Comments received on poems by Thoughtless
The Bottoms
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful wording in the imagery paints a picture in words that can be seen in the mind\'s eye vividly. Simply beautiful and with a hidden message that man destroys such images.
August 25th, 2024 10:54
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful wording in the imagery paints a picture in words that can be seen in the mind\'s eye vividly. Simply beautiful and with a hidden message that man destroys such images.
August 25th, 2024 10:54
Hmm
Teddy.15 said:
LOL a high five for this imagery, so clever. Poor ant though. 🌹 🐜
August 24th, 2024 18:23
Teddy.15 said:
LOL a high five for this imagery, so clever. Poor ant though. 🌹 🐜
August 24th, 2024 18:23
Hmm
Cassie58 said:
Now that I would like to see. Visually scary. Have a great Saturday.
August 24th, 2024 11:22
Cassie58 said:
Now that I would like to see. Visually scary. Have a great Saturday.
August 24th, 2024 11:22
My Flyover State
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ve lived in Oklahoma, and Florida both flat as well as Utah, Montana that have mountains it is all where the heart is. Lovely
August 23rd, 2024 08:34
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ve lived in Oklahoma, and Florida both flat as well as Utah, Montana that have mountains it is all where the heart is. Lovely
August 23rd, 2024 08:34
Learning Curve
sorenbarrett said:
A thoughtful write that makes a lot of sense. We need a backup system.
August 22nd, 2024 08:50
sorenbarrett said:
A thoughtful write that makes a lot of sense. We need a backup system.
August 22nd, 2024 08:50
Learning Curve
Cassie58 said:
Tough times, resilient people. Maybe they aren’t made like that anymore. Survivors. Made me think of my grandparents generation. A good read. Happy Thursday.
August 22nd, 2024 07:40
Cassie58 said:
Tough times, resilient people. Maybe they aren’t made like that anymore. Survivors. Made me think of my grandparents generation. A good read. Happy Thursday.
August 22nd, 2024 07:40
Apology
Dan Williams said:
Story told and explained in the simplest terms. Nice.
August 22nd, 2024 00:07
Dan Williams said:
Story told and explained in the simplest terms. Nice.
August 22nd, 2024 00:07
Apology
Cassie58 said:
I understood this one. Awkward, but not uncommon. Best laugh it off.
August 21st, 2024 15:22
Cassie58 said:
I understood this one. Awkward, but not uncommon. Best laugh it off.
August 21st, 2024 15:22
Apology
Bella Shepard said:
I think I got it, and I\'m chuckling, and now laughing. Good one!
August 20th, 2024 11:53
Bella Shepard said:
I think I got it, and I\'m chuckling, and now laughing. Good one!
August 20th, 2024 11:53
Apology
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful and so very deeply sad, a wonderful emotional senryu 🌹
August 20th, 2024 08:11
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful and so very deeply sad, a wonderful emotional senryu 🌹
August 20th, 2024 08:11
Apology
Doggerel Dave said:
Might be poking fun now, but there\'s tragedy lurking in those seventeen syllables.
August 20th, 2024 07:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Might be poking fun now, but there\'s tragedy lurking in those seventeen syllables.
August 20th, 2024 07:41
Apology
sorenbarrett said:
Message received and understood. Short and to the point a great Haiku
August 20th, 2024 06:18
sorenbarrett said:
Message received and understood. Short and to the point a great Haiku
August 20th, 2024 06:18
Early Morning Again
sorenbarrett said:
A fitting tribute to the necessaries of a common day. Nicely written with great images.
August 19th, 2024 07:51
sorenbarrett said:
A fitting tribute to the necessaries of a common day. Nicely written with great images.
August 19th, 2024 07:51
Early Morning Thoughts
sorenbarrett said:
Fears, admonitions, hope all contained in this piece nicely written
August 18th, 2024 12:30
sorenbarrett said:
Fears, admonitions, hope all contained in this piece nicely written
August 18th, 2024 12:30
Early Morning Thoughts
Teddy.15 said:
lol this has made me chuckle, probably because I\'m a lady, it\'s true any one man can bring out the best or worst in a woman vice versa, mother\'s should all stay quiet when it comes to our children\'s choice of love, I\'m a mother and I can say it hand on heart, my mother never ever judged or interfered in that. She was an incredibly smart woman. Yes I think respect and admiration and kindness on both parts to eachother is always the best way to keep dignity and memories in some cases. 🌹 A wonderful walk into your reflection today.
August 18th, 2024 09:11
Teddy.15 said:
lol this has made me chuckle, probably because I\'m a lady, it\'s true any one man can bring out the best or worst in a woman vice versa, mother\'s should all stay quiet when it comes to our children\'s choice of love, I\'m a mother and I can say it hand on heart, my mother never ever judged or interfered in that. She was an incredibly smart woman. Yes I think respect and admiration and kindness on both parts to eachother is always the best way to keep dignity and memories in some cases. 🌹 A wonderful walk into your reflection today.
August 18th, 2024 09:11
Reunion?
rhmn_7 said:
It is definitely a reunion when you feel the butterflies!
August 18th, 2024 06:08
rhmn_7 said:
It is definitely a reunion when you feel the butterflies!
August 18th, 2024 06:08
Mask
sorenbarrett said:
Love Haikus and this one is a good one at least two possible meanings a dead soldier with a fixed smile at leaving the war or a living one that loves war.
August 17th, 2024 09:11
sorenbarrett said:
Love Haikus and this one is a good one at least two possible meanings a dead soldier with a fixed smile at leaving the war or a living one that loves war.
August 17th, 2024 09:11
Mask
Teddy.15 said:
Quite brilliant, on the outside your smiling but from within you are in darkness, what\'s not to get. Brilliant senryu 🌹
August 17th, 2024 08:07
Teddy.15 said:
Quite brilliant, on the outside your smiling but from within you are in darkness, what\'s not to get. Brilliant senryu 🌹
August 17th, 2024 08:07
A series in order: Extended Family, By the Old Ones, Succubus, and finally a short story, Threesome.
Tony36 said:
Awesome write
August 16th, 2024 09:20
Tony36 said:
Awesome write
August 16th, 2024 09:20
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