Comments received on poems by Meera Mere
The 8 year old’s whisper
rhmn_7 said:
“Silent or talkative, be yourself and live it”, yes and don\'t think about what others want you to be.
March 3rd, 2024 07:52
rhmn_7 said:
“Silent or talkative, be yourself and live it”, yes and don\'t think about what others want you to be.
March 3rd, 2024 07:52
I am……
anay said:
For the first time I read ur poem and trust me I must say it\'s damn good. U gonna rock for sure.
March 2nd, 2024 12:07
anay said:
For the first time I read ur poem and trust me I must say it\'s damn good. U gonna rock for sure.
March 2nd, 2024 12:07
The 8 year old’s whisper
Cloie said:
I love this! The dialogue with your younger self was a nice touch. The ending\'s message about embracing your true self was powerful. Great job!
March 2nd, 2024 10:44
Cloie said:
I love this! The dialogue with your younger self was a nice touch. The ending\'s message about embracing your true self was powerful. Great job!
March 2nd, 2024 10:44
The 8 year old’s whisper
peto said:
Meera
Your word choices are excellent
The last line in particular is very impressive
Thoroughly enjoyed this one
Loud and clear
March 2nd, 2024 08:30
peto said:
Meera
Your word choices are excellent
The last line in particular is very impressive
Thoroughly enjoyed this one
Loud and clear
March 2nd, 2024 08:30
The 8 year old’s whisper
Accidental Poet said:
Aren\'t we all Meera? There\'s a little part of that 8 year old in all of us. Very well penned. 😉👍
March 2nd, 2024 02:08
Accidental Poet said:
Aren\'t we all Meera? There\'s a little part of that 8 year old in all of us. Very well penned. 😉👍
March 2nd, 2024 02:08
My existence
Cassie58 said:
Powerfully expressed with good choice of language. Well done Meera. Pleased I stopped by.
February 27th, 2024 18:40
Cassie58 said:
Powerfully expressed with good choice of language. Well done Meera. Pleased I stopped by.
February 27th, 2024 18:40
My existence
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words revealing experience and sadness leading to cynicism but some hope remains.
February 27th, 2024 14:51
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words revealing experience and sadness leading to cynicism but some hope remains.
February 27th, 2024 14:51
The Unwanted Mask
Accidental Poet said:
You deserve better than this Meera. Well written. 👍
February 25th, 2024 11:44
Accidental Poet said:
You deserve better than this Meera. Well written. 👍
February 25th, 2024 11:44
The Unwanted Mask
evenwheniLie said:
A meaningful poem with a good flow…. Beautiful
February 25th, 2024 11:38
evenwheniLie said:
A meaningful poem with a good flow…. Beautiful
February 25th, 2024 11:38
Remnants of Yesterday
p0em.writter said:
this is a lvely poem for the verse:
I yearn to rewind and secure my past,
Diminish the pain, make it the last.
I long for gentler wounds to bear,
Regretting the moments when I didn\'t care.
this what got me hooked i like the way u started off the poem
February 19th, 2024 10:03
p0em.writter said:
this is a lvely poem for the verse:
I yearn to rewind and secure my past,
Diminish the pain, make it the last.
I long for gentler wounds to bear,
Regretting the moments when I didn\'t care.
this what got me hooked i like the way u started off the poem
February 19th, 2024 10:03
Remnants of Yesterday
Accidental Poet said:
Regrets are inevitable, we all have them. Even those who say they have no regrets, deep down inside they do. Well penned Meera. 😉👍
February 19th, 2024 10:00
Accidental Poet said:
Regrets are inevitable, we all have them. Even those who say they have no regrets, deep down inside they do. Well penned Meera. 😉👍
February 19th, 2024 10:00
Remnants of Yesterday
Hugh said:
\"The distant sight of you, a haunting scene,
I wish I hadn\'t waved my hand so keen.
A wish to undo my foolish ways,
And erase the memory of love\'s misplays.\"
Isn\'t that just a perfect verse, that what makes poetry alive, you can feel it, i guarantee even when your older, this memory will return, maybe with a smile on a past cherised, maybe with regret, but that verse (along with the rest of the poem is brilliant
February 19th, 2024 08:52
Hugh said:
\"The distant sight of you, a haunting scene,
I wish I hadn\'t waved my hand so keen.
