Comments received on poems by Thomas W Case
Like a Butterfly Melting
sorenbarrett said:
The obsession of love is well expressed here. Nice images.
November 26th, 2023 15:43
sorenbarrett said:
The obsession of love is well expressed here. Nice images.
November 26th, 2023 15:43
Like a Butterfly Melting
John Lee said:
well written description of loneliness. Nice job
November 25th, 2023 22:06
John Lee said:
well written description of loneliness. Nice job
November 25th, 2023 22:06
Fuck all the King\'s Horses And All The King\'s Men
Bobby O said:
An interesting mechanism for the fly on the wall ?it’s commentary and its observation. Does that pride thing mean it arrived first with intention to lead , or with a certain varnish could sometimes mean, that it hangs around stir up problems but just when the trouble is about to get big the phony self appointed shill realizes that his act , that is without substance, can’t hang under pressure and he charts a quick escape , he “Goeth”
Elsewhere??)
November 24th, 2023 23:56
Bobby O said:
An interesting mechanism for the fly on the wall ?it’s commentary and its observation. Does that pride thing mean it arrived first with intention to lead , or with a certain varnish could sometimes mean, that it hangs around stir up problems but just when the trouble is about to get big the phony self appointed shill realizes that his act , that is without substance, can’t hang under pressure and he charts a quick escape , he “Goeth”
Elsewhere??)
November 24th, 2023 23:56
Fuck all the King\'s Horses And All The King\'s Men
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh I\'d buy a collection of rewritten nursery rhymes - so bring your entrepreneurial spirit/skills to bear, please...!
Excellent.
November 24th, 2023 17:48
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh I\'d buy a collection of rewritten nursery rhymes - so bring your entrepreneurial spirit/skills to bear, please...!
Excellent.
November 24th, 2023 17:48
Fuck all the King\'s Horses And All The King\'s Men
Syd said:
I wish my kids were still little so I could read this version of a bed time story to them. Great write!
-Syd
November 24th, 2023 15:01
Syd said:
I wish my kids were still little so I could read this version of a bed time story to them. Great write!
-Syd
November 24th, 2023 15:01
Fuck all the King\'s Horses And All The King\'s Men
Ellen Marsell said:
Really, it was fun ))
November 24th, 2023 08:46
Ellen Marsell said:
Really, it was fun ))
November 24th, 2023 08:46
Fuck all the King\'s Horses And All The King\'s Men
Teddy.15 said:
LOL very entertaining dear Thomas, did you know that Humpty Dumpty was really a cannon. 💜
November 24th, 2023 05:51
Teddy.15 said:
LOL very entertaining dear Thomas, did you know that Humpty Dumpty was really a cannon. 💜
November 24th, 2023 05:51
Fuck all the King\'s Horses And All The King\'s Men
Tom Dylan said:
Very good, Thomas.
November 24th, 2023 03:03
Tom Dylan said:
Very good, Thomas.
November 24th, 2023 03:03
Fuck all the King\'s Horses And All The King\'s Men
Introverted Sage said:
Clever perspective of the woefully ignorant. Good one!
November 24th, 2023 02:50
Introverted Sage said:
Clever perspective of the woefully ignorant. Good one!
November 24th, 2023 02:50
Fuck all the King\'s Horses And All The King\'s Men
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words Thomas.
Andy
November 24th, 2023 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words Thomas.
Andy
November 24th, 2023 02:16
Fuck all the King\'s Horses And All The King\'s Men
Lorenz said:
Don\'t take the hump !
accept the fall ...
November 24th, 2023 01:58
Lorenz said:
Don\'t take the hump !
accept the fall ...
November 24th, 2023 01:58
Death is Stalking Me
Bobby O said:
I believe I possess no retrospective or introspective that can sneak past my hardened bias and trained denial about my own demise. Rather , much like in your piece I view it through my personal loss of friends , my journey forced to rearrange , I just don’t like it. The inevitability for me is always a swim across a calm shallow sea.
November 23rd, 2023 20:03
Bobby O said:
I believe I possess no retrospective or introspective that can sneak past my hardened bias and trained denial about my own demise. Rather , much like in your piece I view it through my personal loss of friends , my journey forced to rearrange , I just don’t like it. The inevitability for me is always a swim across a calm shallow sea.
November 23rd, 2023 20:03
Death is Stalking Me
madalynsamantha said:
I’m so sorry for you loss. Secondly,I absolutely love this. Death is stalking us all and in the end it will unfortunately get us.
November 23rd, 2023 16:32
madalynsamantha said:
I’m so sorry for you loss. Secondly,I absolutely love this. Death is stalking us all and in the end it will unfortunately get us.
November 23rd, 2023 16:32
Death is Stalking Me
G.Cabús said:
I am an admirer of the concrete in your writings!
Thank you Thomas, for sharing your inspirational talent with us,
November 23rd, 2023 12:54
G.Cabús said:
I am an admirer of the concrete in your writings!
Thank you Thomas, for sharing your inspirational talent with us,
November 23rd, 2023 12:54
Death is Stalking Me
evenwheniLie said:
I always love well written works on real life situations, this poem has weight and it\'s own gravity.
November 23rd, 2023 08:24
evenwheniLie said:
I always love well written works on real life situations, this poem has weight and it\'s own gravity.
November 23rd, 2023 08:24
Death is Stalking Me
Goldfinch60 said:
Well done in finishing the poem Thomas.
Andy
November 23rd, 2023 02:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Well done in finishing the poem Thomas.
Andy
November 23rd, 2023 02:56
Death is Stalking Me
John Lee said:
Well done! And Yes. You showed death this time and finished the poem. Every small victory against death is a large victory for life!
November 23rd, 2023 01:54
John Lee said:
Well done! And Yes. You showed death this time and finished the poem. Every small victory against death is a large victory for life!
November 23rd, 2023 01:54
Death is Stalking Me
Introverted Sage said:
This made me thinkof the Anais Nin quote: \'I postpone death by living, by suffering, by error, by risking, by giving, by losing.\'
🪶Great write!
November 23rd, 2023 00:30
Introverted Sage said:
This made me thinkof the Anais Nin quote: \'I postpone death by living, by suffering, by error, by risking, by giving, by losing.\'
🪶Great write!
November 23rd, 2023 00:30
Mary\'s Mouth
aDarkerMind said:
I would imagine Mr Cohen applauding your work as loudly as I do Thomas;
November 22nd, 2023 13:52
aDarkerMind said:
I would imagine Mr Cohen applauding your work as loudly as I do Thomas;
November 22nd, 2023 13:52
4 Walls
Katdream said:
In my mind, the simple things are the most elegant. We all need our own castle, even if it is only in our mind\'s eye.
November 21st, 2023 17:46
Katdream said:
In my mind, the simple things are the most elegant. We all need our own castle, even if it is only in our mind\'s eye.
November 21st, 2023 17:46
Will They Remember Me Well?
Katdream said:
This is a beautiful reminder that everything that happens in this universe adds up to something spectacular. And, then, that beautiful child....legacy indeed.
November 21st, 2023 17:40
Katdream said:
This is a beautiful reminder that everything that happens in this universe adds up to something spectacular. And, then, that beautiful child....legacy indeed.
November 21st, 2023 17:40
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