Comments received on poems by lunarchloedip
pocket poem
sorenbarrett said:
Clever the wording and wise the meaning of this poem. A well worded piece that sends its message clearly and well. Nicely done
September 4th, 2025 08:00
sorenbarrett said:
Clever the wording and wise the meaning of this poem. A well worded piece that sends its message clearly and well. Nicely done
September 4th, 2025 08:00
pocket poem
Tom Dylan said:
Love the thought of having a poem in your pocket. A great write that flowed wonderfully.
September 4th, 2025 07:48
Tom Dylan said:
Love the thought of having a poem in your pocket. A great write that flowed wonderfully.
September 4th, 2025 07:48
come back to me
sorenbarrett said:
A view and reflection of oneself. Nicely done
August 16th, 2025 20:34
sorenbarrett said:
A view and reflection of oneself. Nicely done
August 16th, 2025 20:34
come back to me
Demar Desu said:
I myself have been struggling with aging… it feels as if all this internet information speeded up the process… I don’t usually read long poems but this was great
August 16th, 2025 20:08
Demar Desu said:
I myself have been struggling with aging… it feels as if all this internet information speeded up the process… I don’t usually read long poems but this was great
August 16th, 2025 20:08
flower
sorenbarrett said:
Joy always lighter than pain. A brighter poem full of hope and aspirations. Nicely done
August 16th, 2025 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
Joy always lighter than pain. A brighter poem full of hope and aspirations. Nicely done
August 16th, 2025 04:15
flower
Poetic Licence said:
He is caring, nourishing and protecting his flower, ensuring this time it stays in bloom, lovely write
August 15th, 2025 21:23
Poetic Licence said:
He is caring, nourishing and protecting his flower, ensuring this time it stays in bloom, lovely write
August 15th, 2025 21:23
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Poetic Licence said:
A poem of total love, determination and commitment that this time it will all be ok, enjoyed the read
August 11th, 2025 15:24
Poetic Licence said:
A poem of total love, determination and commitment that this time it will all be ok, enjoyed the read
August 11th, 2025 15:24
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sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love again with determination and commitment. Nicely written
August 11th, 2025 14:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of love again with determination and commitment. Nicely written
August 11th, 2025 14:43
hi.
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely day write of one who offers, support, love, care and peace, enjoyed the read
August 9th, 2025 12:20
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely day write of one who offers, support, love, care and peace, enjoyed the read
August 9th, 2025 12:20
hi.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about one that inspires confidence and peace. Lovely
August 9th, 2025 12:04
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about one that inspires confidence and peace. Lovely
August 9th, 2025 12:04
heal
2781 said:
Nice: I shouldn\'t try to interpret poetry I am lousy at it!
But I did wonder if congratulations were in order?
August 5th, 2025 08:39
2781 said:
Nice: I shouldn\'t try to interpret poetry I am lousy at it!
But I did wonder if congratulations were in order?
August 5th, 2025 08:39
heal
sorenbarrett said:
So nice to be accepted for who one is. It is healing. Usually gained when a mother with unconditional love imparts it as a baby and child a needed part of development. Well written
August 5th, 2025 08:38
sorenbarrett said:
So nice to be accepted for who one is. It is healing. Usually gained when a mother with unconditional love imparts it as a baby and child a needed part of development. Well written
August 5th, 2025 08:38
dance
sorenbarrett said:
A fun rhyme shows the passion in this youthful poem of young love.
August 3rd, 2025 18:46
sorenbarrett said:
A fun rhyme shows the passion in this youthful poem of young love.
August 3rd, 2025 18:46
dance
peto said:
Nice rhyme
Lovely feeling to the whole write
Dance your heart out
Enjoyed reading
August 3rd, 2025 17:53
peto said:
Nice rhyme
Lovely feeling to the whole write
Dance your heart out
Enjoyed reading
August 3rd, 2025 17:53
rain
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write of loneliness curbed by a dream of fantasy that seems real and seems desired to be. Lovely
July 21st, 2025 16:59
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write of loneliness curbed by a dream of fantasy that seems real and seems desired to be. Lovely
July 21st, 2025 16:59
nova
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful love poem that extols the virtues and the longing for the beloved. Nicely done
July 10th, 2025 20:50
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful love poem that extols the virtues and the longing for the beloved. Nicely done
July 10th, 2025 20:50
sane.
