Comments received on poems by lunarchloedip
safety net
sorenbarrett said:
Reminiscing over memories of friends and past events. A wonderful write well done
November 22nd, 2025 14:47
sorenbarrett said:
Reminiscing over memories of friends and past events. A wonderful write well done
November 22nd, 2025 14:47
springs in my mattress
sorenbarrett said:
Like springs in a mattress thoughts of discomfort work their way through the brain and cause us to toss and turn. A lovely metaphor in this poem
November 20th, 2025 08:08
sorenbarrett said:
Like springs in a mattress thoughts of discomfort work their way through the brain and cause us to toss and turn. A lovely metaphor in this poem
November 20th, 2025 08:08
dappled desire
sorenbarrett said:
A myriad of emotions and feelings fill this poem making it human and alive. A lovely write
November 19th, 2025 08:22
sorenbarrett said:
A myriad of emotions and feelings fill this poem making it human and alive. A lovely write
November 19th, 2025 08:22
i am okay
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem that becomes brighter at the end with acceptance of being oneself and that is a good thing. Lovely
November 16th, 2025 13:22
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem that becomes brighter at the end with acceptance of being oneself and that is a good thing. Lovely
November 16th, 2025 13:22
guilt
Lorenz said:
Don\'t feel guilty about writing such delicate thoughts !
November 13th, 2025 11:58
Lorenz said:
Don\'t feel guilty about writing such delicate thoughts !
November 13th, 2025 11:58
guilt
sorenbarrett said:
Guilt a cancer that needs to be cut out and in the cutting comes the change. A wonderful metaphor in the chewing for we do chew on guilt and it has a bitter taste. Nicely penned
November 13th, 2025 08:26
sorenbarrett said:
Guilt a cancer that needs to be cut out and in the cutting comes the change. A wonderful metaphor in the chewing for we do chew on guilt and it has a bitter taste. Nicely penned
November 13th, 2025 08:26
star-kissed scars
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem with a powerful message to look out for oneself and not walk blindly in this world. Well done
November 10th, 2025 08:18
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem with a powerful message to look out for oneself and not walk blindly in this world. Well done
November 10th, 2025 08:18
honeybee
sorenbarrett said:
A strong argument for the sanctity of life and against suicide. Well written in poetic form.
November 7th, 2025 11:45
sorenbarrett said:
A strong argument for the sanctity of life and against suicide. Well written in poetic form.
November 7th, 2025 11:45
honeybee
OA Poetry said:
Such beautiful and vivid imagery, a very nice write lunar✨
November 7th, 2025 10:45
OA Poetry said:
Such beautiful and vivid imagery, a very nice write lunar✨
November 7th, 2025 10:45
joy and grief
sorenbarrett said:
Joy can be found where ever you look for it. A most upbeat and positive poem, nicely done
November 6th, 2025 20:42
sorenbarrett said:
Joy can be found where ever you look for it. A most upbeat and positive poem, nicely done
November 6th, 2025 20:42
joy and grief
OA Poetry said:
Where sorrow kneels, joy learns to sing. Great Write :)
November 6th, 2025 18:17
OA Poetry said:
Where sorrow kneels, joy learns to sing. Great Write :)
November 6th, 2025 18:17
safe
sorenbarrett said:
A personal poem of joy and enthusiasm over a love that is felt and shared. Nicely written
November 3rd, 2025 14:25
sorenbarrett said:
A personal poem of joy and enthusiasm over a love that is felt and shared. Nicely written
November 3rd, 2025 14:25
bed
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a bed describing it as comfortable and private but still in nature. Nice
October 27th, 2025 20:00
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a bed describing it as comfortable and private but still in nature. Nice
October 27th, 2025 20:00
sushi
sorenbarrett said:
Love how this poem addresses the issue of different tastes in people. This goes for poetry as well. A wonderful write
October 16th, 2025 13:14
sorenbarrett said:
Love how this poem addresses the issue of different tastes in people. This goes for poetry as well. A wonderful write
October 16th, 2025 13:14
lemon loaf cake
sorenbarrett said:
Food is always sensuous and seductive and it is used in this poem as such. A wonderful write
October 14th, 2025 13:32
sorenbarrett said:
Food is always sensuous and seductive and it is used in this poem as such. A wonderful write
October 14th, 2025 13:32
i wish
sorenbarrett said:
Loosing a parent is tough and this is voiced in this poem. Memories cloud the brain leaving images of a person missed. Lovely
October 12th, 2025 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
Loosing a parent is tough and this is voiced in this poem. Memories cloud the brain leaving images of a person missed. Lovely
October 12th, 2025 03:43
scared
sorenbarrett said:
Anything as powerful as love should be feared. A poem very well penned
October 8th, 2025 16:59
sorenbarrett said:
Anything as powerful as love should be feared. A poem very well penned
October 8th, 2025 16:59
panic
sorenbarrett said:
A unique approach to what many see as an enemy. To make one\'s enemy one\'s friend is a most useful tactic of war. Lovely
October 5th, 2025 07:37
sorenbarrett said:
A unique approach to what many see as an enemy. To make one\'s enemy one\'s friend is a most useful tactic of war. Lovely
October 5th, 2025 07:37
panic
Paul Bell said:
Panic is a defence mechanism, so you need it.
