Comments received on poems by lunarchloedip
stagnancy
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes our wishes are stronger than reality. A lovely poem of love and obsession. Nicely done
December 18th, 2025 15:09
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes our wishes are stronger than reality. A lovely poem of love and obsession. Nicely done
December 18th, 2025 15:09
citrus stains
sorenbarrett said:
A magnificent metaphor well explored and a fave. Just remember that the rind is bitter and one must peel it away
December 15th, 2025 12:38
sorenbarrett said:
A magnificent metaphor well explored and a fave. Just remember that the rind is bitter and one must peel it away
December 15th, 2025 12:38
ink-stained noose
sorenbarrett said:
Very raw yet with continued echoing rhyme like skipping a stone on a pond leaving ripples. It like a drip runs down a wall before a fall. I calls out. A lovely poem and a fave
December 13th, 2025 10:44
sorenbarrett said:
Very raw yet with continued echoing rhyme like skipping a stone on a pond leaving ripples. It like a drip runs down a wall before a fall. I calls out. A lovely poem and a fave
December 13th, 2025 10:44
layers of madness
NinjaGirl said:
This is fantastic! it perfectly expresses the realization that it\'s our job to take care of us...well done!
December 10th, 2025 21:13
NinjaGirl said:
This is fantastic! it perfectly expresses the realization that it\'s our job to take care of us...well done!
December 10th, 2025 21:13
layers of madness
sorenbarrett said:
A dark write of a life changed from softness to hardness, love to anger, acceptance to rejection. A sour feel that comes through so well. Nicely written
December 10th, 2025 07:55
sorenbarrett said:
A dark write of a life changed from softness to hardness, love to anger, acceptance to rejection. A sour feel that comes through so well. Nicely written
December 10th, 2025 07:55
healing space
sorenbarrett said:
Healing such an important aspect in life. Well written
December 9th, 2025 17:06
sorenbarrett said:
Healing such an important aspect in life. Well written
December 9th, 2025 17:06
die
sorenbarrett said:
Death of someone close can leave such an impression. A lovely write.
December 8th, 2025 17:44
sorenbarrett said:
Death of someone close can leave such an impression. A lovely write.
December 8th, 2025 17:44
am i unlovable?
Soman Ragavan said:
You wrote that in the middle of the night... Clearly you could not sleep. From insomnia came a great poem, impactful. The search for love is ever present in the human, for it provides hope, a compass with which to navigate this world this life...
December 7th, 2025 01:03
Soman Ragavan said:
You wrote that in the middle of the night... Clearly you could not sleep. From insomnia came a great poem, impactful. The search for love is ever present in the human, for it provides hope, a compass with which to navigate this world this life...
December 7th, 2025 01:03
am i unlovable?
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for acceptance in this poem asking for love. Well worded and imaged of one that is fragile and weak needing special care. Love and tenderness are two separate items. I handle eggs gently but don\'t necessarily love them. To me doing what is best for the one loved is what love is about. A very thought provoking write. Nicely done.
December 6th, 2025 20:32
sorenbarrett said:
A plea for acceptance in this poem asking for love. Well worded and imaged of one that is fragile and weak needing special care. Love and tenderness are two separate items. I handle eggs gently but don\'t necessarily love them. To me doing what is best for the one loved is what love is about. A very thought provoking write. Nicely done.
December 6th, 2025 20:32
words expelled
Katie B. said:
Just lovely! Thanks for sharing! You work is noticed!
December 2nd, 2025 18:50
Katie B. said:
Just lovely! Thanks for sharing! You work is noticed!
December 2nd, 2025 18:50
words expelled
sorenbarrett said:
I hear you have read your words and feel the pain. Not a little girl but an old man. We all have the hope that the letter we write will be read that is the wish of a poet but many of our works go unnoticed. Maybe some day the will see the light and be heard.
December 2nd, 2025 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
I hear you have read your words and feel the pain. Not a little girl but an old man. We all have the hope that the letter we write will be read that is the wish of a poet but many of our works go unnoticed. Maybe some day the will see the light and be heard.
