Comments received on poems by Meera Mere
My existence
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words revealing experience and sadness leading to cynicism but some hope remains.
February 27th, 2024 14:51
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words revealing experience and sadness leading to cynicism but some hope remains.
February 27th, 2024 14:51
The Unwanted Mask
evenwheniLie said:
A meaningful poem with a good flow…. Beautiful
February 25th, 2024 11:38
evenwheniLie said:
A meaningful poem with a good flow…. Beautiful
February 25th, 2024 11:38
Remnants of Yesterday
p0em.writter said:
this is a lvely poem for the verse:
I yearn to rewind and secure my past,
Diminish the pain, make it the last.
I long for gentler wounds to bear,
Regretting the moments when I didn\'t care.
this what got me hooked i like the way u started off the poem
February 19th, 2024 10:03
p0em.writter said:
this is a lvely poem for the verse:
I yearn to rewind and secure my past,
Diminish the pain, make it the last.
I long for gentler wounds to bear,
Regretting the moments when I didn\'t care.
this what got me hooked i like the way u started off the poem
February 19th, 2024 10:03
Remnants of Yesterday
Hugh said:
\"The distant sight of you, a haunting scene,
I wish I hadn\'t waved my hand so keen.
A wish to undo my foolish ways,
And erase the memory of love\'s misplays.\"
Isn\'t that just a perfect verse, that what makes poetry alive, you can feel it, i guarantee even when your older, this memory will return, maybe with a smile on a past cherised, maybe with regret, but that verse (along with the rest of the poem is brilliant
February 19th, 2024 08:52
Hugh said:
\"The distant sight of you, a haunting scene,
I wish I hadn\'t waved my hand so keen.
A wish to undo my foolish ways,
And erase the memory of love\'s misplays.\"
Isn\'t that just a perfect verse, that what makes poetry alive, you can feel it, i guarantee even when your older, this memory will return, maybe with a smile on a past cherised, maybe with regret, but that verse (along with the rest of the poem is brilliant
February 19th, 2024 08:52
Everyday
boot said:
I think you have really cool poems in your head..I like them
February 6th, 2024 06:38
boot said:
I think you have really cool poems in your head..I like them
February 6th, 2024 06:38
Dusk’s Dilemma
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Dusk’s dilemma” by Meera Mere
While being romantic, your poem also has dramatization. Crying over a broken relationship. Sitting on a cliff at sunset : image of solitude, perhaps of sadness at the turn events took. “learning to embrace all the heat “ : trying to take the blame. “catching up, falling down” : chaos at the relationship getting out of control. “when did I drown” : hints at failing to handle the matter. “the eerie of red” : this could be the sunset or something else. “struggle to not feel sad” : the poem ends on a note of both struggle and sadness. Soman Ragavan. 4 February, 2024.
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February 4th, 2024 08:13
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Dusk’s dilemma” by Meera Mere
While being romantic, your poem also has dramatization. Crying over a broken relationship. Sitting on a cliff at sunset : image of solitude, perhaps of sadness at the turn events took. “learning to embrace all the heat “ : trying to take the blame. “catching up, falling down” : chaos at the relationship getting out of control. “when did I drown” : hints at failing to handle the matter. “the eerie of red” : this could be the sunset or something else. “struggle to not feel sad” : the poem ends on a note of both struggle and sadness. Soman Ragavan. 4 February, 2024.
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February 4th, 2024 08:13
A scar in stars
novellaa said:
Your poem is a powerful expression of feeling like an outsider, contrasting the unique individual against societal norms. The imagery of being different, like a moon among stars, really captures the essence of standing out and the struggle for acceptance and understanding. It\'s a poignant reflection on embracing one\'s uniqueness in a world that often values conformity. Keep expressing your unique perspective through such evocative poetry!✨
January 30th, 2024 11:09
novellaa said:
Your poem is a powerful expression of feeling like an outsider, contrasting the unique individual against societal norms. The imagery of being different, like a moon among stars, really captures the essence of standing out and the struggle for acceptance and understanding. It\'s a poignant reflection on embracing one\'s uniqueness in a world that often values conformity. Keep expressing your unique perspective through such evocative poetry!✨
January 30th, 2024 11:09
The Burden My Words Weighed
Soman Ragavan said:
Beautifully written poetry. Very touching. You express well your emotions. Soman Ragavan. 30 December, 2023.
December 30th, 2023 07:43
Soman Ragavan said:
Beautifully written poetry. Very touching. You express well your emotions. Soman Ragavan. 30 December, 2023.
December 30th, 2023 07:43
The Girl Who Grew Up
2781 said:
I like to think I am journeying back to childhood.
December 14th, 2023 08:02
2781 said:
I like to think I am journeying back to childhood.
December 14th, 2023 08:02
A Night without stars
2781 said:
And he that sat upon the throne said, Behold, I make all things new.
November 20th, 2023 08:39
2781 said:
And he that sat upon the throne said, Behold, I make all things new.
November 20th, 2023 08:39
Day After Killing an Angel- The little warrior
peto said:
You have a unique style of writing
Vivid imagery
Love the title
Like the little warrior needed a day to reflect
Enjoyed reading
Keep em coming
October 23rd, 2023 10:23
peto said:
You have a unique style of writing
Vivid imagery
Love the title
Like the little warrior needed a day to reflect
Enjoyed reading
Keep em coming
October 23rd, 2023 10:23
Day After Killing an Angel- The little warrior
2781 said:
I don\'t know what to think.
I know good triumphs over evil, and if we fall we only have ourselves to blame.
October 23rd, 2023 01:29
2781 said:
I don\'t know what to think.
I know good triumphs over evil, and if we fall we only have ourselves to blame.
October 23rd, 2023 01:29
Day After Killing an Angel- The little warrior
Thomas W Case said:
Very well crafted.
October 23rd, 2023 00:48
Thomas W Case said:
Very well crafted.
October 23rd, 2023 00:48
A Night without stars
peto said:
Super use of language
Welcome
I look forward to reading more from you
October 22nd, 2023 11:15
peto said:
Super use of language
Welcome
I look forward to reading more from you
October 22nd, 2023 11:15
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