Comments received on poems by Thoughtless



\"Sanctuary\"
Bella Shepard said:

Color me ignorant, but I did not know what FWB stood for. Upon googling it, which I do know how to do, I was enlightened, and thoroughly enjoyed this write. I love \"Church of Everlasting Orgies\", seems I missed out on a lot. Fine write!

August 26th, 2024 13:38

\"Sanctuary\"
sorenbarrett said:

What a write about relationships not just of people but societies and countries

August 26th, 2024 09:38

The Bottoms
Dan Williams said:

Lovely, flowing. A lot said in not so many words. Nice work.

August 26th, 2024 00:04

The Bottoms
Tony36 said:

Beautiful

August 25th, 2024 15:49

The Bottoms
Bella Shepard said:

Such a beautiful description, I can understand your love for this place of peaceful bliss. Being native Missourians, and bird lovers, my husband and I travel through Kansas on our westward vacations, this sounds like something we should definitely check out.

August 25th, 2024 15:03

The Bottoms
Cassie58 said:

Fabulous imagery here. Just the type of place that would lift spirits. Your words conveyed beautifully and they stimulate the senses. I enjoyed the posted video too. Thank you JDB. I can’t call you Thoughtless, because you aren’t lol.

August 25th, 2024 11:31

The Bottoms
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful wording in the imagery paints a picture in words that can be seen in the mind\'s eye vividly. Simply beautiful and with a hidden message that man destroys such images.

August 25th, 2024 10:54

Hmm
Dan Williams said:

Wonderful. Just wonderful.

August 25th, 2024 00:04

Hmm
Teddy.15 said:

LOL a high five for this imagery, so clever. Poor ant though. 🌹 🐜

August 24th, 2024 18:23

Hmm
Cassie58 said:

Now that I would like to see. Visually scary. Have a great Saturday.

August 24th, 2024 11:22

Hmm
sorenbarrett said:

A most precarious image hear created.

August 24th, 2024 09:27

My Flyover State
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

August 23rd, 2024 14:30

My Flyover State
Thoughtless said:

Yes. That\'s true.

August 23rd, 2024 09:43

My Flyover State
sorenbarrett said:

I\'ve lived in Oklahoma, and Florida both flat as well as Utah, Montana that have mountains it is all where the heart is. Lovely

August 23rd, 2024 08:34

Learning Curve
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

August 22nd, 2024 09:21

Learning Curve
sorenbarrett said:

A thoughtful write that makes a lot of sense. We need a backup system.

August 22nd, 2024 08:50

Learning Curve
Cassie58 said:

Tough times, resilient people. Maybe they aren’t made like that anymore. Survivors. Made me think of my grandparents generation. A good read. Happy Thursday.

August 22nd, 2024 07:40

Learning Curve
Teddy.15 said:

Fabulous, and I couldn\'t agree more. 🌹

August 22nd, 2024 07:10

Apology
Dan Williams said:

Story told and explained in the simplest terms. Nice.

August 22nd, 2024 00:07

Apology
Cassie58 said:

I understood this one. Awkward, but not uncommon. Best laugh it off.

August 21st, 2024 15:22

Contemplation
Teddy.15 said:

lol yes, beautiful. 🌹

August 21st, 2024 11:40

Contemplation
sorenbarrett said:

Good advice do what I say not as I do.

August 21st, 2024 09:22

Contemplation
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 21st, 2024 09:19

Apology
Bella Shepard said:

I think I got it, and I\'m chuckling, and now laughing. Good one!

August 20th, 2024 11:53

Apology
Teddy.15 said:

Beautiful and so very deeply sad, a wonderful emotional senryu 🌹

August 20th, 2024 08:11

Apology
Doggerel Dave said:

Might be poking fun now, but there\'s tragedy lurking in those seventeen syllables.

August 20th, 2024 07:41

Apology
Thoughtless said:

Thank you.

August 20th, 2024 06:36

Apology
sorenbarrett said:

Message received and understood. Short and to the point a great Haiku

August 20th, 2024 06:18

Early Morning Again
sorenbarrett said:

A fitting tribute to the necessaries of a common day. Nicely written with great images.

August 19th, 2024 07:51

Early Morning Thoughts
sorenbarrett said:

Fears, admonitions, hope all contained in this piece nicely written

August 18th, 2024 12:30

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