Comments received on poems by Thoughtless
A Story
Doggerel Dave said:
Same again. Lonely street. Woman in opposite direction I felt certain I knew. Bolted. On realisation ran after to apologise. Didn\'t help.....
Thanks for that.
August 5th, 2024 07:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Same again. Lonely street. Woman in opposite direction I felt certain I knew. Bolted. On realisation ran after to apologise. Didn\'t help.....
Thanks for that.
August 5th, 2024 07:38
My Wedding Night
Teddy.15 said:
For anyone who doubts themselves, this is magnificent message, it doesn\'t matter of your past only of your future, sir I\'m delighted to read your beautiful poetry. 🌹
August 4th, 2024 15:32
Teddy.15 said:
For anyone who doubts themselves, this is magnificent message, it doesn\'t matter of your past only of your future, sir I\'m delighted to read your beautiful poetry. 🌹
August 4th, 2024 15:32
My Wedding Night
sorenbarrett said:
Is it the body or the person we love? Old histories should be left in the past. Nice write.
August 4th, 2024 13:55
sorenbarrett said:
Is it the body or the person we love? Old histories should be left in the past. Nice write.
August 4th, 2024 13:55
A Strange Woman\'s Lips
sorenbarrett said:
Confusing to all involved. Incredible is the word. Meaning not credible. A fun read.
August 3rd, 2024 18:47
sorenbarrett said:
Confusing to all involved. Incredible is the word. Meaning not credible. A fun read.
August 3rd, 2024 18:47
The House of my Mind
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor works well and is well employed. Great wording here.
August 3rd, 2024 05:34
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor works well and is well employed. Great wording here.
August 3rd, 2024 05:34
The House of my Mind
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful metaphor here, as mouldy metaphor can be it\'s a brilliant and very emotional to be able to see the imagery of what a mind feels like, I\'ve had these moments in my life on my mind, caused by love🌹
August 3rd, 2024 03:33
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful metaphor here, as mouldy metaphor can be it\'s a brilliant and very emotional to be able to see the imagery of what a mind feels like, I\'ve had these moments in my life on my mind, caused by love🌹
August 3rd, 2024 03:33
I\'m Selfish, I suppose.
Teddy.15 said:
A Certain singing artist comes to mind, who ever she is you just put her on a pedastal. Absolutely beautiful poem. 🌹
August 3rd, 2024 03:29
Teddy.15 said:
A Certain singing artist comes to mind, who ever she is you just put her on a pedastal. Absolutely beautiful poem. 🌹
August 3rd, 2024 03:29
I\'m Selfish, I suppose.
sorenbarrett said:
An expression of worth and most interestingly said.
August 1st, 2024 18:25
sorenbarrett said:
An expression of worth and most interestingly said.
August 1st, 2024 18:25
Don\'t even like Oranges
sorenbarrett said:
Good format for the subject. Short and a bit enigmatic. nicely done
July 30th, 2024 19:34
sorenbarrett said:
Good format for the subject. Short and a bit enigmatic. nicely done
July 30th, 2024 19:34
Those Days
sorenbarrett said:
Depressing left with the smell of diapers a brown smog and the smell of diesel. Powerful poem
July 29th, 2024 06:15
sorenbarrett said:
Depressing left with the smell of diapers a brown smog and the smell of diesel. Powerful poem
July 29th, 2024 06:15
Fugitives
sorenbarrett said:
Something about this caught my mind like a loose fish hook and I was snagged unable to let go and move on.
July 27th, 2024 20:30
sorenbarrett said:
Something about this caught my mind like a loose fish hook and I was snagged unable to let go and move on.
July 27th, 2024 20:30
The Truck Bed and Summer
sorenbarrett said:
A nostalgic memory of youth gone by and images of a fond past remembrance that beckons. Nicely done
July 24th, 2024 07:11
sorenbarrett said:
A nostalgic memory of youth gone by and images of a fond past remembrance that beckons. Nicely done
July 24th, 2024 07:11
An Old Man all Over
Doggerel Dave said:
Speak for yourself, son............
(cf \'Tissue Paper Hearts\', with trepidation) 🤣
July 20th, 2024 17:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Speak for yourself, son............
(cf \'Tissue Paper Hearts\', with trepidation) 🤣
July 20th, 2024 17:05
Tissue Paper Hearts
Doggerel Dave said:
Not \'we\' - there are some few free of such superficiality.
But from pure observation many adhere to that template.
Enjoyable write.
July 20th, 2024 16:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Not \'we\' - there are some few free of such superficiality.
But from pure observation many adhere to that template.
Enjoyable write.
July 20th, 2024 16:53
Shrapnel in the Snow
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes I know.... but The Reaper suddenly decided to take a break -hasn\'t revisited...so far so good...
July 20th, 2024 16:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes I know.... but The Reaper suddenly decided to take a break -hasn\'t revisited...so far so good...
July 20th, 2024 16:43
Not a poem but please pass on.
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Yes Fear can most certainly cause violence. Good write.👍
April 3rd, 2024 22:01
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Yes Fear can most certainly cause violence. Good write.👍
April 3rd, 2024 22:01
My Dream
Teddy.15 said:
Your title is perfect for this 🌹 packed with everything.
April 1st, 2024 15:49
Teddy.15 said:
Your title is perfect for this 🌹 packed with everything.
April 1st, 2024 15:49
My Dream
Bragee said:
So many different emotions captured in a few short words.
Great work!
March 18th, 2024 23:21
Bragee said:
So many different emotions captured in a few short words.
Great work!
March 18th, 2024 23:21
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