A wish to undo my foolish ways,
And erase the memory of love\'s misplays.\"
Isn\'t that just a perfect verse, that what makes poetry alive, you can feel it, i guarantee even when your older, this memory will return, maybe with a smile on a past cherised, maybe with regret, but that verse (along with the rest of the poem is brilliant
February 19th, 2024 08:52
Everyday
boot said:
I think you have really cool poems in your head..I like them
February 6th, 2024 06:38
boot said:
I think you have really cool poems in your head..I like them
February 6th, 2024 06:38
Dusk’s Dilemma
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Dusk’s dilemma” by Meera Mere
While being romantic, your poem also has dramatization. Crying over a broken relationship. Sitting on a cliff at sunset : image of solitude, perhaps of sadness at the turn events took. “learning to embrace all the heat “ : trying to take the blame. “catching up, falling down” : chaos at the relationship getting out of control. “when did I drown” : hints at failing to handle the matter. “the eerie of red” : this could be the sunset or something else. “struggle to not feel sad” : the poem ends on a note of both struggle and sadness. Soman Ragavan. 4 February, 2024.
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February 4th, 2024 08:13
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Dusk’s dilemma” by Meera Mere
While being romantic, your poem also has dramatization. Crying over a broken relationship. Sitting on a cliff at sunset : image of solitude, perhaps of sadness at the turn events took. “learning to embrace all the heat “ : trying to take the blame. “catching up, falling down” : chaos at the relationship getting out of control. “when did I drown” : hints at failing to handle the matter. “the eerie of red” : this could be the sunset or something else. “struggle to not feel sad” : the poem ends on a note of both struggle and sadness. Soman Ragavan. 4 February, 2024.
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February 4th, 2024 08:13
A scar in stars
novellaa said:
Your poem is a powerful expression of feeling like an outsider, contrasting the unique individual against societal norms. The imagery of being different, like a moon among stars, really captures the essence of standing out and the struggle for acceptance and understanding. It\'s a poignant reflection on embracing one\'s uniqueness in a world that often values conformity. Keep expressing your unique perspective through such evocative poetry!✨
January 30th, 2024 11:09
novellaa said:
Your poem is a powerful expression of feeling like an outsider, contrasting the unique individual against societal norms. The imagery of being different, like a moon among stars, really captures the essence of standing out and the struggle for acceptance and understanding. It\'s a poignant reflection on embracing one\'s uniqueness in a world that often values conformity. Keep expressing your unique perspective through such evocative poetry!✨
January 30th, 2024 11:09
A scar in stars
Accidental Poet said:
Very well written Meera. But don\'t be so hard on yourself. Live YOUR life at YOUR own pace. There\'s a smile somewhere deep inside you. It needs you to see it. 😊
January 14th, 2024 11:28
Accidental Poet said:
Very well written Meera. But don\'t be so hard on yourself. Live YOUR life at YOUR own pace. There\'s a smile somewhere deep inside you. It needs you to see it. 😊
January 14th, 2024 11:28
Under your touch
Neville said:
this is not only erotic .. it is deeply electric .. and falls within the shadow of my favourite genre .. and so very tastefully done ..
Neville
January 10th, 2024 04:12
Neville said:
this is not only erotic .. it is deeply electric .. and falls within the shadow of my favourite genre .. and so very tastefully done ..
Neville
January 10th, 2024 04:12
The Burden My Words Weighed
Soman Ragavan said:
Beautifully written poetry. Very touching. You express well your emotions. Soman Ragavan. 30 December, 2023.
December 30th, 2023 07:43
Soman Ragavan said:
Beautifully written poetry. Very touching. You express well your emotions. Soman Ragavan. 30 December, 2023.
December 30th, 2023 07:43
The Girl Who Grew Up
2781 said:
I like to think I am journeying back to childhood.
December 14th, 2023 08:02
2781 said:
I like to think I am journeying back to childhood.
December 14th, 2023 08:02
A Night without stars
2781 said:
And he that sat upon the throne said, Behold, I make all things new.
November 20th, 2023 08:39
2781 said:
And he that sat upon the throne said, Behold, I make all things new.
November 20th, 2023 08:39
Day After Killing an Angel- The little warrior
peto said:
You have a unique style of writing
Vivid imagery
Love the title
Like the little warrior needed a day to reflect
Enjoyed reading
Keep em coming
October 23rd, 2023 10:23
peto said:
You have a unique style of writing
Vivid imagery
Love the title
Like the little warrior needed a day to reflect
Enjoyed reading
Keep em coming
October 23rd, 2023 10:23
Day After Killing an Angel- The little warrior
2781 said:
I don\'t know what to think.
I know good triumphs over evil, and if we fall we only have ourselves to blame.
October 23rd, 2023 01:29
2781 said:
I don\'t know what to think.
I know good triumphs over evil, and if we fall we only have ourselves to blame.
October 23rd, 2023 01:29
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