I\'d say this is a love letter. And I\'m truly humbled to read this , so very romantic and real. Beautiful emotion Sir. 🌹
March 22nd, 2024 01:03
Green is my Bed
Bobby O said:
I smiled at the Utopia line ,
It may mean Naivette is good
Or why not expect other than truly debilitating because we are brave and can face worse imagined fear
Or maybe the best way to place in our logic is to seek a diminished view?
I just liked the whole thing and I would have been better suited to deal w my ex had I read this first.
Nice nice
March 21st, 2024 07:05
Bobby O said:
I smiled at the Utopia line ,
It may mean Naivette is good
Or why not expect other than truly debilitating because we are brave and can face worse imagined fear
Or maybe the best way to place in our logic is to seek a diminished view?
I just liked the whole thing and I would have been better suited to deal w my ex had I read this first.
Nice nice
March 21st, 2024 07:05
Jazz In Hell
Bobby O said:
Two things
First I enjoyed it
Second I’m still trying to get around it. Love the polka dot dress. I play chess at a competition level but the long games kill me
March 21st, 2024 06:47
Bobby O said:
Two things
First I enjoyed it
Second I’m still trying to get around it. Love the polka dot dress. I play chess at a competition level but the long games kill me
March 21st, 2024 06:47
Jazz In Hell
Teddy.15 said:
You must have met Dante and a few others I suspect such as Bukowski himself. I cannot help but be pulled in by the Italian surrender phrase, hey they got it back though. 🌹 Always a pleasure to read.
March 21st, 2024 04:39
Teddy.15 said:
You must have met Dante and a few others I suspect such as Bukowski himself. I cannot help but be pulled in by the Italian surrender phrase, hey they got it back though. 🌹 Always a pleasure to read.
March 21st, 2024 04:39
Whose Seed Is This?
Bella Shepard said:
The seed, the miracle of life you have captured in this wonderful poem is truly inspiring. We should be awestruck every time we see one.
March 19th, 2024 14:21
Bella Shepard said:
The seed, the miracle of life you have captured in this wonderful poem is truly inspiring. We should be awestruck every time we see one.
March 19th, 2024 14:21
Green is my Bed
Bella Shepard said:
Floating peacefully in a sea of green, the sky above and the expanse of life that is our natural world all around us. What could be more real or beautiful. Incredible pic to accompany this wonderful soul searching poem my friend!
March 19th, 2024 14:14
Bella Shepard said:
Floating peacefully in a sea of green, the sky above and the expanse of life that is our natural world all around us. What could be more real or beautiful. Incredible pic to accompany this wonderful soul searching poem my friend!
March 19th, 2024 14:14
The Proper Task
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphors are great in this poem. Nicely done
March 19th, 2024 09:58
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphors are great in this poem. Nicely done
March 19th, 2024 09:58
Whose Seed Is This?
Teddy.15 said:
Superb poetry, love the last lines. Your imagery is fabulous. 🌹
March 19th, 2024 02:03
Teddy.15 said:
Superb poetry, love the last lines. Your imagery is fabulous. 🌹
March 19th, 2024 02:03
Whose Seed Is This?
Introverted Sage said:
I\'m loving your latest works!
🪶Inspiring and full of life
March 19th, 2024 00:26
Introverted Sage said:
I\'m loving your latest works!
🪶Inspiring and full of life
March 19th, 2024 00:26
Dark Corners of the Soul
MendedFences27 said:
Very relatable. I think lots of us have a \"little boy/girl\" inside them. It\'s like an unfilled hole that wants to be filled but never is, keeping us in the time of when it was created. I felt something when reading this and realized how lucky I am. Nicely done. - Phil A.
March 17th, 2024 10:49
MendedFences27 said:
Very relatable. I think lots of us have a \"little boy/girl\" inside them. It\'s like an unfilled hole that wants to be filled but never is, keeping us in the time of when it was created. I felt something when reading this and realized how lucky I am. Nicely done. - Phil A.
March 17th, 2024 10:49
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