Comments received on poems by Thoughtless
Those Days
sorenbarrett said:
Depressing left with the smell of diapers a brown smog and the smell of diesel. Powerful poem
July 29th, 2024 06:15
sorenbarrett said:
Depressing left with the smell of diapers a brown smog and the smell of diesel. Powerful poem
July 29th, 2024 06:15
Fugitives
sorenbarrett said:
Something about this caught my mind like a loose fish hook and I was snagged unable to let go and move on.
July 27th, 2024 20:30
sorenbarrett said:
Something about this caught my mind like a loose fish hook and I was snagged unable to let go and move on.
July 27th, 2024 20:30
The Truck Bed and Summer
sorenbarrett said:
A nostalgic memory of youth gone by and images of a fond past remembrance that beckons. Nicely done
July 24th, 2024 07:11
sorenbarrett said:
A nostalgic memory of youth gone by and images of a fond past remembrance that beckons. Nicely done
July 24th, 2024 07:11
An Old Man all Over
Doggerel Dave said:
Speak for yourself, son............
(cf \'Tissue Paper Hearts\', with trepidation) 🤣
July 20th, 2024 17:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Speak for yourself, son............
(cf \'Tissue Paper Hearts\', with trepidation) 🤣
July 20th, 2024 17:05
Tissue Paper Hearts
Doggerel Dave said:
Not \'we\' - there are some few free of such superficiality.
But from pure observation many adhere to that template.
Enjoyable write.
July 20th, 2024 16:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Not \'we\' - there are some few free of such superficiality.
But from pure observation many adhere to that template.
Enjoyable write.
July 20th, 2024 16:53
Shrapnel in the Snow
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes I know.... but The Reaper suddenly decided to take a break -hasn\'t revisited...so far so good...
July 20th, 2024 16:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes I know.... but The Reaper suddenly decided to take a break -hasn\'t revisited...so far so good...
July 20th, 2024 16:43
Not a poem but please pass on.
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Yes Fear can most certainly cause violence. Good write.👍
April 3rd, 2024 22:01
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Yes Fear can most certainly cause violence. Good write.👍
April 3rd, 2024 22:01
My Dream
Teddy.15 said:
Your title is perfect for this 🌹 packed with everything.
April 1st, 2024 15:49
Teddy.15 said:
Your title is perfect for this 🌹 packed with everything.
April 1st, 2024 15:49
My Dream
Bragee said:
So many different emotions captured in a few short words.
Great work!
March 18th, 2024 23:21
Bragee said:
So many different emotions captured in a few short words.
Great work!
March 18th, 2024 23:21
A Journey
Teddy.15 said:
lol wonderfully funny 🤣 I feel lke that some days.🌹
February 19th, 2024 14:22
Teddy.15 said:
lol wonderfully funny 🤣 I feel lke that some days.🌹
February 19th, 2024 14:22
A Journey
Bella Shepard said:
Love the presentation of this poem, a life long journey, cleverly layed out.
February 19th, 2024 10:55
Bella Shepard said:
Love the presentation of this poem, a life long journey, cleverly layed out.
February 19th, 2024 10:55
A Story
Bella Shepard said:
It\'s the little oddities of life that keep it interesting. She has probably told the story of the young man who approached her in the library and blurted out \"I know you\", and she wonders why she ran away Shouting \"No! No!\" I love stories, and I love this one.
February 11th, 2024 15:16
Bella Shepard said:
It\'s the little oddities of life that keep it interesting. She has probably told the story of the young man who approached her in the library and blurted out \"I know you\", and she wonders why she ran away Shouting \"No! No!\" I love stories, and I love this one.
February 11th, 2024 15:16
My Fellow Americans
Bella Shepard said:
I have to say that I feel every line of this poem in the pit of my stomach. You present a reality that I never thought I would live to see. Perhaps from the ashes, something far better can arise. A good write, my Fellow American!
February 10th, 2024 14:25
Bella Shepard said:
I have to say that I feel every line of this poem in the pit of my stomach. You present a reality that I never thought I would live to see. Perhaps from the ashes, something far better can arise. A good write, my Fellow American!
February 10th, 2024 14:25
My Fellow Americans
Thoughtless said:
I believe a better future is ahead, contrary to what this composition of mine says. A little creative destruction is possible and perhaps necessary.
February 10th, 2024 11:29
Thoughtless said:
I believe a better future is ahead, contrary to what this composition of mine says. A little creative destruction is possible and perhaps necessary.
February 10th, 2024 11:29
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