Comments received on poems by Thoughtless
Micro poem
sorenbarrett said:
This has a George Carlin type of word play to it. Loved it
February 16th, 2025 14:05
sorenbarrett said:
This has a George Carlin type of word play to it. Loved it
February 16th, 2025 14:05
Micro poem
Ma5on said:
JDB,
this is a striking & minimalistic statement. It suggests themes of independence, isolation, & possibly defiance. Not much more to add otherwise my comment will be longer than the poem itself...oh hang on, it already is!!
regards
Ma5on
February 16th, 2025 13:59
Ma5on said:
JDB,
this is a striking & minimalistic statement. It suggests themes of independence, isolation, & possibly defiance. Not much more to add otherwise my comment will be longer than the poem itself...oh hang on, it already is!!
regards
Ma5on
February 16th, 2025 13:59
Micro poem
Cassie58 said:
This brevity tells me that through strength and determination, someone can succeed no matter how difficult their start in life. Anyone in this position deserves to be congratulated.
February 16th, 2025 13:50
Cassie58 said:
This brevity tells me that through strength and determination, someone can succeed no matter how difficult their start in life. Anyone in this position deserves to be congratulated.
February 16th, 2025 13:50
maybe
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and creative. Irma is also the word for sister in Portuguese and Spanish
February 16th, 2025 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and creative. Irma is also the word for sister in Portuguese and Spanish
February 16th, 2025 04:58
Seasonings
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating. As if taking the reader along in your nightly excursions in the vaporous world of dreams, how beautifully rendered this is, excellent imagery tricking out the adventure with a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 13th, 2025 18:43
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating. As if taking the reader along in your nightly excursions in the vaporous world of dreams, how beautifully rendered this is, excellent imagery tricking out the adventure with a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 13th, 2025 18:43
Seasonings
Poetic Licence said:
Reflecting back on the good and bad, a well written piece, enjoyed the read
February 13th, 2025 05:08
Poetic Licence said:
Reflecting back on the good and bad, a well written piece, enjoyed the read
February 13th, 2025 05:08
Seasonings
sorenbarrett said:
memories of the past are seasoning to life a great metaphor. Very nice Thoughtless
February 12th, 2025 17:50
sorenbarrett said:
memories of the past are seasoning to life a great metaphor. Very nice Thoughtless
February 12th, 2025 17:50
Scifaiku, current affairs
Poetic Licence said:
That is a fair statement, who would want us with destruction and chaos we cause, enjoyed the read.
February 8th, 2025 08:07
Poetic Licence said:
That is a fair statement, who would want us with destruction and chaos we cause, enjoyed the read.
February 8th, 2025 08:07
Scifaiku, current affairs
sorenbarrett said:
Yes I believe we would be undesirables. Not too smart, bad habits, immoral, violent, constantly changing values, poorly educated and the list goes on. Good wrte
February 8th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Yes I believe we would be undesirables. Not too smart, bad habits, immoral, violent, constantly changing values, poorly educated and the list goes on. Good wrte
February 8th, 2025 04:25
On the other Foot
sorenbarrett said:
Here the sexual is tied to errotic fantasy that is tied to relationship problems that are mutual for both and resolved through sharing of mutual fantasies. What a tanged web we weave when frist we practice to deceive. A great write
February 5th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Here the sexual is tied to errotic fantasy that is tied to relationship problems that are mutual for both and resolved through sharing of mutual fantasies. What a tanged web we weave when frist we practice to deceive. A great write
February 5th, 2025 04:33
On the other Foot
Poetic Licence said:
That is one for a late night read, enjoyed the read
February 5th, 2025 02:52
Poetic Licence said:
That is one for a late night read, enjoyed the read
February 5th, 2025 02:52
broken promises
Teddy.15 said:
This is excellent powerful and as I myself am non religious can agree completely. 🌹
February 4th, 2025 08:57
Teddy.15 said:
This is excellent powerful and as I myself am non religious can agree completely. 🌹
February 4th, 2025 08:57
broken promises
Poetic Licence said:
I might be wrong, but i feel these few words say an awful lot about a certain politician, strong statement, enjoyed the read
February 3rd, 2025 12:47
Poetic Licence said:
I might be wrong, but i feel these few words say an awful lot about a certain politician, strong statement, enjoyed the read
February 3rd, 2025 12:47
A familiar Yard
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem with that superb twist at the end that gives new meaning. Its that sharp unexpected turn in the road that raises the excitement
February 2nd, 2025 07:54
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem with that superb twist at the end that gives new meaning. Its that sharp unexpected turn in the road that raises the excitement
February 2nd, 2025 07:54
A haiku, sort of
Demar Desu said:
Tell that to the hours I have to work! I was never there! I don’t exist!
January 16th, 2025 17:26
Demar Desu said:
Tell that to the hours I have to work! I was never there! I don’t exist!
January 16th, 2025 17:26
Things I Said to or about my Wife
Poetic Licence said:
An entertaining read and gave me a smile, Thank you
January 7th, 2025 17:25
Poetic Licence said:
An entertaining read and gave me a smile, Thank you
January 7th, 2025 17:25
Blizzard
sorenbarrett said:
You cast an image that revives old memories of days in the north and cold that seems as though it will never end. You had to leave the faucet dripping so the pipes wouldn\'t freeze. Too cold for me in my old age moved south, far south. Good write
January 6th, 2025 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
You cast an image that revives old memories of days in the north and cold that seems as though it will never end. You had to leave the faucet dripping so the pipes wouldn\'t freeze. Too cold for me in my old age moved south, far south. Good write
January 6th, 2025 04:03
Blizzard
Poetic Licence said:
Keep Cozy, enjoy the films , i enjoyed the read
January 5th, 2025 20:42
Poetic Licence said:
Keep Cozy, enjoy the films , i enjoyed the read
January 5th, 2025 20:42
Blizzard
Teddy.15 said:
I\'ve read about the big freeze today, wishing you warm and cozy safety at home, a good excuse to watch all your favourite films whilst the weather softens. Best wishes. A lovely poem, love the ending. 🌹
January 5th, 2025 16:46
Teddy.15 said:
I\'ve read about the big freeze today, wishing you warm and cozy safety at home, a good excuse to watch all your favourite films whilst the weather softens. Best wishes. A lovely poem, love the ending. 🌹
January 5th, 2025 16:46
Asleep at last
arqios said:
Thinking those thoughts as well, in a different way from the way one did as a child or a younger person. This touches and lifts up. Thanks for sharing. It helps in the preparing. All the more as love is bridged between existences.
January 4th, 2025 16:50
arqios said:
Thinking those thoughts as well, in a different way from the way one did as a child or a younger person. This touches and lifts up. Thanks for sharing. It helps in the preparing. All the more as love is bridged between existences.
January 4th, 2025 16:50
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