Comments received on poems by lunarchloedip
songbird
sorenbarrett said:
I sense a metaphor here. Yes indeed things do need a chance to go wrong. Well written
November 10th, 2026 13:44
sorenbarrett said:
I sense a metaphor here. Yes indeed things do need a chance to go wrong. Well written
November 10th, 2026 13:44
alive
sorenbarrett said:
This poem runs through thoughts and times coming to loving being alive. Very nice
October 30th, 2026 15:53
sorenbarrett said:
This poem runs through thoughts and times coming to loving being alive. Very nice
October 30th, 2026 15:53
glasses
Paul Bell said:
It is strange, as a kid I wore braces. Wasn\'t cool at all.
Now braces are trendy, and i think that\'s the answer.
Had the eye patch been a different colour evewryday, you suddenly become the cool kid.
October 27th, 2026 10:47
Paul Bell said:
It is strange, as a kid I wore braces. Wasn\'t cool at all.
Now braces are trendy, and i think that\'s the answer.
Had the eye patch been a different colour evewryday, you suddenly become the cool kid.
October 27th, 2026 10:47
glasses
sorenbarrett said:
Just tell a young kid with poor self esteem that they have to wear an eye patch to school and see it they want to be called a pirate by other children. A good read.
October 27th, 2026 07:39
sorenbarrett said:
Just tell a young kid with poor self esteem that they have to wear an eye patch to school and see it they want to be called a pirate by other children. A good read.
October 27th, 2026 07:39
not lost
maydanae said:
This is really beautifully put, I struggle with it sometimes too, and it\'s certainly really difficult and hard to accept that you have love all around you. Thank you for sharing this.
October 9th, 2026 18:59
maydanae said:
This is really beautifully put, I struggle with it sometimes too, and it\'s certainly really difficult and hard to accept that you have love all around you. Thank you for sharing this.
October 9th, 2026 18:59
mad
Fränz Müller said:
This world will indeed drive you mad if we let it. Hang in there!!!
October 2nd, 2026 07:15
Fränz Müller said:
This world will indeed drive you mad if we let it. Hang in there!!!
October 2nd, 2026 07:15
mad
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic expression of sanity despite what may come. Well done
October 1st, 2026 19:39
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic expression of sanity despite what may come. Well done
October 1st, 2026 19:39
prayer
sorenbarrett said:
A write of a belief in a loving god and a forgiving one that awaits following this life. Nicely done
September 21st, 2026 13:29
sorenbarrett said:
A write of a belief in a loving god and a forgiving one that awaits following this life. Nicely done
September 21st, 2026 13:29
prayer
Fränz Müller said:
He is love! Says so twice in 1 John 4. Well done.
September 21st, 2026 10:30
Fränz Müller said:
He is love! Says so twice in 1 John 4. Well done.
September 21st, 2026 10:30
time
sorenbarrett said:
The slow growth of peace in a relationship with a happy ending. Nicely done
September 13th, 2026 14:34
sorenbarrett said:
The slow growth of peace in a relationship with a happy ending. Nicely done
September 13th, 2026 14:34
kitchen table
sorenbarrett said:
The ups and downs of life presented here and the recognition that life consists of ups and downs. Nicely said
September 5th, 2026 21:00
sorenbarrett said:
The ups and downs of life presented here and the recognition that life consists of ups and downs. Nicely said
September 5th, 2026 21:00
change
Fränz Müller said:
I enjoyed this one immensely. Change is tough but also necessary!!
August 23rd, 2026 21:45
Fränz Müller said:
I enjoyed this one immensely. Change is tough but also necessary!!
August 23rd, 2026 21:45
change
sorenbarrett said:
Opening a new chapter in ones life can be exciting. Well done
August 23rd, 2026 17:40
sorenbarrett said:
Opening a new chapter in ones life can be exciting. Well done
August 23rd, 2026 17:40
bones
sorenbarrett said:
This poem pairs dark and revolting images with the image of love. This diametric opposite juxtaposition creates tension that requires resolution found in the last lines. Well done
August 12th, 2026 12:04
sorenbarrett said:
This poem pairs dark and revolting images with the image of love. This diametric opposite juxtaposition creates tension that requires resolution found in the last lines. Well done
August 12th, 2026 12:04
separation anxiety
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the separation anxiety in this write and the pleas for continued presence. Well written
August 9th, 2026 19:30
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the separation anxiety in this write and the pleas for continued presence. Well written
August 9th, 2026 19:30
best friend, boyfriend
sorenbarrett said:
Hope and warmth created through a simple game and a friend. Nicely done
August 8th, 2026 19:05
sorenbarrett said:
Hope and warmth created through a simple game and a friend. Nicely done
August 8th, 2026 19:05
a writer
sorenbarrett said:
I love the internal rhyme in this piece. \"i have to ask why we rely on ai to supply a reply why...\" There are some good lines with metaphor as well. Nicely done
July 28th, 2026 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
I love the internal rhyme in this piece. \"i have to ask why we rely on ai to supply a reply why...\" There are some good lines with metaphor as well. Nicely done
July 28th, 2026 04:02
paradise
sorenbarrett said:
I hear this as a cry for peace, love and charity. A wonderful call to an ear of a hardened world.
July 20th, 2026 07:40
sorenbarrett said:
I hear this as a cry for peace, love and charity. A wonderful call to an ear of a hardened world.
July 20th, 2026 07:40
modern love
Nerd said:
In modern dating with technology does not feel the same as experiencing someone’s raw emotion in person this
Is so true
I absolutely love your poem
June 30th, 2026 17:33
Nerd said:
In modern dating with technology does not feel the same as experiencing someone’s raw emotion in person this
Is so true
I absolutely love your poem
June 30th, 2026 17:33
owen
sorenbarrett said:
The nonverbal emphasized in this poem of being infatuated. Nicely done
June 21st, 2026 10:54
sorenbarrett said:
The nonverbal emphasized in this poem of being infatuated. Nicely done
June 21st, 2026 10:54
paint
sorenbarrett said:
A write of unity in a cause comradery where usually there is strife. Nicely penned
June 11th, 2026 16:36
sorenbarrett said:
A write of unity in a cause comradery where usually there is strife. Nicely penned
June 11th, 2026 16:36
we are calm
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor in the similarity between a child\'s behavior and an adult\'s Nicely written with great sensitivity and tenderness
May 28th, 2026 18:42
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor in the similarity between a child\'s behavior and an adult\'s Nicely written with great sensitivity and tenderness
May 28th, 2026 18:42
early ending
sorenbarrett said:
The expression of a mother\'s tenderness leaving the person feeling loved and wanted. A lovely write
May 27th, 2026 07:39
sorenbarrett said:
The expression of a mother\'s tenderness leaving the person feeling loved and wanted. A lovely write
May 27th, 2026 07:39
i am not gone
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of unity and how one is always present with others in mind, spirit or body. Nicely done
May 25th, 2026 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of unity and how one is always present with others in mind, spirit or body. Nicely done
May 25th, 2026 04:06
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