Comments received on poems by lunarchloedip
modern love
Paul Bell said:
As you say, modern technology is great, but it lacks touch.
I suppopse this is the future and people live their lives by it.
In a way it\'s comforting but not perfect.
May 13th, 2026 10:05
Paul Bell said:
As you say, modern technology is great, but it lacks touch.
I suppopse this is the future and people live their lives by it.
In a way it\'s comforting but not perfect.
May 13th, 2026 10:05
anxiety is...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt painfully familiar to me, Chloe…the exhaustion, the racing thoughts, the physicality of anxiety living inside the body, and then trying to negotiate with yourself through it all. But I also love how much warmth and self-awareness survives inside the poem despite the struggle. As someone who struggles with anxiety and panic attacks, this really touched me, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 11th, 2026 22:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this felt painfully familiar to me, Chloe…the exhaustion, the racing thoughts, the physicality of anxiety living inside the body, and then trying to negotiate with yourself through it all. But I also love how much warmth and self-awareness survives inside the poem despite the struggle. As someone who struggles with anxiety and panic attacks, this really touched me, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 11th, 2026 22:08
if walls could talk
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of providing shelter. Nicely worded
May 11th, 2026 07:51
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of providing shelter. Nicely worded
May 11th, 2026 07:51
understanding through poetry
sorenbarrett said:
Poetry an art is also a therapy nicely written
May 8th, 2026 07:32
sorenbarrett said:
Poetry an art is also a therapy nicely written
May 8th, 2026 07:32
better
sorenbarrett said:
Two injured souls nursing each other back from pain and hurt. Well written
May 7th, 2026 19:42
sorenbarrett said:
Two injured souls nursing each other back from pain and hurt. Well written
May 7th, 2026 19:42
better
Fränz Müller said:
I love the way you structured this one. Nicely written!
May 7th, 2026 19:29
Fränz Müller said:
I love the way you structured this one. Nicely written!
May 7th, 2026 19:29
the lines that stayed
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to me of pain painted over and a past dressed up. Well written
May 1st, 2026 16:51
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to me of pain painted over and a past dressed up. Well written
May 1st, 2026 16:51
the lines that stayed
Katie B. said:
This is moving, powerful with rich imagery at what seems to be a lost love. Excellent my dear!!!
May 1st, 2026 15:04
Katie B. said:
This is moving, powerful with rich imagery at what seems to be a lost love. Excellent my dear!!!
May 1st, 2026 15:04
oh, to be loved
sorenbarrett said:
I love the cascade of rhyme and the line necklace of kisses. A fave
April 25th, 2026 10:37
sorenbarrett said:
I love the cascade of rhyme and the line necklace of kisses. A fave
April 25th, 2026 10:37
eat properly!
sorenbarrett said:
Some of us were never taught proper manners as children and turned into gross adults. I learned late in life and have been paying the consequences ever since. At least now I understand what was never understood before. Well penned
April 22nd, 2026 16:21
sorenbarrett said:
Some of us were never taught proper manners as children and turned into gross adults. I learned late in life and have been paying the consequences ever since. At least now I understand what was never understood before. Well penned
April 22nd, 2026 16:21
maybe healing is….
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting view that healing may be happening without notice and effort. Well said
April 20th, 2026 12:25
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting view that healing may be happening without notice and effort. Well said
April 20th, 2026 12:25
a poet\'s weekend
sorenbarrett said:
So right it is that a poet is a state of mind. Nicely said
April 15th, 2026 15:57
sorenbarrett said:
So right it is that a poet is a state of mind. Nicely said
April 15th, 2026 15:57
bubble wrap
sorenbarrett said:
A cute romantic write of a dance and a kiss. Well written
April 14th, 2026 19:30
sorenbarrett said:
A cute romantic write of a dance and a kiss. Well written
April 14th, 2026 19:30
mellow
sorenbarrett said:
A good read on how to mellow out with age. Well done
April 13th, 2026 19:50
sorenbarrett said:
A good read on how to mellow out with age. Well done
April 13th, 2026 19:50
dismantled
sorenbarrett said:
There is the expression of being ready to move on and leave behind the old for the new. So well put in metaphor of a house. Nicely done
April 9th, 2026 19:30
sorenbarrett said:
There is the expression of being ready to move on and leave behind the old for the new. So well put in metaphor of a house. Nicely done
April 9th, 2026 19:30
pointe shoes
sorenbarrett said:
Every little girl’s dream of being a ballerina put in this poem nicely written
April 6th, 2026 18:33
sorenbarrett said:
Every little girl’s dream of being a ballerina put in this poem nicely written
April 6th, 2026 18:33
cat
Doggerel Dave said:
Easy to see who is dominant in that relationship....Puss rules..
April 2nd, 2026 23:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Easy to see who is dominant in that relationship....Puss rules..
April 2nd, 2026 23:09
museum
sorenbarrett said:
Despite a rough start all seems to work out in this poem leaving a calm feeling. Nicely done
March 30th, 2026 17:08
sorenbarrett said:
Despite a rough start all seems to work out in this poem leaving a calm feeling. Nicely done
March 30th, 2026 17:08
moving out
Siah Bjerke said:
I love this poem so much. It pains this wonderful picture in your mind and it makes you think.
March 27th, 2026 09:51
Siah Bjerke said:
I love this poem so much. It pains this wonderful picture in your mind and it makes you think.
March 27th, 2026 09:51
bluebells
sorenbarrett said:
This poem mixes reflections with observations of nature and its beauty. Nicely written it works its way through the seasons.
March 23rd, 2026 14:08
sorenbarrett said:
This poem mixes reflections with observations of nature and its beauty. Nicely written it works its way through the seasons.
March 23rd, 2026 14:08
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