Comments received on poems by Meera Mere
Dear Death
arial said:
The final carsing hand that one longed for ,
It doesn\'t go away
It yearns to sway
But alas o human
You never learnt to face
Ah what a nice write a job well done
October 12th, 2025 13:02
arial said:
The final carsing hand that one longed for ,
It doesn\'t go away
It yearns to sway
But alas o human
You never learnt to face
Ah what a nice write a job well done
October 12th, 2025 13:02
Dear Death
Paul Bell said:
Death can get close to you, even hold you, but just not wake you out of your slumber.
I like the last words, telling.
October 12th, 2025 06:05
Paul Bell said:
Death can get close to you, even hold you, but just not wake you out of your slumber.
I like the last words, telling.
October 12th, 2025 06:05
Dear Death
sorenbarrett said:
This is a fave for I feel death to be a friend, kind, and yet unyielding. One that takes away the pain of life. The last lines are what get the fave. In these is what many that hang onto life and even the illusion of it in a hoped for afterlife, there are those that only wish to sleep and never awaken. A lovely write
October 12th, 2025 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
This is a fave for I feel death to be a friend, kind, and yet unyielding. One that takes away the pain of life. The last lines are what get the fave. In these is what many that hang onto life and even the illusion of it in a hoped for afterlife, there are those that only wish to sleep and never awaken. A lovely write
October 12th, 2025 04:15
If Only I Could—
peto said:
If only meera
Great to see you still writing
Keep it up
October 7th, 2025 19:26
peto said:
If only meera
Great to see you still writing
Keep it up
October 7th, 2025 19:26
If Only I Could—
sorenbarrett said:
This poem a pledge of love counts the many ways. Nicely written
October 4th, 2025 20:12
sorenbarrett said:
This poem a pledge of love counts the many ways. Nicely written
October 4th, 2025 20:12
Another Toy
NafisaSB said:
this is so true, and such a universal phenomenon - to play with people\'s feelings, and then discard them like a broken toy.
well written..
September 23rd, 2025 00:01
NafisaSB said:
this is so true, and such a universal phenomenon - to play with people\'s feelings, and then discard them like a broken toy.
well written..
September 23rd, 2025 00:01
I will be Okay
orchidee said:
But we do it, we say it. Do some folks really want to know how we are? And do we really want everyone to know? It can be a brush-off, and intended to be, if we just say to some folks who we may not know very well \'I\'m Okay\'.
September 21st, 2025 11:32
orchidee said:
But we do it, we say it. Do some folks really want to know how we are? And do we really want everyone to know? It can be a brush-off, and intended to be, if we just say to some folks who we may not know very well \'I\'m Okay\'.
September 21st, 2025 11:32
I will be Okay
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed the perfunctory answer okay is expected and when not given others really don\'t want to know. And so we go on our way saying we are okay even when we are not. A poignant write
September 21st, 2025 10:19
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed the perfunctory answer okay is expected and when not given others really don\'t want to know. And so we go on our way saying we are okay even when we are not. A poignant write
September 21st, 2025 10:19
I will be Okay
Natavia Hobert said:
I really like this. I can understand where you\'re coming from because I\'m right there with you, feeling the same way.
September 21st, 2025 09:53
Natavia Hobert said:
I really like this. I can understand where you\'re coming from because I\'m right there with you, feeling the same way.
September 21st, 2025 09:53
Another Toy
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Meera but I am sure you would not ever be abandoned.
Andy
September 18th, 2025 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Meera but I am sure you would not ever be abandoned.
Andy
September 18th, 2025 01:48
Another Toy
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
A heartfelt meditation on fear of impermanence in love, beautifully simple but emotionally piercing. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 16:44
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
A heartfelt meditation on fear of impermanence in love, beautifully simple but emotionally piercing. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 16:44
Another Toy
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful metaphor of abandonment. Nicely done
September 17th, 2025 10:58
sorenbarrett said:
Such a wonderful metaphor of abandonment. Nicely done
September 17th, 2025 10:58
Another Toy
Priya Tomar said:
Painful poem about abandonment !
Nicely done.
September 17th, 2025 10:37
Priya Tomar said:
Painful poem about abandonment !
