Comments received on poems by lunarchloedip
rise
sorenbarrett said:
The poem speaks of past injuries and bearing with them. Moderation is a key and can be delt with. There is a feeling of acceptance and a sense of chill with this poem
December 29th, 2025 20:32
sorenbarrett said:
The poem speaks of past injuries and bearing with them. Moderation is a key and can be delt with. There is a feeling of acceptance and a sense of chill with this poem
December 29th, 2025 20:32
home.
gray0328 said:
Very well written with a message that sings truth. Merry Christmas
December 24th, 2025 18:25
gray0328 said:
Very well written with a message that sings truth. Merry Christmas
December 24th, 2025 18:25
home.
sorenbarrett said:
A train of religious musings and thoughts at a time of celebration for the birth of a Messiah and savior. Well done
December 24th, 2025 08:47
sorenbarrett said:
A train of religious musings and thoughts at a time of celebration for the birth of a Messiah and savior. Well done
December 24th, 2025 08:47
home.
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem juxtaposes the physical and emotional aspects of love and sacrifice. It reflects on Christ\'s humanity—his childhood, his pain, and his ultimate sacrifice on the cross—while also celebrating the gift of life and the warmth of human connection. The poet expresses a longing for spiritual homecoming and redemption.
December 24th, 2025 08:37
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem juxtaposes the physical and emotional aspects of love and sacrifice. It reflects on Christ\'s humanity—his childhood, his pain, and his ultimate sacrifice on the cross—while also celebrating the gift of life and the warmth of human connection. The poet expresses a longing for spiritual homecoming and redemption.
December 24th, 2025 08:37
IRL.
sorenbarrett said:
Here in this poem is a proclamation of friendship and declaration of support. Nicely written
December 23rd, 2025 03:35
sorenbarrett said:
Here in this poem is a proclamation of friendship and declaration of support. Nicely written
December 23rd, 2025 03:35
stagnancy
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes our wishes are stronger than reality. A lovely poem of love and obsession. Nicely done
December 18th, 2025 15:09
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes our wishes are stronger than reality. A lovely poem of love and obsession. Nicely done
December 18th, 2025 15:09
citrus stains
sorenbarrett said:
A magnificent metaphor well explored and a fave. Just remember that the rind is bitter and one must peel it away
December 15th, 2025 12:38
sorenbarrett said:
A magnificent metaphor well explored and a fave. Just remember that the rind is bitter and one must peel it away
December 15th, 2025 12:38
ink-stained noose
sorenbarrett said:
Very raw yet with continued echoing rhyme like skipping a stone on a pond leaving ripples. It like a drip runs down a wall before a fall. I calls out. A lovely poem and a fave
December 13th, 2025 10:44
sorenbarrett said:
Very raw yet with continued echoing rhyme like skipping a stone on a pond leaving ripples. It like a drip runs down a wall before a fall. I calls out. A lovely poem and a fave
December 13th, 2025 10:44
layers of madness
NinjaGirl said:
This is fantastic! it perfectly expresses the realization that it\'s our job to take care of us...well done!
December 10th, 2025 21:13
NinjaGirl said:
This is fantastic! it perfectly expresses the realization that it\'s our job to take care of us...well done!
December 10th, 2025 21:13
layers of madness
sorenbarrett said:
A dark write of a life changed from softness to hardness, love to anger, acceptance to rejection. A sour feel that comes through so well. Nicely written
December 10th, 2025 07:55
sorenbarrett said:
A dark write of a life changed from softness to hardness, love to anger, acceptance to rejection. A sour feel that comes through so well. Nicely written
December 10th, 2025 07:55
healing space
sorenbarrett said:
Healing such an important aspect in life. Well written
December 9th, 2025 17:06
sorenbarrett said:
Healing such an important aspect in life. Well written
December 9th, 2025 17:06
die
sorenbarrett said:
Death of someone close can leave such an impression. A lovely write.
December 8th, 2025 17:44
sorenbarrett said:
Death of someone close can leave such an impression. A lovely write.
December 8th, 2025 17:44
am i unlovable?
Soman Ragavan said:
You wrote that in the middle of the night... Clearly you could not sleep. From insomnia came a great poem, impactful. The search for love is ever present in the human, for it provides hope, a compass with which to navigate this world this life...
December 7th, 2025 01:03
Soman Ragavan said:
You wrote that in the middle of the night... Clearly you could not sleep. From insomnia came a great poem, impactful. The search for love is ever present in the human, for it provides hope, a compass with which to navigate this world this life...
December 7th, 2025 01:03
am i unlovable?
