Comments received on poems by Meera Mere
Imagined Realities
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Meera may the worlds wounds all be healed.
Andy
March 11th, 2024 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Meera may the worlds wounds all be healed.
Andy
March 11th, 2024 02:16
Imagined Realities
anay said:
Ur words are getting damn good day by day. The imagination u create with ur poem is just mind blowing. Waiting to buy your book someday in future.
March 10th, 2024 23:00
anay said:
Ur words are getting damn good day by day. The imagination u create with ur poem is just mind blowing. Waiting to buy your book someday in future.
March 10th, 2024 23:00
My Pen Found its Might
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"My pen found its mightā by Meera Mere
Life is indeed strange. Itās a fight since the time you can remember, a fight even against those near and supposed to be ādearā to you. In fact, quite often the battles are against oneās near ones. These are tough battles, indeed, and they take a toll on us. The scars remain for long, if not for a lifetime. Where you are supposed to find support, you find treachery, obstacles.
āmy artistic soul saw through their disguiseā¦ā : poets have inherent qualities that enable them to see what others do not see. They have qualities like extra sensory perception that enables them to see quite a lot in the minds of others, especially stuff that is hidden.
āI fought their tyranny, broke free from their chainsā¦ā The fights are often against those quite near to us. Either you fight back or become their slave and allow them to get a victory.
āAnd discovered my voice, where freedom remainsā¦.ā : it is in discovering your voice that you can set yourself free from the bondage others want to impose on you. We poets take to writing to break free of chains and bondage. Writings can only be opposed by other writings and not by other means. So, our opponents can resort only to one thing : write back.
āI pursued my passions, ignored their empty chatterā¦ā : You are right to forge ahead and not to let others dictate your life. Your judge will be your writings, your compositions, not the vain chatter of others. Poets look at posterity and write for posterity, not for transient beings that gravitate around them.
āLife became a bliss, as I followed what truly matteredā¦.ā : as you find out what really matters, you discover joy, because you know that your real legacy is the compositions you leave back, especially in the form of writing. āA book is the only immortality.ā Quoted from the book ā3000 proverbs.ā Edited by Sam Phillips. New Delhi : Goodwill Publishing House, c 2017. Full acknowledgements are made to the authors, publishers and right-holders.
āA curse turned into a boon, my pen found its mightā¦ā : in the disorder and conflicts around you, you managed to steer towards that which really matters : leaving your footprints in an immortal way. Poetry is immortal. It has been said that the pen is mightier than the sword. Entire empires that were built by force have crumbled to dust : but writings remain. Today, the most formidable weapon is the keyboard --- on the laptop, the PC, the tablet or the mobile. And the Internet represents archives that cannot be destroyed. Soman Ragavan. 11 March, 2024.
March 10th, 2024 19:57
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"My pen found its mightā by Meera Mere
Life is indeed strange. Itās a fight since the time you can remember, a fight even against those near and supposed to be ādearā to you. In fact, quite often the battles are against oneās near ones. These are tough battles, indeed, and they take a toll on us. The scars remain for long, if not for a lifetime. Where you are supposed to find support, you find treachery, obstacles.
āmy artistic soul saw through their disguiseā¦ā : poets have inherent qualities that enable them to see what others do not see. They have qualities like extra sensory perception that enables them to see quite a lot in the minds of others, especially stuff that is hidden.
āI fought their tyranny, broke free from their chainsā¦ā The fights are often against those quite near to us. Either you fight back or become their slave and allow them to get a victory.
āAnd discovered my voice, where freedom remainsā¦.ā : it is in discovering your voice that you can set yourself free from the bondage others want to impose on you. We poets take to writing to break free of chains and bondage. Writings can only be opposed by other writings and not by other means. So, our opponents can resort only to one thing : write back.
āI pursued my passions, ignored their empty chatterā¦ā : You are right to forge ahead and not to let others dictate your life. Your judge will be your writings, your compositions, not the vain chatter of others. Poets look at posterity and write for posterity, not for transient beings that gravitate around them.
