Comments received on poems by Tom Dylan



On a clear night like this
Neville said:


That is precisely what poems are .. moments captured .. simple as that .. write on Tom .. Neville

January 15th, 2024 11:30

On a clear night like this
Bella Shepard said:

When you experience such a moment, no matter where, it is a gift. You describe the scene so beautifully that I can imagine all else around you fading into the background. Truly a lovely write!

January 15th, 2024 10:30

On a clear night like this
Teddy.15 said:

Reminds me of home 💜 wonderful imagery I don\'t remember too many times I saw the open skies and the stars in London, but I will remember this.

January 15th, 2024 05:25

On a clear night like this
Doggerel Dave said:

🥹Gentle irony, a picture well painted in words. I will have to see what else you\'ve got...



January 15th, 2024 04:38

Don\'t be like me, she says.
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work. Your love for literature shines through in your writing.

January 12th, 2024 18:01

Don\'t be like me, she says.
Teddy.15 said:

You make me feel envious of having grandparents. I only had my grandad tom the rest were gone so was he by the time I was 5 years old.. Beautiful Tom.

January 12th, 2024 13:26

Don\'t be like me, she says.
gray0328 said:

Sometimes people fail to see the beauty within themselves. Nicely Done Tom

January 12th, 2024 11:37

Reality TV
gray0328 said:

The truth of it made me laugh. Nicely Done

January 12th, 2024 11:27

Poetry Analysis
Teddy.15 said:

Well this made me giggle, you know you are a true poet when you find yourself reflecting deeply on how to reinvent the poem lol this is inspiring and unique and I found myself questioning too. LoL so glad I found this one. 🤗

January 12th, 2024 05:18

Reality TV
Cassie58 said:

Yes, sounds very much like the last company I worked for :)

January 11th, 2024 21:55

Reality TV
Thomas W Case said:

Funny and so true.

January 11th, 2024 18:31

Reality TV
orchidee said:

Ahh, no need to go on TV then. Doh!

January 11th, 2024 05:53

The Other Dog
Neville said:



Your dog aint daft is it .. Neville

January 11th, 2024 04:12

A Remembrance Promise
Thomas W Case said:

Absolutely beautiful.

January 10th, 2024 18:11

A Remembrance Promise
Neville said:



that\'s the spirit Tom .. again, sadly very much enjoyed ..

January 10th, 2024 11:36

A Remembrance Promise
orchidee said:

A fine write T.

January 10th, 2024 08:45

A Remembrance Promise
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

Heart felt. Thank you for sharing

January 10th, 2024 07:50

A Remembrance Promise
Goldfinch60 said:

Always remember the good time Thomas, they are so special.

Andy

January 10th, 2024 03:49

A Good Summer
Teddy.15 said:

Your imagery is haunting. Kudos, I really wasn\'t expecting the twist. My deepest condolences. If there is a silver lining it\'s that you got or get to cherish those last months, and hopefully that makes the whole grieving process somewhat less difficult. 🤗 A natural process never the less tragic. Beautiful dear Tom.

January 10th, 2024 02:45

A Good Summer
Goldfinch60 said:

Very well written sad words Tom.

Andy

January 10th, 2024 02:09

A Good Summer
Cassie58 said:

A heartbreak of a poem. Making the absolute most of time in devastating circumstances. Those last special days. I found your poem very moving. Reminded me of my younger brother’s last summer.

January 9th, 2024 15:12

A Good Summer
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful imagery. Powerful.

January 9th, 2024 13:02

A Good Summer
Neville said:


some sadnesses are simply crying out to thus captured and saved for all eternity .. so very sadly enjoyed my friend .. Neville

January 9th, 2024 11:58

Making My Debut
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words Tom, may you read more of your words to gathering audiences.

Andy

January 9th, 2024 02:44

Born 2nd Jan.
Neville said:


what an excellent tribute Tom & clearly most fitting & truly, timely tooly .. my friend .. Neville

January 8th, 2024 13:39

Making My Debut
Neville said:



Well done you .. be proud Tom and write on my friend, write on .. Neville

January 8th, 2024 13:37

Making My Debut
orchidee said:

Oops, they will sit up when you get to the last line of the poem - the \'s\' word!
I was at a poem reading group. It got dull and dour though, e.g. here\'s Mrs X again, who will waffle on for 20 minutes of mumbling - no-one knows what she\'s on about! lol. Look out for dull poets.

January 5th, 2024 07:54

Making My Debut
Tom Dylan said:

Thank you so much for that. I am new to poetry and more of a story writer naturally, so your comments are inspiring me! :-)

January 5th, 2024 06:51

Born 2nd Jan.
Michael Edwards said:

I\' don\'t post here regularly any more and most of my work these days is comical verse (or at least I hope it is) so I\'ve only just cpome across your work. Well I have to say it is so refreshing - nothing complicated, not trying to be clever but written from the heart and each and every one is a joy to read. I\'ll certainly be returning to your work in the future and thanks for posting - keep doing so.

January 5th, 2024 03:35

Born 2nd Jan.
arqios said:

Birthday salutations to your dear Grandfather’s memory!

January 4th, 2024 06:31



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