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for acceptance in this poem asking for love. Well worded and imaged of one that is fragile and weak needing special care. Love and tenderness are two separate items. I handle eggs gently but don\'t necessarily love them. To me doing what is best for the one loved is what love is about. A very thought provoking write. Nicely done.
December 6th, 2025 20:32
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for acceptance in this poem asking for love. Well worded and imaged of one that is fragile and weak needing special care. Love and tenderness are two separate items. I handle eggs gently but don\'t necessarily love them. To me doing what is best for the one loved is what love is about. A very thought provoking write. Nicely done.
December 6th, 2025 20:32
words expelled
Katie B. said:
Just lovely! Thanks for sharing! You work is noticed!
December 2nd, 2025 18:50
Katie B. said:
Just lovely! Thanks for sharing! You work is noticed!
December 2nd, 2025 18:50
words expelled
sorenbarrett said:
I hear you have read your words and feel the pain. Not a little girl but an old man. We all have the hope that the letter we write will be read that is the wish of a poet but many of our works go unnoticed. Maybe some day the will see the light and be heard.
December 2nd, 2025 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
I hear you have read your words and feel the pain. Not a little girl but an old man. We all have the hope that the letter we write will be read that is the wish of a poet but many of our works go unnoticed. Maybe some day the will see the light and be heard.
December 2nd, 2025 08:19
calm
sorenbarrett said:
A poem where contentment can be felt and happiness seems to grow out of every word. Lovely
December 1st, 2025 18:36
sorenbarrett said:
A poem where contentment can be felt and happiness seems to grow out of every word. Lovely
December 1st, 2025 18:36
safety net
sorenbarrett said:
Reminiscing over memories of friends and past events. A wonderful write well done
November 22nd, 2025 14:47
sorenbarrett said:
Reminiscing over memories of friends and past events. A wonderful write well done
November 22nd, 2025 14:47
springs in my mattress
sorenbarrett said:
Like springs in a mattress thoughts of discomfort work their way through the brain and cause us to toss and turn. A lovely metaphor in this poem
November 20th, 2025 08:08
sorenbarrett said:
Like springs in a mattress thoughts of discomfort work their way through the brain and cause us to toss and turn. A lovely metaphor in this poem
November 20th, 2025 08:08
dappled desire
sorenbarrett said:
A myriad of emotions and feelings fill this poem making it human and alive. A lovely write
November 19th, 2025 08:22
sorenbarrett said:
A myriad of emotions and feelings fill this poem making it human and alive. A lovely write
November 19th, 2025 08:22
i am okay
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem that becomes brighter at the end with acceptance of being oneself and that is a good thing. Lovely
November 16th, 2025 13:22
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem that becomes brighter at the end with acceptance of being oneself and that is a good thing. Lovely
November 16th, 2025 13:22
guilt
Lorenz said:
Don\'t feel guilty about writing such delicate thoughts !
November 13th, 2025 11:58
Lorenz said:
Don\'t feel guilty about writing such delicate thoughts !
November 13th, 2025 11:58
guilt
sorenbarrett said:
Guilt a cancer that needs to be cut out and in the cutting comes the change. A wonderful metaphor in the chewing for we do chew on guilt and it has a bitter taste. Nicely penned
November 13th, 2025 08:26
sorenbarrett said:
Guilt a cancer that needs to be cut out and in the cutting comes the change. A wonderful metaphor in the chewing for we do chew on guilt and it has a bitter taste. Nicely penned
November 13th, 2025 08:26
star-kissed scars
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem with a powerful message to look out for oneself and not walk blindly in this world. Well done
November 10th, 2025 08:18
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem with a powerful message to look out for oneself and not walk blindly in this world. Well done
November 10th, 2025 08:18
honeybee
sorenbarrett said:
A strong argument for the sanctity of life and against suicide. Well written in poetic form.
November 7th, 2025 11:45
sorenbarrett said:
A strong argument for the sanctity of life and against suicide. Well written in poetic form.
November 7th, 2025 11:45
honeybee
OA Poetry said:
Such beautiful and vivid imagery, a very nice write lunar✨
November 7th, 2025 10:45
OA Poetry said:
Such beautiful and vivid imagery, a very nice write lunar✨
November 7th, 2025 10:45
joy and grief
sorenbarrett said:
Joy can be found where ever you look for it. A most upbeat and positive poem, nicely done
November 6th, 2025 20:42
sorenbarrett said:
Joy can be found where ever you look for it. A most upbeat and positive poem, nicely done
November 6th, 2025 20:42
joy and grief
OA Poetry said:
Where sorrow kneels, joy learns to sing. Great Write :)
November 6th, 2025 18:17
OA Poetry said:
Where sorrow kneels, joy learns to sing. Great Write :)
November 6th, 2025 18:17
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