Comments received on poems by Thoughtless



Reunion?
rhmn_7 said:

It is definitely a reunion when you feel the butterflies!

August 18th, 2024 06:08

Mask
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 17th, 2024 13:05

Mask
sorenbarrett said:

Love Haikus and this one is a good one at least two possible meanings a dead soldier with a fixed smile at leaving the war or a living one that loves war.

August 17th, 2024 09:11

Mask
Teddy.15 said:

Quite brilliant, on the outside your smiling but from within you are in darkness, what\'s not to get. Brilliant senryu 🌹

August 17th, 2024 08:07


Don\'t even like Oranges
Cheeky Missy said:

Pity you dasn\'t like those charming pockets of delectable juiciness. Sorry you fell for what, fundamentally, you\'d eschew.

August 16th, 2024 08:28

A series in order: Extended Family, By the Old Ones, Succubus, and finally a short story, Threesome.
sorenbarrett said:

Sexual, sensual, vivid this write is an expression of sex from different views. Powerful words

August 16th, 2024 06:38

Dummy
Cassie58 said:

Oh what complicated lives some people lead. Not for the faint hearted. Two is company, threes a crowd. Yes, foolish behavior Thoughtless.

August 15th, 2024 16:08

Dummy
sorenbarrett said:

All those words apply. Cleverly written and nicely said.

August 15th, 2024 09:55

Dummy
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 15th, 2024 09:06

Dummy
Teddy.15 said:

Fools indeed. Honesty is always the best road in my very humble opinion 🌹

August 15th, 2024 09:00

Working it Out
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

August 14th, 2024 17:54

Working it Out
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 14th, 2024 16:48

Working it Out
sorenbarrett said:

Opposites attract they say. Difference is good to a point no catsup on ice-cream for me

August 14th, 2024 12:05

Midnight Wish
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work. Funny stuff.

August 13th, 2024 20:31

Midnight Wish
Cassie58 said:

The sort of dream that would put a smile on the face of most of the males in our species and keep them happy all day. Sensual writing, nicely done.

August 13th, 2024 12:54

Midnight Wish
Tony36 said:

Love it

August 13th, 2024 08:55

Midnight Wish
sorenbarrett said:

Sensuous and sexy it evokes a feeling of longing. Nicely worded.

August 13th, 2024 08:29

Midnight Wish
2781 said:

Then you woke up?

August 13th, 2024 07:29

Reunion?
Teddy.15 said:

Reunion and possibly rebirth, such beautiful imagery 🌹

August 12th, 2024 07:30

Reunion?
sorenbarrett said:

Pieces and bits put together yes reunion. Nicely said

August 12th, 2024 07:24

Illusions?
Teddy.15 said:

lol oh so brilliant. I thoroughly enjoyed your tongue and brain twisting, love optic illusions. A wonderful poem to mix it all up. 🌹

August 11th, 2024 15:25

Illusions?
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 11th, 2024 09:41

Illusions?
sorenbarrett said:

This poem is why I frustrate people when I say that I know nothing, and believe in nothing a bit of a nihilist here. Ask Descartes he\'ll tell ya.

August 11th, 2024 09:39

Illusions?
aDarkerMind said:

a very impressive write JDB.

August 11th, 2024 09:26

Illusions?
2781 said:

There\'s more than meets the eye

August 11th, 2024 09:09

Fantasy and Reality
sorenbarrett said:

Sensuous and enticing this poem shows brave wording. Nicely said

August 10th, 2024 11:41

My Wedding Night
kwrites said:

it is the most beautiful thing I\'ve read PERIOD.

August 10th, 2024 08:03

A Communion
sorenbarrett said:

I feel the celebration

August 9th, 2024 11:51

A Communion
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

August 9th, 2024 09:56

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