Nicely done.
September 17th, 2025 10:37
You Asked Me Everyday
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of feared loss and the inability to express it. Nicely done
September 10th, 2025 11:11
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of feared loss and the inability to express it. Nicely done
September 10th, 2025 11:11
How do I explain?
amirose2015 said:
This was such a lovely read. What a privilege it is to know someone so intimately that you’re at a loss for words when trying to explain the feeling.
September 8th, 2025 22:33
amirose2015 said:
This was such a lovely read. What a privilege it is to know someone so intimately that you’re at a loss for words when trying to explain the feeling.
September 8th, 2025 22:33
How do I explain?
sorenbarrett said:
Most lovely, tender and sweet its words fall like a summer rain. A beautiful poem
September 8th, 2025 11:12
sorenbarrett said:
Most lovely, tender and sweet its words fall like a summer rain. A beautiful poem
September 8th, 2025 11:12
Almost
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This is sad and touching. I love it.
September 8th, 2025 09:43
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This is sad and touching. I love it.
September 8th, 2025 09:43
Almost
sorenbarrett said:
A sad reflection of never quite measuring up to expectations. Nicely done.
September 7th, 2025 20:37
sorenbarrett said:
A sad reflection of never quite measuring up to expectations. Nicely done.
September 7th, 2025 20:37
All I Can Hear
sorenbarrett said:
Everything is temporary but true love that does not come in words. A most lovely write with each pledge followed by its logical outcome. A fave
September 5th, 2025 12:15
sorenbarrett said:
Everything is temporary but true love that does not come in words. A most lovely write with each pledge followed by its logical outcome. A fave
September 5th, 2025 12:15
Kyu tu roti hai?
Priya Tomar said:
Sach hai... aurat hmesa hi galat khi gyi ...
Bahut sundar kavita....
September 5th, 2025 11:50
Priya Tomar said:
Sach hai... aurat hmesa hi galat khi gyi ...
Bahut sundar kavita....
September 5th, 2025 11:50
All I Can Hear
Priya Tomar said:
Well worded....
Promises without commitment are merely words.
Love reflects in action not words...
Nicely done..
September 5th, 2025 11:43
Priya Tomar said:
Well worded....
Promises without commitment are merely words.
Love reflects in action not words...
Nicely done..
September 5th, 2025 11:43
All I Can Hear
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Wow, this is so deep. I love the repetition of ‘is all I hear’ — when he says one thing but you feel another. Different perspectives, different feelings, all mixed with emotions. Beautifully written.
September 5th, 2025 11:41
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Wow, this is so deep. I love the repetition of ‘is all I hear’ — when he says one thing but you feel another. Different perspectives, different feelings, all mixed with emotions. Beautifully written.
September 5th, 2025 11:41
Please Stay (A little longer)
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of communication and desired perception to be strong, not wanting to be seen as dependent resulting in regret. Nicely done
August 28th, 2025 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of communication and desired perception to be strong, not wanting to be seen as dependent resulting in regret. Nicely done
August 28th, 2025 03:56
Happily Married Women
Neville said:
this is very sad but it happens and all too often .. a real gentleman never forgets any of those things missed .. Neville
August 22nd, 2025 02:20
Neville said:
this is very sad but it happens and all too often .. a real gentleman never forgets any of those things missed .. Neville
August 22nd, 2025 02:20
I want a home
Doggerel Dave said:
A human right very directly expressed. Cannot be demanded often enough.
August 15th, 2025 16:17
Doggerel Dave said:
A human right very directly expressed. Cannot be demanded often enough.
August 15th, 2025 16:17
I want a home
sorenbarrett said:
What defines a home is what resides within and whether that is love or peace a simple house contains neither. A wonderful write of desire for not just a house but a home.
August 15th, 2025 05:20
sorenbarrett said:
What defines a home is what resides within and whether that is love or peace a simple house contains neither. A wonderful write of desire for not just a house but a home.
August 15th, 2025 05:20
I want a home
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely expressed write of wanting somewhere to call there own and feel safe, nicely written
August 15th, 2025 05:11
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely expressed write of wanting somewhere to call there own and feel safe, nicely written
August 15th, 2025 05:11
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