Comments received on poems by Meera Mere



Empty Vessel
NafisaSB said:

the longing, the desire, and yet the reluctance to make a move are so well depicted...i would suggest and hope that the step is taken, and there is no holding back so that the twain may meet- and there is no holding back from either side

October 29th, 2025 07:54

I just want to β€”
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive words Meera.

Andy

October 29th, 2025 02:46

Do you also mean?
Doggerel Dave said:

\'Love\' is an exhaustingly overused term, as I have been wont to remark a number of times hereabouts! Your attempt to trim refine and nail it is a very worthwhile project. Thanks for the effort.

October 28th, 2025 16:54

I just want to β€”
sorenbarrett said:

The spirit is strong but the body is weak. How often the physical betrays the emotional. A touching poem of sentiment betrayed.

October 28th, 2025 09:09

Terms and Conditions
sorenbarrett said:

There is deep understanding in this poem and a sense of sadness. There are few that love us for who we are and this poem reflects this sense of loneliness and waiting. Well written

October 28th, 2025 03:47

Terms and Conditions
Goldfinch60 said:

Sad words Meera, in my life I have found love forever.

Andy

October 28th, 2025 02:23

Terms and Conditions
lunarchloedip said:

\"healing hurts before it soothes / you bleed a little / before you bloom\" πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»

really love this, thank you so much for sharing!

October 27th, 2025 20:53

Don\'t get me wrong !!!!
Doggerel Dave said:

Would be interesting to know more, or perhaps less as in \"β€œDon’t get me wrong, Mother β€” I love you, I empathize with you, but I pray I never end up a mother like you.”

October 26th, 2025 18:03

Empty Vessel
rhmn_7 said:

You reminded me of a similar memory and I thank you for that Meera!

October 26th, 2025 15:40

Don\'t get me wrong !!!!
sorenbarrett said:

Sad but also humorous in the way that it is stated. A dark statement of discontent. Nicely done.

October 26th, 2025 04:16

Don\'t get me wrong !!!!
orchidee said:

Erm, might I get you wrong?! lol.

October 26th, 2025 01:58

Empty Vessel
sorenbarrett said:

A great metaphor in this poem of sadness and alienation where loneliness runs through the words like wine spilled on a white linen tablecloth. Very nicely written

October 25th, 2025 03:56

Empty Vessel
peto said:

You are far from empty meera
Emotion oozes from your words
I\'m sending a hug on the off chance


October 25th, 2025 03:39

Empty Vessel
Kora said:

The heartache I feel reading this...
The last line especially.
Beautifully written.
I wish I could favourite it twice! ❀

October 25th, 2025 01:02

For A Girl Like Me
NafisaSB said:

don\'t short sell yourself - there is definitely something in each one that will attract the right sort of people..so be patient and wait...

October 24th, 2025 00:57

The Shackles On My Throat
sorenbarrett said:

Quite the image that captures well the sensation of anxiety and fear that comes with speaking out. Nicely imaged and worded

October 21st, 2025 04:32

Dear Mom
sorenbarrett said:

A sad poem about a person deprived of love that seems generational. Nicely written

October 20th, 2025 10:58

Bleed For Love....
peto said:

Meera
Your writing is progressing constantly
You always had a way with words
Now you have added emotion
You are loved by many on here
Very talented

October 19th, 2025 19:44

Bleed For Love....
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

October 19th, 2025 18:49

All at Once
William Hromada said:

Understandable

October 19th, 2025 08:31

All at Once
William Hromada said:

Under

October 19th, 2025 08:31

Bleed For Love....
sorenbarrett said:

In this poem there is a sadness where the one love that should be unconditional is not perceived. Whether true of not still a sad situation. It is as if God did not love you, and I am not a religious man. How can one love themself if the one that created you does not? A powerful message in this poem.

October 19th, 2025 04:09

For A Girl Like Me
Doggerel Dave said:

A little self deprecation can go a long way.....

October 19th, 2025 01:55

I HOPE I HAVE A DAUGHTER JUST LIKE ME...
peto said:

Your mum got lucky with her daughter
I\'ve no doubt you will also
Super write as per

October 18th, 2025 13:37

I HOPE I HAVE A DAUGHTER JUST LIKE ME...
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of being proud of who one is. It is strong and powerful. Nicely penned

October 18th, 2025 13:07

Why I Hate Maths
Paul Bell said:

I myself love maths, for most Friday and Saturday nights I get pi eyed squared.
This usually results in me going home in all sorts of angles, finally resulting in a horizontal submission.

October 17th, 2025 10:51

Why I Hate Maths
sorenbarrett said:

I think you just did and in such a clear way. Nicely said numbers can be a bane.

October 17th, 2025 10:46

For A Girl Like Me
Dan Williams said:

Don\'t sell yourself short; you can write. I like your honesty.

October 16th, 2025 23:14

All at Once
sorenbarrett said:

Quite the mixed emotions in this poem. It bounces from one end to the other.

October 16th, 2025 20:53

For A Girl Like Me
Poetic Licence said:

Myself I find nothing attractive in someone who thinks there perfect, the beauty lies in the cracks, faults and quirks we all have , nicely expressed write

October 16th, 2025 20:11

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