Comments received on poems by Tom Dylan
Monday morning office...
Doggerel Dave said:
All things pass, my friend...all things pass. One day in the distant future seated in your old comfortable armchair as you rest in reverie you will recall moments of great joy in a long life... and infrequently remember moments such as these.... and I don\'t need any reminders, so keep \'em to yourself....😂
February 5th, 2024 06:43
Doggerel Dave said:
All things pass, my friend...all things pass. One day in the distant future seated in your old comfortable armchair as you rest in reverie you will recall moments of great joy in a long life... and infrequently remember moments such as these.... and I don\'t need any reminders, so keep \'em to yourself....😂
February 5th, 2024 06:43
Monday morning office...
Tom Dylan said:
Aw thanks Teddy. It\'s very Monday in the office this morning and I tried to capture it in a poem. Thanks for your comments as always. :-)
February 5th, 2024 04:53
Tom Dylan said:
Aw thanks Teddy. It\'s very Monday in the office this morning and I tried to capture it in a poem. Thanks for your comments as always. :-)
February 5th, 2024 04:53
Monday morning office...
Teddy.15 said:
Tom, good morning my friend, your first stanza is a song just to say part of lyrics that you should keep in mind for the future, I do not work with computers I\'d fall asleep after 5 minutes although for my scribbles I happily use one anytime. The mundane of office work you have made incredibly obvious in this one. Wonderful. I have nothing against computer boffs, my husband is a physicist so I know how important they can be. I just love your first stanza. 🤗 Excellent imagery too.
February 5th, 2024 04:45
Teddy.15 said:
Tom, good morning my friend, your first stanza is a song just to say part of lyrics that you should keep in mind for the future, I do not work with computers I\'d fall asleep after 5 minutes although for my scribbles I happily use one anytime. The mundane of office work you have made incredibly obvious in this one. Wonderful. I have nothing against computer boffs, my husband is a physicist so I know how important they can be. I just love your first stanza. 🤗 Excellent imagery too.
February 5th, 2024 04:45
Poetry Competition
Thomas W Case said:
Superb Tom. Keep them coming. Brilliant theme.
February 3rd, 2024 00:13
Thomas W Case said:
Superb Tom. Keep them coming. Brilliant theme.
February 3rd, 2024 00:13
Poetry Competition
Bella Shepard said:
When you love the art, expressing your thoughts and feelings brings satisfaction, and as you write the last word, fulfillment. It is yours and no one elses. You are wonderfully perceptive, and your poetry is always a joy to read. Thank you dear poet!
February 2nd, 2024 15:21
Bella Shepard said:
When you love the art, expressing your thoughts and feelings brings satisfaction, and as you write the last word, fulfillment. It is yours and no one elses. You are wonderfully perceptive, and your poetry is always a joy to read. Thank you dear poet!
February 2nd, 2024 15:21
Poetry Competition
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words and marvellous thoughts Tom.
Andy
February 2nd, 2024 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words and marvellous thoughts Tom.
Andy
February 2nd, 2024 02:48
One of the Lads
Goldfinch60 said:
We must all be ourselves Tom, I have a philosophy in my life
\"If you don\'t like what you see it is not my problem, it is yours!\"
Andy
February 2nd, 2024 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
We must all be ourselves Tom, I have a philosophy in my life
\"If you don\'t like what you see it is not my problem, it is yours!\"
Andy
February 2nd, 2024 02:20
Poetry Competition
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m not sure I\'d like to go to one of your poetry groups, Tom. Much better here where I can engage/disengage with a mouse click.
However, I\'m given to understand that there\'s a move away from online activities (think they may mean dating sites, but not sure) towards interpersonal activities. So I\'m against trend (wot\'s new?)
February 1st, 2024 07:16
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m not sure I\'d like to go to one of your poetry groups, Tom. Much better here where I can engage/disengage with a mouse click.
However, I\'m given to understand that there\'s a move away from online activities (think they may mean dating sites, but not sure) towards interpersonal activities. So I\'m against trend (wot\'s new?)
February 1st, 2024 07:16
Poetry Competition
Teddy.15 said:
A fun fact about me I\'m a Harrison. So I love the fact you are honest with your thoughts actually your poems are full of charm fun fact about you. I have never felt any rivalry when writing and sharing my scribbles. I love the feel of your lines and how cool guitar skills ain\'t too shabby in fact totally cool. A fun read 🤣
February 1st, 2024 03:18
Teddy.15 said:
A fun fact about me I\'m a Harrison. So I love the fact you are honest with your thoughts actually your poems are full of charm fun fact about you. I have never felt any rivalry when writing and sharing my scribbles. I love the feel of your lines and how cool guitar skills ain\'t too shabby in fact totally cool. A fun read 🤣
February 1st, 2024 03:18
Poetry Competition
orchidee said:
And now you\'ve written another poem! lol.
Beware of some poetry groups. Some can waffle on for ages on boring themes. lol. It makes us think \'Oh no, not a Poetry Reading Group\'. Must be some good groups too though.
February 1st, 2024 02:55
orchidee said:
And now you\'ve written another poem! lol.
Beware of some poetry groups. Some can waffle on for ages on boring themes. lol. It makes us think \'Oh no, not a Poetry Reading Group\'. Must be some good groups too though.
