Comments received on poems by lunarchloedip
eat properly!
sorenbarrett said:
Some of us were never taught proper manners as children and turned into gross adults. I learned late in life and have been paying the consequences ever since. At least now I understand what was never understood before. Well penned
April 22nd, 2026 16:21
sorenbarrett said:
Some of us were never taught proper manners as children and turned into gross adults. I learned late in life and have been paying the consequences ever since. At least now I understand what was never understood before. Well penned
April 22nd, 2026 16:21
maybe healing is….
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting view that healing may be happening without notice and effort. Well said
April 20th, 2026 12:25
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting view that healing may be happening without notice and effort. Well said
April 20th, 2026 12:25
a poet\'s weekend
sorenbarrett said:
So right it is that a poet is a state of mind. Nicely said
April 15th, 2026 15:57
sorenbarrett said:
So right it is that a poet is a state of mind. Nicely said
April 15th, 2026 15:57
bubble wrap
sorenbarrett said:
A cute romantic write of a dance and a kiss. Well written
April 14th, 2026 19:30
sorenbarrett said:
A cute romantic write of a dance and a kiss. Well written
April 14th, 2026 19:30
mellow
sorenbarrett said:
A good read on how to mellow out with age. Well done
April 13th, 2026 19:50
sorenbarrett said:
A good read on how to mellow out with age. Well done
April 13th, 2026 19:50
dismantled
sorenbarrett said:
There is the expression of being ready to move on and leave behind the old for the new. So well put in metaphor of a house. Nicely done
April 9th, 2026 19:30
sorenbarrett said:
There is the expression of being ready to move on and leave behind the old for the new. So well put in metaphor of a house. Nicely done
April 9th, 2026 19:30
pointe shoes
sorenbarrett said:
Every little girl’s dream of being a ballerina put in this poem nicely written
April 6th, 2026 18:33
sorenbarrett said:
Every little girl’s dream of being a ballerina put in this poem nicely written
April 6th, 2026 18:33
cat
Doggerel Dave said:
Easy to see who is dominant in that relationship....Puss rules..
April 2nd, 2026 23:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Easy to see who is dominant in that relationship....Puss rules..
April 2nd, 2026 23:09
museum
sorenbarrett said:
Despite a rough start all seems to work out in this poem leaving a calm feeling. Nicely done
March 30th, 2026 17:08
sorenbarrett said:
Despite a rough start all seems to work out in this poem leaving a calm feeling. Nicely done
March 30th, 2026 17:08
moving out
Siah Bjerke said:
I love this poem so much. It pains this wonderful picture in your mind and it makes you think.
March 27th, 2026 09:51
Siah Bjerke said:
I love this poem so much. It pains this wonderful picture in your mind and it makes you think.
March 27th, 2026 09:51
bluebells
sorenbarrett said:
This poem mixes reflections with observations of nature and its beauty. Nicely written it works its way through the seasons.
March 23rd, 2026 14:08
sorenbarrett said:
This poem mixes reflections with observations of nature and its beauty. Nicely written it works its way through the seasons.
March 23rd, 2026 14:08
Excalibur.
sorenbarrett said:
Well said I believe that in one way or another we all use poetry as a therapy and it is one of the best, this said from a therapist.
March 21st, 2026 16:13
sorenbarrett said:
Well said I believe that in one way or another we all use poetry as a therapy and it is one of the best, this said from a therapist.
March 21st, 2026 16:13
flat tyre
sorenbarrett said:
Making romance out of excitement and excitement out of recklessness it is from such that attraction is derived. Well done
March 16th, 2026 12:36
sorenbarrett said:
Making romance out of excitement and excitement out of recklessness it is from such that attraction is derived. Well done
March 16th, 2026 12:36
thoughts of my cat
orchidee said:
Good write L. Cats may seem to rule us at times, unlike dogs!
March 13th, 2026 03:36
orchidee said:
Good write L. Cats may seem to rule us at times, unlike dogs!
