Comments received on poems by Thoughtless



Learning Curve
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

August 22nd, 2024 09:21

Learning Curve
sorenbarrett said:

A thoughtful write that makes a lot of sense. We need a backup system.

August 22nd, 2024 08:50

Learning Curve
Cassie58 said:

Tough times, resilient people. Maybe they arenโ€™t made like that anymore. Survivors. Made me think of my grandparents generation. A good read. Happy Thursday.

August 22nd, 2024 07:40

Learning Curve
Teddy.15 said:

Fabulous, and I couldn\'t agree more. ๐ŸŒน

August 22nd, 2024 07:10

Apology
Dan Williams said:

Story told and explained in the simplest terms. Nice.

August 22nd, 2024 00:07

Apology
Cassie58 said:

I understood this one. Awkward, but not uncommon. Best laugh it off.

August 21st, 2024 15:22

Contemplation
Teddy.15 said:

lol yes, beautiful. ๐ŸŒน

August 21st, 2024 11:40

Contemplation
sorenbarrett said:

Good advice do what I say not as I do.

August 21st, 2024 09:22

Contemplation
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 21st, 2024 09:19

Apology
Bella Shepard said:

I think I got it, and I\'m chuckling, and now laughing. Good one!

August 20th, 2024 11:53

Apology
Teddy.15 said:

Beautiful and so very deeply sad, a wonderful emotional senryu ๐ŸŒน

August 20th, 2024 08:11

Apology
Doggerel Dave said:

Might be poking fun now, but there\'s tragedy lurking in those seventeen syllables.

August 20th, 2024 07:41

Apology
Thoughtless said:

Thank you.

August 20th, 2024 06:36

Apology
sorenbarrett said:

Message received and understood. Short and to the point a great Haiku

August 20th, 2024 06:18

Early Morning Again
sorenbarrett said:

A fitting tribute to the necessaries of a common day. Nicely written with great images.

August 19th, 2024 07:51

Early Morning Thoughts
sorenbarrett said:

Fears, admonitions, hope all contained in this piece nicely written

August 18th, 2024 12:30

Early Morning Thoughts
Teddy.15 said:

lol this has made me chuckle, probably because I\'m a lady, it\'s true any one man can bring out the best or worst in a woman vice versa, mother\'s should all stay quiet when it comes to our children\'s choice of love, I\'m a mother and I can say it hand on heart, my mother never ever judged or interfered in that. She was an incredibly smart woman. Yes I think respect and admiration and kindness on both parts to eachother is always the best way to keep dignity and memories in some cases. ๐ŸŒน A wonderful walk into your reflection today.

August 18th, 2024 09:11

Reunion?
rhmn_7 said:

It is definitely a reunion when you feel the butterflies!

August 18th, 2024 06:08

Mask
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 17th, 2024 13:05

Mask
sorenbarrett said:

Love Haikus and this one is a good one at least two possible meanings a dead soldier with a fixed smile at leaving the war or a living one that loves war.

August 17th, 2024 09:11

Mask
Teddy.15 said:

Quite brilliant, on the outside your smiling but from within you are in darkness, what\'s not to get. Brilliant senryu ๐ŸŒน

August 17th, 2024 08:07


Don\'t even like Oranges
Cheeky Missy said:

Pity you dasn\'t like those charming pockets of delectable juiciness. Sorry you fell for what, fundamentally, you\'d eschew.

August 16th, 2024 08:28

A series in order: Extended Family, By the Old Ones, Succubus, and finally a short story, Threesome.
sorenbarrett said:

Sexual, sensual, vivid this write is an expression of sex from different views. Powerful words

August 16th, 2024 06:38

Dummy
Cassie58 said:

Oh what complicated lives some people lead. Not for the faint hearted. Two is company, threes a crowd. Yes, foolish behavior Thoughtless.

August 15th, 2024 16:08

Dummy
sorenbarrett said:

All those words apply. Cleverly written and nicely said.

August 15th, 2024 09:55

Dummy
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 15th, 2024 09:06

Dummy
Teddy.15 said:

Fools indeed. Honesty is always the best road in my very humble opinion ๐ŸŒน

August 15th, 2024 09:00

Working it Out
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

August 14th, 2024 17:54

Working it Out
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 14th, 2024 16:48

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