āLife became a bliss, as I followed what truly matteredā¦.ā : as you find out what really matters, you discover joy, because you know that your real legacy is the compositions you leave back, especially in the form of writing. āA book is the only immortality.ā Quoted from the book ā3000 proverbs.ā Edited by Sam Phillips. New Delhi : Goodwill Publishing House, c 2017. Full acknowledgements are made to the authors, publishers and right-holders.
āA curse turned into a boon, my pen found its mightā¦ā : in the disorder and conflicts around you, you managed to steer towards that which really matters : leaving your footprints in an immortal way. Poetry is immortal. It has been said that the pen is mightier than the sword. Entire empires that were built by force have crumbled to dust : but writings remain. Today, the most formidable weapon is the keyboard --- on the laptop, the PC, the tablet or the mobile. And the Internet represents archives that cannot be destroyed. Soman Ragavan. 11 March, 2024.
March 10th, 2024 19:57
Imagined Realities
peto said:
Your writing is getting tighter
Great rhyme flow and content
\"Weaving characters \"
You are quite the character yourself
Great read
March 10th, 2024 07:05
peto said:
Your writing is getting tighter
Great rhyme flow and content
\"Weaving characters \"
You are quite the character yourself
Great read
March 10th, 2024 07:05
Imagined Realities
Cassie58 said:
I love to wander in my mind too.Lovely words here Meera. You create beautiful imagery. Have a great day.
March 10th, 2024 06:56
Cassie58 said:
I love to wander in my mind too.Lovely words here Meera. You create beautiful imagery. Have a great day.
March 10th, 2024 06:56
A Light in the Night
Cassie58 said:
A positive attitude in the face of adversity.
That takes strength Meera. Donāt give up even when the future looks bleak. I enjoyed your poem.
March 5th, 2024 13:16
Cassie58 said:
A positive attitude in the face of adversity.
That takes strength Meera. Donāt give up even when the future looks bleak. I enjoyed your poem.
March 5th, 2024 13:16
A Light in the Night
peto said:
Nicely done yet again meera
Keep em coming
You are honing your craft superbly well
March 5th, 2024 12:17
peto said:
Nicely done yet again meera
Keep em coming
You are honing your craft superbly well
March 5th, 2024 12:17
A Light in the Night
Neilton said:
Such a great poem!!There is always a light even in the darkest days!
March 5th, 2024 10:39
Neilton said:
Such a great poem!!There is always a light even in the darkest days!
March 5th, 2024 10:39
A Light in the Night
anay said:
Your poems are just too good. Just kuddos to u.
March 5th, 2024 10:18
anay said:
Your poems are just too good. Just kuddos to u.
March 5th, 2024 10:18
The 8 year oldās whisper
rhmn_7 said:
āSilent or talkative, be yourself and live itā, yes and don\'t think about what others want you to be.
March 3rd, 2024 07:52
rhmn_7 said:
āSilent or talkative, be yourself and live itā, yes and don\'t think about what others want you to be.
March 3rd, 2024 07:52
I amā¦ā¦
anay said:
For the first time I read ur poem and trust me I must say it\'s damn good. U gonna rock for sure.
March 2nd, 2024 12:07
anay said:
For the first time I read ur poem and trust me I must say it\'s damn good. U gonna rock for sure.
March 2nd, 2024 12:07
The 8 year oldās whisper
Cloie said:
I love this! The dialogue with your younger self was a nice touch. The ending\'s message about embracing your true self was powerful. Great job!
March 2nd, 2024 10:44
Cloie said:
I love this! The dialogue with your younger self was a nice touch. The ending\'s message about embracing your true self was powerful. Great job!