February 1st, 2024 02:55
One of the Lads
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work Tom. I see this all the time.
January 31st, 2024 11:58
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work Tom. I see this all the time.
January 31st, 2024 11:58
One of the Lads
Neville said:
This more than adequately, it also eloquently sums up almost every young lad in the gang .. tis brilliant master Tom .. Neville
January 31st, 2024 08:42
Neville said:
This more than adequately, it also eloquently sums up almost every young lad in the gang .. tis brilliant master Tom .. Neville
January 31st, 2024 08:42
One of the Lads
Doggerel Dave said:
Cracked that one, mate.... machismo such a farce.
Oh so well said....
January 31st, 2024 05:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Cracked that one, mate.... machismo such a farce.
Oh so well said....
January 31st, 2024 05:44
One of the Lads
Teddy.15 said:
I read this with my lady eyes of course, as I\'m not a lad, growing up and spending almost my entire 20\'s in Twickenham on pub crawls with the girls, you just brought a whole new sensitivity to a lads night out. Superb Tom. 🤗
January 31st, 2024 05:25
Teddy.15 said:
I read this with my lady eyes of course, as I\'m not a lad, growing up and spending almost my entire 20\'s in Twickenham on pub crawls with the girls, you just brought a whole new sensitivity to a lads night out. Superb Tom. 🤗
January 31st, 2024 05:25
A Lesson Learned
Goldfinch60 said:
We can all get conned in our lives Tom but this will add to your life\'s experience and it won\'t happen again.
As I say, you cannot teach experience.
Andy
January 31st, 2024 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
We can all get conned in our lives Tom but this will add to your life\'s experience and it won\'t happen again.
As I say, you cannot teach experience.
Andy
January 31st, 2024 02:24
A Lesson Learned
Doggerel Dave said:
They\'ve told you the truth above, but with you I always feel that you have a wee bit of tongue in cheek when you tickle them keyboards for MPS, Tom!
January 30th, 2024 22:12
Doggerel Dave said:
They\'ve told you the truth above, but with you I always feel that you have a wee bit of tongue in cheek when you tickle them keyboards for MPS, Tom!
January 30th, 2024 22:12
A Mantra of Life & Death
Doggerel Dave said:
It\'s the way you tell \'em, Tom - had me in to the very end.
I would have preferred \'Succulent Green Grapes With Just a Touch of Dryness Fields Forever\' but there you go, I expect its just a matter of taste.....
January 30th, 2024 20:56
Doggerel Dave said:
It\'s the way you tell \'em, Tom - had me in to the very end.
I would have preferred \'Succulent Green Grapes With Just a Touch of Dryness Fields Forever\' but there you go, I expect its just a matter of taste.....
January 30th, 2024 20:56
A Lesson Learned
Thomas W Case said:
You are doing fine without them. Good write.
January 30th, 2024 19:52
Thomas W Case said:
You are doing fine without them. Good write.
January 30th, 2024 19:52
A Lesson Learned
Bella Shepard said:
What a rip off! Sometimes I think you are your own best teacher. Reading your work, I think that you are.
January 30th, 2024 15:54
Bella Shepard said:
What a rip off! Sometimes I think you are your own best teacher. Reading your work, I think that you are.
January 30th, 2024 15:54
A Lesson Learned
orchidee said:
OpenLearn from The Open University (O.U.) has lots of free courses. Don\'t know if any on actual poetry-writing - but you probably don\'t need a course on that!
January 30th, 2024 14:29
orchidee said:
OpenLearn from The Open University (O.U.) has lots of free courses. Don\'t know if any on actual poetry-writing - but you probably don\'t need a course on that!
January 30th, 2024 14:29
A Lesson Learned
Teddy.15 said:
LOL robbed on live video cam oh dear Tom, I would be so disappointed but you may have given thousands of readers a plan to make easy money. LoL 🤣 you are a hoot!
January 30th, 2024 12:33
Teddy.15 said:
LOL robbed on live video cam oh dear Tom, I would be so disappointed but you may have given thousands of readers a plan to make easy money. LoL 🤣 you are a hoot!
January 30th, 2024 12:33
A Lesson Learned
orchidee said:
Oh no! A one-off session?
Similar to Proof-reading courses maybe - which are very expensive.
I agree - you don\'t need them. Keep using that quill, as AP says!
January 30th, 2024 08:33
orchidee said:
Oh no! A one-off session?
Similar to Proof-reading courses maybe - which are very expensive.
I agree - you don\'t need them. Keep using that quill, as AP says!
January 30th, 2024 08:33
Don\'t be like me, she says.
Neville said:
this is truly lovely Tom .. I can still feel a warm glow and the remains of a shiver down my spine .. an excellent reflection poemed & I imagine so full of respect, love and truth .. Neville
January 30th, 2024 05:28
Neville said:
this is truly lovely Tom .. I can still feel a warm glow and the remains of a shiver down my spine .. an excellent reflection poemed & I imagine so full of respect, love and truth .. Neville
January 30th, 2024 05:28
A Mantra of Life & Death
Goldfinch60 said:
Any form of relaxation is great, mine is listening to music.
Andy
January 30th, 2024 03:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Any form of relaxation is great, mine is listening to music.
Andy
January 30th, 2024 03:19
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