Comments received on poems by Thomas W Case
My Raven of Desire
Cassie58 said:
Visually hot. Sets the pulse racing. Great brevity Thomas.
June 9th, 2024 10:43
Cassie58 said:
Visually hot. Sets the pulse racing. Great brevity Thomas.
June 9th, 2024 10:43
Death is Stalking Me
Goldfinch60 said:
You finished the poem Thomas and I am sure there will be many, many more.
Andy
June 8th, 2024 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
You finished the poem Thomas and I am sure there will be many, many more.
Andy
June 8th, 2024 02:09
Death is Stalking Me
Teddy.15 said:
I believe it is behind us all dear Thomas, just ready to push us over the edge 🤣
June 7th, 2024 23:38
Teddy.15 said:
I believe it is behind us all dear Thomas, just ready to push us over the edge 🤣
June 7th, 2024 23:38
Death is Stalking Me
Doggerel Dave said:
Ain\'t mortality shit? However, necessary. But you did finish the poem - no point in letting something like death grind you down. LOL lol.............
June 7th, 2024 23:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Ain\'t mortality shit? However, necessary. But you did finish the poem - no point in letting something like death grind you down. LOL lol.............
June 7th, 2024 23:02
Death is Stalking Me
2781 said:
Then I saw that wisdom excelleth folly, as far as light excelleth darkness.
June 7th, 2024 22:25
2781 said:
Then I saw that wisdom excelleth folly, as far as light excelleth darkness.
June 7th, 2024 22:25
Her
Neville said:
I would like to say this is hot . but the perma frost forming on my nib says better not .. so I\'m just gonna write COOL in big letters .. OK .. N
June 7th, 2024 13:00
Neville said:
I would like to say this is hot . but the perma frost forming on my nib says better not .. so I\'m just gonna write COOL in big letters .. OK .. N
June 7th, 2024 13:00
Lost
Bobby O said:
I love the concept. I wanted one more line. A sort of payoff that that encapsulated all the benefits you mentioned. Something like
IT ENABLED ME TO REACH BEYOND
except better
June 7th, 2024 04:13
Bobby O said:
I love the concept. I wanted one more line. A sort of payoff that that encapsulated all the benefits you mentioned. Something like
IT ENABLED ME TO REACH BEYOND
except better
June 7th, 2024 04:13
Clean, Clean, Clean
J.Edse said:
Great work! I really like this one. I\'d rather live life dirty and authentic than clean and artificial!
June 5th, 2024 17:15
J.Edse said:
Great work! I really like this one. I\'d rather live life dirty and authentic than clean and artificial!
June 5th, 2024 17:15
Trippin
aDarkerMind said:
straight to the jugular...
a touch of humour in tow.
pretty good my friemd;
June 5th, 2024 11:20
aDarkerMind said:
straight to the jugular...
a touch of humour in tow.
pretty good my friemd;
June 5th, 2024 11:20
Trippin
peto said:
There is a gritty reality in your writing Thomas
Would say magic if mushrooms weren\'t involved
Killer last line also
Respect
June 5th, 2024 06:54
peto said:
There is a gritty reality in your writing Thomas
Would say magic if mushrooms weren\'t involved
Killer last line also
Respect
June 5th, 2024 06:54
Clean, Clean, Clean
Goldfinch60 said:
I have told my neighbours that if they ever see me cleaning my car to \'phone for an ambulance as I am obviously extremely ill!
Andy
June 5th, 2024 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
I have told my neighbours that if they ever see me cleaning my car to \'phone for an ambulance as I am obviously extremely ill!
Andy
June 5th, 2024 01:16
Trippin
orchidee said:
I thought my mushrooms tasted a bit magical at dinner today. hmm. lol.
June 4th, 2024 01:35
orchidee said:
I thought my mushrooms tasted a bit magical at dinner today. hmm. lol.
June 4th, 2024 01:35
Trippin
Neville said:
the last time I used shrooms, my wife was in labour .. scared the pants off me ..
June 4th, 2024 01:16
Neville said:
the last time I used shrooms, my wife was in labour .. scared the pants off me ..
June 4th, 2024 01:16
Trippin
Doggerel Dave said:
Those mushrooms were obviously not properly cooked, young Sir - I understand raw mushrooms......
You won\'t get dietary tips often from me, so make the most...after you find your your missing piece of apparel.
Good laugh with serious undertone.
June 4th, 2024 00:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Those mushrooms were obviously not properly cooked, young Sir - I understand raw mushrooms......
You won\'t get dietary tips often from me, so make the most...after you find your your missing piece of apparel.
Good laugh with serious undertone.
June 4th, 2024 00:43
Clean, Clean, Clean
Doggerel Dave said:
Look here, young man, you got clean away with that one...Can\'t fault it other than to ask should not \'your\' really be \'my\'?....unless.....
June 3rd, 2024 23:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Look here, young man, you got clean away with that one...Can\'t fault it other than to ask should not \'your\' really be \'my\'?....unless.....
June 3rd, 2024 23:28
Clean, Clean, Clean
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great piece, Thomas. All this obsession with cleanliness while a tsunami of chemicals, radiation, trash etc. etc. is produced day in and day out. It\'s going to reach a point where only a conflagration of epic size can clean it all up.
June 3rd, 2024 19:05
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great piece, Thomas. All this obsession with cleanliness while a tsunami of chemicals, radiation, trash etc. etc. is produced day in and day out. It\'s going to reach a point where only a conflagration of epic size can clean it all up.
June 3rd, 2024 19:05
Clean, Clean, Clean
Alan R said:
I literally wanna scream this poem in the face of some people, well done!
June 3rd, 2024 10:52
Alan R said:
I literally wanna scream this poem in the face of some people, well done!
June 3rd, 2024 10:52
Trips to the Cemetery.
gray0328 said:
Enjoy it thoroughly. When I was young my dad would sit me on his lap and let me drive is convertible Sprite in Audubon Park. Great memories.
June 3rd, 2024 09:17
gray0328 said:
Enjoy it thoroughly. When I was young my dad would sit me on his lap and let me drive is convertible Sprite in Audubon Park. Great memories.
June 3rd, 2024 09:17
Clean, Clean, Clean
gray0328 said:
Great work Thomas. Made me feel good about being a slob
June 3rd, 2024 09:14
gray0328 said:
Great work Thomas. Made me feel good about being a slob
June 3rd, 2024 09:14
Clean, Clean, Clean
Cassie58 said:
We are a long time dead. Why waste time on stuff which really doesn’t matter. You make a really good point here about where our time would be best invested.
June 3rd, 2024 08:29
Cassie58 said:
We are a long time dead. Why waste time on stuff which really doesn’t matter. You make a really good point here about where our time would be best invested.
June 3rd, 2024 08:29
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