December 2nd, 2025 08:19
calm
sorenbarrett said:
A poem where contentment can be felt and happiness seems to grow out of every word. Lovely
December 1st, 2025 18:36
sorenbarrett said:
A poem where contentment can be felt and happiness seems to grow out of every word. Lovely
December 1st, 2025 18:36
safety net
sorenbarrett said:
Reminiscing over memories of friends and past events. A wonderful write well done
November 22nd, 2025 14:47
sorenbarrett said:
Reminiscing over memories of friends and past events. A wonderful write well done
November 22nd, 2025 14:47
springs in my mattress
sorenbarrett said:
Like springs in a mattress thoughts of discomfort work their way through the brain and cause us to toss and turn. A lovely metaphor in this poem
November 20th, 2025 08:08
sorenbarrett said:
Like springs in a mattress thoughts of discomfort work their way through the brain and cause us to toss and turn. A lovely metaphor in this poem
November 20th, 2025 08:08
dappled desire
sorenbarrett said:
A myriad of emotions and feelings fill this poem making it human and alive. A lovely write
November 19th, 2025 08:22
sorenbarrett said:
A myriad of emotions and feelings fill this poem making it human and alive. A lovely write
November 19th, 2025 08:22
i am okay
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem that becomes brighter at the end with acceptance of being oneself and that is a good thing. Lovely
November 16th, 2025 13:22
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem that becomes brighter at the end with acceptance of being oneself and that is a good thing. Lovely
November 16th, 2025 13:22
guilt
Lorenz said:
Don\'t feel guilty about writing such delicate thoughts !
November 13th, 2025 11:58
Lorenz said:
Don\'t feel guilty about writing such delicate thoughts !
November 13th, 2025 11:58
guilt
sorenbarrett said:
Guilt a cancer that needs to be cut out and in the cutting comes the change. A wonderful metaphor in the chewing for we do chew on guilt and it has a bitter taste. Nicely penned
November 13th, 2025 08:26
sorenbarrett said:
Guilt a cancer that needs to be cut out and in the cutting comes the change. A wonderful metaphor in the chewing for we do chew on guilt and it has a bitter taste. Nicely penned
November 13th, 2025 08:26
star-kissed scars
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem with a powerful message to look out for oneself and not walk blindly in this world. Well done
November 10th, 2025 08:18
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem with a powerful message to look out for oneself and not walk blindly in this world. Well done
November 10th, 2025 08:18
honeybee
sorenbarrett said:
A strong argument for the sanctity of life and against suicide. Well written in poetic form.
November 7th, 2025 11:45
sorenbarrett said:
A strong argument for the sanctity of life and against suicide. Well written in poetic form.
November 7th, 2025 11:45
honeybee
OA Poetry said:
Such beautiful and vivid imagery, a very nice write lunar✨
November 7th, 2025 10:45
OA Poetry said:
Such beautiful and vivid imagery, a very nice write lunar✨
November 7th, 2025 10:45
joy and grief
sorenbarrett said:
Joy can be found where ever you look for it. A most upbeat and positive poem, nicely done
November 6th, 2025 20:42
sorenbarrett said:
Joy can be found where ever you look for it. A most upbeat and positive poem, nicely done
November 6th, 2025 20:42
joy and grief
OA Poetry said:
Where sorrow kneels, joy learns to sing. Great Write :)
November 6th, 2025 18:17
OA Poetry said:
Where sorrow kneels, joy learns to sing. Great Write :)
November 6th, 2025 18:17
safe
sorenbarrett said:
A personal poem of joy and enthusiasm over a love that is felt and shared. Nicely written
November 3rd, 2025 14:25
sorenbarrett said:
A personal poem of joy and enthusiasm over a love that is felt and shared. Nicely written
November 3rd, 2025 14:25
bed
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a bed describing it as comfortable and private but still in nature. Nice
October 27th, 2025 20:00
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a bed describing it as comfortable and private but still in nature. Nice
October 27th, 2025 20:00
sushi
sorenbarrett said:
Love how this poem addresses the issue of different tastes in people. This goes for poetry as well. A wonderful write
October 16th, 2025 13:14
sorenbarrett said:
Love how this poem addresses the issue of different tastes in people. This goes for poetry as well. A wonderful write
October 16th, 2025 13:14
lemon loaf cake
sorenbarrett said:
Food is always sensuous and seductive and it is used in this poem as such. A wonderful write
October 14th, 2025 13:32
sorenbarrett said:
Food is always sensuous and seductive and it is used in this poem as such. A wonderful write
October 14th, 2025 13:32
i wish
sorenbarrett said:
Loosing a parent is tough and this is voiced in this poem. Memories cloud the brain leaving images of a person missed. Lovely
October 12th, 2025 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
Loosing a parent is tough and this is voiced in this poem. Memories cloud the brain leaving images of a person missed. Lovely
October 12th, 2025 03:43
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