Comments received on poems by Katdream
Elegy to an Illusion
Katdream said:
Excellent suggestion. Thank you for the comment.
December 16th, 2023 00:06
Katdream said:
Excellent suggestion. Thank you for the comment.
December 16th, 2023 00:06
Elegy to an Illusion
Bobby O said:
I got a question ?
When fantasy escapes …..emptiness seems opposed to the poems point of view,?
Rather , when fantasy is replaced by emptiness —to my ear is more consistent to the exvelkent mood and motion of the piece ?!!
December 16th, 2023 00:02
Bobby O said:
I got a question ?
When fantasy escapes …..emptiness seems opposed to the poems point of view,?
Rather , when fantasy is replaced by emptiness —to my ear is more consistent to the exvelkent mood and motion of the piece ?!!
December 16th, 2023 00:02
Elegy to an Illusion
Katdream said:
Thank you Buzz Bray. I appreciate the read and your comments.
December 15th, 2023 15:23
Katdream said:
Thank you Buzz Bray. I appreciate the read and your comments.
December 15th, 2023 15:23
Elegy to an Illusion
Buzz Bray said:
Well written. I loved the line \"where loveliness is worn like chic facades.\"
Great allegory. Powerful words.
December 15th, 2023 15:21
Buzz Bray said:
Well written. I loved the line \"where loveliness is worn like chic facades.\"
Great allegory. Powerful words.
December 15th, 2023 15:21
Wake Up Call
Katdream said:
A bit on the melancholy side. But, much of my poetry is. Thank you for sharing your thoughts! I appreciate it very much. Still working through your book. Just finished reading The Neighbor....laughed out loud at the last 3 lines! We poets are, for the most part, very gently (and old) souls. But, I would haved been pissed off too!
December 13th, 2023 18:41
Katdream said:
A bit on the melancholy side. But, much of my poetry is. Thank you for sharing your thoughts! I appreciate it very much. Still working through your book. Just finished reading The Neighbor....laughed out loud at the last 3 lines! We poets are, for the most part, very gently (and old) souls. But, I would haved been pissed off too!
December 13th, 2023 18:41
why not me?
Katdream said:
Thanks Thomas. I am still working my way through your book! Enjoying the read very much! I am hoping to publish something new next year some time.
December 7th, 2023 20:56
Katdream said:
Thanks Thomas. I am still working my way through your book! Enjoying the read very much! I am hoping to publish something new next year some time.
December 7th, 2023 20:56
Concealment
MDStone said:
The poem moved me and drew me in. Thank you for unveiling such hidden thoughts and feelings that we often conceal, even from ourselves.
December 1st, 2023 06:43
MDStone said:
The poem moved me and drew me in. Thank you for unveiling such hidden thoughts and feelings that we often conceal, even from ourselves.
December 1st, 2023 06:43
Descent
Katdream said:
It was based on a true occurrence. Thanks again for the read and your comments. It means a lot to me. Have a wonderful evening.
November 29th, 2023 20:14
Katdream said:
It was based on a true occurrence. Thanks again for the read and your comments. It means a lot to me. Have a wonderful evening.
November 29th, 2023 20:14
Descent
Thomas W Case said:
This was powerful. You really evoke raw emotion. Great job.
November 29th, 2023 20:07
Thomas W Case said:
This was powerful. You really evoke raw emotion. Great job.
November 29th, 2023 20:07
..waltz me to the moon
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant imagery and great use of the senses.
November 20th, 2023 14:42
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant imagery and great use of the senses.
November 20th, 2023 14:42
summer storm
David A Liebermann said:
Powerful, a lightening of beauty and transformation. Superb writing.
November 19th, 2023 00:12
David A Liebermann said:
Powerful, a lightening of beauty and transformation. Superb writing.
November 19th, 2023 00:12
summer storm
jarcher54 said:
I love the ring composition... soldiers at the beginning and at the end, as completely transformed (if only temporarily) by the thunderstorm as the landscape itself. Marvelous!
November 18th, 2023 19:18
jarcher54 said:
I love the ring composition... soldiers at the beginning and at the end, as completely transformed (if only temporarily) by the thunderstorm as the landscape itself. Marvelous!
November 18th, 2023 19:18
summer storm
Katdream said:
Thank you Thomas. Wrote this after returning from AZ one year.
November 18th, 2023 19:02
Katdream said:
Thank you Thomas. Wrote this after returning from AZ one year.
November 18th, 2023 19:02
unrelenting rage
Sadcat said:
Dramatic writing Kat! I enjoyed reading especially the last few words
November 7th, 2023 01:36
Sadcat said:
Dramatic writing Kat! I enjoyed reading especially the last few words
November 7th, 2023 01:36
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