But when panic becomes a life mechanism, it can be destructive.
At the moment, you\'re both on a journey.
October 5th, 2025 06:40
Paul Bell said:
Panic is a defence mechanism, so you need it.
But when panic becomes a life mechanism, it can be destructive.
At the moment, you\'re both on a journey.
October 5th, 2025 06:40
create
sorenbarrett said:
Writing an act of creation but for whom. Good to have a friend. With great images this poem speaks of emotions. Nicely done
September 30th, 2025 13:12
sorenbarrett said:
Writing an act of creation but for whom. Good to have a friend. With great images this poem speaks of emotions. Nicely done
September 30th, 2025 13:12
carpe diem
sorenbarrett said:
Robin Williams and the dead poet society. I hear it in this poem. Fear is a major motivator but need not be. Very nice
September 29th, 2025 14:12
sorenbarrett said:
Robin Williams and the dead poet society. I hear it in this poem. Fear is a major motivator but need not be. Very nice
September 29th, 2025 14:12
write
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that rages and runs down the page looking for resolution. Nicely worded
September 22nd, 2025 14:26
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that rages and runs down the page looking for resolution. Nicely worded
September 22nd, 2025 14:26
pulse
sorenbarrett said:
The thrill of new passion and like a ride it scares and thrills. Lovely
September 18th, 2025 19:57
sorenbarrett said:
The thrill of new passion and like a ride it scares and thrills. Lovely
September 18th, 2025 19:57
music
MatPie said:
How music can change the attitude of whatever we do, it is magic! I loved the poem
September 14th, 2025 21:55
MatPie said:
How music can change the attitude of whatever we do, it is magic! I loved the poem
September 14th, 2025 21:55
music
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting rhyme to this poem that spins its way through a chore and a day. Nicely done
September 14th, 2025 19:29
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting rhyme to this poem that spins its way through a chore and a day. Nicely done
September 14th, 2025 19:29
music
Fred1794 said:
Really love and connect with this one. Music really makes chores a lot easier ! Wonderfully written so that I feel as though I am spinning and singing along as I read.
September 14th, 2025 19:26
Fred1794 said:
Really love and connect with this one. Music really makes chores a lot easier ! Wonderfully written so that I feel as though I am spinning and singing along as I read.
September 14th, 2025 19:26
time is love, i\'ve learned.
MatPie said:
I love this poem, so sweet and soothing
September 13th, 2025 01:23
MatPie said:
I love this poem, so sweet and soothing
September 13th, 2025 01:23
time is love, i\'ve learned.
Fred1794 said:
A very honest love poem ! I enjoy how you speak of hardships big and small, and how love is a great comfort in such times. This poem is warm and lovely. :)))
September 12th, 2025 18:31
Fred1794 said:
A very honest love poem ! I enjoy how you speak of hardships big and small, and how love is a great comfort in such times. This poem is warm and lovely. :)))
September 12th, 2025 18:31
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