Comments received on poems by Thomas W Case
For a Friend in an Asylum in California
Teddy.15 said:
How truly wonderful, just for a glimpse of sanity. What a stunning write I always love your brevity especially when every word counts as yours always do. 🌹
May 28th, 2024 01:29
Teddy.15 said:
How truly wonderful, just for a glimpse of sanity. What a stunning write I always love your brevity especially when every word counts as yours always do. 🌹
May 28th, 2024 01:29
For a Friend in an Asylum in California
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Thomas.
Andy
May 28th, 2024 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Thomas.
Andy
May 28th, 2024 01:27
For a Friend in an Asylum in California
Cassie58 said:
Soft asylum, however soft it’s going to be a hard job. So well captured Thomas. Have a good Tuesday.
May 27th, 2024 23:53
Cassie58 said:
Soft asylum, however soft it’s going to be a hard job. So well captured Thomas. Have a good Tuesday.
May 27th, 2024 23:53
For a Friend in an Asylum in California
jarcher54 said:
Lazy lithium days and Cheshire madness... very fine imagery, densely teeming with allusions and sound. I will remember this little ditty... I assume you are trying to say \"make the best of it\" but with irony and yes beauty.
May 27th, 2024 21:31
jarcher54 said:
Lazy lithium days and Cheshire madness... very fine imagery, densely teeming with allusions and sound. I will remember this little ditty... I assume you are trying to say \"make the best of it\" but with irony and yes beauty.
May 27th, 2024 21:31
In a Battle Without a Shield
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Heart felt message Thomas
May 27th, 2024 16:35
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Heart felt message Thomas
May 27th, 2024 16:35
In a Battle Without a Shield
aDarkerMind said:
as good as always Thomas;
a big thumbs up for this one;
May 27th, 2024 11:23
aDarkerMind said:
as good as always Thomas;
a big thumbs up for this one;
May 27th, 2024 11:23
In a Battle Without a Shield
Meera Mere said:
Amazing poem T.
Hope you are doing well now....
May 27th, 2024 09:11
Meera Mere said:
Amazing poem T.
Hope you are doing well now....
May 27th, 2024 09:11
In a Battle Without a Shield
sorenbarrett said:
The sense of stillness and aloneness as well as the season and site are setting the tone. I have been there many times and can feel it in this poem. Nicely done.
May 27th, 2024 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
The sense of stillness and aloneness as well as the season and site are setting the tone. I have been there many times and can feel it in this poem. Nicely done.
May 27th, 2024 04:33
In a Battle Without a Shield
Neville said:
who was it said the withdrawal method was safe eh\' .. I learnt early that everything has its drawbacks .. and this is just about as ragged and real as it gets .. Neville
May 27th, 2024 02:12
Neville said:
who was it said the withdrawal method was safe eh\' .. I learnt early that everything has its drawbacks .. and this is just about as ragged and real as it gets .. Neville
May 27th, 2024 02:12
In a Battle Without a Shield
Teddy.15 said:
And even then we could say things could always be worse. Such emotion dear Thomas, your imagery brings me to a very dark place. Excellent work as always. 🌹
May 27th, 2024 01:47
Teddy.15 said:
And even then we could say things could always be worse. Such emotion dear Thomas, your imagery brings me to a very dark place. Excellent work as always. 🌹
May 27th, 2024 01:47
In a Battle Without a Shield
Alan R said:
Beautiful.... captures the helplessness so well...
May 27th, 2024 00:42
Alan R said:
Beautiful.... captures the helplessness so well...
May 27th, 2024 00:42
Furor Scribendi
Bobby O said:
Declarative. If there exists a wiggle of doubt it’s too small to measure. It’s instructs or maybe Leads?
May 26th, 2024 05:49
Bobby O said:
Declarative. If there exists a wiggle of doubt it’s too small to measure. It’s instructs or maybe Leads?
May 26th, 2024 05:49
Furor Scribendi
Cassie58 said:
Once it gets a grip, there’s no turning back and no possible cure. Great read Thomas. Happy Saturday.
May 25th, 2024 07:12
Cassie58 said:
Once it gets a grip, there’s no turning back and no possible cure. Great read Thomas. Happy Saturday.
May 25th, 2024 07:12
Furor Scribendi
Goldfinch60 said:
That rage on the page is so meaningful Thomas.
Andy
May 25th, 2024 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
That rage on the page is so meaningful Thomas.
Andy
May 25th, 2024 01:47
Furor Scribendi
orchidee said:
Bit of French there again.
And the last line but one: \'pardon my french!\' lol.
May 25th, 2024 01:42
orchidee said:
Bit of French there again.
And the last line but one: \'pardon my french!\' lol.
May 25th, 2024 01:42
Furor Scribendi
Neville said:
Tis an affliction suffered with a passion and for which there is no easy cure .. Enjoyed a hell of a lot sir ..
May 25th, 2024 01:05
Neville said:
Tis an affliction suffered with a passion and for which there is no easy cure .. Enjoyed a hell of a lot sir ..
May 25th, 2024 01:05
Furor Scribendi
Teddy.15 said:
The passion that has gone into here makes me believe every word but your last words are the ones I think I believe with all my heart, a magnificent might of percervence and yes, it shows in all the words you write. To give up is to lay down and die so to speak, I love this dear Thomas. 🌹
May 25th, 2024 00:49
Teddy.15 said:
The passion that has gone into here makes me believe every word but your last words are the ones I think I believe with all my heart, a magnificent might of percervence and yes, it shows in all the words you write. To give up is to lay down and die so to speak, I love this dear Thomas. 🌹
May 25th, 2024 00:49
Furor Scribendi
sorenbarrett said:
This was so raw and the wording with images and metaphor were so clever. Several good lines in this piece.
\"I grab the pen like
a junkie grabs the syringe,}
\" the pen vomits
words on the paper,\"
Great work
May 24th, 2024 12:27
sorenbarrett said:
This was so raw and the wording with images and metaphor were so clever. Several good lines in this piece.
\"I grab the pen like
a junkie grabs the syringe,}
\" the pen vomits
words on the paper,\"
Great work
May 24th, 2024 12:27
Trips to the Cemetery.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Thomas showing the innocence of children.
Andy
May 24th, 2024 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Thomas showing the innocence of children.
Andy
May 24th, 2024 01:50
Trips to the Cemetery.
Teddy.15 said:
Such true innocence of a seven year old, beautifully written dear Thomas. 🌹
May 23rd, 2024 19:03
Teddy.15 said:
Such true innocence of a seven year old, beautifully written dear Thomas. 🌹
May 23rd, 2024 19:03
Trips to the Cemetery.
sorenbarrett said:
A great story that keeps the timeline. When I was small my father took us to the cemetery to show us where Santa was buried.
May 23rd, 2024 17:56
sorenbarrett said:
A great story that keeps the timeline. When I was small my father took us to the cemetery to show us where Santa was buried.
May 23rd, 2024 17:56
The Cages
orchidee said:
Good write T.
What happened to me? I was The Birdman. lol.
May 22nd, 2024 02:03
orchidee said:
Good write T.
What happened to me? I was The Birdman. lol.
May 22nd, 2024 02:03
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