Comments received on poems by Thomas W Case
Kings and Queens Die, While I Train Kittens
Bobby O said:
You show moxie and agility as you juggle juxtapositions of the critical and mundane with nary a bias to either
December 15th, 2023 19:23
Bobby O said:
You show moxie and agility as you juggle juxtapositions of the critical and mundane with nary a bias to either
December 15th, 2023 19:23
I Need To Visit France
Neville said:
Maybe we should form a cult .. France really is something else .. Reads like a wake up call .. Be sure to book them tickets .. Neville
December 15th, 2023 14:12
Neville said:
Maybe we should form a cult .. France really is something else .. Reads like a wake up call .. Be sure to book them tickets .. Neville
December 15th, 2023 14:12
I Need To Visit France
sorenbarrett said:
Some dreams can be unfulfilled and frustrating.
December 14th, 2023 12:29
sorenbarrett said:
Some dreams can be unfulfilled and frustrating.
December 14th, 2023 12:29
I Need To Visit France
Cassie58 said:
A frustrating dream. Especially the phone number and address of that French babe being lost like that. Strange how mixed up dreams can become. Still, this had a touch of spice about it. You need to dream more often.
December 13th, 2023 23:27
Cassie58 said:
A frustrating dream. Especially the phone number and address of that French babe being lost like that. Strange how mixed up dreams can become. Still, this had a touch of spice about it. You need to dream more often.
December 13th, 2023 23:27
No More Eden
shadowbones said:
Great poem! I see the randomness of it all too.
December 12th, 2023 19:31
shadowbones said:
Great poem! I see the randomness of it all too.
December 12th, 2023 19:31
For a Friend in an Asylum in California
Tooway said:
Nice cadence in the form of words
December 12th, 2023 17:35
Tooway said:
Nice cadence in the form of words
December 12th, 2023 17:35
Dapple and Down
Tooway said:
Down I go into the gray and brown.
This is the only part that I cant make sense of, love the word play in the rest. Can\'t tell if it\'s cultural differences that I don\'t get the first line or if it went over my head. No need to explain, just didn\'t want to be sincere of something I liked but didn\'t understand fully. Thanks
December 12th, 2023 17:29
Tooway said:
Down I go into the gray and brown.
This is the only part that I cant make sense of, love the word play in the rest. Can\'t tell if it\'s cultural differences that I don\'t get the first line or if it went over my head. No need to explain, just didn\'t want to be sincere of something I liked but didn\'t understand fully. Thanks
December 12th, 2023 17:29
Like a Butterfly Melting
Parisab said:
The crow pecking and the life inching away like a filthy worm: like loss, leaving someone to waste away . Like someone waiting for the pain to stop-great symbolism
December 12th, 2023 02:24
Parisab said:
The crow pecking and the life inching away like a filthy worm: like loss, leaving someone to waste away . Like someone waiting for the pain to stop-great symbolism
December 12th, 2023 02:24
2 Dollars on the 6 Horse to Show
gray0328 said:
Nicely done. I worked at the Fair Grounds here in New Orleans for 13yrs back in the 80\'s and I have fond memories of that time. I had my own tip sheet (Courtney\'s Connor) that sold for $2 and I used that income for all my bets. I still read DRF everyday.
December 10th, 2023 11:27
gray0328 said:
Nicely done. I worked at the Fair Grounds here in New Orleans for 13yrs back in the 80\'s and I have fond memories of that time. I had my own tip sheet (Courtney\'s Connor) that sold for $2 and I used that income for all my bets. I still read DRF everyday.
December 10th, 2023 11:27
2 Dollars on the 6 Horse to Show
orchidee said:
A fine write T.
I lost! I put 6 dollars on the 2 horse. Doh! lol.
December 8th, 2023 10:50
orchidee said:
A fine write T.
I lost! I put 6 dollars on the 2 horse. Doh! lol.
December 8th, 2023 10:50
2 Dollars on the 6 Horse to Show
Tom Dylan said:
A really good poem, Thomas. Some great lines, that look in your eyes, was full of good-byes, just brilliant. My wife asked me the other day what I\'d like for Christmas, I told her, Seedy Town Blues.
December 8th, 2023 10:00
Tom Dylan said:
A really good poem, Thomas. Some great lines, that look in your eyes, was full of good-byes, just brilliant. My wife asked me the other day what I\'d like for Christmas, I told her, Seedy Town Blues.
December 8th, 2023 10:00
Life Anew
orchidee said:
A lovely pic and write T.
We have big black tom cat, and his sister a tabby cat.
December 8th, 2023 03:15
orchidee said:
A lovely pic and write T.
We have big black tom cat, and his sister a tabby cat.
December 8th, 2023 03:15
For a Friend in an Asylum in California
John Lee said:
Very nice write! I read these lines several times, definitely took me somewhere.
\"The Mad Hatter moon
laughs at me,
and the fog
only lasts a
little while.
Just one more time,
please stay a while.\"
December 5th, 2023 22:01
John Lee said:
Very nice write! I read these lines several times, definitely took me somewhere.
\"The Mad Hatter moon
laughs at me,
and the fog
only lasts a
little while.
Just one more time,
please stay a while.\"
December 5th, 2023 22:01
For a Friend in an Asylum in California
Tom Dylan said:
Another belter. Some lovely lines.
December 4th, 2023 02:31
Tom Dylan said:
Another belter. Some lovely lines.
December 4th, 2023 02:31
No More Eden
John Prophet said:
Life is so very far from Eden. Maybe someday. Nice work!
December 1st, 2023 21:09
John Prophet said:
Life is so very far from Eden. Maybe someday. Nice work!
December 1st, 2023 21:09
No More Eden
Parisab said:
Very balanced in theme and content-May you find Eden in all beautiful things…
December 1st, 2023 11:25
Parisab said:
Very balanced in theme and content-May you find Eden in all beautiful things…
December 1st, 2023 11:25
No More Eden
Bobby O said:
This is really good I read it twice and it got better. Nice job. Good mind.
December 1st, 2023 02:10
Bobby O said:
This is really good I read it twice and it got better. Nice job. Good mind.
December 1st, 2023 02:10
No More Eden
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes that randomness takes us in the right direction Thomas, it certainly has for me.
Andy
November 30th, 2023 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes that randomness takes us in the right direction Thomas, it certainly has for me.
Andy
November 30th, 2023 02:44
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