March 2nd, 2024 10:44
The 8 year oldās whisper
peto said:
Meera
Your word choices are excellent
The last line in particular is very impressive
Thoroughly enjoyed this one
Loud and clear
March 2nd, 2024 08:30
peto said:
Meera
Your word choices are excellent
The last line in particular is very impressive
Thoroughly enjoyed this one
Loud and clear
March 2nd, 2024 08:30
My existence
Cassie58 said:
Powerfully expressed with good choice of language. Well done Meera. Pleased I stopped by.
February 27th, 2024 18:40
Cassie58 said:
Powerfully expressed with good choice of language. Well done Meera. Pleased I stopped by.
February 27th, 2024 18:40
My existence
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words revealing experience and sadness leading to cynicism but some hope remains.
February 27th, 2024 14:51
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words revealing experience and sadness leading to cynicism but some hope remains.
February 27th, 2024 14:51
The Unwanted Mask
evenwheniLie said:
A meaningful poem with a good flowā¦. Beautiful
February 25th, 2024 11:38
evenwheniLie said:
A meaningful poem with a good flowā¦. Beautiful
February 25th, 2024 11:38
Remnants of Yesterday
p0em.writter said:
this is a lvely poem for the verse:
I yearn to rewind and secure my past,
Diminish the pain, make it the last.
I long for gentler wounds to bear,
Regretting the moments when I didn\'t care.
this what got me hooked i like the way u started off the poem
February 19th, 2024 10:03
p0em.writter said:
this is a lvely poem for the verse:
I yearn to rewind and secure my past,
Diminish the pain, make it the last.
I long for gentler wounds to bear,
Regretting the moments when I didn\'t care.
this what got me hooked i like the way u started off the poem
February 19th, 2024 10:03
Remnants of Yesterday
Hugh said:
\"The distant sight of you, a haunting scene,
I wish I hadn\'t waved my hand so keen.
A wish to undo my foolish ways,
And erase the memory of love\'s misplays.\"
Isn\'t that just a perfect verse, that what makes poetry alive, you can feel it, i guarantee even when your older, this memory will return, maybe with a smile on a past cherised, maybe with regret, but that verse (along with the rest of the poem is brilliant
February 19th, 2024 08:52
Hugh said:
\"The distant sight of you, a haunting scene,
I wish I hadn\'t waved my hand so keen.
A wish to undo my foolish ways,
And erase the memory of love\'s misplays.\"
Isn\'t that just a perfect verse, that what makes poetry alive, you can feel it, i guarantee even when your older, this memory will return, maybe with a smile on a past cherised, maybe with regret, but that verse (along with the rest of the poem is brilliant
February 19th, 2024 08:52
Everyday
boot said:
I think you have really cool poems in your head..I like them
February 6th, 2024 06:38
boot said:
I think you have really cool poems in your head..I like them
February 6th, 2024 06:38
Duskās Dilemma
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Duskās dilemmaā by Meera Mere
While being romantic, your poem also has dramatization. Crying over a broken relationship. Sitting on a cliff at sunset : image of solitude, perhaps of sadness at the turn events took. ālearning to embrace all the heat ā : trying to take the blame. ācatching up, falling downā : chaos at the relationship getting out of control. āwhen did I drownā : hints at failing to handle the matter. āthe eerie of redā : this could be the sunset or something else. āstruggle to not feel sadā : the poem ends on a note of both struggle and sadness. Soman Ragavan. 4 February, 2024.
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February 4th, 2024 08:13
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Duskās dilemmaā by Meera Mere
While being romantic, your poem also has dramatization. Crying over a broken relationship. Sitting on a cliff at sunset : image of solitude, perhaps of sadness at the turn events took. ālearning to embrace all the heat ā : trying to take the blame. ācatching up, falling downā : chaos at the relationship getting out of control. āwhen did I drownā : hints at failing to handle the matter. āthe eerie of redā : this could be the sunset or something else. āstruggle to not feel sadā : the poem ends on a note of both struggle and sadness. Soman Ragavan. 4 February, 2024.
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February 4th, 2024 08:13
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