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Just wow. The irresistible beauty of waltzing rhythmic lines tripping down the page like water trickling and dancing in the sunlight catches me ere I realize, and I love it. Thank you so very much for sharing. Beautifully rendered with exquisite imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you again.
July 6th, 2025 18:26
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Just wow. The irresistible beauty of waltzing rhythmic lines tripping down the page like water trickling and dancing in the sunlight catches me ere I realize, and I love it. Thank you so very much for sharing. Beautifully rendered with exquisite imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you again.
July 6th, 2025 18:26
sane.
sorenbarrett said:
Poetry as therapy for the pain. We all use it as such from time to time. A raw and heart felt poem
July 6th, 2025 17:47
sorenbarrett said:
Poetry as therapy for the pain. We all use it as such from time to time. A raw and heart felt poem
July 6th, 2025 17:47
child
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and inviting it calls out for friendship and looking for connections.
July 4th, 2025 19:10
sorenbarrett said:
Cute and inviting it calls out for friendship and looking for connections.
July 4th, 2025 19:10
laughter
sorenbarrett said:
A joyful poem of love and feelings of completion. Lovely
June 30th, 2025 17:58
sorenbarrett said:
A joyful poem of love and feelings of completion. Lovely
June 30th, 2025 17:58
21
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of celebration not just of time passed but of growth and maturity. Well done
June 29th, 2025 11:50
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of celebration not just of time passed but of growth and maturity. Well done
June 29th, 2025 11:50
bleed
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of creation and its importance in purpose. Well written and very meaningful
June 18th, 2025 14:12
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem of creation and its importance in purpose. Well written and very meaningful
June 18th, 2025 14:12
alive
sorenbarrett said:
Strong emotional bond beyond life is projected in this poem. Sand but at the same time admirable. Lovely
June 14th, 2025 17:28
sorenbarrett said:
Strong emotional bond beyond life is projected in this poem. Sand but at the same time admirable. Lovely
June 14th, 2025 17:28
lonely
Poetic Licence said:
I can really relate to this, I have spent most of my life feeling lonely even when i was married I felt the same, it is a very hard thing to put your finger on, I agree with what mendedfences said about loving yourself, and I am sure that would help but for me the only time I have not felt lonely is when I was in a relationship were for the first time I felt truly loved, sadly I could not handle being loved and it didn\'t last, so the heart was alone again, I appreciate it is horses for courses, nicely expressed and written
June 10th, 2025 16:42
Poetic Licence said:
I can really relate to this, I have spent most of my life feeling lonely even when i was married I felt the same, it is a very hard thing to put your finger on, I agree with what mendedfences said about loving yourself, and I am sure that would help but for me the only time I have not felt lonely is when I was in a relationship were for the first time I felt truly loved, sadly I could not handle being loved and it didn\'t last, so the heart was alone again, I appreciate it is horses for courses, nicely expressed and written
June 10th, 2025 16:42
lonely
sorenbarrett said:
A recognition of a need for love promoting loneliness and jealousy. Nicely written
June 10th, 2025 16:41
sorenbarrett said:
A recognition of a need for love promoting loneliness and jealousy. Nicely written
June 10th, 2025 16:41
lonely
MendedFences27 said:
Reading this, I was almost afraid to comment. Don\'t take that wrong, I liked it. it was honest and reflects what some of us feel. I think we all have a need to be loved. I also feel we must learn to love ourselves before we can honestly love another. Loneliness sometimes is a result of the wall we build around ourselves. Openness can be difficult to attain if we fear the rejection from others. Trust me, there is no one better than anyone else. We are what we are, and we are all equally afraid. Life isn\'t easy, but it\'s all we have. - Phil A.
June 10th, 2025 15:17
MendedFences27 said:
Reading this, I was almost afraid to comment. Don\'t take that wrong, I liked it. it was honest and reflects what some of us feel. I think we all have a need to be loved. I also feel we must learn to love ourselves before we can honestly love another. Loneliness sometimes is a result of the wall we build around ourselves. Openness can be difficult to attain if we fear the rejection from others. Trust me, there is no one better than anyone else. We are what we are, and we are all equally afraid. Life isn\'t easy, but it\'s all we have. - Phil A.
June 10th, 2025 15:17
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