March 13th, 2026 03:36
thoughts of my cat
sorenbarrett said:
Short punctuated, self oriented, demanding, in the moment, changing all what a cat might think and feel. Lovely and well done
March 12th, 2026 16:01
sorenbarrett said:
Short punctuated, self oriented, demanding, in the moment, changing all what a cat might think and feel. Lovely and well done
March 12th, 2026 16:01
1am poetry
sorenbarrett said:
In this write I hear that although we are all different we are also all the same and that common needs and desires frame us all. Well done
March 12th, 2026 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
In this write I hear that although we are all different we are also all the same and that common needs and desires frame us all. Well done
March 12th, 2026 04:01
war
sorenbarrett said:
War and its devastation affect some more than others and in this poem there is a secondary cost to those that await the return of those they care about. Nicely composed with some great wording where one line is followed by another that although not a direct rhyme is a close one that fits so well.
March 8th, 2026 13:47
sorenbarrett said:
War and its devastation affect some more than others and in this poem there is a secondary cost to those that await the return of those they care about. Nicely composed with some great wording where one line is followed by another that although not a direct rhyme is a close one that fits so well.
March 8th, 2026 13:47
poets
sorenbarrett said:
This self expose poem leaves the reader feeling like a fly on the wall and it reads sincere and honest well written.
March 4th, 2026 13:39
sorenbarrett said:
This self expose poem leaves the reader feeling like a fly on the wall and it reads sincere and honest well written.
March 4th, 2026 13:39
poets
Demar Desu said:
The second stanza alone should be its own poem. Great work
March 4th, 2026 12:33
Demar Desu said:
The second stanza alone should be its own poem. Great work
March 4th, 2026 12:33
mercy
sorenbarrett said:
Sanity measured by the norm and when the norm changes so does sanity. A good write
March 3rd, 2026 09:28
sorenbarrett said:
Sanity measured by the norm and when the norm changes so does sanity. A good write
March 3rd, 2026 09:28
end.
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes the burden seems too heavy and there is a desire to put it down and go home but carry on the journey will end one day. it is too late to begin another trip and this is the one chance that one gets. Nicely written
March 1st, 2026 08:22
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes the burden seems too heavy and there is a desire to put it down and go home but carry on the journey will end one day. it is too late to begin another trip and this is the one chance that one gets. Nicely written
March 1st, 2026 08:22
open eyes
sorenbarrett said:
There are many feelings that go with memories of a father past. They are voiced here and there is a nostalgia that accompanies it. Nicely said
February 25th, 2026 20:11
sorenbarrett said:
There are many feelings that go with memories of a father past. They are voiced here and there is a nostalgia that accompanies it. Nicely said
February 25th, 2026 20:11
make it work
sorenbarrett said:
The contrast of the old and familiar the dead and the living and going forward. Well done.
February 23rd, 2026 17:58
sorenbarrett said:
The contrast of the old and familiar the dead and the living and going forward. Well done.
February 23rd, 2026 17:58
i promise, i will try
sorenbarrett said:
Conflict personal, interpersonal, individual or social is a fear that many have and courage comes not by imitation but by determination. Well written
February 18th, 2026 21:25
sorenbarrett said:
Conflict personal, interpersonal, individual or social is a fear that many have and courage comes not by imitation but by determination. Well written
February 18th, 2026 21:25
ache.
sorenbarrett said:
A hard topic. The taking advantage of the helpless is a sore spot and not easily ignored. A poem that contains a sense of anger and righteous rage over exploitation of children. Nicely written
February 13th, 2026 16:46
sorenbarrett said:
A hard topic. The taking advantage of the helpless is a sore spot and not easily ignored. A poem that contains a sense of anger and righteous rage over exploitation of children. Nicely written
February 13th, 2026 16:46
moving out
sorenbarrett said:
A home different from a house, in a home one is safe, wanted, accepted for who one is, A home is a warm place. Everyone should have a home even if it is within themselves. A great metaphor. Well done
February 3rd, 2026 08:12
sorenbarrett said:
A home different from a house, in a home one is safe, wanted, accepted for who one is, A home is a warm place. Everyone should have a home even if it is within themselves. A great metaphor. Well done
February 3rd, 2026 08:12
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