Comments received on poems by lunarchloedip
rain
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write of loneliness curbed by a dream of fantasy that seems real and seems desired to be. Lovely
July 21st, 2025 16:59
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write of loneliness curbed by a dream of fantasy that seems real and seems desired to be. Lovely
July 21st, 2025 16:59
nova
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful love poem that extols the virtues and the longing for the beloved. Nicely done
July 10th, 2025 20:50
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful love poem that extols the virtues and the longing for the beloved. Nicely done
July 10th, 2025 20:50
sane.
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Just wow. The irresistible beauty of waltzing rhythmic lines tripping down the page like water trickling and dancing in the sunlight catches me ere I realize, and I love it. Thank you so very much for sharing. Beautifully rendered with exquisite imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you again.
July 6th, 2025 18:26
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Just wow. The irresistible beauty of waltzing rhythmic lines tripping down the page like water trickling and dancing in the sunlight catches me ere I realize, and I love it. Thank you so very much for sharing. Beautifully rendered with exquisite imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you again.
July 6th, 2025 18:26
sane.
sorenbarrett said:
Poetry as therapy for the pain. We all use it as such from time to time. A raw and heart felt poem
July 6th, 2025 17:47
sorenbarrett said:
Poetry as therapy for the pain. We all use it as such from time to time. A raw and heart felt poem
July 6th, 2025 17:47
child
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and inviting it calls out for friendship and looking for connections.
July 4th, 2025 19:10
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and inviting it calls out for friendship and looking for connections.
July 4th, 2025 19:10
laughter
sorenbarrett said:
A joyful poem of love and feelings of completion. Lovely
June 30th, 2025 17:58
sorenbarrett said:
A joyful poem of love and feelings of completion. Lovely
June 30th, 2025 17:58
21
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of celebration not just of time passed but of growth and maturity. Well done
June 29th, 2025 11:50
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of celebration not just of time passed but of growth and maturity. Well done
June 29th, 2025 11:50
bleed
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of creation and its importance in purpose. Well written and very meaningful
June 18th, 2025 14:12
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of creation and its importance in purpose. Well written and very meaningful
June 18th, 2025 14:12
alive
sorenbarrett said:
Strong emotional bond beyond life is projected in this poem. Sand but at the same time admirable. Lovely
June 14th, 2025 17:28
sorenbarrett said:
Strong emotional bond beyond life is projected in this poem. Sand but at the same time admirable. Lovely
June 14th, 2025 17:28
lonely
Poetic Licence said:
I can really relate to this, I have spent most of my life feeling lonely even when i was married I felt the same, it is a very hard thing to put your finger on, I agree with what mendedfences said about loving yourself, and I am sure that would help but for me the only time I have not felt lonely is when I was in a relationship were for the first time I felt truly loved, sadly I could not handle being loved and it didn\'t last, so the heart was alone again, I appreciate it is horses for courses, nicely expressed and written
June 10th, 2025 16:42
Poetic Licence said:
I can really relate to this, I have spent most of my life feeling lonely even when i was married I felt the same, it is a very hard thing to put your finger on, I agree with what mendedfences said about loving yourself, and I am sure that would help but for me the only time I have not felt lonely is when I was in a relationship were for the first time I felt truly loved, sadly I could not handle being loved and it didn\'t last, so the heart was alone again, I appreciate it is horses for courses, nicely expressed and written
June 10th, 2025 16:42
lonely
sorenbarrett said:
A recognition of a need for love promoting loneliness and jealousy. Nicely written
June 10th, 2025 16:41
sorenbarrett said:
A recognition of a need for love promoting loneliness and jealousy. Nicely written
June 10th, 2025 16:41
lonely
MendedFences27 said:
Reading this, I was almost afraid to comment. Don\'t take that wrong, I liked it. it was honest and reflects what some of us feel. I think we all have a need to be loved. I also feel we must learn to love ourselves before we can honestly love another. Loneliness sometimes is a result of the wall we build around ourselves. Openness can be difficult to attain if we fear the rejection from others. Trust me, there is no one better than anyone else. We are what we are, and we are all equally afraid. Life isn\'t easy, but it\'s all we have. - Phil A.
June 10th, 2025 15:17
MendedFences27 said:
Reading this, I was almost afraid to comment. Don\'t take that wrong, I liked it. it was honest and reflects what some of us feel. I think we all have a need to be loved. I also feel we must learn to love ourselves before we can honestly love another. Loneliness sometimes is a result of the wall we build around ourselves. Openness can be difficult to attain if we fear the rejection from others. Trust me, there is no one better than anyone else. We are what we are, and we are all equally afraid. Life isn\'t easy, but it\'s all we have. - Phil A.
June 10th, 2025 15:17
brave
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of being ready to face the challanges of the world as and when they arise, relatable to so many, enjoyed the read
June 2nd, 2025 10:48
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of being ready to face the challanges of the world as and when they arise, relatable to so many, enjoyed the read
June 2nd, 2025 10:48
brave
sorenbarrett said:
Bravery lies in doing what one has to do, in eating each day to have the strength to face it, in growing to be big enough to hold the weight. This poem speaks to me not of age but of life and we all feel it. A wonderful revelation.
June 2nd, 2025 07:18
sorenbarrett said:
Bravery lies in doing what one has to do, in eating each day to have the strength to face it, in growing to be big enough to hold the weight. This poem speaks to me not of age but of life and we all feel it. A wonderful revelation.
June 2nd, 2025 07:18
stay
sorenbarrett said:
Being grateful for the things often overlooked and realizing that it is not the norm is a key to happiness. Most lovely
May 31st, 2025 09:24
sorenbarrett said:
Being grateful for the things often overlooked and realizing that it is not the norm is a key to happiness. Most lovely
May 31st, 2025 09:24
human
sorenbarrett said:
I hear happiness in perceived connection and a relationship based on firm ties. It rings with a desire for permanency and dependability in a relationship. Nicely worded.
May 29th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
I hear happiness in perceived connection and a relationship based on firm ties. It rings with a desire for permanency and dependability in a relationship. Nicely worded.
May 29th, 2025 04:16
human
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely expressed write of how Happy and content this human is, enjoyed the read
May 29th, 2025 02:32
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely expressed write of how Happy and content this human is, enjoyed the read
May 29th, 2025 02:32
quiet
sorenbarrett said:
A pledge and declaration of love in this poem nicely said.
May 27th, 2025 20:46
sorenbarrett said:
A pledge and declaration of love in this poem nicely said.
May 27th, 2025 20:46
rain
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of nature, self and God and it all merges. Nicely said
May 26th, 2025 14:17
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of nature, self and God and it all merges. Nicely said
May 26th, 2025 14:17
divine
sorenbarrett said:
Yes I recognized this one from before and it still reads nicely as I was trying to pick out the changes that you made.
May 25th, 2025 05:20
sorenbarrett said:
Yes I recognized this one from before and it still reads nicely as I was trying to pick out the changes that you made.
May 25th, 2025 05:20
held
Poetic Licence said:
Pulls you along nicely in the read, I think you are loved, enjoyed the read
May 12th, 2025 13:01
Poetic Licence said:
Pulls you along nicely in the read, I think you are loved, enjoyed the read
May 12th, 2025 13:01
held
sorenbarrett said:
It is the almost that makes this poem better than the rest and gives it meaning. A deep poem
May 12th, 2025 11:43
sorenbarrett said:
It is the almost that makes this poem better than the rest and gives it meaning. A deep poem
May 12th, 2025 11:43
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