Comments received on poems by lunarchloedip
understanding through poetry
sorenbarrett said:
Poetry an art is also a therapy nicely written
May 8th, 2026 07:32
sorenbarrett said:
Poetry an art is also a therapy nicely written
May 8th, 2026 07:32
better
sorenbarrett said:
Two injured souls nursing each other back from pain and hurt. Well written
May 7th, 2026 19:42
sorenbarrett said:
Two injured souls nursing each other back from pain and hurt. Well written
May 7th, 2026 19:42
better
Fränz Müller said:
I love the way you structured this one. Nicely written!
May 7th, 2026 19:29
Fränz Müller said:
I love the way you structured this one. Nicely written!
May 7th, 2026 19:29
the lines that stayed
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to me of pain painted over and a past dressed up. Well written
May 1st, 2026 16:51
sorenbarrett said:
This poem speaks to me of pain painted over and a past dressed up. Well written
May 1st, 2026 16:51
the lines that stayed
Katie B. said:
This is moving, powerful with rich imagery at what seems to be a lost love. Excellent my dear!!!
May 1st, 2026 15:04
Katie B. said:
This is moving, powerful with rich imagery at what seems to be a lost love. Excellent my dear!!!
May 1st, 2026 15:04
oh, to be loved
sorenbarrett said:
I love the cascade of rhyme and the line necklace of kisses. A fave
April 25th, 2026 10:37
sorenbarrett said:
I love the cascade of rhyme and the line necklace of kisses. A fave
April 25th, 2026 10:37
eat properly!
sorenbarrett said:
Some of us were never taught proper manners as children and turned into gross adults. I learned late in life and have been paying the consequences ever since. At least now I understand what was never understood before. Well penned
April 22nd, 2026 16:21
sorenbarrett said:
Some of us were never taught proper manners as children and turned into gross adults. I learned late in life and have been paying the consequences ever since. At least now I understand what was never understood before. Well penned
April 22nd, 2026 16:21
maybe healing is….
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting view that healing may be happening without notice and effort. Well said
April 20th, 2026 12:25
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting view that healing may be happening without notice and effort. Well said
April 20th, 2026 12:25
a poet\'s weekend
sorenbarrett said:
So right it is that a poet is a state of mind. Nicely said
April 15th, 2026 15:57
sorenbarrett said:
So right it is that a poet is a state of mind. Nicely said
April 15th, 2026 15:57
bubble wrap
sorenbarrett said:
A cute romantic write of a dance and a kiss. Well written
April 14th, 2026 19:30
sorenbarrett said:
A cute romantic write of a dance and a kiss. Well written
April 14th, 2026 19:30
mellow
sorenbarrett said:
A good read on how to mellow out with age. Well done
April 13th, 2026 19:50
sorenbarrett said:
A good read on how to mellow out with age. Well done
April 13th, 2026 19:50
dismantled
sorenbarrett said:
There is the expression of being ready to move on and leave behind the old for the new. So well put in metaphor of a house. Nicely done
April 9th, 2026 19:30
sorenbarrett said:
There is the expression of being ready to move on and leave behind the old for the new. So well put in metaphor of a house. Nicely done
April 9th, 2026 19:30
pointe shoes
sorenbarrett said:
Every little girl’s dream of being a ballerina put in this poem nicely written
April 6th, 2026 18:33
sorenbarrett said:
Every little girl’s dream of being a ballerina put in this poem nicely written
April 6th, 2026 18:33
cat
Doggerel Dave said:
Easy to see who is dominant in that relationship....Puss rules..
April 2nd, 2026 23:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Easy to see who is dominant in that relationship....Puss rules..
April 2nd, 2026 23:09
museum
sorenbarrett said:
Despite a rough start all seems to work out in this poem leaving a calm feeling. Nicely done
March 30th, 2026 17:08
sorenbarrett said:
Despite a rough start all seems to work out in this poem leaving a calm feeling. Nicely done
March 30th, 2026 17:08
moving out
Siah Bjerke said:
I love this poem so much. It pains this wonderful picture in your mind and it makes you think.
March 27th, 2026 09:51
Siah Bjerke said:
I love this poem so much. It pains this wonderful picture in your mind and it makes you think.
March 27th, 2026 09:51
bluebells
sorenbarrett said:
This poem mixes reflections with observations of nature and its beauty. Nicely written it works its way through the seasons.
March 23rd, 2026 14:08
sorenbarrett said:
This poem mixes reflections with observations of nature and its beauty. Nicely written it works its way through the seasons.
March 23rd, 2026 14:08
Excalibur.
sorenbarrett said:
Well said I believe that in one way or another we all use poetry as a therapy and it is one of the best, this said from a therapist.
March 21st, 2026 16:13
sorenbarrett said:
Well said I believe that in one way or another we all use poetry as a therapy and it is one of the best, this said from a therapist.
March 21st, 2026 16:13
flat tyre
sorenbarrett said:
Making romance out of excitement and excitement out of recklessness it is from such that attraction is derived. Well done
March 16th, 2026 12:36
sorenbarrett said:
Making romance out of excitement and excitement out of recklessness it is from such that attraction is derived. Well done
March 16th, 2026 12:36
thoughts of my cat
orchidee said:
Good write L. Cats may seem to rule us at times, unlike dogs!
March 13th, 2026 03:36
orchidee said:
Good write L. Cats may seem to rule us at times, unlike dogs!
March 13th, 2026 03:36
thoughts of my cat
sorenbarrett said:
Short punctuated, self oriented, demanding, in the moment, changing all what a cat might think and feel. Lovely and well done
March 12th, 2026 16:01
sorenbarrett said:
Short punctuated, self oriented, demanding, in the moment, changing all what a cat might think and feel. Lovely and well done
March 12th, 2026 16:01
1am poetry
sorenbarrett said:
In this write I hear that although we are all different we are also all the same and that common needs and desires frame us all. Well done
March 12th, 2026 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
In this write I hear that although we are all different we are also all the same and that common needs and desires frame us all. Well done
March 12th, 2026 04:01
war
sorenbarrett said:
War and its devastation affect some more than others and in this poem there is a secondary cost to those that await the return of those they care about. Nicely composed with some great wording where one line is followed by another that although not a direct rhyme is a close one that fits so well.
March 8th, 2026 13:47
sorenbarrett said:
War and its devastation affect some more than others and in this poem there is a secondary cost to those that await the return of those they care about. Nicely composed with some great wording where one line is followed by another that although not a direct rhyme is a close one that fits so well.
March 8th, 2026 13:47
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