Comments received on poems by Thoughtless



Apology
Bella Shepard said:

I think I got it, and I\'m chuckling, and now laughing. Good one!

August 20th, 2024 11:53

Apology
Teddy.15 said:

Beautiful and so very deeply sad, a wonderful emotional senryu 🌹

August 20th, 2024 08:11

Apology
Doggerel Dave said:

Might be poking fun now, but there\'s tragedy lurking in those seventeen syllables.

August 20th, 2024 07:41

Apology
Thoughtless said:

Thank you.

August 20th, 2024 06:36

Apology
sorenbarrett said:

Message received and understood. Short and to the point a great Haiku

August 20th, 2024 06:18

Early Morning Again
sorenbarrett said:

A fitting tribute to the necessaries of a common day. Nicely written with great images.

August 19th, 2024 07:51

Early Morning Thoughts
sorenbarrett said:

Fears, admonitions, hope all contained in this piece nicely written

August 18th, 2024 12:30

Early Morning Thoughts
Teddy.15 said:

lol this has made me chuckle, probably because I\'m a lady, it\'s true any one man can bring out the best or worst in a woman vice versa, mother\'s should all stay quiet when it comes to our children\'s choice of love, I\'m a mother and I can say it hand on heart, my mother never ever judged or interfered in that. She was an incredibly smart woman. Yes I think respect and admiration and kindness on both parts to eachother is always the best way to keep dignity and memories in some cases. 🌹 A wonderful walk into your reflection today.

August 18th, 2024 09:11

Reunion?
rhmn_7 said:

It is definitely a reunion when you feel the butterflies!

August 18th, 2024 06:08

Mask
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 17th, 2024 13:05

Mask
sorenbarrett said:

Love Haikus and this one is a good one at least two possible meanings a dead soldier with a fixed smile at leaving the war or a living one that loves war.

August 17th, 2024 09:11

Mask
Teddy.15 said:

Quite brilliant, on the outside your smiling but from within you are in darkness, what\'s not to get. Brilliant senryu 🌹

August 17th, 2024 08:07


Don\'t even like Oranges
Cheeky Missy said:

Pity you dasn\'t like those charming pockets of delectable juiciness. Sorry you fell for what, fundamentally, you\'d eschew.

August 16th, 2024 08:28

A series in order: Extended Family, By the Old Ones, Succubus, and finally a short story, Threesome.
sorenbarrett said:

Sexual, sensual, vivid this write is an expression of sex from different views. Powerful words

August 16th, 2024 06:38

Dummy
Cassie58 said:

Oh what complicated lives some people lead. Not for the faint hearted. Two is company, threes a crowd. Yes, foolish behavior Thoughtless.

August 15th, 2024 16:08

Dummy
sorenbarrett said:

All those words apply. Cleverly written and nicely said.

August 15th, 2024 09:55

Dummy
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 15th, 2024 09:06

Dummy
Teddy.15 said:

Fools indeed. Honesty is always the best road in my very humble opinion 🌹

August 15th, 2024 09:00

Working it Out
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

August 14th, 2024 17:54

Working it Out
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 14th, 2024 16:48

Working it Out
sorenbarrett said:

Opposites attract they say. Difference is good to a point no catsup on ice-cream for me

August 14th, 2024 12:05

Midnight Wish
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work. Funny stuff.

August 13th, 2024 20:31

Midnight Wish
Cassie58 said:

The sort of dream that would put a smile on the face of most of the males in our species and keep them happy all day. Sensual writing, nicely done.

August 13th, 2024 12:54

Midnight Wish
Tony36 said:

Love it

August 13th, 2024 08:55

Midnight Wish
sorenbarrett said:

Sensuous and sexy it evokes a feeling of longing. Nicely worded.

August 13th, 2024 08:29

Midnight Wish
2781 said:

Then you woke up?

August 13th, 2024 07:29

Reunion?
Teddy.15 said:

Reunion and possibly rebirth, such beautiful imagery 🌹

August 12th, 2024 07:30

Reunion?
sorenbarrett said:

Pieces and bits put together yes reunion. Nicely said

August 12th, 2024 07:24

Illusions?
Teddy.15 said:

lol oh so brilliant. I thoroughly enjoyed your tongue and brain twisting, love optic illusions. A wonderful poem to mix it all up. 🌹

August 11th, 2024 15:25

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